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PostSubject: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:03 pm


Hello,
i'am posting my fanfic here..hope you like it..

“ ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY ”


THE INTRODUCTION:-

GAREWAL FAMILY :-
the garewal family is situated in shimla . the family is headed by chetan
garewal { played by cg of kth } , chetan's wife is veena garewal who is
a very loving and caring mother { typical kth types }.
chetan and veena have 4 sons and a daughter .
the
eldest son is our sweetheart sujal { played by rajeev } he is abt 26
yrs of age , swayam is the second son { he is a very positive character
} he is 24 yrs of age , rishi is the third son { he is very sportive
and friendly } he is 21yrs of age , the youngest of the sons is shlok {
he is a very big flirt ,but good at heart } he is 20yrs of age . now
coming to the only beti of the garewal house being the only beti she is
the pyarri - dulari of the house . she is 18 years of age she is
pampered by all her brothers .she is sneha……. the garewals r very big
business people in shimla . chetan's best friend was lalit . lalit and
his wife die in a accident . they have 4 sons . akshat , piyush , aman
and varun . akshat is sujal's age and is his best friend , aman and
varun r two nice guys who hang around with rishi & shlok . the only
odd man out is piyush , he does not like the garewals , he wants to
destroy them but he always has a fake nautanki smile on his face .
nobody knows abt piyush's intentions.
sujal has a best friend pratham . sujal looks after the business.

OBEROI FAMILY :-
the
oberoi family r very big business tycoons in the U.S.A . it is headed
by sumeet oberoi { played by sumeet ahuja of remix } , his wife is
sonia oberoi { played by sonia ray of remix } , they have 5 daughters .
kashish is the eldest she helps her father in managing the business ,
archie , gauri , charu , mehak r the other daughters of the oberoi's .
the sisters have a wonderful bond between them . the sisters have never
been to INDIA before . the oberoi's know the garewal family very well
but the children have not met even once . only the elders know each
other becoz sumeet & sonia stayed in shimla and were very good
friends of chetan and veena before they moved to U.S.A .
there r some more characters whom i'll be introducing later on ..
i hope u people liked my introduction . sorry guys if have used the
same names can't think of any other names .
this story is about the phases in life one has to face
sometimes
life is a bed of roses and sometimes is a high tide wave . so this
story will deal with how people of different personality come together
to lead a life & deal with their situations .
well i hope u all like the introduction keeping my fingers crossed .
bye........
take care

love
Surya...
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"ZINDIGI KE SILSILAY--PART 1"

IN SHIMLA:-

it is 7 in the morning in Shimla . mostly all the people in shimla are asleep , becoz the mornings in shimla is very cold . in the garewal mansion veena is awake .she enters a room and then
veena:- utto beta
son :- maa bas 10 minute aur .plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
veena:- beta 7 baj gaye hain office ke liye tayar nahi hona hain kya ??
son:- kya 7 baj gaye , mujhe tho ajj office jaldi jana tha..........
{ saying all this the son uncovers the bedsheet from his face & sits on the bed with a jerk }
veena :- sujal raath ko der thak kam karoge tho aisa hi hoga. mujhe lagtha hain tumhe ab shaddi kar leni chahiye ??
sujal :- mom shaddi aur mein
veena:- kyun tum insaan nahi ho kya ??
sujal :- aisi koi baat nahi mom , lekin shaddi usse karni chahiye jo hum se pyar kare aur ab thak SUJAL GAREWAL ko aisi ladki nahi mili hain.........
veena:-tujhe ladki nahi mili tu tho subah shaam office office kartha rehtha hain tho phir tujhe ladki kahan se milegi..........
sujal:- maaa
veena:-achcha tujhse bahas karna bekar hai main ab chalthi hoon tu tayar ho ja thik hain .
{ veena leaves the room }
sujal goes and stands by the window & starts dreaming about his dream girl . in his imagination he sees a girl wearing a white beautiful sari , but he does not see the face . sujal suddenly looks at the clock and realizes that he has a meeting to attend at 9 so he rushes to get ready .
now coming to the other brothers
there is room which is full of posters & that is rishi , shlok , aman and varun room . they r all getting ready to go to different places .shlok to college , varun , rishi & aman to the office . swayam is sitting in the study and going through some details .
{ lalit's sons aman , varun , akshat & piyush stay with the garewals after losing their family }
everbody comes to the dining table to have there breakfast .piyush is a lazy bug so he is still asleep .
chetan :- morning everbody
all say good mornning & then sit for the break fast .
rishi starts teasing sneha regarding some competition
sneha :- BIG B ye dekho ye bhai mera mazak bana raha hain..........
sujal :- kido kyun pareshan kar rahe ho gudiya ko ??
rishi :- kya BIG B app tho hamesha iski tarafdari karthe ho .aur waise BIG B ye app ko kis angle se gudiya dikthi hain ??
rishi runs & sneha runs behind him .
veena enters & says beta ye akshat kab wapas aa raha hain .
sujal :- maa bas ek mahine ke ander aajayega { actually akshat is aboard & has competed his law practice }
sujal :- thik hain main chaltha hoon . der ho rahi hain .
shlok & sneha together say BIG B plz humme college chod dijiyena , hummari gadi garage mein hain ??
sujal agrees & leaves with them . then one by one all leave . & veena is alone.
suddenly the phone rings veena picks it up . veena recognizes the voice as
sonia oberoi's voice .
veena :- kaisi ho sonia ??
sonia :- bilkul theek hoon. aur tum ?
veena:- mein bhi theek hoon .
sonia:- mujhe tumse ek favour chahiye wo actually meri badi beti kashish INDIA aa rahi hain koi kaam ke silsilay mein, wo shimla mein rahegi tho mein chahthi hoon ki tum uske liye ek hotel room book kar do .
at this veena interupts and says :- kya hotel main kyun wo hamari bhi tho beti hain na . ab koi baat nahi sunugi wo hamare saath rahege bus...............
sonia:- ok { she says bye and cuts the phone }
now IN U.S.A:-
sonia goes out and calls a girl who is playing basket ball in the garden.
sonia:- kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh , ab ander aajao . kashish comes running .
kashish:- kya mom , kya hua ??
sonia :- kashish tum ek ladki ki jaise kab pesh aaogi .
kashish:- mom it is cool .
sonia:- tum aur tumhara cool . achcha suno tumhe garewal mansion mein rehna hoga , ab yeh nahi kehna ki tum nahi rukogi ?? samjhi.....
kashish:- yes mom .
just then all the other sisters enter
sonia :- tum log utgaye.
{sumeet enters }
sumeet:- kya ho raha hain bhai ??
sonia:-ye meri paanch betiyan jo ek dusre se itni alag hain bhagwan bachchaye un becharo ko jo in logon se shaadi karega .
all the sisters together shout mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm........... ..
sonia:- aur nahi tho kya ye dekho ye archie jo hamesha apni computer ke samne rehthi hain , yeh mehak jo ek padaku hain , ye gauri jo ek chasmis aur hamesha chup rehthi hain{ 2nd kutumb's look } , ye charu jo ek sport lover hain aur in sab se badi ye kashish jo hamesha business par dhyan dethi hain aur ladko ki jaisa bartav karthi hain . { basically kashish is a TOM BOY . she always wears a jeans & a shirt with a high tied pony . kashish does not wear any other ornament like earing etc }.
sonia continues talking
tum log kisise mat kehna ki tum U.S.A mein pale-bade ho .koi vishwaas nahi karega .
all giggle and then kashish talks to her father about some business deal and then goes to do her packing to leave for INDIA .
here in INDIA all the garewal family members return home and r sitting in the hall
chit-chatting . veena tells everybody that oberoi's elder daughter "KASHISH OBEROI " is coming to stay with them for some days .she also tells them that she is coming there for some business deal & sujal should help her in that business deal . she tells sujal that he has to pick her up after 2 days from the airport .
sujal agrees & all retire to their rooms as all r tired .

well here ends the 1st part . i hope u all liked it .


"ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 2 "

IN U.S.A :-

kashish
is bidding good bye to all her family members . sonia starts
instructing kashish as to wat she should do and what she should'nt do .
kashish starts repeating wat all her mother is telling , because sonia
had been telling kashish wat to do and wat not to do for the past 2
days . it's something like sonia telling apna khayal rakna , khana time
par ka lena , office ka kaam bohat nahi karna & all other stuff
like that { a daughter & mother talk }. the flight is announced and
kashish goes in . kashish in the flight starts reading a magzine and
then goes off to sleep as it is a long flight .
IN INDIA :-
sujal is in his office , he suddenly gets a phone call
sujal :- hello
veena:- sujal kaha tha mein tab se phone kar rahi thi
sujal :- wo mama mein kuch files dekh raha tha........
veena:- achcha vo sab chod tujhe yaad hain na ki tujhe ajj sham ko kashish ko laane ke liye airport jana hain ???
sujal:- haan ma , mein chala jauga......
veena:-theek hain phir sham ko milthe hain.......
sujal:- bye mama..........................
now sujal gets busy with his work .....................
in
the college shlok is sitting with some of his friends . shlok & his
friends were ragging the new students who have come to the college { it
is the opening days of their college } . suddenly diya { a new
character } comes to shlok . diya and shlok r best friends . diya is
pratham { sujal's best friends }sister . diya and shlok r very popular
in their college .
now in sujal's cabin
rishi and swayam enter and tell sujal that there is something urgent to be discussed .
sujal :- kya hua itine pareshan kyun lag rahe ho ??
rishi:- BIG B , wo accounts mein kuch gadbadi hain..........
sujal:- kya , yeh kya keh rahe ho...............
swayam:- BIG B rishi theek keh raha hain . appko agar vishwaas nahi hota tho app ye file dekh ligiye .
swayam
puts the file on the table and sujal checks it . sujal finds that a
amount of 2 crocres is missing from the garewal enterprises account .
sujal calls mr . sharma the cheif accountant . mr. sharma is found
guilty and sujal sacks him from the job . sujal is in a very irritated
state because a honest employee had { mr . sharma } cheated them ,just
for some money .
after some time
sujal looks at the clock and
he sees that the time is 5 in the evening , so he decides to leave for
the airport . he is still in the irritated mood . he reaches the
airport and is looking for kashish . kashish comes and asks sujal
kashish:- ru from the garewal family ???
sujal:- yes, i'am the eldest son of the garewal family SUJAL GAREWAL...........
kashish:- ok hi i'am KASHISH OBEROI
sujal
is suprised to hear that she is kashish becoz , sujal expected some
modern babe to land in as kashish oberoi , but the girl in fornt of him
was a typical tom boy ......
then they came to the car and got in............
kashish being a very friendly person started talking to sujal
kashish:- well maine app ke bare mein bohat kuch suna hain , ap ne itni choti se umer mein hi bohut kuch paa liya
sujal is not listening wat all she is talking , he is thinking abt mr.sharma .
kashish:- mr . garewal
sujal:- haan , kya keh rahi thi app
kashish:- iska matlab tabse mein hi bake jaa rahi thi , aur appne kuch nahi suna {she makes a sad face }
sujal:- { sujal is very frustrated} actually mein ajnabeeyonnnnn se baat nahi krata.
kashish is shocked to hear that & the rest of the drive both are quite
sujal reaches home . kashish gets down & walks in with sujal . veena & chetan are waiting for them in the hall .
veena:- aa gaye tum log
sujal:- haan mama
kashish:-
namaste aunty , telling this kashish touches veena's feet . sujal ,
veena and chetan are suprised that staying in U.S.A she has not
forgotten her sanskar .
veena:- kashish beta upar jaakar aaram karo
kashish:- ji aunty
veena:-sujal jao aur kashish ko uska kamra dikhkao.
sujal and kashish leave from there . sujal shows kashish her room & without telling anything he leaves from there .
kashish
is in her room and is thinking about sujal's behaviour . she thinks
that sujal bohat hi rude hain . pata nahi log use kaise bardasht karte
hain. thank God mujhe yahan par sirf 1 mahine ke liye rukna hain .
sujal
is in his room repenting for what he told kashish in the car . he
thinks that he will apoligize to kashish later . now he thinks that ye
kaisi ladki hain ,is se dekhkar koi nahi kehyaga ki ya U.S.A se aayi
hain . sujal starts thinking about kashish even though he wants to
divert his attention .
the same case is with kashish in her room she is unable to fogert sujal's rude behaviour . then she goes to get fresh .
veena calls kashish down , all the brothers and sneha are sitting in the hall and doing masti .
kashish comes down .
she
sees sujal playing with rishi & teasing sneha . she is deep in
thoughts that is he they same person who talked to her so rudely . she
is deep in her thoughts when veena comes
veena:- aao kashish beta . hamare saath baito .
kashish:- ji aunty .
now everybody introduces themselves to kashish . kashish is happy to see a family which has a very good bond .
swayam:- kashish tum yahan kis deal ke silsilay mein ayi ho
kashish:- mein vo mr.gupta ke deal ke liye aayi hoon . pata nahi kya hoga .
rishi:- jab hum sab hain tumhare saath , tho tumhe kya fhikar .
all smile
veena:- ab office ka kaam chodo , chalo saab khana ko lo.
all go to the dining table . all finish their dinner and it is time for desert .
veena serves gajar ka halwa . kashish's face glows when she sees the desert .
veena sees this and tells kashish , kashish tumhe gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain.
kashish smiles & nods her head .
now rishi tells
rishi:-aap aur BIG B kitna milthe ho ek doosre se . kyunki BIG B ko bho gajar ka halwa bohat pasand hain .
sujal & kashish look at each other and then the thoda sa music is played in the background .
all leave for their rooms .
sujal goes to kashish's room
kashish:- app yahaan
sujal:-{ sujal hesitates and then says } hain mein wo actually , appse sorry kehne aaya tha meri behaviour ke liye .
kashish:- it's ok .
sujal:- nahi actually maine kisi aur ka furstration app par nikal diya .
sujal:- it's ok mr. garewal , mein samaj sakthi hoon .itna bada business empire chalana koi aasan baat nahi .
sujal:- thanku
sujal is abt to leave when he suddenly turns back and says :- friends { in typical sujal style }
both shake hands . & then sujal says ajj se app mujhe sujal bulana
mr.garewal nahi ,bohat ajeeb lagtha hain.
kashish:- theek hain lakin ek shart par app mujhe tum , aur kashish kehayge.
sujal:- ok done and then both smile .
sujal tells kashish that if she wants she can join him in the office 2mmorrow , he also tells that he would leave at 9 .
sujal:- gud night , sweet dreams
kashish:- gud night . same to u
sujal leaves
sujal is on his bed is thinking abt kashish and here kashish is on her bed thinking abt sujal .
the song in the babkgroung :-
" ye achchanak kya hua hain
dil ko ye kya hone laga ......
yaad kisiki aane lagi hain
jaan jaane lagi hain
thoda sa pyar hua hain
thoda hain baki...................... "
both sujal and kashish go to sleep thinking about each other .
here
ends the 2nd part. hey guyz please tell me if this part was too long or
too draggy . please let me know if u have any suggestions or complaints
. thanku very much................

Love
Surya..






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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:11 pm

" ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY ---PART 3 "

next
day morning at the breakfast table . kashish is helping veena in
setting up the breakfast table . sujal is getting down the stairs &
is very suprised to see kashish doing house hold work . he is still in
his thoughts . when veena notices him .
veena:- sujal aao aur nashtha kar lo
sujal is still looking at kashish
veena:- sujallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll { veena goes and shakes him } , kahan khoya hua hain .
sujal:- nahi mumma wohhh...............kuch nahi
veena:- achcha chal nashtha kar le . kashish kab se intezar kar rahi hain tera .
sujal:- good morning kashish
kashish:- good morning
sujal :- mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum itni punctual ho .
kashish:- it's ok .
both kashish and sujal start discussing about business
veena interupts and says
veena:- chalo ab dono nhastha kar lo office ki baatein baad mein karna .
veena serves the breakfast & sujal - kashish start eating .
suddenly the phone rings . veena goes and picks it up .
veena:- hello
the other person :- hello , kya mein kashish di se baat kar sakthi hoon .
veena:- haan .
veena
goes to kashish and hands over the phone to her . kashish is confused
as to who is calling her . veena understands this and says that pata
nahi kaun hain kashish ke liye pooch rahi the .
kashish :- hello , kaun bol raha hain
the other person :- hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
kashish is very happy realizing that it is a call from her sisters .
becoz kashish is eating veena asks her to put the phone on the speaker .
now the phone is put on the speaker..........
kashish:- charuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuu , kaise ho tum log .
charu:-hum sab theek hain di , appko bohut miss kar rahe hain .
sujal sees the happiness on kashish's face .
kashish:- achcha mehak , gauri , archie kahan hain
all the sisters shout together hi diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
then gauri & archie discuss something about business & then kashish puts the phone down .
kashish stops eating and leaves the place . veena and sujal see that kashish has tears in her eyes .
sujal wonders that the girl who was so happy talking to her sisters suddenly has started crying .
sujal asks :- ise kya hua , abhi tho itni khush thi .
veena:- use ghar ki yaad aayi hain .
sujal:-theek hain main chaltha hoon
veena:- theek hain , par suno kashish ke saath lunch pe kuch kha lena , kyunki usne abhi nhastha theek se nahi kiya .
sujal :- theek hain mumma
sujal leaves
kashish is in the garden sujal tells her that they will have to leave now .
both get into the car .
sujal starts driving . he is sees that kashish is very quite . he puts on the music to change her mood .
the song played :-

AJEEB DASTAAN HAIN YE
KAHAN SHURU KAHAN KHATAM
YE MANZILA HAIN KAUN NI SE
NA WO SAMAJ SAKE NA HUM.................

hearing to the song kashish smiles .

kashish:- mujhe purane gaane aur soft misic bohat pasand hain .
sujal says :- isi bahane tumhare chehera par hasi to aayi .
sujal in his mind rishi sahi keh raha tha humari pasand khaffi milthi hain .
sujal reaches the offices . he takes kashish inside . and then introduces kashish to everbody .
sujal takes kashish to his cabin .
sujal
realizes that he has a conference meeting to attend . he tells kashish
to wait there . he says that he will be back in half an hour .
sujal leaves.
kashish takes a magzine and starts reading . 20 min have gone by .
suddenly some one enters the cabin searching for sujal .
he
sees that sujal is not around and notices kashish . he thinks that
kashish must be a employee and starts scloding her . the person is
piyush .......
piyush:- tumhe sharam nahi aati , salary tho achcha -khasa le the ho par kaam nahi kathe .
kashish:- par mein
piyush interupts and says :-it's ok . agar tumhe koi kaam nahi tho mera saath coffee pena chalogi .
kashish realizes that he is trying to flirt with her . she is very irritated .
kashish:- mr i don't know who u are & please mind your own business .
piyush:-
are vaah pehali baat tum yahan ki employee ho kar kaam nahi kar rahi
ho, aur dusari baat tumhari himmat kaise hui apne boss se is tarah baat
karne ki ?
kashish can't stand it any more . she is walking towards the door . when sujal comes in . sujal sees kashish .
sujal:- kahan ja rahi ho kashish
kashish:- sujal wo mein
piyush :- sujal kaise employees hain yahaan par , inhe tho apne maalik ka koi lihaz nahi hain .
sujal is confused . kashish looks at sujal and sujal understands what might have happened there .
sujal:-
piyush ye tu kya keh raha hain . ye kashish oberoi hain . sumeet oberoi
ki beti . hamare saath humare ghar per reh rahi hainn . lekin tu inse
nahi mila na .
piyush is shocked .
sujal:- kashish ye piyush hain lalit uncle ka beta . tum varun aur aman se mili ho na ye unka bada bhai hain .
kashish:- ok
piyush says sorry . but kashish is in no mood to talk to him . piyush leaves the place .
sujal:- tum theek ho na
kashish:- haan
suddenly the pune walks in with food .
sujal:- haan , yahan pe rak do .
kashish:- sujal ye sab kya hain ?
sujal:- wo kya hain na tum ne subah theek se nhastha nahi kiya na . is liye
kashish gives him a smiles & then both start eating .
while
eating kashish wants to take the curry & even sujal wants to do the
same both their hands collide while trying to take the curry . sujal
& kashish look at each other and both are lost into each others
eyes .
thoda sa music played in the back ground .
suddenly rishi enters and sees them .
rishi:- hi big b , hi kashish
both come out of their dream world and say hi , both are embarassed .
rishi:- kashish tum SHIMLA first time aayi ho na .
kashish:- haan
rishi:- to phir chalo kahiin picnic pe chalthe hain
kashish:- are mein abhi toh aayi hoon U.S.A se , yahaan ka kaam khatam kar ke chalthe hain .
at this sujal interupts and says
sujal:- kashish kaam tho hotha rahega , chalo na hum sab picnic pe chalthe hain .
kashish:- smiles and says ok
rishi:- theek hain then it is decided ki hum log kal picnic pe jaa rahein hain .
sujal:- done
rishi leaves .
kashish starts to discuss MR.GUPTA'S project with sujal .
sujal:- kashish zara sambhal kar rehna mr.gupta ka reputation utna achcha nahi hain
kashish:- tum ho na mere saath , tho kuch nahi hoga
sujal gives her a look in typical RAJEEV style
kashish realizes what she just said & says
kashish:- i mean tum sab log hona mere saath
sujal
& kashish smile . in the evening sujal ,kashish reach home . rishi
is already there . all the family is sitting in the hall waiting for
sujal and kashish . sujal enters with kashish . all greet them and all
the youngsters are very happy about going to the picnic . veena and
chetan say that they will not be able to make it to the picnic .
rishi:- big b ye piyush bhaiyaa kahaan hain....
sujal sees kashish irritated face when piyush's name is mentioned
sujal:- pata nahi rishi , aata hi hoga.......
all chat for some time and go to their respective rooms to relax . veena tells them to come down for dinner at 9

here some where in shimla a guy is sitting and talking to himself :- ajj pehali baar
us
ghar ke aaye hua kisi ne mera saccha roop dekha . mujhse itni baadi
bewakoofi kaise ho gayi . maine apne app se vaada kiya tha ki koi bhi
mera saccha roop tab thak nahi janega jab thak mein apne maksat mein
kamiyaab nahi ho jata . aur mera maksat hain "GAREWALS KI BARBADI " .
the guys laughs aloud and turns around and it is none other than
PIYUSH......................................................
........................................................

so
guys here ends the part three . well to know further what happens in
the picnic and y does piyush hate the garewals read the next part .
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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:15 pm

" ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY-- PART 4 "

next
day early in the morning all are awake as they have to leave early for
the picnic spot .all the family members are busy with their own work .
kashish is sitting in the hall along with sujal who is busy in reading
a project file .
kahish:- sujal , kya kar rahe ho??
sujal:- kuch nahi , bas ye file pad raha tha
kasish:- uffo… sujal tumne hi tho kal kaha tha ki kaam baad mein bhi ho saktha hain aur ab tum khud file lekar baite ho
sujal:- achcha baba lo maine ye file baand kar di .
both sujal and kashish start talking & laughing .
veena observes this whole conversation and has a big smile on her face ...................
some body enters the garewal mansion .
somebody:- doston ko bhoolgaye.........
yaaro ko bhoolgaye..........
lekin mere yaar..............
dosti ko kabhi nahi bhool na....................

sujal & kashish turn behind .
sujal :- are pratham tuuuuuuuu
pratham:- haan yaar mein
sujal:- tu kab wapas aaya
pratham:- abhi aaya hoon

[
basically pratham & sujal are best friends they are even business
associates , pratham's parents live in LONDON , so pratham & his
sister diya stay in the garewal mansion - don't ask me why ok
..........]

pratham:- aur ye kya kahan jane ki tayari ho rahi hain .
sujal:- woh actually hum sab kashish ke saath picnic pe ja rahein hain .
pratham:-kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, ab ye kashish kaun hain
...............................
sujal:- tho pratham ye hain kashish { pointing towards her } ye sumeet oberoi ki beti hain.
pratham:- oh , hi kashish mein pratham hu sujal ka dost
kashish:- hi pratham .
all
the other youngsters come down to the hall . piyush came home late last
night at that time the ghar ka naukar ramu kaka informed him that they
all were going to picnic the next day . so even piyush was with them .
all come out of the house to leave for the picnic . they have arranged for a picnic bus .
all get into the bus and wave to veena & chetan

in the bus :-
by the way sneha , shlok & diya call kashish , kashish di
sneha:- di waise app apne free time mein karthi kya hain
kashish:- zyadda kuch nahi bas basketball khelthi hoon , beheno ke saath masti karti hoon . aur mom ko irritate karthi hoon .
diya:-appki kitni behene hain
kashish:- meri char behena hain .
rishi:- kashish waise ek personal sawal pooch saktha hoon .
kashish:- hain poocho
rishi:- appka koi boy friend.....................................
all look at kashish waiting for a answer
kashish:- mera ab tak koi boyfriend nahi hain . lekin hain mere khaffi sare dost hain jo ladke hain.
shlok:- iska matlab U.S.A mein pal -badkar appka koi boyfriend nahi
kashish:-
boy friend....... shayad tum theek kahe rahe ho , par kya kare agar
mera koi boyfriend ban bhi gaya tho usko time kaun dega , meri aatma
swayam:- kya matlab hain appka
kashish:-
mera matlab ye hain ki mein hamesha business par concentrate kathi
hoon.aur shaam ko apni family aur friends ke saath rehthi hoon . tho
waqt kiske pass hain boyfriend pal ne ka .
pratham looks at sujal
and gives a sarcastic smile because sujal also has the same ideaology .
sujal feels awkward as pratham is teasing him .
all reach the
picnic spot . it is a beautiful landscape with waterfalls , a big open
land space . the point is something like the cliff {old sujal's fav
spot } . if people want they can go down to the waterfall but the road
is very slippery..................
all start enjoying the place . kashish is very happy to be with the garewals & others .
rishi:- chaliye na big b hum sab neeche chalthe hain .
sneha:-hain big b chaliye na
sujal:- nahi , tum log ja ke aao
diya:- plz bhaiyya chaliye na .
sujal
gets a phone call . he starts talking . in between he tells everybody
to go down, he tells that he'll join them after talking over the phone
.
all go down except kashish & piyush . kashish becoz she said
she would come along with sujal & piyush becoz he was least
interested .
sujal sees that kashish is waiting for him so he cuts the phone quickly .
sujal:- kashish , tum kyun nahi gayi
kashish:- bas aise hi .
piyush comes and says chale kashish
kashish:- sujal hum neeche chale
sujal:- hain chalo
sujal , kashish & piyush start going down .
sujal & kashish are talking and enjoying while piyush is getting irritated and jealous
sujal:- kashish sach hi batao tumhara koi boyfriend nahi hain.
kashish:- hain sujal mein sach keh rahee hoon, mera koi boyfriend nahi hain .
piyush tells slowly but kashish is able to hear . he says that waise bhi is chehra ka koi boyfriend kaise ho saktha hain.
kashish
is shocked & hurt . sujal has heard what piyush has said . sujal
sees that kashish is hurt . he gives a irritated stare to piyush &
starts walking in the front with kashish .
kashish is deep in her
thoughts when she suddenly trips and is about to fall . but sujal
catches her at the right time . both sujal & kashish remain in the
same position and are looking into each others eyes . both get up and
give a chota sa smile to each other .
then both go down to where all are enjoying . kashish starts playing in the water like a small kid .
sujal
sees this & thinks :- patha nahi kashish mein kya hain jo mujhe
uski taraf keech raha hain . mujhe aisa lagtha hain ki ek ajeeb si
kashish hain isme .
song played in the background:-

teri ye muskurahat
teri ye masumiyat
tujh mein hamesha shamil ye rahe
tujhko ye patha hi nahi
kitni pyarri tu hain mujhe
rahe sada yunhi hum
thoda sa pyar hua hain
bohat hain baki...........
{ he guys plz tell me what do u think of the song i have written }

sujal
is deep in his thoughts looking at kashish when ptratham comes and sees
this . pratham sees that sujal is looking at kashish .
pratham:- sujal agar pasand kartha hain use tho batha dena use...
sujal:- nahi yaar aisi koi baat nahi hain
pratham:- theek hain . pratham thinks main bhi dekhtha hoon tu kitne din thak chup rehtha hain .
sujal
thinks :- kya pratham sahi keh raha tha , kya mujhe sach mein kashish
se pyar ho gaya hain . nahi nahi aisi koi baat nahi kashish sirf meri
dost hain .. shayad........
all the younsters enjoy the whole time
& then it is their time to get back home .all are tired and so all
be quiet during the bus journey .sujal is meamwhile thinking about
pratham's words & kashish is talking to her sisters over the phone
. after reaching home all go to their respective rooms to rest .piyush
goes out .
piyush is on his way to meet somebody . he goes to a
deserted place where already somebody is waiting for piyush . piyush
gets down the car and then
piyush:- sorry uncle bohat aane mein der ho gayi .
person:- it is ok son

{
the main point is that the person is none other than piyush's mamma he
is aditya gujral . piyush's mother vasu was a very greedy lady . piyush
mother is still alive . vasu & aditya are the two people who have
made piyush aganist the garewals .
guys plz dont think it is some
serial where dead people come back alive u will come to know how she is
alive in just some time plz wait }
aditya:- tho kya chal raha hain . humara plan kahan thak pohancha..
piyush:-
uncle haan wo bus final stage pe hain maine ek shooter se baat kar li
hain aur wo ek ya do din mein apna khaam khatam kar lega
aditya:- use kisi bhi haal mein marna hoga .
piyush:- app fikar mat kijiye sujal zinda nahi bachega.
piyush:- uncle waise mom kaisi hain , aur kab aarahi hain wapas .
aditya:-wo theek hain . bohat jald aajayegi .
piyush:- theek hain uncle
aditya:-vaise
bhi wo garewals ye nahi jaanthe ki us din { 8 years back } vasu ne vo
flight board nahi ki varna wo bhi us flight accident mein mar jathi .
lekin ye baat koi nahi jaantha ki sirf lalit ne flight board ki aur
vasu ne nahi...............
piyush:-waise un garewals ko patha hi
nahi ke mom zinda hain . aur ye bhi unhe nahi patha ki wo log ek
aasthiin ke saap ko paal rahe hain .
piyush & aditya laugh
aditya:- theek hain , main abhi chaltha hoon .
piyush:- ok uncle . mein kaam hote hi phone karuga .
both piyush & aditya leave for their respective destinations .

in the garewal mansion :-
sujal is just resting on the bed when he gets a call from mr.gupta
mr.gupta:- hello mr. garewal .
sujal:-hello
mr.gupta:- wo actually meri kal kashish oberoi ke saath meeting hain . wohi confirm karne ke liye phone kiya tha .
sujal:- theek hain mr.gupta kal subah 11 baje hum log meeting mein milthe hain SG ENTERPRISES mein .
mr.gupta:- theek hain
sujal puts down the phone and goes to kashish's room to inform it to her .
sujal knocks , kashish opens the door
kashish:- sujal tum
sujal:- hain kashish wo actually kal 11 baje humari mr.gupta ke saath meeting hain . ye hi yaad dilane aaya tha .
kashish:- theek hain .
sujal:- maine disturb tho nahi kiya na
kashish:- nahi . now kashish is getting restless as she wants to go inside .
sujal:- theek hain . good night
kashish :- good night & she closes the door
sujal thinks :- ab ise kya ho gaya . he smiles and goes to his room .
kashish
goes to her room & continues her work . actually kashish was
writing her diary . in which she was writing about sujal and the
moments spent with him and that's y she was behaving like that with
sujal .
she is totally in her thoughts. thinking about sujal she gets a smile on her face .

song in the background
jane ye kya hua hain
dil nahi mera bas mein
kaunsa mod aaya zindagi ke safar mein
bas gaya tu hi tu ab tho meri nazar mein

thinking all this kashish goes to sleep.
the same is the case with sujal he is also thinking about kashish and goes to sleep.

well
guys here ends the part 4 . to know more as what will piyush do . what
will happen to sujal , kashish . how will gupta effect sujal kashish's
relationship . read the next part to know all get answers for all these
questions . guys u people may feel that i'am writing more about sujal
& kashish and ignoring all other characters . but guyz just wait
for some time and u will have a story which is totally
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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:18 pm

"ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 5 "

next
day morning kashish is in the dining table along with veena . shlok and
diya come down stairs. kashish and veena are deep in conversation .
actually kashish is telling veena as to what all they did in their
picnic .
shlok :-good morning ma , kashish di
diya:- good morning
veena and kashish together give a smile and say :- good morning
veena:- tum dono aaj inti jaldi kaise aagaye ? college jaldi jana hain kya ??
shlok :- hain maa , vo actually humme { he pauses for second and asks } are diya humme kaunsa lecture hain abb ??
diya:- kya yaar shlok tumhe kitni baar kahu ki humme ektra business ki class hain ajj .
sujal
comes down in a total black suit { looking dashing as ever } pratham
also comes down . they have heard the whole conversation
sujal:- shlok tum bhi kamal ho , tumhe kis class ke liye jana hain tumhe wo bhi pata nahi
shlok:- are bhaiya diya meri best friend hain aur dost ke liye ye itna tho kar sakthi hain ??
pratham:-
bilkul sahi shlok .tum jaanthe ho shlok sujal hamesha mera liye notes
banatha tha , meri attendance deta tha . aur waisa bhi , dost hotha hi
is liye hain.
sujal & diya give a what kind of look to shlok & pratham .
kashish is enjoying a small nok-jhok between the family and is reminded of her sisters .
now shlok says:- kashish di aap bataiye kaun sahi hain
all look at kashish waiting for a reply .
veena interupts all of them and says :- kyun bechari kashish ko tang kar rahe ho. chup chap khana kaa loo.
all smile and get back to eating . as they know veena would scold them if they continued to argue .
veena
goes inside for a moment . shlok's cell rings . as u know he is a very
big flirt the call is of one of his girl friends anita . he finishes
talking on the cell .
shlok:- diya chalo jaldi , anita ka phone aaya tha . wo mera wait kar rahi hain .
diya's
face drops down as she hears anita's name . kashish observes this . she
feels that diya has certain feelings for shlok .
sujal:- ye anita kaun hain ?????????
diya:- bhaiya ye anita shlok ki nayi girl friend hain .
now shlok & diya leave for their college .
pratham , sujal & kashish are still sitting
veena comes and sees kashish has not finished her breakfast
veena:- kashish beta kya hua . kya soch rahi ho .
kashish:- kuch nahi aunty . bas aise hi project ke bare mein soch rahi thi .
veena:-
kashish tum vo sab baad mein sochna phela aapna khana khatm karo .varna
jab sonia aur sumeet yahan aayege to mujh se puchchege ki kya mein
tumhe khana nahi khila rahi roon .
kashish gives a weak smile .
sujal:- kashish chale , hum me meeting par bhi jana hain .
kashish:- theek hain chalo . pratham tum nahi aa rahe ho .
pratham:- nahi kashish mujhe kahiin aur jana hain meeting attend karne ke liye
kashish:-theek hain c u later , bye .
kashish and sujal leave for the office . in the office they are waiting for mr.gupta to come .
mr.gupta comes .
mr.gupta:- hello mr.garewal .
sujal:- hello , mr.gupta inse miliye yeh hain kashish oberoi .
mr.gupta:- hello ms.oberoi . kaisi hain app .
kashish:- hello , ab yeh formalities poori ho gayi ho tho kaam ki baat kare .
sujal for the first time observed the kind of coldness with which she was talking to mr.gupta .
mr.gupta
, kashish & sujal discussed the project for some time . mr.gupta
told them to visit his office while going to their home because there
were some papers to be singed which he had not brought along .
mr.
gupta left & again kashish and sujal were busy in their own work .
but sometimes kashish would give a stare to sujal while sujal was not
looking and the same was the case with sujal .
sujal:- kashish ek baat poochu . tum bura tho nahi manogi na
kashish:- haan , go ahead
sujal:- tumne mr.gupta se aise kyun baat ki ........
kashish:-
sujal aapno mein aur business associates mein bohat farq hotha hain ,
is liye shayad tumhe mera behaviour ajeeb laga ho . apni apni soch par
nirbhar kartha hain ki hum logo se kaise deal kar the hain .
sujal:- shayad tum sahi keh rahi ho .
both
continue their work . suddenly sujal ke maan mein kashish ke baato ka
khayal aatha hain ki kashish ne kaha aapno mein aur business associates
mein bohat farq hotha hain. he sees kashish and sees that she is
carrying a whole lot of files in her hand . suddenly all the files
falls . sujal rushes to help her to pick up the files . both sujal
& kashish r picking up the files both their hands meet & they
look at each other

song in the background:-

sujal's version:-
ek kashish si najaane
kyun rahe mere maan main
mein ne tau samjha nahi
magar ehsaas hone lage hain
thoda sa pyar hua hain
bohat hain baki...........................


kashish's version:-

aaj kal subah , shaam
tumhari yaad saathane lagi hain
mujhe ye kya hone laga hain
dil ye kahan khone laga hain
thoda sa pyar hua hain
thoda hain baki.....................................

both are so deeply involved with each other . that they forget the world around .
{though
kashish is a tom boy sujal has started developing feelings for her .
but note that it is not for her beauty but for her attitude &
behaviour }. now the time is 6 kashish and sujal are leaving for home
while going home they decide to meet mr.gupta . when they are leaving
the manager comes and informs sujal that he has to go through some
papers and sign them . sujal tells kashish that she should go to gupta
and sign the papers , he even tells her that she should go through the
papers before singing them . kashish agrees .and leaves .
sujal
carries on with his work . kashish is stuck in a traffic jam and by the
time she reaches gupta's office it is 7.30 . meanwhile sujal also
decides to go home.being tired sujal decides to take the short cut
route to his house .

in mr. gupta's office kashish is feeling very uncomfortable . as gupta is going on staring at her .
meanwhile sujal reaches home and goes to his room to get freshen up .
kashish has gone through the papers and singed them and she wants to leave . but gupta does not let her go . he says
gupta:- kashishhhhh jaana zaroori hain kya
kashish:- kya matlab hain aapka
gupta:- dekho kashish mera khayal se tum samajdaar ho , ho na ?? . phir samaj kyun nahi rahi ho
kashish:- app hosh mein tho hain , mr. gupta
in the garewal house sujal comes to the hall
veena:- tu kab aaya sujal
sujal:- bas ma abhi thodi der pehle , mumma kashish kahan hain
veena:- kashish tumhare saath aane wali thi na
sujal:- kyaaaaaa mumma app kehna chahthi hain ki kashish ab thak nahi aayi .
sujal
runs to kashish's room to check whether she is there . he does not find
her there and comes down and rushes outside without telling anybody .
he starts his car and he is very worried as he knows gupta is not a
nice man . he starts driving very fast .
in gupta's office gupta
is trying to get close to kashish and kashish is crying for help .
gupta tries to force kashish . but suddenly sujal enters . kashish
heaves a sigh of relief . seeing sujal kashish goes and hugs him
tightly . sujal warns mr.guta and cancels the contract and leaves the
place with kashish . who still is scared , crying and holding sujal
very tightly . sujal and kashish come out . inside gupta calls some
body and says :- maine appna kaam kar diya hain , ab tum appna kaam
karo .
the other person says:- ok . ab mein dekhlunga .
gupta cuts the phone and has a wicked smile on his face .
sujal
and kashish r sitting in the car . sujal sees kashish is crying , he
goes to her and wipes her tears . kashish clungs into his arms crying
very bitterly . sujal and kashish slowly drive home . kashish decides
to behave normal and not to tell anybody .
kashish & sujal enter
veena:- aagaye tum dono , itna der kyun ho gaya
kashish and sujal together say :- nahi bas kuch kaam tha .
sujal:- mumma baki sab kahan hain
veena:- wo sab movie ke liye gaye hain . wo log tumhara kab se intezar kar rahe the .phir maine unhe jane ko kaha.
sujal:- theek hain , mumma
both refuse their dinner and go to their rooms .
kashish is sitting in her room and crying . some one knocks on the door .
kashish:- come in
sujal enters with a box in his hand
kashish:- sujal tum yahan
sujal:-
haan kashish woh first aid box laaya tha . tumhe chot lagi hain na . {
actually kashish got hurt when she was trying to save herself from
gupta } .
sujal comes and sits beside her . he takes her hand and
applies dettol on it . kashish feels the pain . but manages to control
herself .
kashish:- sujal thanks
sujal:- thanks kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
kashish:- wo is liye ki tum ne aunty se kuch nahi kaha mr.gupta ke baare mein.
sujal:-
kashish pehli baat dosto ki kuch bato ko sab ko bata the nahi , wo dost
hi kya jo apni dost ke mann ki baat nahi samaj sake aur dusari baat
dosti mein
no thanks no sorry . samjhiiiii
kashish smiles .
outside
the room veena is standing she has heard the whole conversation and
understood what might have happened that day & decides not to ask
them about it. she enters the room and she sees that sujal and kashish
are hitting each other playfully . sujal sees veena and tells her to
sit with them . all the three chat for a long time then sujal &
veena leave wishing kashish good night . kashish goes off to sleep with
a cute smile on her face .
veena is with sujal
veena:- sujal , aaj sonia se meri baat hui thi usne bato-bato mein bataya ki 2hafte baad kashish ka janam din hain .
sujal:- mumma mujhe lagtha hain , humme use ek suprise dena chahiye
veena:- mujhe bhi ye hi lagtha hain , itne kam dino mein wo itna gul -mil gayi hain humare saath .
sujal:- app fikar mat karo mein kuch kartha hoon . abhi app jaiye aur so jaiye
veena:- good night .
sujal:- good night .
sujal
goes and sits on his bed and thinks :- kashish jitni tough dikhthi hain
utni hi sensitive aur emotional hain . thinking about that days events
he goes to sleep .
the next day everything is the same { normal } :-
kashish
has already called her father and told her that she is not intrested in
gupta's project . she does not tell the reason .
kashish and sujal
are going to leave for the office when chetan comes and tells:-ajj
subah meri sumeet se baat hui usne bataya ki tum { kashish} us project
mein intrested nahi ho .
he pauses for a second and says :-
kashish , sujal sumeet aur main ye chahthe hain ki oberoi aur garewal
industries merge kare tum dono kya soch the ho .
sujal & kashish say :- great , ye tho bohat achcha hoga .
the scene ends there .
4 days have passed and the same routine continues . sujal & kashish are busy with the merger proceedings .
it is the fifth day . some legal problem arises in the merger.
sujal:- kashish ye problem mera dost hi suljha saktha hain .
kashish:- nahi sujal ye problem mera dost solve karega .
sujal and kashish start arguing . they have a very heated argument .
kashish:- achcha tumhare lawyer ka naam batao .
sujal:- us ka naam hain . sujal's cell rings and he leaves the place .
kashish
and sujal both are very frustrarted both don't want to give a chance
for the other to speak . they both have their own ego while dealing in
bussiness matters.
some person is standing outside opposite to the
garewal industries building . he is waiting for somebody to come out of
the building. he gets a call from some body .
caller:- hello
some person:- hello boss
the caller :- abey , kya aaj kaam ho jayege
some person :- piyush sir aap fikar mat kijiye ajj sujal garewal ka kaam thamaam ho jayega .
{ the caller is piyush & the person is the shooter }
sujal
and kashish r not intrested in talking to each other but they have to
go home together as they both are heading towards the same destination
.
sujal comes to the car & kashish is a bit behind as she is walking slowly.
the shooter fires the bullet.............................

so
here ends the part 5 . to know what happens to sujal is he hospitalized
or not , will his and kashish's argument ever end , who is the lawyer
sujal is talking about,who is lawyer kashish is talking about . to have
answers for these questions read the next part .

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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:20 pm


" ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 6 "

kashish
is still walking very slowly , she keeps looking everywhere . suddenly
she sees the shooter and she also sees that he has fired a bullet that
is heading towards sujal , the shooter also sees her .
kashish runs to sujal who is facing the car door and says
kashish :- sujallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll .
by
this time the bullet hit kashish on her hand . but the shooter fired
again and this time aiming at kashish because she had seen him . this
time the bullet hit kashish in her stomach.
sujal was surprised
and turned around to see what had happened . but what he saw shocked
his life out of him , he saw kashish falling down . he catches her and
she falls on his knees unconscious . sujal is very shocked and then he
sees blood woozing out of her wounds . he realizes the importance of
the situation and puts her in the car , rushes her to the hospital . he
reaches appollo hospital . he carries kashish inside and puts her on
the stretcher .the doctor comes . kashish is taken inside the operation
theatre .
sujal is standing outside and is very worried .
he
is thinking :- kashish ko please bacha ligiye baghwan , mujhse meri ek
achchi dost ko mat chiniye { sirf dost..... } , kashish bohat achchi
hain , wo kabhi kisi ka bura nahi karthi . please bhagwan app ek bar
mera pyar mujhse cheen chuke hain is bar app meri dost ko nahi cheen
sakhthe.............................. .....

sujal is thinking
about all these things . his cell is going on ringing . he does not
hear it . then finally he realises that his cell is ringing . he picks
it up .
sujal:- hello
rishi:- BIG B app aur kashish kahan par hain ?? mein kabse appka cell try kar raha hoon.
sujal:- haan wo actually mein hospital main hoon .
rishi:- hospital , par kyun BIG B
sujal:-
rishi actually , sujal tells him everything what has happened . rishi
is worried . he tells sujal that they all are coming to the hospital
and keeps the phone down .
everybody in the garewal house are sitting in the house and chatting . rishi comes in .
veena:- rishi , baat ki tune sujal se
rishi:- maa wo , rishi hesitates to tell
veena:- bol rishi
rishi:- he tells everything which sujal had told him .
all are shocked . rishi , veena , CG , pratham leave for the hospital .
in the hospital:-
sujal is pacing too and fro outside the operation theatre . veena and all enter . they see sujal and rush towards him .
sujal sees them . veena first goes to sujal and says
veena:- sujal ye kya hain inta sara khoon { actually there is total blood on sujal's shirt }.
sujal:- kuch nahi mumma
pratham :- kashish kaisi hain
sujal:- pata nahin , ab tak doctor ne kuch nahi kaha .
just then the red light of OT had gone off and the doctor came out .
all rushed to the doctor
cg:- kashish kaisi hain doctor
doc:- operation ho gaya hain , par agle 24 ghanthe mein agar unhe hosh nahi aaya tho......
sujal jumps in between and says
sujal:- wo theek ho jayegi na......
doc:- bhagwan par bharosa rakhiye...
the doc leaves......
sujal asks everybody to leave . he says he would be there . all first refuse but then sujal persuades them .
all leave...........
sujal is sitting in the corridor . he opens the I.C.U rooms door and walks in
{ by the way kashish is shifted to the I.C.U } .
he
goes sits near kashish . and is admiring kashish's innocent &
nbsp;face . sujal then goes and sits on the sofa in the room . he is
very tired and falls off to sleep .
in garewal house all are worried . veena decides that they will tell the oberoi's
later .
in
the hospital sujal suddenly gets up with a jerk because he in his sleep
hears kashish panting . sujal intially thinks it's a dream but then
sees kashish and realises that she indeed is panting . sujal runs out
to call the doctor . the doctor rushes in.
sujal is sent out of the I.C.U . sujal is waiting outside when the doctor comes out
{ and ya it is about 5 in the morning} . sujal goes to him
sujal:- ab kaisi hain kashish doctor
kashish:- ab bilkul theek hain , aur use kisi bhi pal hosh aa saktha hain .
sujal:- thanks doctor
the doctor leaves....
sujal
goes inside and sits beside kashish . he sees kashish gaining
conciousess . kashish opens her eyes . she sees sujal and is relieved .
sujal helps kashish to get up and sit on the bed .
kashish:- ouch.........
sujal:- kya hua
kashish:- kuch nahi , bas thoda sa dard ho raha hain .
sujal:- tum theek ho hona
kashish:- haan baba , bilkul first class .
sujal:- tumne tho kal dara hi diya tha , kya zaroorat thi beech mein aane ki lag jane dethi goli mujhe
kashish:- sujal kya karoon mujhe apna bhi swart dekhna padtha hain na
sujal:- tumhara kaisa swart??
kashish:- are sidhi si baat hain agar tumhe wo goli lag jathi tho mein
jagadthi kisse , dil ki baat kehthi kisse . samjhe " MR. BHUDHU "
sujal looks at kashish and smiles .
kashish:- sujal tumne ghar par tho kisi ko nahi bataya na { she means her home } ??
sujal:-
nahi kashish , wo kal raat mumma ka phone aaya tha wo keh rahi thi ki
wo tumhare ghar walon ko pareshan nahi karna chahthi .
kashish:- bohat achcha kiya , warna wo log duadthe duadthe yahan aa ja the .
kashish sees that sujal's shirt is full of blood and she even realizes that he has'nt changed .
kashish:- sujal tum kal raat se yahiin par ho , ghar nahi gaye ??
sujal:- nahi wo actually [ he hesitates and says ] , tumhe chodkar kaise jatha main
kashish gives him a sweet smile . both continue there talking when veena and pratham and rishi enter .
veena:- kashish beta kaisi ho
kashish:- theek hoon aunty
kashish
cell rings . the cell is with sujal . he gives it to her . but kashish
is unable to hold and so the phone is put on speaker .
kashish:- hello
sonia:- kash kaisi ho
kashish:- mommm , mein bilkul theek hoon . app kaisi hain
sonia:- mein bhi theek hoon . ek min ruko ye tumhari bahene mujhe baat nahi karne de rahi hain .
gauri :- hi kash
kashish:- gauri
veena , rishi , pratham and sujal see kashish face glowing while talking to her family .
kashish:- gauri baki sab kahan hain
{ in oberoi house the speaker is on }
gauri :- sab yahiin par hain , tumhe bohat miss kar rahe hain .
kashish:- achcha aki ki koi khabar
gauri:- pata nahi , ruk mein charu , mehak ya archie se poochthi hoon .
charu comes
charu:- hi diiii
kashish:- hi charu , kaisi ho .
charu:- bilkul theek di
kashish:- charu aki kaisa hain , uski koi khabar
charu:- di wo theek hain , wo appse baat karna chahtha tha wo keh raha tha ki wo INDIA aa raha hain .
now sumeet enters and takes the phone
sumeet:- hi kash baccha { he calls kashish like that } .
kashish
feels embara ssed because his father is calling her bachcha ,but not
because he is calling her but becoz all are standing beside her.
kashish:- dad , kaise hain app ??
sumeet:- pehle tu mujhe baata tu kaisi hain , INDIA kaise laga ??
kashish:- INDIA bohat achcha hain , aur mein bhi theek hoon.
sumeet:- merger proceedings kaisi chal rahi hain ??
kashish:- bohat achchi
kashish and sumeet start discussing about business when sonia comes and tells
sonia:- in baap - beti ko tho hamesha hi business soojtha hain , kabhi koi aur baat tho nahi karthe .
sumeet:-
achcha kashish agar mein tumse se aur thodi der business ki baat karuga
tho tumhari maa mujh par baras padegi . bye kash bachcha . apna khayal
rakhna .
kashish:- byeee dad ..........
veena:- tum ne un logon ko bataya kyun nahi kashish
kashish:- nahi aunty agar mein batathe tho wo pareshan ho jathe , aur ab tho mein theek hoon na
pratham:- starts teasing her kashish ye kash baccha kaun hain.............................
kashish:- prathammmmmmm
just then the police enters
[ the people in the garewal house don't know that sujal was the actual target .]
police person:- ms. kashish humme appka bayaan chahiye
kashish tells everything that had happened
all are shocked on coming to know sujal was the target.......
the police tells kashish that they will get the sketch done after some days . the police leaves ..
veena:- gets veryyyyy sentimental and tells to kashish thanks kashish tum nahi hothi tho mera sujal.....
kashish interupts and says
kashish:-
ye app kya keh rahi hain aunty , ye tho mera farz tha , aur agar mein
sujal ko na bachathi tho phir apne dost ko kho dethi .
veena gives a weak smile to kashish . the doctor comes and tells that kashish can be discharged but she needs some bed rest .
all
are relieved and take kashish home . they all reach home . kashish
enters with others . in the hall all are waiting for kashish . all see
her and greet her .
kashish is sitting with everybody in the hall . veena has gone to the kitchen and cg leaves after meeting kashish .
shlok comes to kashish and says
shlok:-
di app us din humare sawaal ka jawaab nahi de payi { remember
sujal,diya , pratham and shlok's argument on the dining table in the
last part }
kashish:- mujhe lagtha hain tum charon hi sahi ho.......
diya:- matlabbbb
kashish:-
matlab ye agar dosti mein hum ek dusare ka kaam share kare tho kuch
bura nahi lekin humme dusuro par apne kaam thopne nahi chahiye .
samjheeeeeeeeeee
veena comes
veena:- kashish tum jao aur aaram
karo , doctor ne tumhe complete bed rest ke liye kahan hain , sujal tu
bhi jakar fresh ho jaaa
sujal and kashish leave to their respective rooms .
sujal
is in his room he gets fresh . sujal does not put his shirt he is
wearing for wash but instead puts it in his cupboard . he himself is
confused over his behaviour..
{ and ya the shirt is full of kashish's blood }

days
are passing by kashish is getting alright , aur waise bhi wo theek
kaise nahi hothi uska khayal tho sujal rak raha tha na time time per
usko davayi detha tha , uska khana - peena ka dhayan rakhtha tha . dono
ki dosti gehri hothi gayi ...

it's been 6 days after the
incident . kashish is absolutely fit and fine . kashish decides to
visit the office . veena allows her to go only on one condition that
she would not strain herself too much . kashish agrees and leaves with
sujal.....
in the office kashish is in sujal's cabin . sujal is in
the conferance room talking to somebody over the phone . kashish enters
the conferance room in search of sujal , sujal sees her and cuts the
call very abruptly as though he did'nt want kashish to hear what or to
whom was he talking.
kashish feels his behaviour a bit odd but decides to ignore it..
now in sujal's cabin both kashish and sujal are sitting and discussing about the merger.
sujal:- kashish us din tho humne ek dusare se ladayi ki na , phir tumne mujhe kyun bachaya.
kashish:-{
she smiles and says } tum bilkul theek keh rahe ho mujhe tumhe nahi
bachana chahiye tha na , dekho sujal personal or professional life ko
kabhi mix nahi karna chahiye samjheee
sujal:- haan samaj gaya
kashish:- mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain
sujal:- haan kaho
kashish:- wo mein ye kehna chahthi thi ki ajj se tumhe MR.SUJALGAREWAL &nbs p;ke naam se nahi pukarugi
sujal:-to phir kya pukarogi
kashish:- mein tumhe BHUDHU bulaugi.. saying this she starts laughing .
sujal
sees her and smiles . both get back to work . both are not able to
concentrate . kashish is thinking about sujal and vice - versa .
in
the evening kashish and sujal reach home . sujal walks in first . he
sees that somebody is there and all are very happy . sujal recognizes
that somebody and says
sujal:- akshatttttttttttttttttttttttttttt , sujal goes and hugs him .
akshat:- kaisa hain yaar tu ,
sujal:- main bilkul theek hu , tu bata tu kaisa hain aur kab aaya .
akshat:- are yaar main ek dum theek hoon , socha tum logon ko suprise doon .kaisa laga mera suprise
veena:- bohat achacha
sneha:- BIG B di kahan par hain
akshat and sujal are facing opposite side of the door . sujal turns back and says
sujal:- wo rahi { actually kashish has entered and walking slowly towards everybody.}
sujal:- then says kashish inse milo ye mera sab se achcha dost hain .
akshat
turns behind . sujal is going to introduce kashish to akshat but too
everybody's suprise akshat goes forward and hugs
kashish . kashish
is very happy seeing him . all are wondering as how akshat and kashish
know each other......................

so guyz here ends my
part . i'am sure you must also be wondering as how akshat and kashish
know each other , what is piyush's reaction about the shooting incident
, who was the girl in sujal's life , will sujal and kashish realize
their love for each other , what plans has sujal made for kashish's
birthday party , yeh sab jaane ke liye wait for ZKS's Next part....

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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:22 pm

" ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY --- PART 7 "


sujal
is wondering as to what is happening { actually everybody is wondering
but i think we guyz are only bothered about sujal . am i right
guysssssssssssssssssssss}.
veena:- are kashish , akshat tum log ek dusare ko jaanthe ho kya ???
akshat and kashish separate .
akshat :- haan mumma
{ he calls veena mumma and cg dad , becoz bachpan se he has been with them }
akshat
continues :- mumma mein aur kash PARIS mein ek saat padthe the . app
tho jaanthi ho na ki mein vakalat ke saath saath business
administration ka course bhi kartha tha . kash mera saath business
administration ke course mein thi .
kashish is seeing all this and wondering how come akshat is here ???
akshat sees her expression and says:-
akshat:-
kash , aise moo banane ki koi zaroorat mein jaantha hoon tum kya
confusion mein ho . tum ye jaana chahthe ki mein yahan kya kar raha
hoon ??
kashish:- tumhe kaise pata chala
akshat:- tho madam
kashish oberoi mein tumhe pichle paanch saal se jaantha hoon. tumhe
itna bhi na jaan paya tho hum dost kis haq se kehlayenge....... mein is
ghar ka beta hoon . tumhe yaad hain mein tumhe hamesha bataya kartha
tha ki mera ek sabse achcha dost hain jinke saath meri family rehthi
hain . tho ye hain meri family. aur sujal mera sabse achcha
dost........
akshat :- aur waise tum yahan kya kar rahi ho

{ before kashish could reply veena interrupted and said }
now veena says :- tum log jakar fresh ho jao . baad mein saari baatein pooch lena..
akshat , sujal , kashish go to their respective rooms.............................................

{ guyz i would like to tell you that all the family members are there except for piyush . he has gone out some where }

all the three get fresh . sujal is sitting in his room and is very happy . someone knocks on the door .
kashish enters
sujal:- kashish tum...... koi kaam tha ???
kashish:-
haan sujal , wo actually ye file ke kuch contents mujhe samaj nahi aa
raha the ( she is holding a file in her hand ) , if u don't mind please
meri madat kar doge .............
( today i'll explain something
about sujal's room , it is the same as the one in kth but only
difference is he has a study table in one corner on which all files are
placed , there is even a computer on that table ) .
sujal:- it's ok kashish , tum mujhe batao kya problem hain................
akshat comes to sujal's room . he sees kashish , sujal there .
sujal & kashish are busily discussing some business problem . they don't observe that akshat is there in the room.
akshat :- he coughs to get their attention .
sujal & kashish look back
sujal:- aki aa na ander aajaa { actually he is standing at the door }
akshat:- kya sujal mein itne saalon baad aaya hoon , aur tum phir kaam ko lekar baite ho
sujal:- nahi bus kashish ka ye doubt solve kar raha tha................ ;
akshat
:- kash ka , tum isse chod do ise tho hamesha koi na koi doubt hothi
hain. iska naam humme baadal dena chahiye kashish oberoi se doubt
oberoi .
kashish:- akiiiiiiiiiiiii , mein tumhe maar dalugi...................
akshat:- waise kash tum yahan kya kar rahi hooo
sujal
intervents and explains everything as to why she is here , what
mr.gupta did & then what they are doing now . akshat is very happy
, but also shocked after hearing the shoot - out incident .
akshat
:- kash tum kuch badli ho ya waisi hi ho , dekho tum hamesha ladko ke
jaisa pesh aathi ho . ab tum INDIA mein ho tho ye sab nahi chalega ...
samjhiiiiiii
kashish:- samjhi.........
akshat:- waise bhi akshat the great ki baatein sab ko samaj ni padthi hain.......
kashish:-
akiii , mujhe patha hain ki tumhara naam akshat hain.... par ye akshat
the great kaun hain.. mujhe tho koi nahi dikh raha hain . haan lekin
mujhe ek
akshat the waste zaroor dikh raha hain..........
[ while telling all this kashish is slowly moving behind ]
akshat goes to hit kashish with a pillow but kashish hides behind sujal and accidentally the pillow hits sujal.......
sujal:- ouchhhhhhhh.................
kashish :- kya hua sujal , laga kya { she is making innocent face expressions }
sujal:- nahi kuch nahi....
akshat:- is bar tum bach gayi kash , kyunki is baar sujal beech mein aagaya tha , par agli bar nahi bachoge...............
kashish
wantedly teases akshat and now akshat starts running behind kashish
chasing her in the room.... ( guyz i think you people know that this
scene is happening in sujal's room )........
kashish starts running . sujal tries to stop both of them but in vain .
kashish takes a pillow and hits akshat and she is running backwards she trips
and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and and
she
lands on sujallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllll
sujal sees kashish and kashish sees sujal there eyes are locked & they forget the world around them .

song in the background :-

{MALE VERSION }

ajeeb daastan hain ye....................
kahan shuru kahan khatam.............
ye manzilan hain kaun si................
na tum samaj sake na hum.............

{guys
now for the female version i'am writing some other song . because ajeeb
daastan hain ye fits into sujal situation , but not in kashish's
situation }


{FEMALE VERSION }

churalo na dil mera sanam.............
banalo na appna sanam.................
ki tere bin na ji sakhege................
ki tere bin na mar sakhege..............
kuch bhi na kar sakhege...............

sujal
and kashish totally forget that akshat is also there in the room .
suddenly both realize and get up feeling embarassed . akshat gives a
cute smile seeing the situation...

akshat , sujal , kashish continue talking....
veena enters.
veena :- akshat , sujal , kashish chalo khana kha lo
sujal :- nahi mumma bookh nahi hain...........
akshat :- mujhe bhi bhookh nahi hain.......
kashish
wants to give the same answer which sujal and akshat gave . but before
kashish could say anything , veena interupts and says:-
veena:- kashish ab tum ye mat kehna ki tumne bhi khana nahi hain kyunki main jaanthi hoon ki tumne subah se kuch nahi khaya
kashish has a puzzled expression on her face as to how veena came to know she has'nt eaten anything since morning
kashish:-
nahi aunty main aisa kuch nahi kahugi , par aunty appko kaise patha
chala ki maine subah se kuch nahi khaya { she looks at sujal and sees
that he is looking else where , so she understands it was he who told
veena } , aunty waise sujal ne bhi subah se kuch nahi khaya...........
veena:- sujal ye kashish kya keh rahi hain .
sujal:- mumma woh mainn
veena :- ab bholega meeting mein tha , ya aur koi bahana banayega . ab chup chap sab chal kar khana kaa lo
sujal & akshat :- ji mumma , app jaiye hum aathe hain
veena:- kashish tum in dono ko 5 min mein neeche lekar aajana . warna ye dono phir se koi bahana bana denge
kashish giggles where as sujal & akshat frown
kashish:- theek hain aunty........................

sujal , kashish and akshat come down for dinner { all others have eaten }
all three start eating their dinner . veena is also sitting with them.......

akshat:- patha hain mumma mein jab 5 saal yahan se duur tha , tab mujhe kabhi laga hi nahi ki main akela hoon.....
veena smiles
akshat
continues :- kyunki hamesha jab mujhe ek dost ki zaroorat thi tho kash
thi mere saath . jab bhi hamari college ki vacation hothi thi tho mein
kashish ke ghar jatha tha aur wahan bohat masti kartha tha ...........

{
guys u might be wondering as y 5 saal he stayed in paris i'll tell you
that's because akshat did business admistration in the 1st 3 years and
the next 2 years he practiced law and kashish joined her father's
business after completion of her business admistration but kashish and
akshat always maintained their friendship }

akshat again
continues :- [ this time he turns towards sujal and says ] :- jaanthe
ho sujal mein wahan jakar itni jaldi kaise settle ho gaya , kyunki tum
hamesha mere saath the
sujal:- mainnnnnnnnnnnnnn
akshat:- haan tum , jaanthe ho kaise ??
sujal:- nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
akshat :- tum mere saath hamesha kashish ke roop mein the ....
now akshat towards veena and says :- mumma app jaanthi hain , ye kash aur sujal bilkul ek jaise hain kai aspect mein....
talks go on and on .
akshat's cell rings . he picks his phone
akshat :- hellooo , akshat raheja bol raha hoon
the
person on the phone:- zyahir si baat hain agar akshat raheja call kiya
hain tho akshat raheja hi bol raha hoga na koi bhoot ya phir koi xyz
tho nahi na..............
akshat :- haan bandhar bolo , kya kaam tha
the person on the phone:- akshat mein phone rak rahi hoon , agar tumne mujhe bandar kaha tho
akshat
:- sorry phir nahi kahunga { there is silence at the other end , akshat
says } itna sanata kyun hain bhai
charuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kaha na i'am sorry
charu :- theek hain
akshat :- tho bolo kaisi ho , aur kis kaam se phone kiya
charu :- mein theek hoon . aur kya matlab mein kya hamesha koi kaam ho tho tumse baat karthi hoon .
akshat:- nahi babaa
charu:- waise ek kaam tha , wo di tumhara contact address pooch rahi thi
akshat:- tumhari diiiiiiiiiiiiii
kashish is sitting opposite to akshat , she snatches the cell from akshat's hand....
sujal & veena are wondering as why did she take the phone they don't know it is kashish sister on the phone..........
charu:- akiiii , tumho ho na { she says that becoz akshat is not repling }
kashish:- akiiii , nahi kashish bol rahi hoon...
charu:- diiiiiiiiiiiii app
kashish:-
charu haan mein hi bol rahi hoon , agar tumhe yaad na ho tho mein yaad
diladu ki mein tumhari badi behen hoon............
akshat , sujal & veena are watching kashish intently . while she is talking to charu .
later kasish gives the phone to akshat after finishing her talk & he finishes the call.........
all the three finish there dinner .
veena :- akshat tu ab yahiin rahega na ,wapas tho nahi jayega na
akshat is not listening . sujal shakes him and he is in his senses .
akshat:- nahi mumma mein wapas nahi jaa raha hoon . yahan sujal ke saath kaam karuga.....
sujal:- waise tum kin khayalon mein khoye hue the aki
akshat:- kuch nahi
kashish:-
[suddenly says ] aki agar tum usse pasand karthe ho tho bata kyun nahi
dete . veena is standing at a distance she says
veena:- askshat ye kashish kya keh rahi hain ........
akshat { feeling a bit shy but trying to avoid } :- nahi mumma aise kuch nahi hain .
ye kash tho kuch bhi kehthi rehthi hain....
veena goes inside
akshat:- tum mujhe ek din marvaoge kash
sujal
understands the whole situation . he sees akshat who is making angry
faces towards kashish . sujal smiles very sweetlyyyy

now enters some one
someone :- akshat kaise hooooo
akshat turns around to see it is piyush
{ guys i think you know akshat & piyush are brothers }

akshat { answers very indifferently } :- theek hoon.......
{
piyush realises the coldness akshat is having towards him and feels a
lot more angry because kashish and sujal are also sitting there }
piyush:- bhai aki aise kyun keh rahe ho , apne bhai ke gale nahi lagoge
akshat
{ losess his temper } :- bhai my foot , tum shayad bhool chuke ho ki
maine tumse apne saare rishtey thod diye the , yaad hain jab tum PARIS
aaye the , agar tumhe yaad nahi tho mein yaad diladu.............
now veena comes , piyush taps his foot in anger and leaves the place ..
veena:- ye piyush ko kya ho gaya
akshat:- kuch nahi mumma

(
guyz neither sujal or kashish know the reason why akshat behaved like
that with piyush , but both sujal and kashish chose to ignore it
thinking it would be a small tiff between the brothers ---- see guyz
even their thinking matches........... )

kashish retires to her room........................
where as sujal and akshat are in the terrace ....

sujal:- aki tu bol kaisa hain tu
akshat:- bilkul theek hoon , sujal main tere liye bohat khush hoon
sujal:- kyun ???
akshat:- sujal main bohat khush hua ye dekhkar ki tu USSE bhool gaya hain.....
sujal:-
kisne kahan mein bhool gaya hoon { sujal has tears in his eyes } . main
USE kabhi bhula nahi pauga . woh nahi hain tho kya hua , jab thak mein
zinda hoon woh mujh mein jeeyegee
akshat [ feels sad ] :- sujal 6 saal purani baat ko kab thak nahi bhulaga.........
sujal { trying to divert the topic} :- achcha ab ye sab chod , tumse kuch zaroori baat karni thi mujhe
akshat { understanding } :- haan theek hain , ab bol kya baat karna chahtha tha tu mujhse
sujal:- akiiii tu tho jaantha hoga na ki agle hafthe kashish ka birthday hain
akshat:- haan
sujal:-
tho us ke liye maine kuch plan kiya haa . sujal starts telling his plan
to akshat ____________________________________________________________
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{ sorry guys sujal did'nt want me to listen as i'am not akshat........}

akshat:- wow sujal ye tho bohat achcha suprise hoga kashish ke liye
sujal:- tum meri madat karoge na ?? tum tho uski pasand aur na pasand jaanthe hoge na.................................
akshat:- sujal ye bhi koi pooch neki baat haan i'am with you mein tumhari madat karuga.
sujal:- thanks akiii
akshat and sujal hug..........................

so
well here ends zindagi ke silsilay -- part 7 . hope you all liked it .
feel free to post your comments . well to know what suprise sujal has
for kashish , why akshat cannot stand piyush , who was the other woman
in sujal's life and answers for etc etc questions read the next
part.............

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"ZINDA GI KE SILSILAY -- PART 8"


the
next day as usual kashish and sujal leave to the office . where akshat
also joins them . sujal and kashish are arguing on some matter { as i
told they both don't budge as far as their professions are concerned u
see both are indeed true professionals } .
akshat enters , he sees ;-
sujal:- kashish tum meri baat maanthi kyun nahi ho........................
kashish:- kyunki tum usi baat par ade ho..........................................
sujal:- kashish mein yahan ka conditions tum se behatar jaantha hoon......
kashish:- sujal tum na jo chahiye wo karo , mujhse se kuch mat poocho...........
akshat:- hello people , tum dono kyun lad rahe ho sarii duniyan ko bhool kar
kashish:- ye sujal lad raha hain.........
sujal:- kashish mein kahan lad raha hoon , ye tho tum ho jho meri baat nahi maan rahi hain....
{ek aur ladayi shuru hone ja rahi thi jab akshat ne keh tha hain }
akshat:-
bas ab ladayi band karo tum dono , tum dono tho bilkul bachcho ke jaisa
lad rahe ho . tunhe dekhar koi nahi kahega ki tum itne bade business
empire chalathe ho.......
sujal , kashish look at akshat......but they are frowning at each other
akshat:- mooh banana chod do , aur ab batao kyun lad rahe the tum dono......
sujal:- business ke legal formalities mein kuch problem aa gayi thi .
kashish:- aur mein ye chahthi thi ki wo problem mera dost slove kare.....
sujal:- aur mein chah tha hoon ki ye case tum lado { pointing at akshat }
kashish { totally suprised } :- kya tum chahtha ho ki ye case akiiiiiiii lade..........
sujal:- haan.........kyun
kashish:- kyunki mein bhi yahi chahthi thi ki ye case akiiii hi lade...... ........
akshat
intervents and says :- tum log mera liye hi ek dusare se ladayi kar
raha ho. jabki tum dono ki baat ek hi hain .
sujal:- iska matlab hum dono itne dino se kamaka lad raha the...............
kashish:- haan , hum dono hi ye chahthe the ki aki lade .
akshat:- chalo ab baat khatam . isi baat par tum dono mujhe lunch per le jao......
sujal & kashish together say :- kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
akshat:-
{play fully says } tum log kitne kangoos ho . apne dost ko lunch par
bhi nahi le ja sakhtha { makes a jhoota mutaa sad face }
sujal:- kashish kya kehthi ho , le chale isse ??????????
kashish:-
kaam tho bohat hain , lekin agar hum ise lekar nahi gaye tho phir ye
humme koi kaam karne nahi dega . tho isse behtar hain ki hum isse lunch
per le jaye . aur phir aake kaam khatam , kar le..........
sujal:- ok....
akshat:- good , tum dono bade hi samajdaar ho gaye ho........
sujal & kashish :- ab chale............

they reach the resturant . finish their lunch .and get back to their work.
the
next two days pass- by . it is the day of kashish's birthday . veena is
sitting on the table & talking to akshat . sujal comes down .
sujal:- morning mumma , akshat..........
veena & akshat :- good mortning........
veena:- chalo ab nhastha kar lo... aur ye kashish kahan par hain..........
sujal:- aki sab kuch plan ke hisab se chal raha hain na ????
akshat:-haan sujal . sab kuch plan ke hisaab se chal raha hain........ akhir use excecute kisne kiya hain
sujal raises his eyebrow asking him what does he mean.
akshat:- aur nahi tho kya is plan pe kaam AKSHAT THE GREAT kar raha hain...........................
kashish
is walking down the stairs . she has just heard akshat say his last
sentance . veena , sujal & akshat do not observe
her.......................
kashish:- akiiiiiiiiiiiii tumse kitni baar kaha hain ki tum apne app ko
akshat
the great kehna chod do . { while telling all this she has walked down
the stairs & is coming towards the table } . akiiiii waise bhi
tumhare liye mere pass ek suitable naam hain.......
akshat :- aur wo kya hain ???
kashish :- wohi jo maine pehle bhi kaha tha akshat the waste...................................
kashish
sits down on the table........................while veena , sujal are
laughing at what kashish told , where as akshat is making faces.
veena:- waise kashish ajj late kyun ho gayi , tumhari tabiyat tho theek hain na ?
kashish:- nahi aunty aisi koi baat nahi , mein bilkul theek hoon..............
sujal:- kashish jaldi se nhastha kar lo humme meeting ke liye shimla se thodi door jana hain.....
kashish:- MEETING ?????????
sujal:- haan baba meeting wo mr.gill ke saath hain.....
kashish:- sujal lekin wo meeting tho agle hafthe thee na ???????
akshat slowly mumbles iski yaadhast bohat achi hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
sujal smiles and says....................
sujal:- haan lekin wo prepone ho gayi . mein tumhe batana bhool gaya............
kashish:- ok .
veena;- kashish theek se kyun nahi ka rahi ho.......
kashish:- bas aunty aise hi
akshat:-
mumma waise bhi kashish ka kakar moti ho rahi hain. tho isi bahane uski
thodi dieting bhi ho jayegi . akshat gives a big smile to kashish to
tease her . kashish hits him on his arm playfully .
sujal:- jaldi
karo kashish , humme jana hain . jitna hum jaldi chalege shaam ko utni
hi jaldi wapas aa sakenge........................
veena:- sujal us bechari ko khana tho kha lene do................
kashish:- nahi aunty waise bhi mera khana tho ho hi gaya hain....
chalein sujal................
sujal:- haan chalo.......
both sujal and kashish bid good - bye to veena & akshat and leave.........................
sujal
before going turns back and shows thumbs - up to akshat . akshat does
the same . { kashish does not observe this } . then they leave
....................

car mein kashish bhujii bhujii si hain .
wo soch rahi thi :- aisa kaise ho sakhtha hain . is tarah pehle tho
nahi hua ki mom , dad , aki aur sab mera birthday bhool jaye
............. kya wo log mera birthday sach mein
bhool gaye
......... kya mein itni buriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii hoonnnnnnnn { she is
making a sad puppy face while thinking all this }.
sujal:- kashish , kashish , kashish { she is not even listening } . sujal observes her and goes to her ear and YELLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS KASHISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
kashish comes out of her sochna .
kashish:- kya hua sujal , kyun cheeek rahe the.
sujal:-aur
nahi tho kya tabse bula raha hoon . sun hi nahi rahi
ho................mujhe bore lag raha hain aur tum ho ki baat hi nahi
keh rahi ho . aur mein hoon jo tabse bole ja raha hon.
kashish:- oh , sorryyyyy. tum kuch keh rahe the........
sujal:- gana sunna pasand karogi.............................
kashish:- haan..................

song starts playing :---------

" Tumse milke aisa laga........................................................ .....................................
Aisa laga tumse milke....................................................... ........................................
Armaan hua pure dil ke.......................................................... ...................................
Teri meri meri teri ek jaan hain........................................................ .........................
Saat tere rahege sada........................................................ ......................................
Apna ye wada raha........................................................ ............................................
Ab hum na hogaein juda........................................................ ..................................."

{ song from the movie parinda................}

sujal
is enjoying the song and driving where as kashish is looking at sujal
and smiling . she is thinking about how they met , fought , became
friends & now how good friends they
are...............................
{are ye kya ho gaya hain ,
kashish ko sujal se pyar hone laga hain , lekin intezar karna padega
kyunki ab thak kashish ko ye patha nahi chala hain ki uske dil mein
sujal ke liye jo jazbaat hain wo pyar hain ya phir kuch
aur..........................}

kashish is again lost . this time sujal shakes her hand and kashish says
kashish:- hmmmm ab kya hua , bolo kya kehna hain.........
sujal:- yehi kehna tha ki hum log pohanch gaye hain .
kashish sees outside & realizes that they have indeed reached gill's office . kashish
hits on her fore head lightly and then gets down....................
kashish & sujal go in . and then wait for about an hour as gill is in another meeting .

{
app log ye soch rahe hogein na ki gill sujal aur kashish ko wait kaise
karva saktha hain , tho ye humare sujal ka plan tha wo actually ek
ghantha jaldi aa gaya tha thaki ghar pe sare kaam aaram se ho sake } .

kashish
& sujal go to meet gill the meeting starts at around 12 and it
carries on till 3 . kashish & sujal are totally exhausted so they
decide to have their lunch & then go to the shopping mall .
sujal , kashish enter the the resturant . it is a open air resturant . they order for their food .
sujal:-
kashish ajj kya baat hain . tum bohat udaas lag rahi
ho..............mere saath bore ho rahi ho kya................
kashish:- kuch nahi sujal...................
sujal:- kashish dosto se koi baat kabhi nahi chupana chahiye .......
kashish:- kuch nahi sujal , bas ghar ki yaad aa rahi thiiiii...........
sujal:- chalo ab apna mood jaldi se theek karo....... warna mera bhi mood kharab ho jayega...............
kashish:- theek hain.
both smile at each other....................
the
food is served . both finish their lunch . they leave for the mall .
where sujal buys to red & white saree . he does not even know why
he bought it or for whom he bought it . he buys a huge teddy bear for
kashish because he sees her looking at it . { he buys all these things
when kashish is not around } .......
it is 5 & they decide to leave . { ghar pohanch ne ke liye 7 bajayege }.......
they come out of the mall & it starts raining kashish starts playing in rain & sujal also joins her .

song played in the background :-

Ji
ye chahe ye
lamhe.......................................................
.......................................... Bas yahi pe ruk
jaye........................................................
.........................................
Samne tum raho........................................................ .................................................
Aur hum tumhe dekhe jaye........................................................ .................................
Saath din raat rahe........................................................ ............................................
Pyar ki ye baat rahe........................................................ .........................................
Thoda sa pyar hua hain........................................................ ......................................
Thoda hain baki........................................................ .................................................

{song khatam barish mein khelna khatam . now they start to leave .}

while coming back sujal & kashish keep on talking . they reach home .
kashish , sujal get down & start walking inside .
kashish:- sujal yahan ke light ko kya hua hain.....
sujal:- pata nahi dekhtha hain { he has a mischevious smile on his face }
both
enter the house . kashish is holding sujal's hand as she is very scared
of darkness . suddenly the hand { i mean sujal's hand } she is holding
is no longer in her hand...
she tries calling sujal when the lights are switched on & then
All
Together Shout
:-"SUPRISEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

next
part mein party ke bare mein zaroor likugi . ye wada raha . agli part
mein thodi enjoyment karege . tho party mein kya hotha hain ? kya ye
party kashish ke liye hi ek suprise hain ya phir sujal ke liye bhi? kya
sujal aur kashish ke liye koi bohat bada suprise wait kar raha hain ??
kya sujal aur kashish achche dost reh payege . piyush kya karega ? agli
part sujal ke past life ke bare mein bhi

bataugi aur etc etc sawalo ke jawab agli part mein doongi.........


i'll be waiting for your replies.

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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:24 pm

"
ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 9 "


they both reach the house it is all dark . kashish is afraid of darkness and so
she enters the house holding sujal's hand . after entering she realizes that
sujal is no longer beside her , she is
about to call out sujal when , when all together shout suprise and the lights
are switched on . kashish is very happy at the sight she saw . she saw all the
garewals & the oberoi's standing together to welcome her . in between
akshat was standing . kashish was very happy . she walked in to where her
family was standing . she went & hugged her sisters one by
on . then all got busy talking chatting .
kashish was standing with her parents.
kashish:- mom app sab log yahan kaise
{ while she is asking this veena , akshat & cg come and
stand beside them }
sonia :- wo kash socha tumhe suprise dede.....
sumeet:-tho kaisa laga humara suprise....
kashish:- bohat , bohat , bohat achchaaaa
akshat:- kash waise humne tumhe bohat pareshan kiya na.
kashish:- aki tum ruko mein tumhe baad mein dekh loongi....
samjhe { telling this she hits him playfully on his arm }.
akshat:- are maine kya kiya . ye sab tho sujal ka idea tha .
[ remember sujal is not yet been introduced to the oberoi's
becoz he was not there when they came home in the morning . this was the reason
why he took kashish out to the meeting & delayed every
thing ]
kashish:- tho ab samjhi sujal kyun keh raha tha ki humari meeting hain ..
sumeet:- are jabse hum aaye hai tab se sujal
ka naam sun rahein hain . par ye sujal hain kahan
sonia:- bilkul sahi.
veena:- [ just turns around and sees
sujal with some of his business associates discussig something
, veena calls ] sujallll
sujal excuses himself from them
and starts starts walking towards veena
. he comes to veena .
sujal:- jee mumma , appne bulaya....
veena:- sumeet , sonia ye hain sujalllllll
sujal says hello to them & even takes their
aashirwad..................
sumeet & sonia both are impressed...........
suddenly some business associates call sujal
sujal:- mein chaltha hoon....
veena:- sujal kabhi tho business ko office mein chod ke aao , jab dekho koi na
koi file dekhthe rehthe ho ya phir kisi se business matters discuss karthe reh
the ho.

[ sujal feels a bit embarassed because sumeet and sonia are also standing there
, sonia understands this & says ]
sonia:- sujal koi baat nahi , tumhari ek jodidar yahan hain [ pointing at
kashish ] ye bhi hamesha aise hi karthi hain....
sujal & kashish look at each other and smile...
veena:- sujal , kashish tum dono jakar fresh ho kar aajao . phir party aage
badaega.......
sujal:- mumma bas un clients se milkar jatha hoon .
veena:-nahi tum dono ab hi jakar fresh ho jao .
sujal & kashish together say :- ok
akshat:- sujal tu jaa , mein unko handle karloonga...
sujal smiles & kashish aur sujal head to their repective
rooms .

kashish in her room thinking :- aaj mein bohat khush hoon . ye khushi mujhe
sirf sujal ke vajah se milli hain . kyun mera dil sujal ki
taraf kicha chala jaa raha hain , kya woh bhi
yahi mehsoos kar raha hain jo mein uske liye mehsoos kar rahi hoon . ye mujhe
kya ho raha hain , aisa pehle tho nahi hua kya isi ehsaas ko pyar
kehthe hain. she is thinking all this and writing
in her diary . she hits her head playfully &
then goes to get ready .

jahan kashish apne kamre mein bohat khush thi wahi sujal
ka haal dekhthe hain kaise hain..............

sujal in his room thinking :- patha nahi ye kya ehsaas hone
laga hain . mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki mein usse
pyar...........{ he pause for a second and says} nahi kabhi
nahi mein MAYA ko kaise
bula saktha hoon . ye uske saath nainsafi hogi aur kashish ke saath bhi . mein
aisa sooch hi kyun raha hoon . kashish sirf meri
achchi dost hain
aur hamesha ra hegi mein vada
kartha hoon { he promises himself that in any
circumstance he will always be kashish's friend & stand by
her always }...

down in the party certain new love stories are being developed

akshat is standing with his family i mean all the
youngsters in the garewal house..

rishi:- akshat wo kya hain na ki humne kashish ke behno se appne appko ko theek
se introduce nahi kiya . tho kya tum humariiiii { he stops }
akshat:-kya sab bhi yahi chahthe hain
all nod their heads .
akshat:- tho chalo.
even sujal has joined them now . kashish is not yet come down .
{sujal is wearing a black blazer looking very cool }

all walk towards kashish's sisters
akshat:- hiiiiiii girls...........
all the girls together say :- hi akiiiiiiiii
akshat introduces all the sisters to them . they are very happy to know each
other.
[guys i would like to tell you that archie is being played by
kripa & swayam by angad ]

kashish comes down.... sujal spots her
&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&

time stops for him he goes blank . this is
the first time he saw kashish in an chudidaar
.
{ chalo dekhthe hain ki kashish ne kya pehna hua hain , she is
wearing a
red short chudi with little necessary jewellery like a small
earing & chain . she has let her hair open . she is looking awesome . u
guys must be thinking that kashish is a tom boy , well she
wears INDIAN
clothes rarely u know right she has not
left her traditions .}

kashish walks towards sujal and the others .
pratham:- kashish aaj bohat achchi lag rahi ho .
kashish:- thanks........
rishi:- waise kashish aaj ka poora din
ka time pass kaise hua .
sujal is smiling......
kashish :- haan , haan bohat achcha time pass kiya sujal ne
mera , mein use kehthi rahi ki ghar chalthe hain lekin sujal
koi na koi bahana bana ke taall raha tha . ab samjhi kyun ..
sujal is giving his sweetest smile ever.........

then all split up & start talking . sujal , kashish ,
akshat & standing with
charu , gauri , archie & mehak .
when suddenly sneha comes there and says
sneha:- BIG B , akshat bhaiyya , plzzzzz
help karo.
sujal & akshat together say :- kya hua gudiya.............
sneha:- woh rishi mere peeche pada hain.....
rishi comes there
rishi:- BIG B , akshat app dono hamesha
isko bachchathe rehthe ho..aaj mein isse nahi
choduga .
sujal:- kyun tang kar raha hain gudiya ko .
rishi:- BIG B mein appse kitni baar kahu ki ye gudiya nahi hain .
waise bhi ye mujhe chida rahi thi...
akshat:- sneha kya hua kyun chida rahi thi ??
sneha:- bol du rishi........
rishi:- nahiiiiiiiiii....
akshat:- tu fikar mat kar tu bol mujhe phir hum milke ise
chidayenge ......theek hain
sneha:- actually baat darasal ye hain kiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii {
rishi closes her mouth with his hand , stopping her from
telling }
rishi:- kuch nahi bas yunhi......
akshat:- rishi koi ladki pasand aayi hain kya
????
rishi blushes......
sujal:- rishi , ye aki kya keh raha hain .
rishi:- nahi BIG B aisi koi baat nahi.......
then all continue talking .
the dj calls everybody to the dance floor..........
pratham asks gauri for dance , swayam asks archie , varun wants to ask mehak
for dance but rishi asks her first so all are on the dance
floor . varun sees rishi & mehak dancing happily & cannot digest
it . he is very angry ,piyush sees this & thinks he can
take advantage of situation .
charu is standing alone .
akshat , sujal & kashish are standing together
kashish:- akiii jao charu ko dance ke liye poocho
akshat:- nahi baba , agar usne mana kar diya tho.....
sujal:- tumne poocha kya , kabhi bina doosro ki baat sune humme faisla nahi
karna chahiye...
kashish:- bilkul sahi
akshat :- ok
akshat goes & asks charu she smiles & agrees . sujal , kashish show
thumbs up to akshat , he smiles & goes to the dance floor.
all start dancing .
piyush comes ,
piyush:- hi kashish , happy birthday , looking very
beautiful . mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum itni achchi lagthi ho { again he is
trying to flirt with her } , mere saath dance karna pasand karogiiii
kashish { who is least intrested answers him very rudely }:- thanku ,
and sorry kyunki mere pass already ek partner hain piyush:- is
angry , & asks achcha oh , lekin mujhe the koi nahi dikh raha hain.
kashish:- piyush tum galat ho , ye hain
na SUJAL mera partner .
sujal never excepted his name to be taken by kashish , he was
bewildered .
piyush:- sujal would u mind if i................??
before piyush could say anything further...kashish just dragged sujal onto the
dance floor .
piyush is very very very angry....

all the couples are on the
dance floor .
song played in the back ground :-

"aashiq banaya aashiq banya apna............
tere bin sooni sooni hain bahein..............
tere bin pyassi pyassi nighahen...............
tere bin bin asar meri aahein...................
tere bin
tere bin lamha lamha sataye...................
tere bin baqarari jalaye............................
tere bin chain mujh ko na aaye..............
tere bin
aashiq banaya aashiq banya apna"..............

all are engrossed in their partners , when there is
a announcement on the stage.......excuse me ladies &
gentle men
all look on the stage . veena , cg , sonia & sumeet
are standing on the stage........
cg:- aaj hum log ek announcement karna chahthe hain .kyun
sumeet
sumeet :- bilkul sahi....
they call sujal & kashish on stage . they both are puzzled y they both are
being called on stage .
veena:- aaj ka din do karano se khaas hain
pehla ye hain ki aaj kashish ka janamdin hain aur
doosra ye hain ki aaj
sujal aur kashish ek naye rishthe mein badhne jaa rahe
sonia:- aaj unki sagai hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
sujal & kashish are very very shocked . kashish is happy , but sujal is
confused though he maintains to remain cool . all are clapping
. they are told to exchange rings . kashish places the ring
on sujal's finger , sujal after a lot
of hesitation puts the ring . all are over joyed...........except one &
that is piyush .
he leaves the party and vows to himself that he would seperate
sujal & kashish and destroy the garewals........

the party carries on for some more time which
dance , masti etc then the party ends .
kashish goes to her room very happy . she starts writing her diary :- aaj mujhe
aisa laga ki mujhe duniyan ki saari khushiyaan mil gayi . maine kabhi socha bhi
nahi ki mein sujal ko kabhi paugi wo bhi itni asani se .
lekin aaj meri sagai hui wo bhi sujal ke saath.
aaj maine nayi zindagi ki orr { way } apna
pehla kadam badaya hain . mein nahi chahthi ki ye pal kabhi bhi khatam
ho.........
song in the background :-

"maine socha nahi tha.............
hoga woh mera apna..............
pal mein sach ho jayega.........
meri aankhon ka sapna..........
saat din raat rahe.................
pyar ki ye baat rahe.............
aur rahe kuch na baki...........
thoda sa pyar hua hain..........
thoda hain baki"....................

kashish wants to go & talk to sujal because they have not talked even for
once after the engagement was announced & the next day kashish & her
family will shift to their new farm house in shimla..... so she decided to go
& talk to him & know his feelings for her .
she goes to sujal's room & knocks . she is very nervous .
there is no answer from inside . she sees inside & nobody is there .
kashish thinks that may be sujal is in the terrace . she slowly walks upstairs
& a number of rare emotions are going on inside her ....

in the terrace :- { sujal is with
akshat talking }
akshat:- sujal ye tum kya keh rahe ho......
sujal:- haan akshat mein sahi keh raha hoon , kashish kabhi mera pyar na hi thi
aur na hi ban sakhthe hain , mera liye mera pyaar hamesha maya
rehegi . mein use kabhi bhula nahi saktha.
akshat:- sujal wo jaa chuki hain.... teri zindagi
se durr…
sujal:- akshat wo bhale hi is meri zindagi
mein nahi hain
lekin mera liye wo hamesha mere
saath rahegi……bhale hi
woh mujhse durr
ho par wo mujh mein zinda rahegi....




akshat:- tum aisa kaise kar sakthe ho , tum apne saat aur kashish ke saath aisa
kyun kar rahe ho...
sujal:- mein kashish ke saat kuch nahi kar raha hoon , agar
maine usse shaddi ki tho use wo pyar kabhi nahi de pauga jo wo
desrve karthi hain.. aur raha sawaal mera mein theek hoon ,theek hoon main.....
he has tears in his eyes .
akshat places a hand over his shoulder . sujal hugs him ,both
sujal & akshat are unaware of the fact that somebody has heard their whole
conversation . the person who has heard all
this is none other than
KASHISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

this is the end of this part . to know how will kashish react . will she break
her engagement . how will sujal face her . will
piyush have to do something to seperate sujal &
kashish [or] will the circumstance throw sujal , kashish
apart [or] will the situation not allow sujal , kashish to get
seperated . what will sujal & kashish have to face the next day . will they
remain friends [or] will not even be
in talking terms
i know these and many more questions are ringing in your mind well i'll answer
all these in the next part........

i hope you liked this part . keeping my fingers crossed . please reply after
you read this part because your comments &
compliments help me to make improvements and be a better
writer.................... .........



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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:29 pm

RECAP:-

It is kashish b’day , every body gives her a surprise & her family is also there . in the party kashish sujal’s engagement is announced . piyush is very angry to see kashish – sujal together . kashish is on top of the world where as sujal is very confused , kashish gets to know that sujal loves some body else………………


Zindagi Ke Silsilay- Part 10

Kashish has a shock of her life after hearing to what just sujal said , she is totally devastated & broken . she is walking back , but akshat sees her . but akshat thinks that it is good to be with sujal now and leave kashish alone….
Kashish slowly reaches her room……..she goes in and starts crying…..

Song in the background:-

“ Kho gayi khushi ……………………….
Kho gayi hasii……………………………
Tune kiya kaise ye sitam……………….
Ek pal mein hii suna hogaya ……… …
Meri sapno ka jahan………………………
Rasta umer baar mein dekhu……………
Tum bhi mujhse pyar kar lo……………..
Tum bhi mujhse pyar kar lo…………….”
{ the song is modified by me }
Kashish keeps on crying . she thinks she should‘nt face sujal the next day or atleast for some time..


Sujal is in his room . he is in a dilemma what & what not to tell kashish ..Song in the back ground :-“Meri halat hain aisi…………….
Tum samaj nahi paayi…………….
Dil ki raahon mein aake…………..
Tumne badal li apni raahein……..
Daastan dard bari……………….…
Tumjhe pyar karna ki………………..
Kya sila mujhko mila hain…………
Thoda sa pyar hua tha………………..
Kuch nahi baki……………………………”

{ I think u must be wondering y such a kind of song when he does not love kashish , well this song is not for kashish but for his first love maya }
{ I think u people want to kill me………………………}

NEXT DAY MORNING:-
Sujal comes down to eat break fast . kashish’s family is sitting but minus kashish….sujal wonders where she is . but is not prepared to ask anybody…..
Sujal thinking :- ajj mujhe kashish se baat karni padegi. Mujhe kisi bhi halat mein kashish ko samjana hoga ki main usse pyar nahi kartha…
Sujal is thinking all this & is not eating..veena sees this….
Veena:- sujal , kuch kha kyun nahi raha hain..???
Sujal:- bhook nahi hain mumma.. mumma waise akshat kahan hain…????
Akshat comes & starts singing
Akshat:- tumne pukara aur hum chale aaye , jaan hatali par le aaye……
Sujal:- akii……tu kabhi nahi sudrega……
Akshat:- waise tum is nacheez kyun dhoond rahe the..??
Sujal:- wo is liye ki humari meeting hain.. kuch yaad aaya ??
Akshat:- are haan , main tho bhool gaya tha…..
Sujal:- achcha chalo abhi , isse pehle ki der ho jaye…..
Akshat:- haan chalo……
Veena interrupts & says :- tum dono ne tho theek se nhastha bhi nahi kiya..
Sujal & Akshat together say :- mumma hum office mein kuch khalenge…
Sujal & akshat leave…..

In the car sujal is very restless , because he did not see kashish after yesterday’s party & he was not able to ask anybody .. akshat sees this…….
Akshat:- sujal kyun pareshan ho ????
Sujal:- kuch nahi , bas ye soch raha tha ki………{ he stops }
Akshat:- ki kashish kahan hain , kahiin dhik nahi rahi , dining table pe bhi nahi thi { he makes a mischevious face }
Sujal:- aisi koi baat nahi….
Akshat:- theek hain phir bhi main bata detha hoon , kashish office mein hain use kuch paper work khatam karna tha ,
is liye wo zara jaldhi chali gayi……
Sujal:- lekin office mein tho koi pending kaam nahi tha na phir wooooooooooo ?????
Akshat:- sujal actually kal raat kashish ne hum dono ki saari baatein sun li thi , shayad wo thodi der akeli rehna chahthi ho…
Sujal:- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
{ shocked }
Sujal:- Theek hain main kashish se baat kartha hoon…….
The rest of the drive both akshat & sujal are quite . sujal is thinking about kashish where as akshat is thinking that agar sujal kashish mil jaaye tho kashish ko apna pyar mil jayega aur sujal ko uski zindagi jo piyush ke wajah se….{he stops thinking…. }


Sujal & akshat reach the office….Kashish is in her cabin . when somebody knocks…{ kashish after a lot of hesitation & praying that it shouldn’t be sujal she says }
Kashish:- come in…{ par Bhagwan ne uski nahi suni……}
Sujal:- hi kashish…
Kashish:- sujal tum…….
Sujal:- haan main… kashish tum theek tho ho na na koi hi na hello tum tho mujhe dekhkar aise chaunk rahi ho jaise main tumhare liye ek ajnabi hoon ..aur ye kya tum ajj itni jaldi kaise
aa gayi { trying to act normally }
kashish:- wo bus kuch kaam tha…
Sujal:- kashish mujhe tumse kuch kehna hain..
Kashish gives him a look which is like :- main jaanthi hoon sujal tum abhi mera dil thodoge , sure go ahead der kis baat ki.………….
Sujal:- kashish main ye kehna chahtha tha kiiiiiiiiiiiii { uski zubaan hi nahi khul rahi hain …}
Kashish:- sujal mujhe patha hain tum mujhse pyar nahi karthe aur main ye bhi jaanthi hoon ki tum mujhse shaddi nahi karna nahi chahthe
{ she looks at sujal with pain in her
eyes sujal looks at her unable to stand his gaze she turns away & continues }
Kashish:- sujal tum fikar mat karo main is shaddi se manna kar doongi…
Sujal is very happy {sujal buri baat heroine ko dhuki karke kudh khush ho rahe ho very bad }
Sujal:- kashish thanku very much….
Kashish:- it’s ok sujal.. tumhe explanation dene ki koi zaroorat nahi…..
sujal turns around to leave , when suddenly he comes back……..
Sujal:- kashish hum dono hamesha dost rehenge [ puts his hand forward ]
Kashish:- haan { she gives a weak smile & both shake hands}
Sujal leaves…

{outside kashish’s cabin piyush has heard every thing & smiles as if he has a plan }

Kashish thinks :- shayad humara rishtha dosti thak hi siimit rahega..shayad meri kismat main sujal hain hi nahi..kyun main pyar karthi hoon sujal se jab main jaanthi hoon ki wo kisi aur se she breaks down crying……………

Song in the back ground :-

“ Rabba mera ishq kabhi kisi ko na tadpaye…..
Dil ki baat rahe is dil main……………….
Hoton thak naam na naam………………….
Naam na aaye…………………………………..”

{ she remembers all the moments spent with sujal }

Sujal is in his cabin . he is very relieved that he was able to explain to kashish ..
He thinks :- kashish kitni achchi hain . kashish jaisi dost har kisi ko nahi milthi….main kitna khush naseeb hoon ki wo meri dost hain..
A voice comes :- sirf dost….{ that is sujal’s antar aatma standing in front of him.. }
Sujal:- kya matlab hain tumhara..wo sirf meri ek achchi dost hain…
Aantar aatma:- matlab saaf hain .kashish tumhari sirf dost kabhi nahi ho sakthi..
Sujal:- main nahi maantha…
Antar aatma :- tum kuch bhi kaho wo tumhare liye dost se badkar hain ..nahi tho kyun tum hamesha usi ke bare main sochthe rehthe ho , kyun uski soch tumhare chehre par ek hasi le aathi hain , achcha manna ki wo sirf tumhari ek dost hain tho kya tumhe nahi lagtha tum uski dosti ka faida uta rahe ho , uska dil thod rahe ho………………..
Sujal:- nahi , nahi , bilkul nahi…………….

Akshat enters sujal’s cabin……
Akshat:- sujal tu theek tho hain na…….
Sujal:- { comes out of his imagination & realizes that the person talking was his own conscience } haan akshat main theek hoon…
Akshat:- sujal tune kash se baat ki……{ he has made a question mark face , jaise hum sab karthe hain jab humme koi answer nahi aata hain exam main ok jokes apart }
Sujal:- haan maine use baat ki…aur usne meri baat samaj li.
Akshat:- oh that’s good { he is happy for sujal but akshat is very sad for kashish because he knows kashish really loves sujal & he does not know what to do…to make both his friends happy….}

Kashish is at her home in the evening . she is thinking the resons she has to give her family to refuse [or cancel] her marriage with sujal ..she knows her family will be hurt . but for her at that point sujal was the first priority.

In the garewal house :-
Piyush is talking to somebody over the phone…….
Piyush talking [we can’t hear the other person talk ] :-tumne kya kahatha ki mera wo trumph card mere koi kaam nahii aayega kyunki ab anyway sujal – kashish ki shaddi hone wali hain par tum ghalat ho , ajj mujhe ek aisi sachayi pata chali hain , aur iske baad tho mera who trumph card 100% kaam karega. [ referring to the talk he heard standing outside kashish’s cabin ] . mera wo trumph card aisa chakkar chalaega ki sujal – kashish dost tho kya wo ek dusare ki shakal bhi dekhna pasand nahi karenge…
The person on the other side says :- tumhe apne plan aur apne app par itna barosa kyun hain .itna over confidence achcha nahi hain…..
Piyush:-are main over confident kahan ho raha hoon , aur raha sawaal mere plan ka tho wo main tho main sure hoon ki wo kamiyab hoga..
The person on the other side says:- aisa kyunnnnnnnnn…..
Piyush:- aisa is liye kyunki main sujal ko jaantha hoon , mujhe poora vishwaas hain ki wo bilkul waise hi react karega jaise hum chahthe hain…aur humhe fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi kyunki is par ya us par jeet tho sirf humari hogi aur haar us SUJAL GAREWAL ki………………….
Zara apni nazar humare couple se hatakar dekhthe hain ki baki sab kya kar rahein…..
Sujal ,Rishi , Varun , Swayam, Akshat & Pratham are sitting & talking…..when rishi discloses that he likes mehak..all the brothers are over – joyed….they encourage him to go & propose to mehak.. varun does not like the smallest inch of their conversation….
all others also express their feelings..{ I mean pratham says he likes gauri , swayam says he likes kripa & it is a known fact akshat likes charu }..
sujal is very happy….but he thinks that how would all these people react when they come to know about the fact…
suddenly akshat cell rings.. akshat sees that it is charu’s number all the guys force him to put the phone on speaker..
akshat:- hey charu……
archie :- akiii main archie bol rahi hoon , charu nahi
{all the brother’s look at swayam & he smiles}
akshat:- tho bolo kaise chal raha hain….
Archie :- kya khaak chal raha hain… hum sab ka time kathe kathe bura haal ho gaya hain.. tum plz humme Shimla dikhane le jaogee…
Akshat:- kyun bhai kash kahan hain….
Kripa:- kash diiiiiii , unke paas tho kisi ke liye time nahi hain.. wo tho jabse aayi hain tabse koi file dekh rahi hain..
Akshat:- theek hain hum kal afternoon lunch aur shopping pe zaroor jeyenge…..
Archie :- aki pukka na , nahi tho main high command se recommandation leke aauuu { she means charu }
Akshat & all others understand & all start giggling…except for varun he is least intrested …
Akshat:- nahi meri maa , hum kal chalenge.. {the call is over}
After talking for some more time all the guys disperse to their work…

Varun in his room { talking to himself aloud }:- main aisa
nahi hone doonga . main mehak se pyar kartha hoon . main use rishi ki hone nahi doonga . mujhe mehak chahiye by hook or by crook….[another villan in the making ]
Piyush is there passing by & he hears this { ye piyush ko na koi kaam nahi jab dekho doosro ki baatein suntha rehtha hain } & thinks :- chal bhai piyush ab tho is ghar ko barbad karne main aasani ho jayegi.. varun jo hain mera saath .
he laughs…….

In kashish’s house all the sisters are sitting & gossiping . all the sisters are very happy to be with kashish after such a long time…all the sisters are very exicted that kashish is going to get married . kashish thinks :- mujhe maaf kar dena main inki umeedo ko thod rahi hoon…….
The sisters continue their talking..

Now it is next day morning…..
Sujal enters his cabin. He finds a sealed parcel addressed to him , he opens it & the contents of the parcel shocks him to the maximum extent . there are some pictures inside the cover . he barges into kashish’s cabin & starts shouting at kashish…
Sujal:- tho miss . kashish oberoi tum apne app ko samaj thi kya ho…
Kashish is very shocked & surprised as to why sujal is shouting like this..
Kashish:- sujal kya hua , koi problem….
Sujal:- tum kehthi ho na ki tum meri dost ho , tum dost tho kya insaan kehne ke bhi layak nahi ho….
Kashish is very hurt she says :- bas sujal bohat ho gaya , jab maine kuch kiya hi nahi to phir tum aise kyun cheek rahe ho.. aur agar tumhe cheekna hain tho pehle ye batao ki maine aisa kya kar diya hain….
Sujal opens the parcel removes the photographs & throws them at kashish & leaves..
Kashish is shockedddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd…


So here I end this pary main umeed karthi hoon ki app sab ko ye part achcha laga hoga . main maafi chahthi hoon ki maine itni late se post kiya……

Agar app ko jaanna hain ki un photos mein kya hain ki sujal itna badak gaya , piyush ke pass aisa kaunsa trumph card hain , piyush kisse baat kar raha hain , varun kya karega , sujal ko kashish ko lekar kya ghalatfaimi ho gayi hain , kya sujal kashish ke beech ki galatfaimi kabhi doorr hogi……………………….
i’ll be waiting for your reply………………..

Ye saare sawaalon ke jawaab ke liye padthe rehiye……………………………
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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:59 pm

RECAP:-
well in the last part kashish is very upset . sujal tells her that they
will always remain friends .
sujal & kashish are seeking ways to break their engagement..
piyush
is plotting something against sujal & kashish.. in the end sujal
gets a parcel with some photographs sujal sees them and he barges into
kashish’s cabin & shouts at her & throws some photographs &
leaves………

NOW:-----

“ ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY -- PART 11 ”


kashish
in a bewildered state looks at the photos , after seeing them she has a
shock of her life…kashish sees those photos which were taken on the
road & in the car outside gupta’s office….{ I think u people
remember the scene outside gupta’s office sujal consoling kashish ,
sujal wiping her tears , they hugging each other , these were the
photos there…..}
kashish is not able to understand any thing as to who took the photos or now who has sent them to sujal..
she is very confused…

sujal
in his cabin thinking :- kashish aise kaise kar sakthi hain…. Wo mujhe
pane ke liye is hadh thak kaise gir sakthi hain.. wo ye baat jaanthi
hain ki main maya se pyar kartha hoon…{ his mind was supporting this
while uska dil keh raha tha } lekin kashish aise nahi kar sakthi wo
meri achchi dost hain.. shayad main hi ghalat hoon.. shayad koi humare
beech dooriyan badana chahtha hain.. nahi lekin aise kaun karega aise
koi bhi tho nahi , is photographs main kahin na kahin kashish ki hii
saazish hain { bechare ka dimaak uske dil per haavi tha..}

kashish
in her cabin thinking :- sujal aisa soch bhi kaise saktha hain ki main
aise kuch kar sakthi hoon , wo mera dost hain isse kya farak padtha
hain ki main use apna jeevan saathi banana chahthi thi lekin wo ye nahi
chahtha.. ye kaisi uljhan hain jo ki kabhi khatam hone ka naam hi nahi
le rahi hain ek ke baad problems………. { she is very frustrated..}..
both sujal & kashish walk towards the window & stand……..

SONG IN THE BACKGROUND :-
For kashish :-

“Paas aake bhi mujhse…....
Door woh hogaya hai…..….
Kaisai batlaon kisko……….…….
Mera kya khogaya hai…..……………..

Dard kaisai ye sahoon……
Oh oh oh oh…………………….
Chup bhi kaisai mai rahoon…………..
Ye nahi baat zarasi……………………..……..

Dil ye bezaar hua………
Chaa gayee hai udaasi………….
Thoda sa pyar hua tha………………
Ab bhi hain hai baaqi “……………………

For sujal :-



“ Aina jhoot bole…………...
Main nahi maanta hoon………..
Sach wohi jo dikta hai……………....
Itna main jaanta hoon………………….

Ek hul chul si jaane…………..
Kyun rahe mere mann mein………
Kuch samaj mein naa ayee……………..
Kya karun hoon uljhun mein………………….

Woh to badle har pal…….
Oh oh oh oh………………..…
jaise mausam chanchal………….….
jo bhi jaisee bhi parayee……………….….
Tumko maine yaar kaha tha………..…..…...
Kuch nahi bahi “……………………………….……....


In
the evening sujal leaves early but kashish’s is still in the office ..
both sujal & kashish have’nt faced each other after the morning
incident… kashish is busy in diverting her mind from sujal’s thoughts .
the phone starts ringing . kashish picks up the call…….
Kashish:- hello……..
sonia:- kashish tum ab thak office main kya kar rahi ho
yaad
nahi ajj humhe garewal house jana hain tumhari aur sujal ki shaddi ki
date fix karne ke liye…
[ as kashish hears sujal’s name a sudden feeling of
anger , bebasi strikes her ]………..
kashish:- mom app log jaiye mujhe bohat kaam hain…. Aur waise bhi I’am not feeling too well…………
after a lot of persuation sonia agrees
sonia :- theek hain kashish , apna khayal rakhna aur kaam jaldi khatam karke ghar aajana…
kashish:- theek hain mom , bye
sonia :- bye
kashish gets back to work……..
( ye tho hui humari heroine ki halat zara dekhthein hain ki humare hero saab ki kya halat hain..)
sujal is very restless , he is unable to understand what is going on.
Sujal comes down & is about to go out of the house for a change of mood.. when veena stops him…
Veena:- are sujal kahan jaa raha hain…..???????
Sujal:- bas aise hi mumma……
Veena:- tum ajj ke din kaise jaa sakhthe hooo…
Sujal:- ajj ????? ajj kya baat hain mumma , koi khass baat ???????? { has a question mark face….}
Veena
:- sujal tu ajj ka din kaise bhool gaya , ajj kashish ke ghar wale aa
rahein hain , tumhari aur kashish ki shaddi ki tarik tay karne ke liye…
ajj main bohat khush hoon…….
Sujal sees the happiness on veena’s
face . sujal kahiin na kahiin ye soch kar dhuki tha ki wo apne ghar
walon ki khushi bohat jald cheena ja raha hain as he was going to break
his engagement .. main kya karoon he hits his hand in the wall in
frustration…

Akshat who needed some papers { file } from the
office had to go to the office ….. he came to the office &
collected the papers . he sees that there is somebody in kashish’s
cabin.. he goes to check.. he sees that kashish working….. he is very
surprised , as he knows kashish & her family were going to visit
the garewal house……..
He sees that kashish is sitting on her desk with her head down on the table..
Akshat:- kashish [ he goes to her & places his hand on kashish’s head ]
Kashish gets up her eyes are red as if she had been crying .. akshat observes this…..
Kashish:- akiii tum yahan kya kar rahe ho ???????
Akshat:-
wo actually main ek file bhool gaya tha wahi lene aaya tha lekin kash
ye sawaal tho mujhe tumse se poochna chahiye tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho
, tumhe shayad ajj garewal house aana tha…..
Kashish:- {trying to avoid } akiii wo actually meri tabiyat thodi kharab hain , is liye main nahi gayi…
Akshat:-
{ knows she is avoiding } kash tum meri dost ho , tum chahe kitni bhi
koshish karlo tum mujhse apni dil ki halat chupa nahi sakthi….
Kashish:- akiiiiii maine kaha na kuch nahi hain , kuch bhi nahi hain……
Akshat:-
kashish tum agar mujhe batana nahi chahthi ho tho tumhari marzi lekin
hamesha ye yaad rakhna ki I’ll always stand by u…..
Akshat is about to leave when kashish holds his hand……
Kashish:- ye dekho akshat , she puts the photos in front of him…
Akshat:- kash ye sab kya hain looking at the photos…...
Kashish explains everything mr.,gupta’s scene then the photos….
Kashish:-
lekin ab sujal yeh samajtha hain ki maine yeh sab kuch kiya hain use
pane ke liye… aise kuch bhi nahi hain lekin main sujal ko ye baat kaise
samjau….
{ she cries }
akshat:- kash tum fikar mat karo main dekhtha hoon , he consoles her sab theek ho jayega
main hoon na , ye mera vadaa hain ……….
Akshat leaves…….

Here piyush is talking over the phone:-
Piyush :- tum jald se jald Shimla se bahar nikal jao…
MR.GUPTA
{ he shouts } isse pehle ki sujal ko shak ho jaye , tum yahan se chale
jao… sujal tumhare pass kiss waqt pohanch jaye ye main bhi nahi
jaantha……
Mr.gupta :- lekin abhi suddenly kyun ???????
Piyush:- wo is liye kyunki main sujal ko wo tasveerain bhej chukka hoon…………
Mr.gupta:- theek hain , main jald se jald nikaltha hoon.
Piyush finishes his talking…. Then thinks :- sorry sujal , sorry kashish & he laughs

{actually gupta is hand in glove with piyush I think u all remember the
day gupta mis behaves with kashish , he calls somebody & says kaam
ho gaya . that somebody is none other than piyush . basically piyush
had the idea take kashish & sujal’s pics & to send the photos
to sujal & kashish & force them into a compelled marriage , but
then when their marriage was set to happen he used the same photos to
create misunderstandings , because he pretty well knew that kashish was
going to refuse for the marriage.. the photos were his trumph card he
was talking about..}

in the garewal house the oberoi’s enter minus kashish….
They are welcomed . sujal , veena & cg are sitting in the hall….
Veena:- kashish kahan hain…
Sonia:- wo actually uski tabiyat thodi kharab thi is liye wo nahi aayi……
[ the fact that kashish had not come made sujal feel really very guilty , though he dint know why ]
all the family members are sitting & chit chatting…. The pandit is checking out the dates for shaddi..
pandit:- ajj se 7 din baad ek muhurat hain….
Veena & sonia together say :- itni jaldi…..
Pandit :- in dono kundali ke hisaab se is muhurat ke baad agle muhurat 8 mahine baad ka hain…..
All have a question mark face when veena says :-
Veena:- sujal , kashish ki shaddi agle hafthe hi hogi………
All are very happy …. Sujal is the only one who is’nt happy..
Sujal’s cell rings :---------
Sujal:- helloooooo,,,,,,
akshat :- sujal , tum kya kar rahe ho………
sujal:- kuch nahi…..kyun ?????
akshat:- phir tu ek kaam kar ghar se jaldi nikal aur gupta ke ghar pohanch…..
sujal:- lekin akiiiiiiiiii
akshat:- lekin , vakin kuch nahi , mere liye plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
sujal:- theek hain main pohanchtha hoon…..
veena:- sujal tu kahan ja raha hain….
Sujal:- mumma akiiii ka phone aaya tha , ek zaroori meeting hain aake batauga……
Sujal excuses himself & leaves

akshat reaches gupta’s house on the right time… gupta is almost ready to leave……..
akshat barges in……..
gupta
is very scared to see him…. he tries to push akshat away & run .
but akshat does not let him go.. some
mara- mari goes on…akshat finally catches hold of gupta…
akshat :- gupta batao mujhe ye photos sujal ko kisne bheje hainn…….
Gupta:- kaun si photos , aur app kaun hain {acts as if he is innocent & he knows nothing…….}
Akshat:- agar police ke maar se bachna hain tho mujhe bata do….
Sujal enters but akshat & gupta do not see him…
Gupta
:- haan haan ye sab maine apne saathi ke kehne par kiya…. Aur phas gayi
bechari kashish’s oberoi…. us bechari ko tho ye bhi nahi pata hain ki
hum hain is sab ke peeche …. Lekin tum ye sab jaankar bhi kya kar loge
kyunke tum sujal ke saamne kuch sabit nahi kar paoge….
Sujal intervents & says:-
Sujal:- kisi ko kuch bhi sabit karne ki koi zaroorat nahi….

Akshat & gupta turn around & see sujal . akshat is happy that is sujal
is there at the correct time , where as gupta is shocked…..
Sujal comes & whacks gupta…..
Sujal:-batao mujhe tumhari humse kya dhusmani thi , ye sab tumne kiske kehne
par kiya… BOLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO { shouts in anger…. }
Akshat’s cell starts ringing & sujal looks in that direction… gupta gets a
chance to escape so he runs from there ….. sujal & akshat chase him
but he manages to escape……..
Sujal & akshat are in the car :-
Akshat:- achcha hua sujal waqt rehthe hi saari
Galat faimiyannn door ho gayi….
Sujal :- saari nahi akshat….]
Akshat:- kya matlab sujal ???? main kuch samjha nahi ??
Sujal:-
main ye samaj baitha ki ye sab kashish ne kiya….. aur is soch mein
najane main kashish ko ghalat samaj baitha aur pata hain use kya kya
keh baitha…. Mujhse aisi galthi kaise ho gayi , main itni badi
bewakoofi kaise kar baita…..??????????
Akshat :- sujal galthi insaan
se hi hothi hain aur is me na tumhari nahi kashish ki koi galthi hain
wo tho bus halat hii aise ho gaye ki tumne use galat samaj liya…
Sujal:- nahi akshat mujhe ek baar kashish ki baat sunleni chahiye thi…. galthi tho mujhse hui hain…….
Ab main kya karoon , mujhe kuch samaj nahi aa raha hain…..

Akshat:-dekho sujal agar tumhe lagtha hain ki tumne galthi ki hain tho har
galthi sudarne ka ek mouka
{ chance } miltha hain.. tum us mouka ko apne haath se jaane mat dena ..
sujal tells akshat to stop the car …
akshat:- lekin sujal…kahan jaa rahe ho..?????
sujal:- kisi se maafi maangne ke liye….
Akshat:- agar kashish se milne ja rahe ho tho wo tumhe us ke ghar pe nahi milegi…………………….
Sujal:- kyun ???????
Akshat:- wo office mein hain….
Sujal:- theek hain … main chaltha hoon….. { he gets down akshat’s car &
walks upto his car which is just behind , it is being driven by the
driver & asks the driver to leave with akshat }
Akshat:- sambal kar sujal….
Sujal:- akshat tum ab thak gaye nahi… ghar jao bohat sa kaam hoga
Akshat:- kyun
Sujal:-wo is liye
kyunkiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii{he pauses then says….. }
“ AGLE HAFTHE TERE YAAR KI SHADDI HAIN “….
Akshat is puzzled ……
Akshat:- kyaaaaaaaaa………………………..
Before he could ask any further questions sujal had driven off at very high speed……..
Akshat drives back home with the driver……

Sujal is driving very fast , he wants to reach kashish as soon as
possible……………. Sujal switches on his tape…………..

SONG PLAYED :-

“ Ek uljhun mai hai ye……..
Dil ka sansaar mera………………..
Ek taraf dosti hai…………………..…..
Ek taraf pyar mera…………………….…….
Kiss dagar jaaon jaane…………
Kuch samaj mein naa aye……………...
Mera dil ki bechaini………………………..
Aur badthi hi jaaye………………………………….
Isse pehla tho kabhi………
Oh oh oh oh……………………..
Zindagi aisi naa thi……………………...
Kaisai do raah pe ayee……………………...
Ek humsayaa mera…………..
Ek hai purchayee…………………
Thoda sa pyar hua tha………………...
Thoda hai baaqi “……………………………….


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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:00 pm

Zindagi Ke Silsilay: Part 11 Continuation....


Sujal reaches the office and goes in………He enters kashish’s cabin slowly without any noise.. kashish is now
totally
asleep on her desk…. Sujal walks upto her slowly he wants to wake her
up but he decides against it…Sujal keeps looking at kashish’s innocent
face & admiring her innocence .. he turns around to leave , when by
mistake his hand hits a photo frame kept on the table . this wakes
kashish up… sujal keeps the frame & is unaware that is kashish has
got up.. he is about to leave when he hears a sweet
, soft voice calling out his name …. He turns back…..
Kashish:- sujal tum……….
Sujal:-haan kashish main hi hoon , mera koi bhoot nahi hain , tumhe kya ho
gaya hain tum hamesha mujhe dekhkar chaunk jaathi ho , tum theek tho hona…
Kashish:- sujal lekin……..
Sujal { he starts shouting }:- lekin kya kashish tumne mujhe samjaya kyun nahi ?????? tum meri har
baat chup chaap kaise sun lethi ho , ek baar keh nahi sakthi ki tum un
photos ke bare main kuch nahi jaanthi……..
Kashish { making a cute teary puppy face } :- sujal tumne mujhe batane ka mouka hi kab diya sujal……………..
Sujal:-
haan ye bhi sahi hain…. Kashish , mujhe aise react nahi karna chahiye
tha… dosti main maine jo osool banaya tha ki hamesha saari baat jaane
ke baad hi faisla karna chahiye wo ajj maine kudh thod diya.. I’AM
REALLY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY SORRY { holds his ears in a cute
pleading manner……………..}

Kashish just gives a smile , even though the tears are rolling down her eyes …
kashish walks over to him….
Kashish:- dobara aise nahi karoge na……
Sujal:- bilkul nahi karoga…..
Kashish:- pukka promise…….
Sujal:- haan pukka pukka , ab bolo maaf kiya ??????
Kashish:- haan baba mafa kiya { she moves sujal’s hand from his ear….}
Sujal now says :- kashish tum ab thak office mein kya kar rahi ho ??
Kashish:- bas aise hi… ghar jane ka mann nahi kar raha tha…..
Sujal:- theek hain aur waise bhi tum ab thode dino ke liye office nahi aaogi …………….
Kashish:- aur aisa kyun………….????????
Sujal:- wo is liye kyunki agle hafthe humari
HUMARI SHADDI HAIN…………..
Kashish:- sujal ye tum kya keh rahe ho….. hum tho humari engagement call off karne wale hainn na…..
Sujal:- correction hum apni engagement call off karne wale the……. Lekin ab nahi………….
Kashish:- lekin kyun sujal , tum tho shaddi karna hii nahi chahthe the na ???? { she is very confused………}
Sujal:-dekho
kashish ajj ya phir kal mujhe tho shaddi karni hi hain tum nahi tho koi
aur sahi , tumse shaddi karna ka ek faida bhi hain kyunki tum sab se
pehle meri dost ho…….. agar maine tumse shaddi se manna kar diya tho
phir mera pariwar wale dhuki ho jayenge aur main ye nahi chahtha …main
tumse ye vadaa kartha hoon ki ek dost ke naathe tum mujhe hamesha apne
saath khada paogi……. . ab ye tumhari marzi hain ki “ kya tum ek aisi
shaddi karna pasand karogi jiski shuruwat dosti hain aur jiska
anth kya hoga na main jaantha hoon aur nahi tum jaanthi ho..……”
kashish is in a state of shock .. tears start rolling down her eyes…………………
sujal:- bolo kashish mera saath doogi kya ????? { he moves to her & shakes her }
kashish { coming back to her senses says } :- haan sujal main tumhara saath doongi……
sujal is very very very very very happy & aur ye kya kashish ke aasoooo
rukhne
ka naam hiii nahi le rahein hain….Sujal places his hand on her face
& very slowly wipes off her tears . kashish & sujal keep on
looking at each other they are unable to take off their eyes from each
other . sujal slowly kisses kashish on her forehead . both kashish
& sujal hug……………

SONG IN THE BACKGROUND :-

“ Jisme teri khushi hai……….
Woh ghadi mujhko piyari………..
Mere dil ko ganwar…………
Ab to har baat tumhari………
Ghum woh chahe khushi Ho….
Saath mera rahega………...
Chot tujhko lagegi…………
Dard dil main uthega……………………………….
Tu hase yuhin sada…………
Oh oh oh oh…………………………
Hai meri itni dua………………………….
Dosti maine nibhayee “…………………………...

well
guys zindagi ke silsilay part 11 ends here . hope it was upto ur
exceptations .. to know what will happen futher keep reading ….. and
please do give in your comments & compliments…. I’ll be eagerly
waiting for them…………….

Take care…
Byeeeeeee

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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Sun Nov 23, 2008 2:48 pm

“ Zindagi Ke Silsilay – Part 12“……

sujal , kashish are still in that hugging position .. sujal separates himself from kashish then jovially says
sujal :- kashish main nahi jaan tha ki tum itna rothi bhi ho….are itna bhi mat ro ki ye koi hindi soap lagne lage…
Kashish:- sujallllllllllllllllll { she hits him playfully on his arm }
Sujal:- kya sujal , main theek hi tho keh
raha hoon …………
kashish:- sujal waise main tumse ek baat poochu ?????
sujal :- haan poocho……
kashish :- ye sab kisne karwaya hoga ????
sujal tell kashish every thing about akshat & his confrontation with gupta & how he ran away..
kashish is shocked to hear all this…..
kashish:- lekin uski humare saath kya dushmani ho sakhthi hain ???? { she is talking & is deep in her thoughts }
sujal { to get her out of the mood } :- kashish tum wo sab chod do , business mein business competitors ye sab tho karthe hi rehthe hain…….
Kashish [ is not convinenced but manages to say ] :- shayad tum theek keh rahe ho…………
Sujal:- main hamesha hi sahi hotha hoon . ye tho bas tum ho jo mujhe ghalat samajthi ho……….. { makes a cute sad face }
Kashish:- bas bas , ab natak band karo……..
Sujal { wants to irritate her }:- are main such bol raha hoon aur tum keh thi ho main natak kar raha hoon…
Kashish{ now getting angry }:- sujallllllllllllllllllll
Sujal:- kya kashish….???
Kashish:- sujal agar tumne mujhe irritate karna band nahi kiya na tho main ???
Sujal:- tho main kya………..??????
Kashish:- tho main { thinks } tho main tumse shaddi nahi karogi………..
Sujal :- achcha hain , main tho bach gaya … main dil se ye dua kartha hoon ki bhagwan bachaye usko jisse tumhari shaddi hone wali hain ……
Kashish :- sujal……
Sujal:- kashish…….
Kashish:- sujal……………….
Sujal :- kashish………………
Kashish:- sujal…………………….
Sujal:-kashish…………………………
{ this continues for some time & then kashish says }
kashish { starts teasing him } :- sujal pata nahi tum itne bade business man kaise ban gaye , tum tho kabhi serious nahi hothe ho , jab dekho masti - mazak karthe rehte ho . pata nahi tum apne business associates se kaise deal karthe ho , bechare tumhare associates ……….{ starts laughing }
sujal :- ha ha ha ha ha , very funny…………
seeing kashish laughing sujal also smiles & thinks :- ye khushi hamesha banaye rakhna bhagwan…………

song in the background :-

“ Teri ye muskurahat………….
Teri ye masumiyat…………………..
Tujme hamesha shamil ye rahe………
Tujhko ye patha hi nahi……………………
Kitni pyarri tu hain mujhe………………………
Rahe sada yunhi hum………………………………….
Thoda sa pyar hua hain……………………………………
Bohat hain baki........…………………………………………….”


while sujal , kashish are busy in their talks some body walks in……
akshat :- hey guys , kya haal hain ???? everthing settled ..
sujal & kashish see him…..
sujal :- are aki tum yahan kya rahe ho…….
Akshat :- agar tumhe koi problem hain tho main chaltha hoon..
{ he turns around to leave }
Kashish:- akiiiiii …….
Akshat :- are main tho bas mazak kar raha tha…..
Kashish :- hum jaanthe hain , tum mazak kar rahe ho..
Sujal:- waise tu tho ghar gaya tha na ?? [ has a confused look on his face ]
Akshat:- haan , par maine socha ki pehle ye dekh lu ki tum dono theek ho ya nahi ……..
Sujal walks over to akshat & hugs him & then kashish does the same………
Akshat :- I’am so happy for both of you……..
Sujal :- waise tum hume ye khushi kab doge ?????
Akshat:- kya yaar sujal , tum bhi…..
Kashish :- kya sujal tum bhi ye kya hain akshat , ye tho sujal ki baat ka jawaab nahi hua hain na , ab chup chap sujal ke sawaal ka jawaab do…………………
Akshat :- kash , agar usne mana kar diya tho ???????
Sujal is keenly listening to what kashish is saying……
Kashish :- akii , agar tum use bataoge nahi tho ye tum kabhi nahi jaanoge ki uske dil main kya hain.. aur haan yaad rakhna tum use ye baat ne mein itni der bhi mat karna ki koi aur use aakar le gaye ………
Sujal:- aki , kashish bilkul sahi keh rahi hainnn…….
Kashish:- samjhe bhudhu mahashay………..
Akshat:- shayad tum dono theek keh rahe ho , main jitna jaldi ho sake charu ko apne dil ki baata doonga……..
Sujal & Kashish together say :- now that’s good…………
Akshat , Sujal & Kashish are still talking . when akshat’s cell rings . he picks it up……
Akshat :- hello ,
Veena :- akshat , tum aur sujal kahan par ho…..
Akshat:- mumma , wo actually main aur sujal office main hain ..
Veena:- kya akshat , yahan ye sab log tum dono ka dinner ke liye wait kar rahe hain….{ she means the oberoi’s }
Akshat:- mumma wo actually kuch kaam pending reh gaya tha… app fikar mat kejeye mumma hum log abhi aa rahe hain….
Veena:- kya kashish bhi wahin par hain…..
Akshat looks at kashish & sujal standing in front of him & staring at him …
Akshat:- haan mumma kash yahiin par hain…..
Veena:- achcha tho phir use bhi le aana…..
Akshat:- theek hain mumma , hum aathe hain…..
Akshat puts the phone down…….
Akshat:- chalo bhai , ghar se bulava aaya hain….
Kashish:- haan tum dono jao , main bhi ghar jathi hoon….
Akshat:- are madam bulava sab ko hain , mumma ne app ko bhi bulaya hain…. Aur waise bhi tumhari family bhi wahin par hain . wo log humara wait kar rahe hain…
Kashish:- plz akii , tum koi bahana bana dona plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz [ makes a pleading face ]
Akshat:- common kash……….
Sujal:- chalo na kashish
Kashish { shrugs her shoulders then says }:- theek hain
{ maanthi kaise nahi sujal jo keh raha tha }

sujal , kashish , akshat leave towards the garewal house…..
they reach & then go in greet every body…
all are seated to have their dinner…..all are having fun & finishing their dinner….
After dinner all the yongsters head to the garden , except for kashish’s sisters all are outside…………………….


Now in the garden :-

Sujal:- ye shlok kahan hain ??????
All look around but don’t find shlok…
Diya:- bhaiyya , wo apna koi assignment poora kar raha hain…..
Sujal:- diya hum sab log tumhe aur shlok ko achchi tarah se jaanthe hain . shlok hamesha galthi kartha hain aur hum sab ke saamne cover – up karne ke liye tumhe bhej detha hain…….
Diya:- aisi koi baat nahi hain bhaiyya…..
Akshat:- diya , ab sachayi bol do………….
Diya { finally gives up & says } :- { she starts giggling } wo kya hain na humare college main ek nayi ladki aayi hain uska naam tanisha hain , jab se wo college main aayi hain shlok use impress karne ki koshish kar raha hain . par us bechare ki har koshish nakamiyab hui . abhi wo apne kamre mein baith kar soch raha hai ki tanisha ko kaise impress kiya jaye……
All laugh after hearing to what diya told , just then shlok comes to the garden………
Shlok :- kya chal raha hain ?????
All see him & smile mischeviously……
Rishi walks over to shlok puts his hand over shlok’s shoulder then says…..
Rishi:-{ starts teasing } kya shlok tu ek ladki ko impress nahi kar saktha…….. kya naam hain , kya naam ….
Pratham comes & says :- ta ta tanisha…………..
{ shlok first has a confused expression & then sees everybody giggling so he understands diya has told the truth to everybody }
shlok :- diya ki bachchi tumhe tho main { he starts running behind her & finally manages to catch her }
diya:- shlok I’am sorry…
sujal:- are tum dono ab ladayi mat karo…..
diya:- theek hain ……
shlok:- theek hain , diya main tumhe badme dekhlooga …..
diya usko chidathi hain…….
Gauri :- kash kal humme shopping jana hain ???????
Kashish:- nahi nahi , meri kal ek important meeting hain……
Mehak:- di ab app ko jo kuch bhi kehna na wo sab aapko mom se kehna hoga… kyunki ye mom ka order hain….
Kashish:- mar gayi….. ab kya karoon….
Akshat:- kash main kal subah tumhare ghar aakar project ki file le jauga……
Kashish:- theek hain……

All continue talking & then the oberoi’s leave….before leaving they decide that the sangeet will be held
day after tomorrow & the mehandi will be held the next day after sangeet …..
the oberoi’s head towards their home…….

Here piyush is very angry with the happenings . he is in his room & is shouting & throwing all the things down……..
Piyush:- nahi aise nahi ho saktha , main aise hone hi nahi doonga . bhale hi sujal , kasish ke beech ki ghalat faimiyan phir se dosti main badal gayi ho , lekin piyush rahega itni jaldi kabhi haar nahi maanega….. piyush kabhi sujal , kashish ko milne nahi dega . kabhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii.
Akshat walks into piyush’s room . & sees all the mess that is created . piyush is very happy to see him & starts blabbering……..
Piyush:- mera bhai , aagaye tum un garewals ko chod kar . mujhe pata tha ki tum ek na ek din mere pass zaroor aaoge , lekin main ye nahi jaantha tha ki tum itne jaldi aajaoge …
Akshat is big time very irritated …. & then starts talking
Akshat:- kya keh rahe hain ho tum , tum ab thak badle nahi tum waise hi ho jaise tum tab the jab tum mujhse milne Paris aaye the…. Shayad tum bhool gaye ki maine
Appse Paris main kaha tha….
Piyush tries to cut akshat , but akshat continues :- koi baat nahi , main appko phir se samjhatha hoon.. agar aapne ek khadam sujal ya phir garewal pariwar ki taraf utaya tho main appke khilaf sau khadam uta saktha hoon.. sharafat isi main hain ki app apne kaam se kaam rakhe .
WARNAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
{ he points his finger at piyush and leaves piyush’s room in a huff…}
piyush in his room is very worried that may be akshat might spoil his plans…….
Piyush again gets back to plotting……{ isko na koi aur kaam hi nahi hain , jab dekho tab koi befithul ka plan banathe rehtha hain ……….}

Kashish is in her room .. writing in her diary……:- aaj ka din mere liya bura bhi hain , aur sabse achcha hain . aaj tho mujhe aisa laga ki maine sujal ko kho diya hain , aur main is baat par vishwaas karne lagi lekin phir zindagi ne karwat li . aur ajj hi ke din sujal ne poocha ki kya main usse shaddi karungi . ajj main behad khush hoon….. ye “ zindagi ke silsilay “ bhi bade ajeeb hothe hain kab kya rang dikhaye koi bata nahi saktha……..
She closes of her diary , goes to her bed & starts thinking about that day’s events………..

Song in the background:-

“ Honth khamosh hain par…..
Aankhein kuch bolti hain………
Pyaar ka raaz tum par………………..
Aaj yeh kholti hain…………………………..

Dhadkanon me meri tum…….
Is tarah kho gaye ho…………….
Keh rahi hain ye saansein…………
Tum mere ho hain mere ho………….

main jahan jaoon jidhar……..
ho ho ho…………………………
tu mujhe aaye nazar…………………..
maine palkein jo uthayin……………………
maine ikraar kiya hai…………………………..
tera hai baaki………………………………………….

thoda sa pyaar hua hai………….
thoda hai baaki…………………………
thoda sa pyaar hua hai…………………….
thoda hai baaki……………………………….”


Thinking about sujal & her life happenings kashish goes to sleep …………….…………………………
Sujal is in his room thinking :- najane ajj maine jo kiya wo sahi tha ya ghalat . main tho ye bhi nahi jaantha ye faisla maine kiss ke liye hain .. par main itna jaantha hoon ki apno ka dil ko dukhane se pehle main khud tootna pasand karuga……….. chahe meri aur kashish ki shaddi toote ya phir bane lekin kashish hamesha
sab se meri wo meri dost rehegi……….

Song in the back ground :-

“ Jisme teri khushi hai……….
Woh ghadi mujhko piyari……………..
Mere dil ko ganwar…………………………
Ab to har baat tumhari…………………………....

Ghum woh chahe khushi Ho……….
Saath mera rahega……………………...
Chot tujhko lagegi…………………………
Dard dil main uthega……………………………….

Tu hase yuhin sada…………
Oh oh oh oh…………………………
Hai meri itni dua………………………….
Dosti maine nibhayee …………………………...”

Sujal also thinks about the time he spent with kashish & both go to sleep…..
Both sujal & kashish go to sleep waiting for a new tomorrow…………..

Next day morning sujal gets up & veena walks in…..
Veena:- sujal ut gaye tum
Sujal:- mumma app yahan…….,,,,,, koi kaam tha tho mujhe bhula dethi ????
Veena:- kuch nahi sujal , main tho bas tujhse milne aayi hoon….
Sujal smiles……
Veena:- sujal tu nahi jaantha ki tune kashish se shaddi ke liye haan karke mujhe kitni badi khushi de hain…
Sujal:- mumma main appke ke khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar saktha hoon…
Veena:- achcha chal abhi tu jaldi se tayaar ho ja , tujhe kashish ke ghar jana hain……..
Sujal:- kashish ke ghar lekin kyun mumma ????? { has a confused expression on his face }
Veena:- are tujhe uske saath shopping pe jana hain…….
Sujal:- lekin mumma , meri tho meeting hain……
Veena:- lekin vakin kuch nahi maine keh diya na……
{ makes a angry expression }
sujal:- theek hain mumma , main tayar hokar chala jauga.. ab tho khush ?????
Veena :- mera sab se pyaara beta { she kisses him on his forehead }
Sujal gets ready , he is wearing a casual black pant & white shirt .{ what to say he is looking as cool as ever } he leaves towards kashish house ..

In kashish’s house…………
kashish is not yet informed that sujal is going to pick her up for shopping . according to her she will be shopping along with her sisters .
she is very excited that she is going to do her shaddi ki shopping…………
but she thinks :- kaash ki sujal bhi mere saath
chaltha , tho shayad main uske pasand ke kapde karid lu.. lekin main jaanthi hoon ki sujal ke liye uska kaam bohat zaroori hain. Aur wo yahan nahi aayega…….
She diverts her mind & starts getting ready , she is wearing a long embroidded black skirt with a white top , she is wearing big black earings & etc etc etc . she is looking very beautiful…

The door bell rings..
kashish comes down opens the door & she is very shocked to see sujal standing in front of her……………………….

So well guys this part ends here . I hope it was upto your expectations . to know sujal , kashish ki shopping kaise rahegi , ya phir akshat & gang kya masti plan kar rahe hain , sangeet main kya hotha hain ya phir piyush kya karega etc etc sawaalo ke jawaab jaane ke liye padthe rahiyega…………..

Please send in your comments & compliments . I’ll be waiting for them……………


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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Fri Dec 05, 2008 9:18 pm

hey suri jaan!!! gr888 FF, i have read upto part 15 of it, waiting for you to post the next few parts!!!! awesome FF though!!

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rajeevaamna4eva wrote:
hey suri jaan!!! gr888 FF, i have read upto part 15 of it, waiting for you to post the next few parts!!!! awesome FF though!!

summi jaanu no thankoo dear.. i'll surely update soon... Smile
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hey suri me watiting 4 2 update!! do update soon!!!

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hey suri me watiting 4 2 update!! do update soon!!!

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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Wed Dec 31, 2008 1:49 pm

Zindagi ke silsilay -- part 13

The door bell rings .
kashish comes running down and opens the door . she is shocked ,
surprised to see sujal at the door..
Kashish stands there not
knowing how to react , she just keeps staring at sujal . Sujal is
standing there removes his goggles & says
Sujal :- kashishhhhhhhhhhh , kashishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
{ he snaps his fingers in front of her }
kashish is still wondering . but she manages to mumble out..
kashish:- sujal tum……??????????????????
Sujal:- haan kashish , main hi hoon , tum theek tho ho na ???????
Kashish:- haan , kyun ????????
Sujal:-
wo is liye kyunki tum jab bhi mujhe dekhthi ho tum mujhe dekhkar aise
chaunk padti jaise tumne koi bhoot ko dekh liya hain.. common yaar ab
tho ye adat chodo , after all I’am your would be……{ he smiles &
winks at her }
kashish :- ha ha ha very funny { she hits him playfully }
sujal:- kya yaar kashish main is ghar ka hone wala damaad hoon tum mujhe andhar nahi bulaogi…..
tabhi andar se ek awaaz aathi hain…..
sonia :- kash kis se baatein kar rahi ho ..{ she is telling all this coming towards the door }
she sees sujal standing there..
sonia:-
are sujal tum kab aaye , aur tum bahar kyun khade huwe ho….??????? {
she turns towards kashish & says } aur kashish ye kya tune ise
bahar kyun khada rakha hain ??????
sujal :- { like a small kid }
aunty ye hi tho main keh raha tha , lekin kashish tho meri baat sunthi
nahi hain ….. { kashish is surprised by the way sujal is behaving }
sonia :- achcha chalo ab andhar aao….
Sujal comes inside , but kashish is a bit irritated with him as he complained about her to sonia….
Sujal comes & sits…..
Sonia:-
achcha sujal beta tum baito , mujhe dher ho rahi hain main chalthi hoon
, wo actually mujhe veena se milne jana hain..
Sujal :- theek hain , aunty…..
Sonia
:- aur haan kashish tum sujal ko coffee pilana aur phir tum dono
shopping per jana aur haan khabardaar jo tum dono ne office jane ka
socha ya office ki baatein ki tho….
Kashish :- yes mom…………. Appko ab late nahi ho raha hain…
Sonia:- haan haan ja rahi hoon .. sujal zara bachke rehna isse…{ starts laughing }
Sujal:- { laughing } theek hain aunty….
Sonia leaves…..
Kashish is now totally irritated.. she starts frowning ..
She goes into the kitchen to make sujal a cup of coffee..
She comes out……
Kashish { still frowning } :- ye lo tumhari coffee…..
Sujal:- { enjoying her irritation } thanku……mujhe pata nahi tha ki tum { he stops }
Kashish { irritated} :- ki main kya ???????????????????????
Sujal:- ki tum , ki tum coffee bhi bana sakhthi ho….
Kashish takes a cushion from the sofa & hits sujal…
Sujal:- kashish kya kar rahi ho , coffee gir jayegi….
Sujal
is slowly drinking his coffee & enjoying kashish’s reactions &
finally he finishes his coffee ……….
Kashish :- agar tumhara coffee pena ho gaya ho tho chale……????????????????? { points her hand towards the door }
Sujal :- {getting up } haan haan chalo… after you….
Kashish
walks out with sujal.. both are in the car . kashish is still in the
bad mood… she is looking outside the window .. sujal is observing her
reactions & is smiling…….
Sujal { suddenly speaks up } :- waise kehna padega , tum coffee achcha bana lethi ho…
Kashish turns from the window & looks at sujal.. seeing sujal smile , she also smiles….

SONG IN THE BACKGROUND:-

“Akhon Se Kaajal Ki Tarah……..
Phoolon Se Khushboo Ki Tarah………
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hai Tumne………
Chura Liyaa……….
Chura Liyaa Hai Tumne ……….
Chura Liyaa………..
O Jaana Yeh Kya Kiya Tumne…………
Aankhon Se Kaajal Ki Tarah…………
Phoolon Se Khushboo Ki Tarah………..
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hai Tumne……..
Chura Liyaa………..
Chura Liyaa…………….
Aksar Yeh Sunte The Hum……..
Ishq To Hai Deewaanapan………
Tum Se Milke Jaan Gaye………
Sach Kehte The Log Sanam………
Hoto Se Hasi Ki Tarah ………..
Hasi Se Khushi Ki Tarah…………
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hai Tumne ………….
Chura Liyaa…………
Chura Liyaa Hai Tumne ………
Chura Liyaa……….
Palkon Se Neendon Ki Tarah………..
Neendon Se Khwaabon Ki Tarah………..
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hai Tumne……..
Chura Liyaa………
Chura Liyaa Hai Tumne……….
Chura Liyaa………….. "

Kashish:- thanks…. Waise tum ajj office kyun nahi gaye….
Sujal :- mujhe apni bhari jawaani main marna thodi hain ????????
Kashish :- { confused } kya matlub ???????????
Sujal :- matlab ye ki agar main tumhe ajj shopping per nahi le jatha tho mumma mujhe……..samjhi
Kashish :- oh……
Sujal & kashish continue talking all idhar udhar ki baatein , but no office talk…..
Sujal & kashish reach the mall . first kashish & sujal go to select clothes for sujal…
Kashish starts seeing all types of kurta’s & sherwani’s for sujal ….
Sujal is very impatient .
Kashish :- sujal tum plz ye sherwani try karo , jao…..
Sujal :- nahi kashish , main kuch try nahi karunga.. tumhe jo achcha lage tum use pack karva lo….
Kashish :- sujal lekin pehan ni tho tumhe hain na …..
Sujal :- haan phir bhi mujh mein itni patience nahi haan….
Kashish then buys clothes for sujal some sherwani’s ,Casual wear & suits…..
{ I’ll give the description of clothes when they will wear the clothes }
now it is sujal’s turn to select clothes for kashish…
sujal
who was very impatient while his shopping now is very patiently looking
at the clothes shown by the sales boy….
Sujal :- { points out a red shaddi ka jhoda & says } :- kashish ye achcha hain na ????
Kashish
looks at it & pretends as if she does not like it & says :-
nahi sujal , kuch aur dekhthe hain….
Sujal again shows kashish 4 or
5 dresses , but again kashish acts in the same way.. sujal gets
frustrated & tells her to finish her shopping & come
out…..& he walks out..
Kashish smiles to herself . now she goes to the
sales
boy & asks him to pack all the dresses that sujal had selected .
apart from that she purchases some more clothes…..
sujal comes back in ……… he goes to kashish
Sujal :- appka shopping ho gaya ho tho chale ?? [ he asks this like a small kid who is very frustrated ]
Kashish :- haan chalo….
She
walks outside … & sujal pays the bill & walks out { bechare ki
waat lagi hogi bill pay karthe waqt , kashish ne itni shopping jo ki
hain…….}
sujal & kashish are outside . now sujal is acting like
a kid because kashish has’nt bought clothes of his choice..
it is after noon by the time they finish their shopping..
kashish :- sujal mujhe bohat bhook lag rahi hain… hum kuch kha sakthe hain…
sujal :- haan chalo…. { now has started to acting normal }
They go to a beach side resturant ….
Sujal & kashish keep talking & teasing each other..
Sujal
:- waise kashish mujhe ajj pata chal gaya hain , ki mere dost kuyn
kabhi apni hone waali biwiyon ya unke girlfriends ko shopping pe nahi
le jathe
Kashish :- aur aisa kyun ??????????
Sujal :- wo is
liye ki tum saare kapde apni pasand ke karidhthe ho aur hum par hukam
chalathi ho , aur tumhara wo bada bada bill { gulps down a sip of cool
drink } uske bare mein tho pucho hi mat…… un logo ne tho mujhe bhi mana
kiya tha . lekin
Meri tho mathi maari gayi thi na jo main tumhare saath chala aaya…..…. { he starts gigiling }
Kashish :- haso , aur haso…. Main ja rahi hoon………
She gets up & is about to leave when sujal holds her hand… she turns back..
Sujal:- are baba main tho mazak kar raha tha….
Kashish sits back..
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Zindagi ke silsilay -- part 13(Continuation)


Now both again get back to talking… when kashish asks
Kashish :- sujal kaisi thi woh……….
Sujal :- kaun kashish….
Kashish :- { gathering all her guts says } MAYA………..
Sujal :- { becomes sad } kyun kashish , kyun jaana chahthi ho…..?????
Kashish
:- bas aise hi….. bas ek dost ke naathe pooch rahi hoon agar tum batana
nahi chaho tho phir theek hain…….
Sujal :- achcha poochoo , kya jaan na chahthi ho…
Kashish
:- sab kuch ki tum usse kab mile , tumne apne pyaar ka izhaar kaise
kiya , tum usse door kyun ho gaye…
Sujal :- theek hain tho suno…



FLASH BACK :-

Maya
& sujal did their college together . sujal & maya liked each
other very much . they were very happy being together . but maya was
very insecure of loosing him .. she was always very possessive about
him.. during the last days of college somebody in the college spread a
rumour that sujal had an affair with some other girl .. maya asked
sujal if that was true . but then when sujal tried to explain , she did
not give sujal a chance to justify nor rather did she believe him &
then she left .
Sujal comes to reality & has tears in his eyes { ye kashish bhi na bilkul pagal hain usse rula diya }
Kashish :- sujal ab wo kahan hain…….
Sujal
{looks at her with pain in his eyes & then says } :- pata nahi uske
baad college khatam ho gaya , maine business join kar liya aur main
nahi jaantha ki wo kahaan chali gayi.. maine usse dhoondne ki bohat
koshish ki lekin…………… { tears start rolling down his eyes }
kashish
places her hand on sujal’s hand which is kept on the table……kashish
& sujal look at each other…..

SONG IN THE BACKGROUND :-

“ Thoda sa pyar hua hain………
Thoda hain baaki…………………
Hum tho chahege tujhe……………….
Jab talak jaan hain baki…………………
Dard jitna milega…………..
Pyar utna badega……………….
Saath hum denge tera………………
Tujh se waada hain saathi………………
Thoda sa pyar hua hain………
Bohat hain baki……………………. “
Kashish
& sujal are still lost . they are bought back into the world with
the ringing of sujal’s cell phone……
Sujal :- hello…..
Veena :- {
veena throws a volley of questions at sujal } sujal tum dono kahaan
ho…….???? Tumne shopping karli hain kya ?????? tum dono ne lunch kar
liya…?????
Kahiin tum dono office tho nahi chale gaye…….?????????
Sujal
:- mumma pehli baat hum office nahi gaye , humne shopping khatam karli
hain , aur hum ne lunch bhi kar liya hain…………..
Veena :- Chal theek
hain main ab rakhthi hoon aur haan meri beti ka khayal rakhna usse
pareshan mat karna samjhe ……..
Sujal :- { in a childish tone asks }
are waah kashish appki beti hain tho phir iska matlab hain ki appka
pyaar mere liye but jayega…….
Veena :- sujal tu chup kar , tu tho mera sab se pyara beta hain…….
Sujal :- tho phir theek hain….
They finish talking & sujal disconnects the phone…….
Kashish keeps looking at sujal during the whole coversation…
Kashish
& sujal are having their ice -cream . sujal looks up at kashish
& starts laughing kashish looks at him wondering as to why he is
laughing…
Kashish :- kyun has rahe ho sujal….???????
Sujal { can’t control his laughter } :- kashish woh ,woh
He points his finger towards her face…..
Kashish
is not able to understand anything…sujal then takes a tissue puts his
hand towards her nose & then wipes her nose which has ice cream on
it & then shows the tissue to her…. She sees the tissue & then
she joins sujal in laughing…..
Sujal :- kashish chalo , bohat dher ho chuki hain…..
Kashish :- haan chalo… waise bhi kal phir milenge …….
Sujal :-{ teasing manner asks her } kis ne kaha hum log kal mil rahein hain…..???????
Kashish :- sujalllllllllll , shayad tum bhool rahe ho ki kal humari sangeet hain……..remember…….????????????
Sujal:-
tho kya hua , zaroori tho nahi ki humari sangeet ho tho hum mile , ya
shayad ye bhi ho sakhtha ki main tumse shaddi ka apna irada hi badal
luuuuu ….
Kashish :- sujal , ab mazak band karo aur chalo…….

Sujal
& kashish step out of the resturant & then bijli chmakthi
hain…. Kashish gabra kar sujal ko pakad lethi hain… aur phir kya barish
shuru ho jathi hain .
sujal & kashish together say :- mujhe
barish bohat achchi lagthi hain….. both look at each other & smile..
abhi kya dono barish main bheegna shuru karthe hain…. Dono bohat khush hain…..
sujal
sees kashish in the rain & thinks :- main iski khushi hamesha
banaye rakhkuga… ye mera wadaa hai…..
now kashish sees sujal &
thinks :- main ajj ye wada karthi hoon ki main sujal ko kabhhi akela
nahi chodugi , hamesha uska saath doongi…….



SONG IN THE BACKGROUND:-

“ Wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka…….
Ab hum na hongey juda......…………….
Wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka…………….
Ab hum na hongey juda......……………………….
Yeh .....meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda…………...
Chahey tumey kis qader mera dil tum ko nahi ha pata …….
Yeh.... meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda...…………………..
Wada raha..........
Yeh wada raha...…......
Dono jahan ko bulaoon main ai si lagi hai……....
Tujh say lagan…….
Chahey kaho issey awargi chahey kaho issey deewanapan….
Dil ney kaha dil ney suna……...
Maine tumhey dilbar chuna…..
Ab dooriyan na rahi darmiyaan……..
Kya rang laye wafa.....…………….
Yeh meri dhadkaneein sun raha hai khuda........
Wada raha………..
yeh wada raha.....
Dekha tumhey tho aisa laga……
Mujh ko mila manzil ka pata…...
Chalana hai hum ko ab sath mein……
Tum say jura mera raasta ………………..
Main ne li hai ye qasam…………….…….….…..
Paoon tumhey janmo janum ………….….……..….
Yeh meri dhadkane sun raha hai khuda…………….…....
wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka ...
yeh wada raha ....
Wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka…..
Ab hum na hongey juda.........………...
Wada raha pyaar say pyaar ka……………
Ab hum na hongey juda.......………………..….
Yeh meri dhadkanein sun raha hai khuda…….…...
Wada raha ………...
Yeh wada raha ..………………
Pyaar say pyaar ka………………....
Wada raha yeh wada raha..……….…..”


Sujal
& kashish continue playing in the rain & then leave towards
kashish’s house . sujal & kashish are in the car…
Sujal :-
kashish waise tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat nahi main apna irada kabhi
nahi badluga… he looks at her & smiles….
Kashish :- theek hain
sujal , tum apna irada nahi badloge par main tho badal sakhthi hoon na.
{ she smiles }
Sujal :- haan tum tho badal sakhthi ho , lekin mujhe pata hain tum aisa kuch nahi karogi…..
Kashish :- itna barosa karthe ho mujhpar……
Sujal
:- haan kartha hoon , kyunki hum risthey unhi se jodthe hain jinpar
humme vishwass ho tha hain … samjhi…….
Kashish :- haan baba samaj gayi…….
Sujal :- lo tumhe samjha the samjha the tumhara ghar bhi aagaya…..
Kashish
gets down & is about to go in , but then she comes back.. she goes
to the driving seat window { I mean where sujal is sitting } &
knocks . sujal lowers his window pane & asks..
Sujal :- kya hua kashish…
kashish bends down & then says
Kashish :- sujal thanku…
Sujal ( wondering ) :- par kyun ??????
Kashish :- for everything… jo tum ne mere liye kiya..thanku very very very much..
Sujal :- achcha theek hain , ab jao……….
Kashish stands straight but once again bends down…
Sujal :- ab kya hua kashish……?????????
Kashish does not say anything . she just kisses sujal on the cheeks & leaves the place quickly……..
Sujal is puzzled before he could react or understand what is happening kashish had already gone in….
Sujal just hits his forehead slowly , smiles & starts driving….
Here kashish comes to her room & is peeping through the window & seeing sujal leave…..
The
screen divided into two . one which shows sujal driving his car happily
& the other which shows kashish standing at her room’s window
smiling…..

Both sujal & kashish are waiting for a new tomorrow & future …..

So
guys here ends zindagi ke silsilay -- part 13.. well I hope u people
liked it .. to know what the future has in store for sujal &
kashish , to know whether their belief in each other will sustain or
not , to know if sujal’s past life will come between his &
kashish’s future , to know what will piyush do & etc etc plz keep
reading……..

And ya in the next part I’ll write about the sangeet function pukka….


Hey thanku all for the reviews you are sending me ...
hope
this part was upto your expectations……Plz send in your valuable
comments & compliments I’ll be waiting for them …..

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Zindagi Ke Silsilay --- Part 14

It is the day of sangeet dono gharo main hulchul machi hui hain . sabhi log apne kaam main vyast { busy } hain ..
Zara dekhthe hain garewal house ki kya halat hain….
Cut to garewal house :-
Veena in the hall is giving instructions to everybody ..
Veena :- ye saaman yahan kyun rakh kha hain , isse gadi main rakhwa do……are ye kya , she asks pointing to someother things……..
At that time akshat & rishi come down stairs laughing….
Veena { sees them } :- kyun has rahe ho tum dono….
Akshat :- kuch nahi mumma , wo humne appko itna excited kabhi nahi dekha…..
Veena :- kyun na hoon , ajj sujal ki sangeet jo hain…..
Rishi :- mumma waise big b hain kahan ??????
Veena :- {veena gets total hyper } sujal………. pata nahi kahaan hain , subah se neeche nahi aaya , pata nahi kya kar raha hain…. Zara tum dono jakar dekh aao kya kar raha hain….
Akshat :- haan mumma , hum ab bhi jakar dekhthe hain…
Veena :- aur usse yaad bhi dilana ki ajj uski sangeet hain….
Rishi & akshat smile & walk upstairs to sujal’s room….
Sujal in his room is engrossed in some files work . he does not realize that akshat & rishi are there in his room . while looking at the files he takes his cell phone to dial a number..but then he spots akshat & rishi……
Sujal { surprised to see them there } :- tum dono yahaan kya kar rahe ho ????
Rishi :- BIG B , wo mumma ne kaha tha ki hum appko yaad dilaye ki ajj appki sangeet ceremony hain….
Sujal smiles .
Akshat :- ye kya sujal ajj ke din bhi kaam……
Sujal :- bas akshat kaam ho hi gaya samjho…. Bas ek call karna hain…
Akshat & rishi shrug their shoulders & wait until sujal finishes his call….
Sujal dials the number & then says
Sujal :- hello kashish………
Kashish { wants to irritate him }:- kaun bol raha hain….
Sujal :- kashish main sujal bol raha hoon….
Kashish :- kaun sujal ???? main kisi sujal ko nahi jaanthi….
Sujal :- kashish irritate karna band karo…
Kashish :- are wah app kisi anjaan ladki ko phone karke pareshan karthe hain aur mujhse kehthe hain main appko irritate kar rahi hoonnn….
Sujal :- { totally irritated } kashish ab bohat ho chukka , yaad hain na kal maine kya kaha tha …
Kashish :- pehli baat kya hum kal mile the , mujhe tho kuch yaad nahi aa raha hain ????
Sujal :- achcha tho main tumhe yaad dilatha hoon , kal maine tumse kaha tha ki main apna irada badal loonga , ab mujhe pareshan karna band karo warna main phone rakh raha hoon aur haan ajj tumhare ghar bhi nahi aauga…..…samjhi…………..
Kashish [ laughing ] :- haan haan theek hain….ab bolo kyun phone kiya ?????
Sujal :- ab aayi na raasthe par …. Theek hain mujhe batao wo Sharma & sons ka file tumhare pass hain kya ?????
Kashish :- haan wo file mere pass hain…..
Sujal :- tho kya tum mujhe wo file bijwa sakhthi ho….????
Kashish :- mujhe marwane ka irada hain kya ????
Sujal :- { confused } aisa kyun ????
Kashish :- sujal agar maine ajj koi bhi office ke file ko haath bhi lagaya tho main tho mar hi jaugi…..
Sujal smiles & kashish continues…
Kashish :- aur haan tumhare liye bhi mere pass yahi advice hain ki tum bhi ajj koi bhi kaam na hi karo tho tumhare liye behtar hoga……
Sujal :- haan shayad tum theek keh rahi ho… main kaam badme kar loonga….
Kashish :- good….. aur kuch kehna hain….
Sujal :- nahi…
Kashish :- to phir main rakhthi hoon , shaam ko tho milna hi hain…
Sujal :- haan theek hain…..
Sujal cuts the phone , he sees rishi & akshat sitting there . they both were laughing as sujal was talking to kashish .
Now veena comes in calling for sujal..
Veena :- sujal tu kya kar raha hain ,{ then she turns towards rishi & akshat & says } tum dono kya kar rahe ho ????
rishi :- kuch nahi mumma bas big b ke saath baite the…
Veena :- achcha theek hain , tum log baitho aur time per tayaar ho jana…
Veena leaves….
Now rishi says :- waise big b , jab hum logo ne kaha ki app ajj koi kaam na kare , tho appne inkaar kar diya , lekin kashish bhabhi ne ek baar kaha tho aap jhat se maan gays….
{ sujal understands that they are trying to tease him }
sujal :- tum log kya keh rahe ho meri tho kuch samaj nahi aa raha……
akshat:-{ he walks over to sujal & places his hand on sujal’s shoulder } haan bhai ab hum jo kahe wo tumhe thodi samaj aayega , ab tumhe tho sirf ek hi insaan ki baat samaj aur sunayi degi.. aur wo hain kashish…………………….
The ched chad continues……
Now evening all the garewals are ready & are waiting in the hall for our prince charming…..
sujal walks down . { ab kya kahein he is looking so damn cool } . he is wearing a navy blue armaani suit , with a rolex watch , then black shoes, cufflings etc etc ………… { so guys what do u think , how does he look ???????? }
pratham :- are wah sujal , ajj tho bade hi handsome lag rahe ho…
sujal smiles….
Veena :- comes to him & says :- kisiki nazar na lage mere bete ko…
Now sneha says :- agar app ki batein poori ho gayi ho , tho hum chale…
they all leave towards kashish’s house.
They reach and are greeted by the oberoi’s….
All the garewal youngsters are waiting for kashish…
All the youngsters are standing together….
When akshat says :- are ye kashish kahan par hain ???
Gauri :- kash apne kamre main hain….taiyaar ho rahi hain…..
Sneha :- aur kitni dher….
Charu :- bas thoda sa intezaar…..
Akshat :- aur kitna intezaar , zara is bechare ki bechani tho samjho { pointing at sujal…… }
all laugh…
kashish finally comes down ..
{ zara dekhthe hain ussne kya pehna hain }
She had her hair straight and was wearing a navy blue sharara. She draped her embroidded duppatta around her back and both the ends were placed on her arms. The sharara was a straight skirt type sharara with a side slit. She was wearing the minumun of make up and minimum jewllery……
All are very happy to see her..
Aur sujal tho usko dekhthe dekhthe hi reh gaya….
Veena & sonia make sujal , kashish sit together [ it is the same kind of arrangement that we have seen in kth during sujal – kashish sangeet ceremony…..]

There is a announcement made by akshat :- jaisa ki app sab ye jaanthe hain ki aur do din baad sujal aur kashish ki shaddi hain tho humara pehla dance shaddi ke excitement , pyaar , rootna etc etc ke feelings ko darshatha hain…. So what are we waiting lets get to work ….all clap & cheer them…
Ab the dance starts:- { performed by all the yongsters of oberoi & garewal family }kashish’s sisters along with sneha & diya walk out in the middle……& the music starts }
“ bole chudiyaan bole kangna , hye main ho gayi teri sajana tere bin jee yo nah yo lagtha main tho mar gayi haan….. leja lega dil leja leja, leja leja sonia leja leja , leja leja dil leja leja ooooooooooo aa aaa bole chudiyaan bole kangna , hai main ho gayi teri sajana tere bin jee yo nah yo lagtha main tho mar gayi haan………..leja leja oooooooooooo
{ now the guys enter } bole chudiyaan bole kangna , hye main ho gaya tera sajana tere bin jee yo nah yo lagtha main tho mar javaa….. leja lega sonia leja leja, dil leja leja , ooooooooooo
{ girls } ohoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
hye hye main mar java mar java tere bin ab tho meri raathe kathi hain tare gin gin ….bas tujhko pukara kare meri bindiya ishara kare……..
{ Guys } lashkara lashkara teri bindiya ka lashkara aisa chamka jaisa chamka chand ke pass sitara
{ girls } ooooooooooooooooo meri payal pukare tujhe , jo rute mayaye tujhe o sajanji haan sanjanji kuch socho kuch samjho meri baat ko……
{ guys & girls together } bole chudiyan bole kangna…… “ { the end of first song }
{ courtesy -- kabhi khushi kabhi gham }

the second announcement :- kashish naam ki ek ladki INDIA aayi thi apni koi kaam lekar , lekin usse kya pata tha ki saat samundar paar uski zindagi , uska intezar kar rahi thi…. Tho ye gana kashish ke naam…..

the music starts :[ this time only the girls]
“maan saat samundar dol gaya jo tu aankon se bol gaya .... Oooooooooooooo maan saat samundar dol gaya jo tu aankon se bol gaya le teri ho gayi yaar sajna ve sajna o sajna mere yaar sajna ve sajna , jo saat samandar dol gaya jo tere pyaar main ye dil bol gaya , le teri ho gayi yaar…sajna ve sajna o sajna mere yaar sajna…sajna ve sajna…..ore ooooo sajnaaaa tujhe bar lu apni aankon main in aankon ko main kholu na kholu apni baton main phir is duniya se bolu na… main dekhu main baat karu tere saath jeeyu saath maru le teri ho gayi yaar…. Sajna ve sajna o sajna mere yaar sajna…sajnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Tu aur kisi ka na hona main jeethe jee mar jaugi , teri khatir duniyan se ab tahna hi lad jaugi , aur kisika na hona main jeethe jee mar jaugi teri khatir duniya se ab tanha hi lad jaugi maine tujhko kahhan piya ye tan man tere naam kiya…. Le teri ho gayi yaar… Sajnaaa o sajna mere yaar sajna ve sajna……………
Sajnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”
{ courtesy – chameli }
{ the second song ends }

akshat comes back & makes the third announcement :- well jaisa ap sab jaanthe do din baad Shimla ka sabse handsome , dashing bachelor jo ki sujal hain , nahi rahega…. Wo hamesha shaddi se duur bhagtha tha….lekin jabse wo kashish se mila hain uska haal kuch aisa hain..chaliye dekhthe hain kaisa hain…
music starts { this time only the guys }
“ tara gin gin yaad se teri main ta jaga raata nu….rhok na pava ankhiyan wich gham diya barsa tanu.. tara gin gin yaad se teri main ta jaga raata nu….rhok na pava ankhiyan wich gham diya barsa tanu. .hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave..
deep jalake roshan ke tha main tho teri ravanu
samaj na pave tu kyun mere pyar bare jazbathanu…. samaj na pave tu kyun mere pyar bare jazbathanu…. rhok na pava ankhiyan wich gham diya barsa tanu.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave….... hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave…....
ek baar pass ake milja meri tu , jaan na jave meri ajja na kar dheri tu….
sehna paau duri teri tarsa main mulaka tanu rhok na pava ankhiyan wich gham diya barsa tanu. .hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave..

tara gin gin yaad se teri main ta jaga raata nu….rhok na pava ankhiyan wich gham diya barsa tanu.. tara gin gin yaad se teri main ta jaga raata nu….rhok na pava ankhiyan wich gham diya barsa tanu. .hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave.. hoho oho oho oho ishq tera tadpave..”
{ sorry agar ye gana padne mein koi mushkil hui ho tho , wo actually yehi gana yahaan fit baiththa
hain}
{ courtesy -- sukhbir - prince of bhangra greatest hits volume 1 }
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PostSubject: Re: ZINDAGI KE SILSILAY- Part 14 Updated , Page 3...   Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:01 pm

Zindagi Ke Silsilay --- Part 14 (Continuation)

during all the dances are going on sujal , kashish look at each
other when they feel that the other person is not looking … { are yaar
chori chupe dekhne ka mazaa hi alag hotha hain , kyun kya khayal hain }


{ so guys now the last song of ceremony all are there ..}
they even get sujal , kashish on to the stage & the music starts….


mehdi laga ke rakhna doli sajake rakhna , sehra sajake rakhna chera
chupaye rakhna shava oy oy oy shava oy oy oy shava oy oy oy shava oy oy
oy shava oy oy oy shava oy oy oy shava oy oy oy shava oy oy oy shava oy
oy oy shava oy oy oy shava oy oy oy shava oy oy oy shava…”

all dance & the sangeet ceremony ends…….the garewals leave to their house….. all are very happy……

sujal
is in his room thinking about the happening & changes in his life
from the time kashish came into his life . it is not that he has
started “ loving “ kashish but some where deep in his heart he had
feeling for kashish . which he still did not understand .. there were a
number of mixed emotions going through sujal at that point of time…
sujal
thinking :- ye kya ho raha hain mujhe , main kyun kashish ki taraf
attract ho raha hoon jab ki main jaan tha hoon ki kashish sirf meri ek
achchi dost hain wo kabhi maya ki jagah nahi le sakhthi , main sirf
maya se pyaar kartha hoon…..he has sad music played in the behind….
Now veena sees the light in sujal’s room & enters …..
Veena :- sujal tu abhi thak jaga hua hain ???? koi tension hain kya ??????
Sujal :- nahi mumma , main tho bas sone hi jaa raha tha….
Veena :- achcha chal jaldi so ja , waise bhi kal mujhe bhi kashish ke ghar jana hain…
Sujal [ with a question mark face ] :- kyun mumma ?????????
Veena :- are kya matlab kyun kal kashish ki mehandi hain.. kal use sabse pehle main mehandi lagaugi……
Sujal :- oh……….
Veena
:- achcha chal ab jaldi so ja , parsu teri shaddi hain tab thak ke liye
koi kaam nahi … samjha { she places her hand on sujal’s cheeks } sujal
nods his head & smiles…
Veena tells good night & leaves the room….
Sujal is goes back to his thoughts……

Song in the background :-

“ Kaisi uljhan hain ye.
Zindagi ke safar main..
Ek taraf pyaar mera…....
Tho dooja yaar mera….…
Kis dagar jau main….………..….
Duur kab hogi udassi………….……
Dosti ka haath maine thama………….{ thinking abt kashish }
Thoda sa pyar tha……………………………………
Kuch nahi baki………………………..…………………” {thinking abt maya }

Kashish on the other hand is very happy that she is getting married to the “ love “ of her life ……..
Kashish
thinking :- { she is looking at her hand } kal inhi haatho main sujal
ke naam ki mehandi lagegi . main ajj bohat khush hoon . main jaanthi
hoon ki sujal maya se pyaar kartha hain , lekin mujhe ye vishwaas hain
ki kabhi na kabhi main sujal ke pyaar ko jeet sakhthi hoon… aur jab
thak mere pass ye vishwaas hain tab thak sujal ko mujhse koi cheen nahi
saktha , koi bhi nahi ….. { she has a determined look like she will do
it }….kashish starts dreaming about sujal… the first time she met him ,
she liked him etc etc…….

Song in the background :-

“ Honth khamosh hain par…
Aankhein kuch bolti hain…
Pyaar ka raaz tum par………
Aaj yeh kholti hain……………
Dhadkanon me meri tum……………
Is tarah kho gaye ho………………………
Keh rahi hain ye sansein……………………
Tum mere haan mere ho gaye ho…………………….
Main jahan jaoon jidhar………………………….
Ho ho ho………………...
Tu mujhe aaye nazar……...
Maine palkein jo uthayin……….
Maine ikraar kiya hai…………………..
Tera hai baaki…………………………………
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai………..
Thoda hai baaki……………………….
Thoda sa pyaar hua hai…………………….
Thoda hai baaki…………………………………..”

Both sujal kashish go to sleep ……both are unaware that what the future has in store for them.
The
next day morning kashish is in her house , veena & many other
ladies have come for the mehandi……they write sujal’s name on kashish’s
hand , the whole day there is lot dhoom dhadaka in kashish’s house…..
in the evening the ladies see kashish mehandi & start teasing her….
One lady :- are wah kashish beta tumhari mehandi ka rang tho bada gehra aaya…
Kashish smiles…
Another lady says :- are ye tho sujal ke pyaar ka rang hain…..
All giggle while kashish shies……
Now veena says :- achcha sonia ab hum chalthe hain ,
Sonia :- are aur thodi dher ruk jathe……
Veena
:-nahi , kal shaddi hain tho bohat saari taiyariyaan bhi baki hain….aur
waise bhi kal hum tumhari beti ko hamesha ke liye le jaane aa rahein
hain….
All laugh , kashish takes veena’s aashirwad & all the ladies leave……
Kashish
is sitting in the living room & she sees everybody running around
the house doing some or the other work….
when she gets a phone call from a stranger.. kashish picks up the call….
Kashish :- hello ,
Stranger :- tum sujal se shaddi nahi karogi…
Kashish :- helloooo , kaun bol raha hain……?????? Aur ye kya bhak rahe ho ?????????
Stranger :-maine kaha na ki tum sujal se shaddi nahi karogi…
Kashish:- kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa { she starts getting irritated } lekin kyun na karu main sujal se shaddi…?
Stranger
:- agar tum jaana chahthi ho ki tum sujal se shaddi kyun nahi kar
sakhthi tho abhi isi waqt mujhe SUNSET POINT par aake milo { sorry guys
I don’t know the places in Shimla }….
Kashish { at first hesitates but then says } :- theek hain , main aa rahi hoon….
Kashish
informs sonia that she will be back in a while & leaves before
sonia could ask her any further questions..

Kashish reaches
the point stops the car & gets off the car . she sees that a man is
standing by the edge of the sunset point.. she goes towards the man and
then gathers all her guts and says
Kashish :- excuse me……….
{ the man slowly turns & kashish is shocked }
kashish :- piyushhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh , tummmmmmm
piyush :- haan kashish main………
kashish :- { with an angry irritated face } tho batao mujhe kya tumne hi wo phone kiya tha ?????
piyush :- haan kashish maine hi kiya tha……
kashish { she shouts } :- lekin kyun ?????????
piyush :- wo is liye kashish ki jis din se maine tumhe dekha hain , main tumse pyaar karne laga hoon…
kashish :-{ she is very angry now } What Rubbish…
piyush
:- { tries coming close to her & hold her hand } kashish main tumhe
kisi aur ki hothe hue nahi dekh sakhtha , aur wo bhi us sujal ka tho
kabhi nahi ….. plz kashish , he starts moving forward & catches her
shoulder when kashish slaps him do woh bhi ulta haath…
kashish :- how dare u piyush , tumhari himmat kaise hui mujhe choone ki ..
piyush :- { having a hand on his cheek } kashish lekin main…..
kashish
cuts him short & says :- don’t u dare touch me , Mr. Piyush rahega
…. Kal sujal ke saath meri shaddi hain…
piyush :- kashish tum
mujhe jitne chahe thapad maar lo lekin main tumse pyaar kartha hoon
,aur tum us sujal ke liye apni zindagi kyun barbad kar rahi ho jabki wo
tumse pyaar hi nahi kartha , aur main jaantha kashish ki tum bhi mujhse
…..{ before he could complete }
kashish piyush ko do aur thapad
mar thi hain….& then says :- main sujal se pyaar karthi thi karthi
hoon aur karthi rahoongi , mujhe isse koi farq nahi padtha ki kya sujal
mujhse pyaar kartha hain ya nahi……..
she starts to walk off leaving
piyush in that dazzled state when suddenly she turns around , faces
piyush & then says :- “ AUR HAAN SHADDI THO MAIN SUJAL SE HI
KARUNGI “ ye baat tum jitni jaldi samaj loge tumhare liye utna hi
behtar hoga , aur kal main ‘ KASHISH SUJAL GAREWAL’ banugi kyunki kal ‘
meri aur sujal ki shaddi hain , shaddi main‘MEHMAAN BANKAR AANA MAT
BHOOLNA…...’

Kashish walks off & leaves the place and piyush is left behind there angry & frustrated………

So
guys here ends the part 14 …….plz post in your comments.. to know what
will piyush do , will sujal ever be able to understand kashish love
towards him…agle part main sujal , kashish ki shaddi ke bare main
likhugi…..

Take care………………
Byeeeeeeeee

Love forever
RAJEEV

Surya……….
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