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PostSubject: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:53 pm

hi frnds i m heena and i av decided to write ff story . this is my first ff story so plz forgive me if there r mistakes in it .

This story revolve around three couples

Sujal- Kashish

Daksh-khwaish

Angad-kripa

this story is all abt understanding and luv b/w two people whether luv happens bf4 marriage or after marriage it doesn't matter bt understanding is must. all these three couple facing there own problems of life . bt what happens when they really start luving each other . will there problems increse or decrese?????. lets see wat happens.

INTRODUCTION

GAREWLS- xtremly rich business family. 5 yrs ago garewals were putting up in london and at present they r in india (delhi). 5yrs ago an accident took place in garewals life and after that they had shifted to india

Lalit Garewal- He is the head of garewals family and he is very loving and caring husband and father. he is the owner of garewals industry and he has achieved postion of top industrialsts in india within in 5yrs. he has two sons sujal garewal and daksh garewal . 5yrs ago lalit has lost his best frnd anurag mehta and prerna mehta in an accident in london and that's d only reason of shifting of them to india 5 yrs ago and now lalit is looking after the children of his frnd i.e kashish and angad. for him there is no diffrence b/w sujal ,daksh ,angad and kashish. he loves all of them equally.

Veena Garewal- a very caring and loving person for whom his family comes first . She is a house wife. she also loves her four children very much.



Sujal Garewal: He is 26years old who is putting up in london at present wid his best frnd angad mehta and persuing his MBA. . He has everything that a young man needs that Money and power to impress girls he is very caring and emotional person who loves his family very much . he is very close to his elder brother daksh and there r no secrets b/w them. only one thing which brings sujal in low spirits is his dark past and daksh and angad r only two person in his life who r awared abt his past.



Daksh Garewal- elder son of garewals. he is 27 yrs old and he is working as an intern . . he is also very handsome,caring and loving person. he was never intersted in his family business and his family always suppoted him in his decision of becoming a doctor( heart surgeon). his best frnd is kahsish mehta and his love is khwaish. he can do any thing for his family and frnds.he is working in escort hospital whose trutee is his father.

MEHTA.S

Aurag and prerna mehta both died 5yrs ago uin a road accident.



Kashish Mehta -She is 25 years old. She is very shy and innocent girl . she is also persuing her internship wid daksh (her best frnd) in escort. she is angad's younger sister. there is gr8 understanding b/w kashish and angad.at present she is putting up wid garewals in india and for her garewals is now her family. she is very close to veena and for her veena and lalit r just like her parents. bf4 her parents accident she always remained in high spirits bt after that incident things get really changed now she usually remains in low spirit and usually remain quiet in front of every one xcept some special and close ones.and only person which brings simle on her face is daksh. there is no secrets b/w daksh and kashish . she knows that daksh is in love wid khwaish and khwaish is also kashish's frnd. kashish stop living her life as normal person just after her parent's death now she is living just to fulfil his parent's dream (to become a doctor). kashish is also a very gud artist . in her free time she usually paints. she has her art gallery also which is run by kripa. kripa is just like her younger sister.



Angad Mehta- anurag.s and prerna's son and kashish elder brother, he is very handsome, passionate young boy who change her girlfriends everday bt know his limits. he is sujal's best frnd and putting up in london wid him and persuing his MBA . his life also get changed after his parents death bt he came out of that incident and start living his life as very carefree guy.bt he is very caring for her sister.and know's kashish condition very well.bt he knows that daksh and veena both r taking good care of kashish.

kHANNA'S (living in delhi)

CG khanna- khwaish and kripa,s father and a rich business man . he is a friend of lalit and anurag. he loves his wife and two daughters very much.

Vasu Khanna - she is very caring and loving person . she runs her own fashion house wid khwaish.. she loves and trust her daughter's very much



Khwaish Khanna- a very cute ,sweet 24 old girl who is very bubbly in nature. she loves her younger sister kripa very much and kashish frnd . she is in love wid daksh and she has no problem wid kashish and daksh frndship. she knows kashish condition and also support daksh in his all decision towards kashish and never interfair in their frndship. she is a fashion designer and working wid her mom.



Kripa khanna- she is 23 yr old . she is very close to her sis and she is persuing her M'A in fine arts from corspondense in Delhi university . she is in her final yr.she runs kashish art's gallery b'coz she is very much intersted in art and kashish usually not get enough time to take care of his art gallery . for her kashish is just like her sisiter .Kripa hates boys who flirt around girls and belives that there is no true love in this world. she is very high temper

here the introduction part is end.

i hope u all like it.

if u like it then plz comment so that i can continue and if u don't than also tell me franlky.


first part

FIRST THANX To ALL FOR UR COMMENTS

PART 1


SUJAL-S
ANGAD-A
KASHIAH-KA
DAKSH-D
KRIPA-K
KHWAISH- KH
SO HERE I GO
IN LONDON

hum dehkte hain ek bahut sundar aur bata sa ghar hai jiske bahar garewal mansion lekha hai . ye ghar garewals ka hai jab wo london me rehte the aur ab yahan sujal or angad rehta hain

now what's going inside in house let's see

ek bahut sundar room me ek ladka window ke paas khra hai aur uski aankhon me kuch nami hai jaise ki wo kuch aisa soch raha hai jise soch kar bhi uski aankhon me aanso aa jata hain tabhi wo ek dam turn hota hai aur wo apni side table par rakhi hui watch ki tarf dekhta hai jisme subha ke 6 baje hoote hain and wo jaldi se apne aason saaf kar lete hai aur apne cute se choclati face par ek pyari se muskaan le aata hai aur ye ladka aur koi nahi hearthrob and hottest hunk sujal garewawl hota hai aur wo ek room ki tarf chala jata hai.


in other room- hum dekhte hain ye room bahut hi buri condition me hain sari chijeen idhar udhar pheli hui haan , walls pe sirf girls aur bike ke posters hain aur bed pe ek ladka bahut ghari neend me so raha hai.

S- angad hey bro jsut get up otherwise aaj me phir se jogging par jane ke liye teri wjhe se late ho jaonga.

A- Plz sujal tune jana hai tu ja main aaj nahi jaoonga ,kal raat ko late hogya tha aur ab bahut neend
aa rahi. aur abhi sirf 6 baje haan.

S-(*to himself) - jata kab hai ye mere saath jogging par pata nahi raat bhar karta kya hai ye ladka, i m sure books to kabhi kholta nahi hoga raat ko beth kar parne ke liya kunki MBA ki books to iske study room aaj tak wrapped hi rakhi hui haan jaise unhe kabhi khol ke dekha hi na ho.

A- mujhe pata hai tu kya bool raha isliye apni bakwass band kar or ja yahaan se mujhe bahut need aa rahi aur haan jata waqt apna face wash kar liyo kunki teri aankhon me abhi bhi aasoon nazar aa rahe hain.

S- tu kabhi nahi sudhre ga theek hai main ja kar aata hoon phir college chalte hain and then he leaves wid a cute simle on his face.

A(to himself)- ye ladka kab use bhul payega pat nahi. plz God help him. mujhe mera phele wal dost wapas kar do.

IN INDIA

veena- v
lalit-l

v again see a very big again same name plate garewal mansion . v see there is very big garden in which servants are watering the plants . thwen we see that two person r sitting in d living room . and d one is lalit garewal and other is veena garewal and both r having coffee mugs in their hands.

V- abhi tak daksh aur kashish nahi uthe

L- asa ho sakta hai veena kabhi ki kashish abi tak no uthi ho aur ab wo paka daksh ko utha rahi hogi.

V-haan ye baat to aapki bulkul sahi ha aur ye daksh as usual uth nahi ra hoga aur abhi dekhna jor se chilane k awaj aaye gi

then we suddenly heard ki koi bahut joor se chilata hai kashish

VAND L- joor se hasne lagte hain

in room

we see ki ladka bed par betha hua hoota hai aur sara gila hua hoota hai aur ladki jiske bbal khule hote haan aur usne track suit phena hoota hai aur uske haath ,me ek bucket hoothi aur uske chere par choti se smile hooti hai.

ladka- kashish ye koi terika hai kisi pyare se .cute, handsome se ladke ko need se uthana ka

so ye ladki kashish hoti aur ladke ke baat sun kar uske chere ki smile aur thodi se increase ho jatii hai.

KA- cute, handsome ,pyara sa ladka kisne aisa kha tumse uski aankhein to theek thi,ya wo insaan us time neend me ttha jab wo tumse ye sab kha raha tha aur wwo phir se hasne lagti hai

L- aacha tumhe pata hai ladkiyan mujh pe marti haan, mujhse baaat karne ke liye tarsti haan, aur tum ho ki tumhe meri koi kadar hi nahi hai.

ka- ahem ahem.......... so DR. daksh garewal par ladkiyan merti hain ya phir wo unpe marta hai, shayad daksh tumne kuch ulta bool diya

SO WO LADKA DAKSH HAI

D- kashish main tumhe abi dekhta hoon

jaise hi daksh khra hoone lagta uska par pani ki wajhe se slip ho jata hai aur woneeche gir jata hai aur kashish jor se hasne lagti hai.

daksh jab kashish ase haste hue dekhta hai to uske face par ek badi se smile aa jati hai

KA - ab tum kun muskra rehe ho.

D- Kunki aaj tum jo hans rahi ho aur ye hansi kitni pyari lagti hai tumhare chere par, humesha asi he hansti raah karo

KA- ye sunte hi kashish ke ankhoon me aansu aa jate hain

D-hey meri pyari si kashish phir se rone lagi, rona tu muhe chhiye itni joor se nache gir gaya pata nahi kahan kahan bandage karni pategi aur khwaish ko kitna dukh hoga meri asi halt dekh ke

ye sun te hi kashish k face par choti se smile aa jati hai aur ja kar daksh ko hag kar lati.

D- hey kashish maine yahi to chata that ab to tu bhi gili hogi

ka- dakshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. i m going to kill u

D- sure wen ever u wan. bt plz meri khwaish ka sooch kya hoga

KA- Wahi to ssoch rahi hoon ki uska kya hoga tere saath.

D- Wat do u mean by that kashish

KA- Kuch nahi bas ab tu jaldi se change karlye phir hum jogging par chalte hain

kashish bhi phir apne room me dress change karne chali jati hai kunki uska pura tack suit gila ho chuka hota hai.

s0 here this part ends

i hope u guys like .
plz don't forget to post ur comment.


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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:29 pm

heenu very nice start..... goodd... Very Happy continue soon.. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Fri Nov 07, 2008 8:47 pm

PART-2



IN LONDON


S- while jogging in park sujal is remembering his past aur wo ek dum se ruk jata hai aur apni aankhe band kar leta hai tabhi peche se akar koi uske shoulder par haath rakhta hai Aur ek dum se wo turn ho jata aur wo apne peche rebaka ko khra dekhta hai


Rebaka - sujal,s frnd and angad,s so called girl frnd


S- hi rebaka , how r u.

R- hi, I m fine, and wat.s abt u

S- I m also fine, so wat r u doing here

R- with surprising and questioning face She ask sujal, wat can people do in morning time in parks

S- oh I m sorry, I didn’t mean that, actually I av never seen u here b4

R- oh that’s right I av also come here first time

S- oh I see, nice meeting u here , bt I av to leave now

R- no sujal

S- surprised by his reply

R- oh I mean that I m leaving for usa today , so can u plz come to my house and collects angad,s watch b’coz he left it out at my house last night

S- just shocked and now he realizes that y angad is saying that he wanna sleep more

R- r u coming or not ,

S-yes, b’coz that angad’s favourite watch and a last present by angad,s father to him he doesn’t want to loose it any cost and after collecting angad,s watch he come back to house.

S- jab sujal ghar jata hai to dekhta hai ki angad abhi bhi so raha hai, tab uske dimag me ek idea aata hai or wo angad ke bathroom me jakar ,ek pani ki bucket lata hi or sara pani angad k upar dal deta hai

A-just open his eyes in frustration and ek dum khra ho jata . who d hell has done this.

S- tel me angad xcept me who can do this wid u may b rebaka


A-rebaka ka naam sunte hi angad ki neend gayab ho jati hai aur woe k dum question change kar K puchta ye koi tarika hai kisi ko uthane ka


S- kun angad wo bhi mujhe rebaka se sekh kar aana patega and just giggles

A-kya rebaka -2 laga rakha hai subhe subhe tujhe koi aur nahi mila that play girl kahin ki

S- so wat r u angad Mehta, don’t u think u also fall in same category of play boys. Ok leave it this is ur daily routine and im really not interested in discussing ur affairs. Just tel me where is ur wrist watch.

A-oh no. wo to rebaka k ghar rehgai . how could I do so. I can ‘t believe myself. I m such a stupid. .at this time angad is feeling so much guilty and he is thinking how could he b so irresponsilble towards his dad’s last present to him


S-tabhi apna hath aage karta hai aur uske haath me angad ki watch hoti hi

A-ek dum se watch dekhta hai aur uski aankhon me aansun aa jata hain us time use lag raha tha ki agar wo ye watch kho deta to kya hota aur woe k dum se sujal ko hug karte hai aur kheta hai thnx buddy agar aaj iske badle tu kuch bhi mangle to maine tujhe de dunga . u r my best buddy.

S- I know that. Bt don’t 4get jo tune abhi kaha


A-kya kaha. Mujhe to kuch yaad nahi

S- angadddddddddddd. I m gonna kill u.

A-wen ever u want. ……………………….. .waise jab chahe kuch bhi mang liyo kabhi mana nahi karonga

S – ok maine sahi time ka intezar karonga aur tab tu mujhe mana nahi karega us cheez ko dene k liya

A-I promise u nahi karonga. Then he just leave towards his washroom.

S(to himself)- maine janta hoon angad to apne parents ko bahut miss karta bas batna nahi chata. Then he also leaves from angad,s room.

Now IN INDIA

Kashish aur daksh donor jogging par Jane ke liye tayar hoge hote hain

Ka and D together gud morning mom and dad

Vand L gud morning

So tum dono apni daily ki itni romantic morning talks k baad jogging par Jane k liye tyaar ho hi gaye

D- yes mom v r ready u know na how she is. She is always interested in fighting wid me .


K.- wat do u mean by that I m always and wats abt u .

V- plz ab tum donor dubra mat shuru ho jana

D AND K Ok mom hum jaa rahe haan

V(to herself)- janti hoon in lariyoon me bhi tum donor ki dosti hai.

Ka- daksh tum se subha jaldi khud kuon nahi utha jata

D- tum ho na mera alarm

KA- jab khwaish aa jayegi tab kya karoge

D- tab wo alarm ban jayegi

Ka – wat to tujhee hum dono alarm clock dekhte hain D-

Aur kya ek meri best frnd dosri meri would be wife . itna to tum donor mere liye kar hi sakti ho

Ka- aur tum hamre liye kya kar sakte ho



D- tumhe kiya lagta hai main tumhare liye kya kar sakta hoon

Ka- mujhe lagta hai

D- kya lagta hai

Ka-mujhe lagta hai hume ghar chalna chaiye mom intezar kar rhi hoongi

D- Nahi phele meri baat ka jawab do warna hum donor yahan se nahi janenge aur I m sure ki tum dr. kirti ka gusa nahi jhelna(face karna) chahogi hospital late poochne ki wajhe se

Ka- tum jante ho na mujhe dr kirti se bhoot dar lagta hai phir bhi aisa bool rahe ho

D- kashish ek baat bato tumhe kisse dar nahi lagta mere alawa

Ka-innocently angad bhiya, mom, dad, khwaish,or kripa inse mujhe baat karte hue kabhi dar nahi lagta aur sabse important jab tum mere sath hote ho tu mujhe kisi se dar nahi lagta

D- wow kashish wat a gud answer .bt tel me one thing jab main tumhere saath nahi honga to kya karoogi

Ka- nahi tum hamesha mere saath rahogye

D- main hamesha tumhare sath rahonga par kashish kya tumhe nahin lagta k ab tumhari life main kisi aur k pyar ki bhi jaroorat hai

Ka- plz daksh hum is topic par koi baat nahi karenge

D- par kyuon kashish har kisi ko apni life me ek aise pyar ki jarorat parti hai jo hamri zindagi ko sari duniya k khushiyon se bhar deta hai aur hamara better half ban jata hai.

Ka- janti hoon daksh lekin jab yehi khushiyan had se jayda ho jaati hain tu unhe kho dene ka dar bhi bhar jata hai aur ab mujhme kisi aur ko khone ki himat nahi. Mom –dad k Jane k baad agar main ji rahi hoon to uske wajhe tum aur veena mom aur lalit dad hain, aur mom-dad ka sapna hai. Varna ab tak main kahin kho gi hoti. Agar aaj main tohra hasti hoon ,khush rah pati hoon to uski wajhe sirf tum ho.. aur sabsi badi bat daksh agar Bhagwan ne kisi ka meri zindagi mein aana likha hoga to wo zaroor ayega aur main use rook nahi pongi lekin haan main kabhi khud kisi ko apne zindagi mein lane ki koshish nahi karongi..aur pata nahi jo insaan meri zindagi mein aaye wo meri aur tumhari dosti ko samjh paye ya nahi aur tumhari dosti ko to mein kabhi kisi k liye bhi nahi khoona chahati


D – bt kashish aisa zarooeri to nahi. Khwaish bhi to hum dono ki dosti ko samjhti hai. to wo kyuon nahi Ka- jarori to nahi har koi khwaish jaisa ho

D- haan ye to sach hai ki khwaish jaisa to koi ho hi nahi sakta


K ahem ahem………………………… to mom se keh dun ki use jaldi se ghar laye aoo

D- nahi kashish jab tak sujal aur angad nahi aa jate tum mom se shaadi ki koi baat nahi karogi

Ka- theek hai to tum 4 months aur wait karo

D- haan janta hoon (bada sad sa face banakar kheta hai)

ka-oh so sad……………

D-cholo ab ghar chelte hain.

Ka- haan cholo .
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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Fri Nov 07, 2008 8:50 pm

PART -3

IN KHANNA HOUSE

Khwaish- kh
Kripa-k


Hum dekhte hain e larki mirror k samne bhati hoti hai aur apne baloon me comb kar rahi hoti hai. usne blue colour ka suit phena hota hai . uske hatoon me bahut sari bangels hoti hain . wo bahut hi pyari lag rahi hoti. Phir wo mirror k samne se khri hoti hai aur ek room ki tarf jati hai

IN ROOM
Hum dekhte hain is dusre room me har tarf drawing sheets phele hooti hain, walls pe bahut se paintings hoti hain aur bed pe ek pyari se larki so rahi hoti hai tabhi uske room ka door khulta hai aur usme ek larki enter hoti hai aur phir wo bed par jakar bathti hai aur phir bade pyar se khti hai kripa ab uth bhi ja 7 baj gaye hain

So jo larki so rahi hoti wo kripa hai

K- khwaish di plz dus min sone do bas abho uth jaongi

So dosri larki khwaish hoti hai

Kh- kripa gallery jane k liye late ho jaye gi uth ja jaldi

K- di bas uth rahi hoon

Kh- theek hai to 10 min or so ja itne main tera room theek kar dati hoon

Kh(to herself) kripa main janti hoon to yahi khegi 10 min di islye main tujhe hamesha dus min phele uthati hoon

Phir khwaish room mein sari drawing sheets ikhti karne lagti hai

K- di pl aap 10 min k liye yahan se jaye kunki jab tak aap yahan rahengi tab tak aapki ye bangels k aawaj mujhe soone nahi dagi. Pata nahi daksh jiju or aapki engagement k bad aapne ye itni sari bangels phenna kuon shuru kar diya.

Kh- (with a cute smile on her face) kunki daksh ko bangels ki aawaj bahut pasand hai.

K- ahem ahem- kya pyar hai .mujhe sone bhi nahi deta

Kh-kripa………………………………aur wo bed se ek pillow utha kar kripa ke face par marti hai. jab tujhe pyar hoga tab puchungi to uske liye kya-kya karti hai. abhi tujhe mujhe satne me bada maja aata hai na tab main bhi tujhe dekhongi

K- in sleepy voice plz di mujhe kabhi pyar nahi hoga b’coz I don’t believe in love

Kh- haan –haan janti hoon .par main phir bhi intezar karongi ki koi aisa teri zindagi me aaye jo tujhe pyar karna sikhaye

K- aisa koi hai hi nahi . so just 4get abt thisx

Kh- aacha theek hai ab tu jaldi se uth ja aur tyar ho ja aur haan main tujhe batna bhul gai ki aaj daksh aur kashish gallery aane wale hain

K- di gallery to kashish di aane wali hain jiju to……………………………

Kh- kripa……………………………………….

K- okkkkkkkkkkkkk di just chill . waise main tabhi khoon aaj aap. itni khush kuon hain aur ye khete hi kripa bed se uth kar washroom me bhag jati hai.

Kh- kripa tu nahi sudhregi aur wo phir tohra sa sharmati hai

K-bathroom k door par khri hokar “wari janwan” di kya sharmati ho main to fida hogi is par

Kh- kripa now im gonna kill u.

K-u can’t di aur wo phir jaldi se apne bathroom ka door lock kar lati hai

Kh-(to herself) ye larki pagal hai aur wo thoda sa hasti hai aur phir neeche apne mom –dad k saath jakar dinning table par breakfast k liye beth jati hi

Vasu- khwaish beta kripa kahan hai

Kh- mom bas wo abhi aaa rahi hai aap janti hai na uske dus min.

Then all three of them khwaish, vasu and cg stat laughing together

K- tabhi kripa neeche aa jati hai . aap tino ye kis baat par has rahe hain mujhe bhi batiye taki main bhi thoda has sakoon

Kh- tabhi ek dam se bol deti hai mom soch rahi thi k kuon tumhare liye bhi koi larka dekh liye jaye and just giggles

K- with angry look what rubbish r u talking di. U all know na mujhe abhi shaadi nahi karni then (only to herself) mujhe to kabhi shaadi nahi karni

Kh-aacha baba hum sab majak (joke)kar rahe thee bas ab gusa mat ho jaldi se breakfast kar mama aur main tujhe gallery drop kar denge aur phir fashion house chale janegaye aaj bahut kam hai mujhe

K- theek hai bt di plz aap aisa majak mat kiya kijiye

Kh- tu mujhe kuch bhi kah sakti hai aur main itna sa majak(joke) bhi nahi kar sakti

K- sorry di mera wo matlab nahi aap to mera saath kaisa bhi mazak(joke) kar sakti hain bas ek shaadi……………… ki baat chorkar

Cg- main chalta hoon tum logon ki baate to pata nahi kab khtam hongi waise bhi meri lalit k sath ek meeting soch raha hoon use nxt week dinner par invite kar lon wid family

Kh- ye sunkar bahut kush hoti

K-ahem ahem……………………. Papa kisi ke chere pe kitni badi smile aagai

Kh- tu chupkar kripa. Papa waisa idea bahut aacha aaj main daksh aur kashish se milne wali hoon unhe bhi bata dongi

K- papa kahish di se to main milne wali hoon khwaish di to……………………….

Kh(wid irritation) – mama papa plz aap is kripa ko chup kariya na pata nahi kya kya bulti rahti hai aur mujhe tang karti

Cg- haan bhi kripa ab khwaish ko tang karne ka haq bhi kisi aur ka

Kh (now wid lil bit anger) papa aap bhi ab main aap me se kisi se baat nahi karongi

Vasu- beta hum to sirf majak kar rahe the, tujhe hurt karna chate the

K- I m also sorry di

Kh( now wid a smile on her face) –main janti hoon ki aap log mujhe kabhi hurt kar hi nahi sakti isliye sorry balone ki koi zarorat hi nahi hai lekin haan ab hume chalna chahiye warna yehin khre- khre sham (evening) ho jaye gi aur wo main bilkul nahi chahti

K- di aap sach me nahi chati k aaj sham ho…………………………………….

Kh- kripa to phir shuri hogi. ……………………….

Sab hasne lagte hain aur phir sab apne apne kam k liye chale jate hain.


IN GAREWAL HOUSE

Daksh aur kashish ghar me enter hote hain aur aate hi dono sofe par beth jate hain aur phir dono ek sath bolte hain.
D- mom kahish ka orange juice
Ka- mom daksh ka apple juice

V- pata hai la rahi hoon aur wo juice lakar dono ko de deti hai. tum dono aapna juice nahi mang sakte

D and k- nahi mom aap janti hai na

V- haan haan janti hoon tumhe aisa karna bahut aacha lagta hai aur ye kahkar veena wahan se chali jati hai

Ka- daksh abhi tak angad bhiya ka phone nahi aaya

D- sujal ka bhi nahi aaya

Actually ye in choron(4) ki routine thi ki wo her din ek dosre se baat karte the dakah sujal aur angad se aur kashish sirf angad se lekin ek din D and K phone karte the aur ek S&A aur aaj sujal aur angad k turn thi aur as usual wo dono bhul gaye the

D- aaj phir se ye dono bhul gaye hongi

K- koi baat nahi abhi thodi der me unhe yaad aa jaye ga jaisa tumhe kabhi yaad nahi rehta aur hamesha main tumhe phone karna yaad dilti hoon

D- kashish tum meri tang khichna band karoo aur ab hum dono chalke ready ho jate hain

K chalo waise bhi tum kabhi kabhi to apna dimag lagakar baat kar to ho

Ye khete hi kashish apne room mein upar bhaag jati hai aur door lock kar leti hi

d- kashish mein tujhe dekh longa kuon

k- kuon aaj se phele kabhi nahi dekha

Daksh ab kuch nahi bulta aur door k bahar chup chap khra ho jata

K(to herself )kahin daksh sach maein to gusa nahi . door kholkar dekhti hoon

Aur kashish jaise hi door kholti hai daksh uske samne khra hoota hai par uske haat me ek cockroach hota hai aur kashish cockroach ko dekhte hi bahut jor se chilne lagti hai aur apni dono ankhoon par hath rakh leti hai aur bahut jor se chila rahi hoti hai

Daksh ko ye dekh kar bahut hasi aa rahi hoti lekin phir daksh ko thoda bura lagne lagta hai kunki wo bahut aache se janta tha ki kashish ko andhere aur cock roach se bahut dar lagta hai aur phir cockroach ko phek deta hai aur bahut pyar se kashish k aankhon se uske haath hatata hai aur kheta hai I m very sorry kashish

K- phele to kuch nahi bolti lekin phi jaldi se daksh ko hug kar leti hai aur thodi low voice mein bolti hai aisa karna jarori tha main tumse kabhi baat nahi karongi

D- very sorry kashish. Phir wo bade pyaar se apne dono ears ko pkar lete hai

K- ye dekh kar kahish ko hasi aa jati hai. its okkkkkk daksh. Par dubra aisa mat karna

D- kabhi nahi karonga lekin tum bhi ye mat kehna k mujme dimag nahi hai

K- wid a naughty face wo to sach me nahin hai daksh

D- kashish………………………

K- okkkkkkkkkkkkk . I m just kidding.

D- acha kashish choro ab in sab baton ko aur chal kar meri shirt nikal do warna mein phir se confuse ho jaonga

K- haan janti hon tom to chalti phrti confusion ho ,chalo ab nikal deti hoon
(actual ye daksh ki habit thi ki wo wahi shirt phenta tha jo kashish nikal kar deti thi). Phir wo uski shirt select kar deti hai aur apne room mein tyar hone k liye wapas aa jati hai



Todhi der me kashish tyar ho jati hai usne white colour ka churidar suit phena hota hai aur anklets pheni hui hoti jo bahut hi pyari hoti hain . kashish ne apne hathon me bas ek watch pheni hui haoti hai. waise kashish ko bangels phenna bahut pasand hai bt apne profession ki wajhe se wo aisa nahi kar pati hai.
Kashish ne koi artifical make up nahi kya hota , uske baal khule hote hain aur wo bahut pyari lag rahi hoti.


After 15 min. wo dono niche breakfasr karne k liye aa jate hain

Dono aakar dinning table par bethte hain aur kashish daksh ko uska toast aur juice deti hai aur daksh ka uske corn flakes de deta hai

V- pheli baat to mujhe ye samajh nahi aati kit um dono itna kam breakfast kuon karte ho aur dosra ye ki tum aapna khanna khud kuon nahi utha te dinning table se

Ka- mom pheli baat ka to ye answer hai ki aap har weekend itna heavy breakfast krati hain ki wo pure week chalta hai aur waise bhi hum lunch or dinner sufficient karte hain aur agar itna oily har din khane gaye to mote hojane gaye

V- tum dono doctors se to bat karna bekar hai jab mere sujal aur angad aye gaye tab main unhe apni pasand ka breakfast karwon gi

D- only breakfast , sab khuch unhe apni hi pasand ka karwaiye ga

V- chup kar tu

Ka-bas mama ab hum chalet hain warna late ho jayen gaye

V- theek hai tum dono jao par lunch time par kar lena

D- haan mom karlenge . don’t worry. Waise aapki dosri baat ka answer to diya hi nahi. And that is our true frndship

V-haan janti hoon lekin ab tum dono jao warna late ho jao ge


IN LONDON

S AUR A breakfast karke college jane k liye ready ho chuke the wo dono bahar aakar car me behte hain aur sujal jor se chilata hai oh no aaj hum phir se phone karna bhul gaye aaj hamari turn thi .

S-oh no mar gaye, daksh bhiya mujhe mar dalengaye

A- aur mujhe dono milkar mar dalengye(d and k). sujal tujhe kabhi time par yaad nahi aata phone karna hamesha late karva deta hai

S- abye ***** mujhe yaad to aa jata tujhe to bhagwan ki dya se wo bhi nahi aata. Chal ab phele phone kar lete hain

NOW CONSVERSATION B/W FOUR OF THEM

Daksh aur kashish jaise hi car mein bethte hain dono ka phone bajne lagta hai aur dono ek saath khete hain aagya inhe yaad

Dono phone receive karte hain

Ka- angad bhiya aapko kahbhi time par yaad nahi ata no phone karna hamesha late ho jate hain

A- kashish ye sujal mujhe kabhi time par yaad nahi dilate

Ka-aap me aur daksh mein koi difference nahi hai dono ejk jaise bhulakar ho

Jab angad kashish bat kar rahe hote hain to daksh aur sujal bhi baat kar rahe hote hain

D- sujal to kabhi time par phone nahi kar sakta

S- bhai main khud kar to leta hoon agar aapko kashish yaad na dilaye to aap to kabhi phone kare hi na

D- wat dio u mean by that

S- I mean ki aap me aur angad mein koi difference nahi hai

Daksh to Sujal and Angad to Kashish - tum me aur kashish mein bhi to koi difference nahi

A TO KA-jaise tum hamesha daksh bhaiya ko yaad delati ho phone waise sujal hamesha mujhe yaad delta. He is my best buddy

D TO S-jaise tu hamesha angad ko yaad delta hai phone karna waise hi kashish mujhe dilate hai . she is my best frnd

Sujal daksh k bate sun raha hota hai aur kashish angad ki

Then D sujal ko bolta hai kashish and u both r perfect
Aur same angad kashish ko bolta hai

Sujal aur kashish ek sath bolte hain yes we know (bt wo sach mein abhi tak ye nahi jante ki wo dono ek dusre k liye bilkul perfect hain)

Phir kashish phone rakh deti aur angad daksh se baat karta hai lekin daksh car se bhaar jakar angad se baat karta hai aur kheta ki wo Friday ko London aa raha hai aur aaj Monday hota hai



I hope u guys like it . plz comment.
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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Sat Nov 08, 2008 3:54 pm

heenu dear nice.. very interesting... Very Happy Smile Very Happy Very Happy Smile Very Happy Very Happy Smile Very Happy Very Happy Smile Very Happy continue soon.. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:58 pm

Hey heenu sweetehart!!!! fabulous FF, loved the concept and scenes!! it sounds gr88. the friendship of daksh and kashish is truly great, njoyed there scenes, and loved the ending of part 3 when they sed sujal kashish are perfect 4 each other!! can't wait for them to finally meet!! do update soon jaan!! brilliant work!!!! loved it!!!

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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Fri Nov 14, 2008 3:04 pm

heenu dear jaldi se continue karo na.. me waiting for the next part very eagerly.... Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Sat Dec 06, 2008 11:20 pm

hey heenu!!! i can still reply in this topic!! its not locked dear!!!

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PostSubject: Re: new ff- luv is life- 2 n 3 part   Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:59 am

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