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PostSubject: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 6:59 pm



Hello guys…
i'am posting my other fanfic here... i hope aapko yeh fanfic achcha lage...

“ DIL SE DIL THAK ”….

the introduction :-

dil se dil ka naatha bada anoka hotha hain.. do dil durr
hothe hue bhi ek dusare ke liye dadhak the hain.. kabhi dil
samaj hi nahi patah ki usse kya chahiye.. kabhi kabhi insaan ko
apne dil ke khilaaf jaake kuch aise faisle karne padthe hain
joh dil ko dil se durr kar dethe hain par phir bhi woh do
dil hamesha ek dusare ke liye hi dhadhak the rehthe hain..
kabhi kabhi unkahii , unsuni baton ko bhi dil , dil se dil
thak pohancha hi dethi hain…

The Garewals :-
A very successful business family in Shimla.. the members of
the family have always been stuck together in all difficulties
though the people are of different attitudes..…
Kulbhushan garewal :- { played by bouji of kavyaanjali} the head
of the family..a very caring father & grandfather… he does
not involve himself in business as his sons & grandsons are
taking care of the business.. his wife is no more.. he has
three sons…
Lalit garewal :-{ played by lalit of kth } kulbushan garewal’s
elder son.. a very calm & quite person… very caring towards his
family.. for him his family comes first & business is next…
Veena garewal :- {veena of kth} lalit garewal’s wife a very
family oriented type of lady… her sons & her family are her life…
Mayank garewal :-{bajaj of kzk} the second son of kulbhushan
garewal.. for him his business is very much important than his
family..that is the reason his son does not care for him… his
wife is not alive…
Kamal garewal :- { played by kamal of kggk} the youngest son of
kulbhushan garewal..a very jovial & easy going kind off
person….
Vasu garewal :- { vasu of kth} she is kamal’s wife… a very
crooked lady who always keeps on thinking about how to separate
the family…
Now for the chidren :-
Anurag garewal :-{played by anurag of kzk } the eldest son of
veena & lalit… handles the business… a very soft natured person…
Raj garewal :- { played by our sweet heart Rajeev Khandelwal }the
second son of veena & lalit.. never takes anything seriously..
is very stubborn.. joh cheez usse pasand aathi hain woh usse
kissi bhi keemat par hasil kartha hain….. he runs a fashion
house & also works in the family business…raj never reveals his
true self to anybody not even his family…
Kavya garewal :- he is mayank son.. hates his father may be
because his father never had time for him.. he looks up to
veena & lalit as his parents… he is close to his brother’s &
works along with raj…
Angad garewal :- he is a singer a rockstar.. unlike his father
he is not a jovial person he is always serious.. but it does
not mean he has a grey shade character like his mother it
is just that he loves his family but does not express it..
Mukti garewal :- { played by mukti of kzk } younger sister of
angad.. being the only sister all the brother’s pamper her a
lot… she is very close to her brother’s & does not like her
mother as she wants to break the family relationships..
All the four brother’s & mukti often sit together & chill out..
almost everyday they sit & talk about that day’s doings…

The Sinha’s :-
Mr. Sinha & Mrs. Sinha are not alive.. they lost their lives in
a car accident 5 years ago… they are successful business people
in Delhi.... now they have two daughters & one son..
Prerna sinha :- { played by prerna of kzk }handles her father’s
business… loves her younger sis & brother as her chidren.. her
family her friend’s are her life….
Khushi
sinha :-{ played by our very own Aamna Shariff sorry I changed the name
as I felt khushi is a nice name I hope u don’t mind…} a very straight
forward & out going person.. runs
a botique & also is a
journalist but khushi is not totally a journalist she sometimes just
writes , write-ups & collects
articles just as a hobby…..she works with prerna & helps her to
an extent in her business ….she fights for the right & wrong &
has always supported the right.. she never stands injustice…
veer sniha :- {played by prem of kzk } a very supportive
brother.. loves both his elder sis a lot & is studying in the U.S
doing his law…
with the sinha’s two other girls stay.. they are anjali kapoor
& kripa Sharma.. there families are away in the U.S….
anjali { played by anjali of kavyanjali } & kripa { played by kripa
of kyph }:- these two are khushi’s best friend’s… they live
with prerna & khushi…for them prerna is like their elder sis &
for prerna they are a important part of her family.. they
work with prerna & khushi in the business…anjali & khushi know
everything about khushi all the three never hide any secrets
from each other…
the main characters are raj & khushi.. { guys I would like to
tell you that this story will be a kind off
flash back until some parts of the story but it will have
the present story also…}

promo :-
now we see a girl walking on the empty roads of Shimla.. it
is snowy but then nothing seems to disturb her & separate her
from her thoughts….
The girl is thinking :- zindagi ke khel bhi bade ajeeb hothe
hain.. joh guzar gaya hain usse bar baar annkhon ke saamne
laakar khada kar dethi hain…na jane ab zindagi mujhse kya
karawayegi.. aaj usne joh bhi kaha woh sahi kaha lekin main apni
zindagi ek aisa insaan ke saath nahi bithasakthi joh…….lekin
main karoon bhi tho kya karoon.. tears roll down her eyes she
then laughs sarcastically & says naam tho khushi hain par
zindagi mein khushi ki koi aahat bhi nahi hain siwai..
{she stops wipes her tears & continues walking & thinking }{ab
yeh siwai kya hain baad mein bataugi }
now we see a guy sitting at pub & having a glass of wine
in his hand.. he is just observing the glass very keenly…&
is thinking :- aaj mujhe us shaks se madat maangni padi jisse
main sabse zyada nafrat kartha hoon.. aaj phir zindagi ne
mujhe ussi mukaan par laa khada kiya jahaan mere pass aur koi
raastha hi nahi hain .. he breaks the glass in his hand aur
woh kaanch ussi ke haantho mein chubthe hain aur woh apne
haath mein lage kaanch aur khoon ko dekhkar kehtha hain :- jab
apno ne itni takleef pohanchayi hain tho yeh kaanch ka lagna
tho mamuli si baat hain.. tabhi usse peeche se awaaz detha
hain :- rajjjjjjjjj { raj turns back & the person continues} dher
ho rahi hain chalo……raj starts walking out….
[yes guys it is our hero raj ]

then the screen is divided into two…
one side khushi is walking on the roads & the other side raj
is moving towards his car.. both very angry & frustrated with
the way life is taking them & not knowing now where life
will take them..…

{ guys this promo is the present but then a flashback will
be shown…I hope it is not confusing}
I hope all of you liked the introduction & the promo the
first part will be posted next Sunday…..
Now to know what has happened in raj & khushi’s life.. khushi
ki zindagi mein khushi kyun nahi hain.. aur uske pass kaunsi
ek khushi hain , raj kissse nafrat kartha hain…. etc etc sawaalo
ke jawaab jaanne ke liye padthe rahiye “ DIL SE DIL THAK ”…

I’ll be waiting for your comments & compliments…

Take care..
Byeeeeeee

Love
Surya….


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:03 pm

“DIL SE DIL THAK :- part 1”


Sardhiyon ka mausam hain…Shimla ke log ghar se bahar hi
nikalna nahi chahtha bahar itni tand joh thi aur barf bhi ghir
rahi thi.... par is sab ke beech ek ladki joh 24 ya 25 saal
ki thi Shimla ki kaali sadko par khamoshi se chal rahi thi..
usse dekhkar koi bhi yeh baat keh saktha tha ki bhale hi
woh khamosh kyun na ho uske andar ek toofan uth rahi thi….
Woh ladki chalthe chalthe yeh sochthi hain :- zindagi ke
khel bhi bade ajeeb hothe hain.. joh guzar gaya hain usse bar
baar annkhon ke saamne laakar khada kar dethi hain…na jane ab
zindagi mujhse kya karawayegi.. aaj usne joh bhi kaha woh
such kaha sahi kaha lekin main apni zindagi ek aisa insaan ke
saath nahi bithasakthi joh…….lekin main karoon bhi tho kya
karoon..
Tabhi us ladki ka phone bajtha hain..she picks the call..
The caller :- hellooo……where the hell are you ??? tum kahaan ho
batao mujhe main abhi tumhe lene aatha hoon…..
The girl listens & then tells :- veerrrrrrr…..
Veer:- kya veer….. patah hain main tumhara number kabse try
kar raha hoon.. tum abhi batao tum kahaan ho ???
The girl :- itni chinta mat karo veer main bas ab kuch hi
dher mein ghar pohanch jaugi main ghar pohanch kar tumse baat
karoongi..….
Veer {observes that the girl is sounding sad } :- khushi… tum
theek ho na….
Khushi :- haan main theek hoon.. bas aise hi.. achcha main ghar
pohanch kar tujhse milthi hoon… { she says this last sentence
quickly & before veer can tell anything or know that she is
at the verge of crying she cut’s the call }
Veer :- khushi khushi..{he looks at his cell }main jaantha hoon
khushi tum theek nahi ho kaash main har us cheez ko khatam
kar patah joh tumhe takleef dethi hain… par…{ he kicks his leg
on the ground with anger }
Back to khushi..
Aansoon uske aankhon se behne lagthi hain aur woh kehthi
hain :- khushi….. { she laughs sarcastically } naam tho khushi hain
par zindagi mein khushi ki koi aahat bhi nahi hain siwai..
{she stops wipes her tears & continues walking & thinking }{ab
yeh siwai kya hain baad mein bataugi }
ab khushi ghar pohanchthi hain… wahaan woh dekhthi hain ki
uska bhai veer is just walking in the hall restlessly… she wipes
her eyes dry goes to him & tries to lighten the mood…
khushi :- veer main aa gayi… ab batao kya kaam tha joh tu
phone pe itna pareshaan lag raha tha….
veer:- pareshaan nahi houn tho phir kya itni tand mein tum
bahar chali gayi aur gadi bhi nahi le ke gayi….
Khushi:- are my dear brother main bilkul theek hoon.. dekh na
tere saamne hi tho zinda khadi hoon aur main apni zindagi
mein khush hoon veer….{she turns to the other side }
Veer :- tum kiss se kya chupane ki koshish kar rahi ho
khushi…{he goes & stands in front of her & sees that khushi’s
eyes are teary & khushi is trying hard to have a control over
her emotions} tum mujhse apne yeh aasoon nahi chupa
sakthi….main jaantha hoon tum zinda ho par tum khush khatayi nahi ho….
Tumhari hasi tumhari khushi us insaan ne cheen li hain… lekin
tum us insaan ke liye yeh aasoon na bahao he does not
derseve it… tum usse bhool kyun nahi jaathi khushi.. is baat ko
ek mahina ho chukka hain par tum aaj bhi ussi ke bare
mein soch kar un beethe lamho ko yaad karke khudko takleef
dethi ho..……{isse pehle ki veer kuch kahe khushi kehthi hain }
Khushi :- veer aaj main raj se mili…..
Veer is shocked to hear this…..
Veer :- kya kaha aapne aap us shaks se mili.. {he has anger
in his eyes when he says us shaks he does not take the name
raj from his mouth }kahaan..aur kyun tumhe us insaan se
milne ki kya zarrorat thi…
Khushi:- aaj shaam ko usne mujhe call kiya tha.. woh mujhse
milna chahtha tha… aur main usse milne bhi gayi thi sunset
valley point par..
Veer :- kya kahaa usne ???? ab kya kasar baki reh gayi thi ki
usne tumhe milne bulaya..
Khushi :- woh mujhse yeh kehne aaya tha ki main kuch dino ke
liye uski zindagi mein lout jao…
Veer :- kya…khushi ab woh kya chahtha hain unse pehle hi
tumhe itna hurt kiya hain aur iska kya matlab hua ki kuch dino
ke liye woh tumhe apni zindagi mein wapas chahtha hain…
Khushi :- { gulps down her saliva & says } is baat ka yeh
matlab hain veer ki woh chahtha hain ki jab thak bouji theek
nahi ho jaathe main uski patni hone ka naatak karoon atleast
bouji ke saamne kyunke bouji pichle mahine yahaan nahi the aur
woh nahi jaanthe ki is pichle ek mahine mein humari zindagi
kitni badal gayi hain…. woh ab loutte hain aur unki tabiyat
kharab hain aur woh hospital mein hain…tho
Veer :- { ghusse se poochtha hain } tho iska matlab hain
ki…..God man….. kiss kisam ka insaan hain woh us mein gairrat naam
ki koi cheez nahi hain…main us insaan ko kahiin ka nahi
choduga…
Khushi :- { get’s angry } veer woh aaj bhi mere pati hain aur
is naathe tumhare jeeju agar tum usse woh izzat nahi de
sakthe tho na sahi par tum us rishthe ka tho lihaaz rakho
joh us insaan ka {she pauses & says } raj ka mere saath hain
tumhari behen ke saath hain..
Veer :- khushi woh insaan kissi ke izzat ke liye layak hi nahi
hain…..
veer yeh baat keh kar wahaan se chala jaatha hain as he is
helpless & angry & he cannot see his sister in pain….
Khushi bas wahii khadi khadi soch mein dubi hui hothi hain
aur uske aankhon mein aasoon hothe hain lekin is baar khushi
unhe rokhne ki koshish nahi karthi….…..

Song in the background:-

“ Dil mai kaante chubo kar……
Usne badli hain raahein……..
Bewafa hogaya woh……
Dil se uthti hain aanhein………
Paas aake bhi mujhse………..
Durr woh hogaya hain……..
Kaise batlaon kisko………….
Mera kya kho gaya hain…….
Dard kaise ye sahoon………
Oh oh oh oh……..
Chup bhi kaise main rahoon…..
Ye nahi baat zarasi………
Dil ye bezaar hua……….
Chaa gayee hai udaasi………...
Bikhre bikhre hain armaan…
Saare sapnay hain toote…..
Kiya jispe bharosa….
Wohi dhaagai hain toote….
Jisko apna kiya tha……..
Woh hain harjayee…………...
Thoda sa pyar hua tha………..
Kuch nahi baki…………
Thoda sa pyaar hua hain….
Ab bhi hain baki……………….”


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:03 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak- Part 1 (continuation)


Ab dusari taraf dekhthe hain one man is sitting at a pub &
having a glass of wine in his hand.. uske chaaro taraf shor
tha naach gaana chal raha tha par woh insaan in sab se
bekhabar baitha hua apni hi khayalo ki duniya mein khoya hua
hain………woh bas apne haath mein rakha hua glass dekh raha
tha.… aur woh apne aap se baat karna shuru kartha hain….:- aaj
mujhe us shaks se madat maangni padi jisse main sabse zyada
nafrat kartha hoon.. aaj phir zindagi ne mujhe ussi mukaan par
laa khada kiya jahaan mere pass aur koi raastha hi nahi hain
.. kyun kyun ho raha hain mere saath aisa jis insaan ne
mujhe itna bada dhoka kiya zindagi ne mujhe ussi ke saamne laa
khada kar diya hain…. main nahi jaantha ki humare beech joh
kuch hua ya phir maine usse joh bhi baatein kahi uske baad
mera uske pass jaana sahi tha ya nahi ab tho main yeh bhi
nahi jaantha ki woh meri madat karegi ya bhi nahi par mujhe
bouji ke liye yeh sab karna hi pada….wah ajeeb hain meri
zindagi……he accidentally breaks the glass in his hand iske wajah
se uski haatho mein chot lag jaathi hain par he does not
realize it & continues blabbering to himself … tab hi one of his
friend come to him sees his hand & says :- are yaar yeh kya
tere haath se tho khoon beh raha hain…
The guy sees his hand aur woh kaanch ko dekhtha hain joh
uske haantho mein chube hue hain aur woh yeh bhi dekhtha hain
ki us chot se khoon beh rahi hain.. aur phir woh apne dost
se kehtha hain :- jab apno ne itni takleef pohanchayi hain
tho yeh kaanch ka lagna tho mamuli si baat hain.. tabhi usse
peeche se awaaz detha hain :- rajjjjjjjjj { the guy turns back
[yes guys it is our hero raj ] & he sees that it is the
love of his life Tanya calling him…Tanya comes towards
him…catches hold of his hand & says :- ghar chalne ka irada nahi
hain kya??? {he looks at her totally lost } dher ho rahi hain
chalo…… {she catches his hand } both Tanya & raj start walking
out….
{ guys tanya is being played by humari apni archie urvashi
dholakia sorry aur koi nahi mili }
raj & tanya leave the place raj starts driving.. gaadi
chalathe waqt raj apne khayalo mein ghum tha.. aur yeh baat tanya ko
khatakthi hain…. then tanya ka ghar aa jaatha hain… she is
about to get down but then asks raj}
Tanya :- raj tumhe kya lagtha hain khushi aayegi ???
Raj :- main nahi jaantha…
Tanya :- raj I hope you don’t mind me telling par mere
hisaab se tumne khushi se madat maang kar ghalthi ki hain….{she
says crookedly }
Raj :- nahi Tanya main kuch ghalat nahi kiya.. maine joh kuch
bhi kiya mere bouji ke liye kiya hain…
Tanya :- lekin raj tumhare is kadam se kahiin us khushi ko
badawa na mil jaye.. kahiin woh bouji ka istamaal karke tumhare
property par kabza na kar le……{ she says wickedly }
Raj :- nahi tanya tum is baat ki fikhar mat karo.. ab main
bas chahtha hoon ki bouji jaldi se theek ho jaye…
Tanya :- haan haan main bhi yahii chahthi hoon ki bouji jaldi
se theek ho jaye kyunke agar ek baar woh theek ho gaye tho
hum unhe khushi ki asliyat bata sakthe hain aur hum us
khushi ko dhake maar kar ghar se bahar phikwa sakthe hain……{she
has a evil smile on her face }
Raj :- { get’s kind off irritated with tanya’s last statement &
says } Tanya please….. tum aise baatein mat kiya karo………
Tanya :- { she touches his face & says } theek hain baba main
aisa nahi kahoongi.. achcha ab main chalthi hoon tum apna
khayal rakhna…
Raj { still irritated } :- hmmmmmm…… theek hain.. baad mein milthe
hain……..bye…
Then Tanya bids good-bye & goes inside her house while raj
starts driving back to his house…..
Raj apne ghar pohanch jaatha hain par woh andar nahi jaatha
balki he keeps sitting in the car & thinking :- kaash khushi
jaldi se maan jaye.. joh bhi ho mujhe kal subah bouji ko
jawaab dena hi padega ki khushi kahaan hain ….. aur agar kahiin
khushi nahi maani tho…..{ he hits his hand on the steering
wheel with frustration }

Song in the background:-

“Na Jaane Kyun, Hota Hain Yeh Zindagi Ke Saath…….
Achaanak Yeh Dil, Kisike Jaane Ke Baad…….
Kare Phir Uski Yaad Chhoti Chhoti Si Baat……..
Na Jaane Kyun .……….
Jo Anjaan Pal, Dhal Gaye Kal, Aaj Woh……….
Rang Badal Badal, Mann Ko Machal Machal…….
Rahein Hain Chal, Na Jaane Kyun Woh Anjaan Pal……
Saje Bhi Na Mere, Naino Mein……
Toote Re Hain Re Sapno Ke Mahal…….
Na Jaane Kyun .………..
Wohi Hain Dagar, Wohi Hai Safar……..
Hain Nahin Saath Mere Magar Ab Mera Humsafar…….
Idhar Udhar Dhoonde Nazar Wohi Hai Dagar……
Kahan Gayi Shaamein, Madhbhari………
Woh Mere, Mere Woh Din Gaye Kidhar……
Na Jaane Kyun ...”


He sits there thinks for a while & then he walks off
inside…
Andar angad kripa , anjali kavya aur anurag perna baite hue hain…
{ guys angad kripa , anurag perna & kavya anjali are already
married }
Woh log sab pareshaan baite hue hain jab woh raj ko dekhthe
hain.. usse dekhthe hi angad poochtha hain…
Angad :- raj kahaan tha ab thak….
Raj {looks at him & says } :- bas aise hi pub mein tha….
Kavya :- achcha ab yeh bata khushi se baat ki kya tune ???
Raj { gives him a stare & also sees that all eyes are on
him & he says } :- haan maine baat ki….
Angad :- tho kya kaha usne ??
raj :- patah nahi dekhna padega….
Kavya :- kya matlab dekhna padega ??
Raj :- matlab yeh ki usne ab thak koi jawaab nahi diya
hain….
Angad :- jawaab nahi diya hain tho jawaab mango usse..usse
jawaab tho dena hi padega ….
At this point of time kripa & anjali get irritated & anjali
says :- kyun de woh jawaab ?? uski kya ghalthi hain ??
Sab anjali ke is baat pe hairani hothi hain… aur kavya kehtha
hain :- you stay out of it anjali……
Ab kripa kehthi hain :- anjali sahi hi tho keh rahi hain.. woh
kyun jawaab de….
Angad :- kripa……
Anjali :- kyun tum logo ko sach baat kahi tho ghalat lag
gayi…. Khushi ke saath joh hua tumhare bhai is raj ke wajah se
hua..{she points towards raj } uspe tarah tarah ke ilzaam lagaye
gaye…….lekin aaj jab musibat aayi zaroorat aayi tho kiss hakh
se yeh umeed karthe hain ki woh aapki madat kare……
Kripa :- ajeeb baat hain na raj… { she says scarcastically }
Kavya :- tum log humara saath dene ke bajay us khushi us
ladki ka saath de rahe ho….
Now anurag & perna intervent & say :- bassssss bohat ho gaya….
Chup karo tum log tab se aap log joh maan mein aaye woh
bake hi jaa rahe ho…..
At this time anjali’s cell rings…
Anjali :- hello…
Veer :- hello anjali….
Anjali :- haan veer bol… { all look at anjali when they hear
veer’s name }
Veer :- anjali tum please kripa ko lekar yahaan aa jao…
Anjali :- veer sab theek tho hain na… khushi….
Veer:- haan anjali bas tum log aa jao.. mujhe tum logo se
kuch baat karni hain….
Anjali :- theek hain hum aa rahein hain…….
Anjali puts the phone down & then tells to prerna:- jiji main
aur kripa zara khushi se milkar aathe hain….
Prerna :- anjali khushi…woh theek tho hain na ??
Anjali:- haan jiji.. aap fikar mat kijiye aapko abhi bouji se
milne hospital jana hain aap jayiye…. Hum khushi ko sambhal
lenge…. Chalo kripa…
Kripa & anjali start walking out when kripa turns & says :-
angad , kavya tum log ek baat sahi tarike se samaj lo khushi
humare liye humari zindagi hain humari sabse achchi dost hain
usse zyada zaroori humari zindagi mein kuch nahi….
Anjali :- yeh baatein tum kabhie mat bhoolna.. hum hamesha ussi
ka saath denge chahe iske liye humme humare kissi bhi rishthe
ke khilaaf hi kyun na jana pade….
Anjali & kripa leave leaving behind a shocked kavya & angad..
raj leaves the hall & goes to his room…
Anjali ,kripa reach home & they meet veer & they enquire
about khushi..veer says that khushi is in her room & not opening
the door … anjali & kripa try telling khushi to open the door
but all in vain all they could hear is just khushi’s
cries….. then veer tells anjali & kripa that he would not allow
khushi to go & meet bouji & act with raj…. Anjali , kripa wait
for some more time to meet khushi but khushi does not open the
door finally anjali , kripa go back……
Ghar pohanch kar they inform prerna that khushi is fine &
just is a bit disturbed ….
Then ab zara nazar khushi ke kamre ke andar jaanke dekhthe
hain…. khushi is just sitting by the window looking up to the
sky & thinks :- main kal kya karoongi main nahi jaanthi main
yeh bhi nahi jaanthi ki kya main kal raj ka saamna kar
paugi jisne mujhe duniyaan bhar ke ghum diye hain.. par main itna
zaroor chahthi hoon ki joh bhi ho achcha ho main joh karne
jaa rahi hoon isse kissi ko takleef na pohanche….…
Wahaan raj apne kamre mein baita hua sochtha hain :- I hope
kal khushi mera saath dena aa jaye… kaash…..
then the screen is divided into two…
one side khushi is sitting by the window & thinking about the
next day’s events…& the other side raj is just hoping that
khushi will turn up the next day….. both very sad , angry ,
frustrated with the way life is taking them & not knowing now
where life will take them further...…
agli subah hothi hain… raj ab bhi isi umeed main rehtha hain
ki kahiin se khushi aa jaye aur woh khushi ke saath milkar
hospital jaye aur bouji se mile.. woh kaafi dher thak khushi
ka intezaar kartha hain aur phir hospital ke liye nikal tha
hain kyunke ghar ke sabhi log hospital ke liye pehle se hi
nikal gaye the..…
raj bouji se milne jaatha hain… bouji raj ko dekhkar bada
khush hothe aur kehthe hain:- oye puttar tu aa gaya…aaja aajaa..
phir bouji dekhthe hain ki khushi raj ke saath nahi aayi
hain tho woh kehthe hain :- par yeh kya puttar meri dost meri
girl friend khushi kahaan hain…….usse nahii laya tu…
Raj yeh sawaal sunkar shocked ho jaatha hain aur bas bouji
ko dekhtha rehtha hain……..

Well guys here ends dil se dil thak -- part 1.. I hope you
all liked reading it… I hope it was upto your expectations &
upto the mark….

Ab yeh jaanne ke liye ki raj bouji ko kya jawaab detha
hain.. raj aur khushi ke beech itni durri kyun hain ?? kya is durri
main bhi kahiin ghehra pyaar chupa hain ??? yeh tanya ka asli
maksat kya hain etc etc sawaalo ke jawaab jaanne ke liye
padthe rahiye dil se dil thak…….

I’ll be waiting for your comments & compliments & please feel
free to give your valuable suggestions …..
I’ll try & post the next part soon………

Take care………
Byeeeeeeeeeeee

Love
Surya……..


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:05 pm

“ DIL SE DIL THAK – PART 2 ”……



angad kripa , anjali kavya aur anurag perna hall mein baite hue
hain… { guys angad kripa , anurag prerna & kavya anjali are already
married }
Woh log sab pareshaan baite hue hain jab enter kartha hain
woh sab raj ko dekhthe hain.. usse dekhthe hi angad poochtha
hain…
Angad :- raj kahaan tha ab thak….
Raj {looks at him & says } :- bas aise hi pub mein tha….
Kavya :- achcha ab yeh bata khushi se baat ki kya tune ???
Raj { gives him a stare & also sees that all eyes are on
him & he says } :- haan maine baat ki….
Angad :- tho kya kaha usne ??
raj :- patah nahi dekhna padega….
Kavya :- kya matlab dekhna padega ??
Raj :- matlab yeh ki usne ab thak koi jawaab nahi diya
hain….
Angad :- jawaab nahi diya hain tho jawaab mango usse..usse
jawaab tho dena hi padega ….
At this point of time kripa & anjali get irritated & anjali
says :- kyun de woh jawaab ?? uski kya ghalthi hain ??
Sab anjali ke is baat pe hairani hothi hain… aur kavya kehtha
hain :- you stay out of it anjali……
Ab kripa kehthi hain :- anjali sahi hi tho keh rahi hain.. woh
kyun jawaab de….
Angad :- kripa……
Anjali :- kyun tum logo ko sach baat kahi tho ghalat lag
gayi…. Khushi ke saath joh hua tumhare bhai is raj ke wajah se
hua..{she points towards raj } uspe tarah tarah ke ilzaam lagaye
gaye…….lekin aaj jab musibat aayi zaroorat aayi tho kiss hakh
se yeh umeed karthe hain ki woh aapki madat kare……
Kripa :- ajeeb baat hain na raj… { she says scarcastically }
Kavya :- tum log humara saath dene ke bajay us khushi us
ladki ka saath de rahe ho….
Now anurag & perna intervent & say :- bassssss bohat ho gaya….
Chup karo tum log…. tab se aap log joh maan mein aaye woh
bake hi jaa rahe ho…..
At this time anjali’s cell rings…
Anjali :- hello…
Veer :- hello anjali….
Anjali :- haan veer bol… { all look at anjali when they hear
veer’s name }
Veer :- anjali tum please kripa ko lekar yahaan aa jao…
Anjali :- veer sab theek tho hain na… khushi….
Veer:- haan anjali bas tum log aa jao.. mujhe tum logo se
kuch baat karni hain….
Anjali :- theek hain hum aa rahein hain…….
Anjali puts the phone down & then tells to prerna:- jiji main
aur kripa zara khushi se milkar aathe hain….
Prerna :- anjali …. khushi…{ she fumbles } woh theek tho hain na
??
Anjali:- haan jiji.. aap fikar mat kijiye aapko abhi bouji se
milne hospital jana hain aap jayiye…. Hum khushi ko sambhal
lenge…. Chalo kripa…
Kripa & anjali start walking out when kripa turns & says :-
angad , kavya tum log ek baat sahi tarike se samaj lo khushi
humare liye humari zindagi hain humari sabse achchi dost hain
usse zyada zaroori humari zindagi mein kuch nahi….
Anjali :- yeh baatein tum kabhie mat bhoolna.. hum hamesha ussi
ka saath denge chahe iske liye humme humare kissi bhi rishthe
ke khilaaf hi kyun na jana pade….
Anjali & kripa leave leaving behind a shocked kavya & angad..
raj leaves the hall & goes to his room…
Anjali ,kripa reach home & they meet veer & they enquire
about khushi..veer says that khushi is in her room & not opening
the door … anjali & kripa try telling khushi to open the door
but all in vain all they could hear is just khushi’s
cries….. then veer tells anjali & kripa that he would not allow
khushi to go & meet bouji & act with raj…. Anjali , kripa wait
for some more time to meet khushi but khushi does not open the
door finally anjali , kripa go back home ……
Ghar pohanch kar they inform prerna that khushi is fine &
just is a bit disturbed ….
Then ab zara nazar khushi ke kamre ke andar jaanke dekhthe
hain…. khushi is just sitting by the window looking up to the
sky & thinks :- main kal kya karoongi main nahi jaanthi main
yeh bhi nahi jaanthi ki kya main kal raj ka saamna kar
paugi jisne mujhe duniyaan bhar ke ghum diye hain.. par main itna
zaroor chahthi hoon ki joh bhi ho achcha ho main joh karne
jaa rahi hoon isse kissi ko takleef na pohanche….…
Wahaan raj apne kamre mein baita hua sochtha hain :- I hope
kal khushi mera saath dena aa jaye… kaash…..
then the screen is divided into two…
one side khushi is sitting by the window & thinking about the
next day’s events…& the other side raj is just hoping that
khushi will turn up the next day….. both very sad , angry ,
frustrated with the way life is taking them & not knowing now
where life will take them further...…
agli subah hothi hain… raj ab bhi isi umeed main rehtha hain
ki kahiin se khushi aa jaye aur woh khushi ke saath milkar
hospital jaye aur bouji se mile.. woh kaafi dher thak khushi
ka intezaar kartha hain aur phir hospital ke liye nikal tha
hain kyunke ghar ke sabhi log hospital ke liye pehle se hi
nikal gaye the..…
raj bouji se milne jaatha hain… bouji raj ko dekhkar bada
khush hothe aur kehthe hain:- oye puttar tu aa gaya…aaja aajaa..
phir bouji dekhthe hain ki khushi raj ke saath nahi aayi
hain tho woh kehthe hain :- par yeh kya puttar meri dost meri
girl friend meri khushi kahaan hain…….usse nahii laya tu…
Raj yeh sawaal sunkar shocked ho jaatha hain aur bas bouji
ko dekhtha rehtha hain……..
Bouji { interrupts his thoughts } :- are bolna na.. kahaan hain
khushi….
Raj :- { fumbles , hesitates & then says } :- bouji woh woh
darasal khushi……..{he stops }
Bouji :- bol raj kahaan hain khushi….
Before anybody can answer peeche se awaaz aathi
hain :- bouji yahiin tho hoon main…….
{then we see khushi coming inside the room looking very
simple but beautiful }
bouji ke chehre par khushi ko dekhthe hi muskaan aa jaathi
hain…..
bouji :- khushi puttar tu kahaan thi ab thak.. main kabse
tujhse milna chah raha tha…..
khushi walks over near bouji holds his hand & says :- yahiin
tho thi bouji…
sab bas khushi ko dekh rahe hothe hain kyunke wahaan moujood
kisi bhi shaks ko yeh yakeen nahi tha ki khushi aayegi…. Raj
khushi ko hi dekhkhe jaa raha tha woh bhi ghehri nighahon
se ghehri soch mein dhoob kar…
ab kuch dher baad wahaan nurse aake kehthi hain ki sab log
yahaan nahi rukh sakthe sirf ek shaks rukh saktha hain
patient ke saath……tab khushi kehthi hain ki woh wahiin rukhegi…..
baki sab chale jaathe hain….
khushi bouji ke saath baat kar rahi hothi hain aur has rahi
hothi hain….
tab bouji kehthe hain :- khushi puttar… tu theek hain na ???
khushi :- haan bouji kyun ?? main tho bilkul theek hoon…
bouji :- { points at her face & then says } teri is hasi mein
mujhe khushi ki khushi nahi dikh rahi hain.. mujhe meri
bachchi khushi tujh mein nahi dikh rahi hain tu kissi soch main
jhakdi hui hain… koi problem hain tho bata mujhe ???
khushi :- nahi bouji aisa kuch nahi hain.. aap ab is bare
mein sochna band kijiye aur aaram kijiye…..
bouji { looks at her still not convinced } :- achcha chal chod
di woh baat lekin bata mujhe agar kissi din tum kisi takleef
mein ho tho tum mujhe bataogi….???? {he questions }
khushi :- bouji main aapko nahi bataugi tho phir kissse
bataugi after all aap mere bouji ke saath saath mere dost mere boy
friend bhi tho ho na……
bouji :- are haan bhai woh tho hain….{he smiles & kashish
smiles back…..}
yeh saari baatein raj kamre ke bahar rukhkar sun raha hotha
hain aur phir wahaan se chala jaatha hain…
andar bouji aur khushi ki baatein chalthi hi rehthi hain…
raj corridor mein chalthe rehtha hain aur kai baatein uske
zehan main athi rehthi hain :- bouji ne yeh kaha ki khushi ke
chehre ki khushi aur hasi kahiin kho gayi hain…aisa unhone
akhir kyun kaha… kahiin khushi ne tho bouji se aisa kuch nahi
keh diya ki bouji ko shak ho gaya ho……. Oh God ab main
karoon tho kya karoon…..{ he gets angry on khushi }
issi waqt khushi room se bahar aathi hain woh raj ko
dekhthi hain joh usse badi ghusse se dekh raha hotha hain….raj
holds khushi’s arm tightly & drags her to the hospital terrace…
khushi :- raj kya kar rahe ho ?? mujhe dard ho raha hain
raj…….{ she tries to free her arm but raj uska haath tab thak
nahi chod tha jab thak woh log terrace par na pohanch jaathe…}
khushi :- raj chodo mujhe kya kar rahe ho ???
finally raj leaves her hand …khushi looks at him with disgust
& then says :- yeh kya tarika hain raj ?? aur tum mujhe
yahaan kyun le aaye ho…..
raj :- main tumhe yahaan is liye laya hoon kyunke main jaanna
chahtha hoon akhir tum chahthi kya ho ???
khushi :- kya matlab hain tumhara ???
raj :- matlab bilkul saaf hain.. tum yahaan kyun aayi
ho..kahiin tum mujhe wapas paane ke liye tho nahi aayi ho… { he
taunts her } lekin agar tum is khayal se yeh sab kar rahi ho
tho tumhara bad luck tum mera pyaar kabhi nahi ban sakthi …
samjhi…….{ he catches her shoulder & shakes her }
khushi ko raj ki baato ko sunkar jhatka tho lagtha hain par
she maintains her calm & composure & then says :- tho tumhari
purani aadat ab thak nahi gayi tum aaj bhi har cheez ka
sirf aur sirf ghalat matlab hi nikal the ho…. Tho Mr. Raj
Garewal aap ne kya kaha main tumhe paane ke liye wapas aayi
hoon.. tum is baat ko tho apne sapne mein bhi bhool jao ki
main tumhare pass wapas aana chahugi.. kabhi nahi.. joh takleef
tumne mujhe di hain main woh kabhi bula nahi sakthi…. Main
maanthi hoon ek waqt tha jab main tumse sabse zyada , apno se
zyada , khud se zyada tumse pyaar karne lagi thi beinthahaan
pyaar karne lagi thi… lekin meri mati mari gayi thi { she hits
her fore head & then continues } ki main tumse pyaar kar
baiti… lekin joh tumne mere saath kiya uske baad tho ………{ she wants
to say something when raj cuts her in between }
raj :- joh maine tumhare saath kiya.. kya kiya maine tumhare
saath tumne mujhe dhoka diya tumne… tum hamare is rishthe ki
tootne ki wajah ho…. Sirf tum { he points his finger towards
her }
khushi :- dekho raj main tumse hamare rishthe ke bare mein
koi baat nahi karna chahthi.. main yahaan sirf bouji ke liye
aayi hoon… aur kissi ke liye nahi yeh baat tum hamesha ke
liye yaad rakhna….
Raj starts to walk off when khushi calls out his
name & says :- aur haan raj…..
raj turns around & sees her…….
Khushi continues :- raj shayad hum dono ka rishtha toot gaya
hain lekin humara beech ek aur rishtha hain { khushi
places her hand on her stomach & then says} :- yeh rishtha…
humara bachcha…..
Tab raj khushi ke pass aake kehtha hain :- bachcha.. humara
bachcha {he laughs scarcastically} khushi main tumse kitni baar
keh chukka hoon tum apne is bachche ko mera naam mat do….
Tum isse iske pita ka naam do….
Khushi :- rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj……………….. tumhe kya lagtha hain
mujhe mere bachche ke liye tumhare naam ki zaroorat padegi yeh
baat tum kabhi soch na bhi mat….samjhe tum……{ she catches his
collar }
Raj :-{ he frees his collar & then coolly says } khushi tum
ek kaam karo is bachche ko iske pita ka naam do isse tum
mere naam se mat jhodo…. Main is bachche ko apna naam doonga
is baat ka khayal bhi apne dimaak se nikaal
do…..samjhi………Humara bachcha….{laughs again } jab humare beech koi rishtha hi nahi
tha tho yeh humara bachcha kahaan se aa gaya khushi…… humara
bachcha……
Raj yeh saari baatein keh kar wahaan se chala jaatha hain
leaving behind a devastated khushi …. tears roll down from
khushi’s eyes as she sees raj walking away khushi ko raj ko
jaathe hue dekhkar aisa lagtha hain jaise uski zindagi ki sabse
keemthi cheez usse durr jaa rahi hain…. finally khushi breaks
down she comes on her knees aur woh apne haath ko apne
chehre par rakh kar rone lagthi hain….

Song in the background :-

“ bheegi bheegi si hain raatein……
bhhegi bheegi yaadein…..
bheegi baaey baatein….
bheegi bheegi…….
aankhon main kaisi nami hain…..
ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han…..
sapno ka saaya…..
palko pe aaya…….
pal main hasaya……..
pal main rulaya
phir bhi yeah kaisi kami hain……
ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han…….
na janey koi………
kaisi hai yeah zindagani………
zindagaani…..
humari aadhori kahani………
na janey koi…….
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
humari aadhori kahani……..
aadhi aadhi jagi…….
aadhi aadhi soi………
aankein yeah teri…..
lagta hai roi……..
lekar ke naam hamra…….
aahaan a han aa han aa han…….
rootha rootha rab…….
choota choota sab……
toota toota dil……
terey bina ab…..
kaisey ho jeena gawara……
aahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han…
na janey koi……..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani……
zindagaani……
humari aadhori kahani……….
na janey koi………..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani…….
Zindagaani…..
humari aadhori kahani……
bheegi bheegi si hain raatein…..
bhhegi bheegi yaadein……
bheegi bheegi baatein……….
bheegi bheegi……..
aankhon main kaisi nami hai………
ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han….
na janey koi……..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani……
zindagani……...
humari aadhori khani………
na janey koi……….
na janey koi………..
humari aadhori khani ………
na janey koi ………..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani……..
zindagaani…..
humari aadhori khani……..
naa naaa naaanaaaaaaaa………
yeah yeah yea yea…………
humari aadhori kahani…….”


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:05 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 2 (continuaton)

Khushi wahiin kuch dher rehkar apni zindagi ke guzre pal ke
bare mein sochthi hain aur phir wahaan se chali jaathi
hain……. when she goes down she sees that perna , anurag , kripa ,
angad , anjali , kavya & raj are standing….
Kripa , anjali khushi ko dekhthe hi uske pass aathe hain…
Anjali :- khushi tu kahaan thi…….
Kripa :- Hum kabse tujhe dhoond rahe hain…. aur tu tho yahaan
se jaise gayab hi ho gayi…..
Khushi :- anjali , kripa main yahiin thi , bas aise hi kuch
dher akeli rehna chahthi thi…..
Tab prerna kehthi hain :- anjali ,kripa tum khushi ko pantry
leke jao.. main tum logo ko wahaan par milthi hoon……
Khushi :- nahi jiji mujhe bhook nahi hain….
Prerna :- khushi maine abhi abhi veer se baat ki hain usne
kaha ki tum bina kuch khaye bina usse bataye ghar se nikli
ho…..
Khushi :- nahi jiji.. ab nahi khana.. jab bhook lagegi tab kha
loongi…. Abhi tho mujhe ghar jaana hain warna veer mujhe maar
dalega patah nahi ki kya woh mujhse ghussa hain.. aur agar woh
ghussa hain tho main gayi kaam se…….{ khushi starts to walk
off when prerna holds her hand & stops her }
Prerna :- khushi tu din par din bohat zidii hothi jaa rahi
hain.. tum ab chup chaap anjali aur kripa ke saath jaa aur
kuch kha le phir tu ghar chali jana aur veer se baat kar
lena…. Kyunke ab agar tu ghar bina kuch khaye jayegi tho veer
mujhe daantega.. hain tho mera chota bhai par mujhe usse
daant nahi sunna samjhi mujhe uski daant se darr lagtha hain…..
{she says sweetly } kripa , anjali lekar jao isse…..
khushi :- theek hain jiji main jaa rahi hoon……
anjali , kripa & khushi leave to go to the pantry… kuch dher
baad raj , angad & kavya also walk – in…. prerna aur anurag
upar bouji ke kamre mein hothe hain…
unke aathe hi kripa , angad , kavya aur anjali isharo mein kuch
baat karne lagthe hain yeh baat na raj aur na hi khushi
observe karthe hain……
phir angad { comes near their table & says } :- girls can we
join you ??? yahaan aur koi table khali nahi hain…
kripa :- sure angad…
anjali :- is mein poochne waali kaunsi baat hain..you can join
us..
angad :- thanks…
angad peeche mudtha hain aur raj aur kavya ko awaaz detha
hain…….
raj sees that angad un logo ko wahaan aane ko keh raha hain
par woh jaana nahi chahtha tha kyunke wahaan khushi bhi
thi.. par kavya drags raj along with him & takes him to the
table……
angad :- guys humme yahhin baithna padega kyunke aur koi
jagah khali nahi hain….
kavya agrees & sits while raj thinks for a second & then
starts walking……
when angad calls him :- raj kahaan jaa rahe ho , kuch kha lo
na……
raj :- nahi angad main baad mein kha loonga……
angad :- are nahi baba agar tu bina khaye upar chala gaya
tho bouji humme nahi chod denge….. tho chal kha le…. Raj phir
bhi angad ki baat nahi maantha jab kavya kehtha hain :- dekh
raj tu nahi khayega tho hum bhi nahi khayenga… aur waise
tujhe kya farak padtha hain mujhe aur angad ko bohat bhook lagi
hain tho..….
raj :- theek hain… main baiththa hoon……….
then seating kuch aisi hothi hain ki khushi ke ek side par
anjali aur dusari side par raj , raj ke dusare side par angad
, angad ke pass kripa , kripa ke dusari taraf kavya aur kavya
ke pass anjali……
sab kha rahe hothe hain jab anjali khushi ke arm par lage
ghaav ko dekhthi hain aur khushi se poochthi
hain :- khushi yeh tujhe kya hua ?? {she asks pointing to the
ghaav….}
khushi {looks at where anjali is pointing out & then she
stares at raj with a hurt look in her eyes & says} :- woh tho
bas aise hi lag gayi.. zyada chot nahi hain … {actually she got
hurt when raj caught her arm & dragged her to the terrace }
anjali :- { get’s hyper } tu kaise keh sakthi hain ghaav ghehra
nahi hain… dekh kaisa nishaan pad gaya hain…
{ anjali touches the wound }
khushi :- ahh…kya kar rahi ho anjali….
Kripa :- dekh tujhe dard ho raha hain aur tu is baat ko
itni lightly le rahi hain……
Khushi :- are tum dono ab bas bhi karo , yeh tho mamuli si
chot hain… yeh chot tho us ghaav ke saamne kuch bhi nahi
hain joh ghaav kuch logo ne hamesha ke liye dil pe lage diye
hain…….aur joh kabhi mit nahi sakthe…..
is baat ke kehne par raj khushi ki taraf dekhtha hain aur
dono ki aankhein milthi hain dono mein se ek bhi apni nazar
nahi hata tha , un dono ki aankhein bina kahe hi hazaro dil
ki baatein dil se dil thak pohanch cha rahi thi…
phir khushi apni nazrein hathakar kehthi hain :- achcha ab
main chalthi hoon…….
Kripa :- lekin khushi… kuch dher tho hamare saath baito na……
Khushi { stands up from her chair & again says } :- nahi
kripa….main ab chalthi hoon…veer ghar par mera intezaar kar raha
hoga…..
Anjali :- achcha khushi tu jaa…. Tu apna……{ khushi stops her &
says }
Khushi :- haan haan main apna khayal rakhugi , gaadi sambhal
kar chalugi , ghar jaathe hi tum logo ko call karoongi…. Aur
kuch……{ she says teasingly }
Anjali :- haan yaad rakh teri doctor ke saath appointment
hain do din baad…..
Khushi :- haan haan mujhe yaad hain , aur agar main bhool
gayi tho tu aur kripa kiss liye hain mujhe baad mein yaad dila
dena…….ab main chalthi hoon , bye all of you…..kal milthe
hain……..
Angad , kavya , anjali aur kripa khushi ko bye keh dethe hain
par raj nahi kehtha… woh bas khushi ko dekhthe hi rehtha
hain……khushi bar baar nazar bachakar raj ko phalat kar dekh
rahi hothi hain… khushi then leaves… raj is still looking at the
door from where khushi left.. uski aankhein yeh baat keh rahi
thi ki woh nahi chahtha tha ki khushi jaye par woh usse
rokh nahi paa raha tha….khushi kuch samaj na paayi aur chali
gayi..… raj is still lost in his thoughts jab angad usse
bulatha hain raj does not respond for 2 times & for the third
time angad calls out his name a bit loudly :- rajjjjjj….
Raj apne soch se bahar nikal kar hairani se angad ki taraf
dekhtha hain wondering why he called him aloud…
Angad :- { understands raj’s question from his expression & says
} tho main kya kartha tabse main tumhe do baar bhula chukka
hoon aur tum ho ki jawaab hi nahi de rahe the isliye..….
Raj :- theek hain , ab batao kya hain ??
Kavya :- are raj tum woh sab chodo yeh angad tho aise hi….
aur humme batao tum kisske khyalo mein khoye hue the…. { he
raises his eyebrow at him & asks in a teasing manner }
Raj :- aisa kuch nahi hain… achcha theek hain ab main chaltha
hoon… bouji se kal subah aake miluga….
Raj bids good-bye & leaves the place….
Yahaan angad , kripa , anjali kavya baat karthe rehthe hain….
Angad :- tho guys tum sab jaanthe ho na humme kya karna hain
???
Kripa :- haan angad hum jaanthe hain ki humme kissi bhi
keemat par raj aur khushi ke beech ki differences khatam karni
hain…
Anjali :- aur unhe hamesha ke liye saath karna hain…..
Kavya :- aur aaj joh hum ne kiya usse yeh tho sabit ho gaya
ki raj aur khushi ki zindagi ek dusare ke bina adhuri hain……
Anjali :- haan bilkul sahi…….
Kripa :- mujhe bas ek hi baat ki chintha hain ki agar un
dono ko patah chal gaya ki hum kya plan kar rahe hain tho
woh humme chodenge nahi……..
Angad :- kripa tum us baat ko chod do , jab unhe patah chalna
hoga patah chal hi jayega hum chaar ko bas ek hi kaam par
dhyaan dena hain ki hum un dono ko wapas kareeb kaise lekar
aaye aur unke beech ki ghalat faimiyaan & duriyaan mitaye….
All say done aur phir they leave…
Ab zara dekhtha hain raj kahaan hain….. Raj drives his car &
goes to the sunset point bridge… he get’s down the car takes
his champange & sits at the corner of the bridge near to
the water…. He takes stones starts throwing them in the water
, starts talking aloud :- khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………… kyun kiya
tumne mere saath aisa …. Khushi… tum jaanthi ho main tumse
kitna pyaar kartha hoon…. Haan main pyaar kartha hoon tumse
kabhie keh nahi paya aur tumne mujhe dhoka diya kaash hum aaj bhi
saath hothe kaash hum kabhie alag na hue hothe , kaash main
tumhe apni dil ki halat pehle hi keh detha tho aaj yeh
naubat nahi aathi…..khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii……….{ he throws
a stone in the water with total force }….

Song in the background :-

“ Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare………
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare…..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare………
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare……..
Kabhi tu bhi pyaar se dekh zara mere dil ko ek nazar……..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
{ he thinks about khushi the time in the pantry jab woh dono
sirf ek dusare ko dekh rahe hothe hain..}
Tujhe pata kya ke mere dil mein…….
Hain tere khaatir junoon kitna……….
Main apne baare mein rukh ke sochoon…….
Nahin hai ab to sakoon itna………
Jeeta hoon magar jeeta bhi nahin………
Marta hoon magar marta bhi nahin………
{he thinks about the time when he dragged khushi to the
terrace }
Tere gham mein fanaa hone ke liye …….
Peeta hoon main zeher…….
{he opens the champagne bottle & drinks }
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Daba hua tha jo mere seene ne tujhko dekha……….
Tho dard ubhra………
{he thinks when khushi entered in the hospital room }
Kisi bhi marhum se bhar na paaya…….
Teri judaai ka zakhm gehra………
Seene mein pyaar machalta hain……..
Aakhon se dard chalakta hain………
Saahil ki tarah kaate mujhko………
Chaahat ki har leher……….
{he thinks about the time in the pantry jab khushi is
leaving & he wanted to stop her but could not & he was helpless…}
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare……..
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare………
Kabhi tu bhi pyaar se dekh zara mere dil ko ek nazar….

raj just has tears rolling down his eyes par raj unhe behne
se rokhna chahtha hain woh apna har dard har zakhm apne
andar him dhaba dena chahtha tha……….

chalo guys yahiin khatam hotha hain dil se dil thak part 2…
ab I think aap sabko ek idea hi aa gaya hoga ki kyun raj
aur khushi alag hue hain…. aur shayad aapko yeh bhi patah
hoga ki khushi ki zindagi mein aur koi khushi nahi siwai uske
aane wale bachche ke….

Ab agar aap jaanna chahthe hain ki angad , kripa , kavya aur
anjali kya kamiyaab honge raj aur khushi ko ek karne mein
????? bouji ko jab sachayi ka patah chalega tho unka kya hoga
??? khushi ke bachche ka father kaun hain ?? woh raj hain ya
phir koi aur ?? agar woh raj ka bachcha hain tho raj is baat
se inkaar kyun kar raha hain ????? kya aaj bhi khushi raj ko
chahthi hain ??? kya raj aur khushi kabhi mil payenge ?????? aur
kai sawaalo ke jawaab jaanne ke liye padthe rahiye dil se
dil thak…………

Plz post ur comments & compliments I’ll be waiting for
them………

Take care……..
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

love
Surya….


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:10 pm

“DIL SE DIL THAK :- PART 3”……

Raj drives his car & goes to the sunset point bridge… he
gets down the car takes his champagne & sits at the corner of
the bridge near to the water…. He takes stones starts
throwing them in the water , starts talking aloud :-
khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………… kyun kiya tumne mere saath aisa …. Khushi… tum
jaanthi ho main tumse kitna pyaar kartha hoon…. Haan main
pyaar kartha hoon tumse kabhie keh nahi paya aur tumne mujhe
dhoka diya kaash hum aaj bhi saath hothe kaash hum kabhie alag
na hue hothe , kaash main tumhe apni dil ki halat pehle hi
keh detha tho aaj yeh naubat nahi
aathi…..khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii……….{ he throws a stone in the water with total
force }….

Song in the background :-

“ Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare………
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare…..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare………
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare……..
Kabhi tu bhi pyaar se dekh zara mere dil ko ek nazar……..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
{ he thinks about khushi the time in the pantry jab woh dono
sirf ek dusare ko dekh rahe hothe hain..}
Tujhe pata kya ke mere dil mein…….
Hain tere khaatir junoon kitna……….
Main apne baare mein rukh ke sochoon…….
Nahin hai ab to sakoon itna………
Jeeta hoon magar jeeta bhi nahin………
Marta hoon magar marta bhi nahin………
{he thinks about the time when he dragged khushi to the
terrace }
Tere gham mein fanaa hone ke liye …….
Peeta hoon main zeher…….
{he opens the champagne bottle & drinks }
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Daba hua tha jo mere seene ne tujhko dekha……….
Tho dard ubhra………
{he thinks when khushi entered in the hospital room }
Kisi bhi marhum se bhar na paaya…….
Teri judaai ka zakhm gehra………
Seene mein pyaar machalta hain……..
Aakhon se dard chalakta hain………
Saahil ki tarah kaate mujhko………
Chaahat ki har leher……….
{he thinks about the time in the pantry jab khushi is
leaving & he wanted to stop her but could not & he was helpless…}
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare……..
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare………
Kabhi tu bhi pyaar se dekh zara mere dil ko ek nazar….

raj just has tears rolling down his eyes par raj unhe behne
se rokhna chahtha hain woh apna har dard har zakhm apne
andar him dhaba dena chahtha tha……….
{raj shouts again}Khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii…………. Main tumhare liye
mere dil ke har ek jazbaat ko maar dena chahtha hoon tumhe
mere dil se nikaal dena chahtha hoon par kyun main yeh dil
mera saath nahi de raha hain kyun mera dil na chahthe hue bhi
tumhare baare mein sochtha hain tumhare khayalo mein dhooba
rehtha hain…..kyun kyun akhir kyunnnnnnnnnnnnnnn…. Nahi aaj ke
baad tumhare liye mere dil mein sirf aur sirf ek hi jazbaat
hoga aur woh hain nafrat……..Nafrat kartha hoon main tumse
nafra {he stops & tears roll down his cheeks}….. tum pyaar ka
rishtha tho mujhse nibha na paayi par ab main tumhe nafrat ki
akhri hadh thak jaake dikhauga… shayad tumhe chot pohancha ne
se dard mujhe ho takleef mujhe ho par lekin mujhe usse koi
farq nahi padtha hain main tumhe pal pal tadaptha hua dekhna
chahtha hoon aur iske liye main kuch bhi karoonga…. khushi
ab thak tumne Raj Garewal ka asli roop dekha nahi hain par
main apne aap se wadaa karthi hoon ki now you will see the
real Raj Garewal joh dosto ke liye dost hain aur joh
dushmano ke liye dushman……. { woh music bajthi hain joh sujal ke
liye kth mein bajthi thi when he wanted to separate piyush &
kashish }
Raj yeh sab baatein kartha rehtha hain jab uska mobile bajtha
hain…
Raj :- hello….
Tanya :- hii baby….
Raj :- haan tanya bolo……{ he gives a ukda ukda jawaab }
Tanya :- kya hua raj ??? itne ukde ukde kyun ho , mood
kharaab hain kya ??
Raj :- nahi tanya aisi koi baat nahi hain.. tum bolo tumne
mujhe call kyun kiya ??
Tanya :- raj tumhara kuch nahi ho saktha main tumse itni
achchi tareeke se baat kar rahi hoon aur tum ho ki mujhse theek
se baat bhi nahi kar rahe ho….
Raj:- {cut’s her in between basically he is least interested to
hear anything…} dekho tanya ab mera mood kuch theek nahi hain
main tumse baad main baat kartha hoon…
Tanya{get’s agitated}:- tum aur tumhara mood mujhe bhi shouk
nahi hain ki main tumse baat karoon maine sirf tumhe yeh
batane ko phone kiya ki agar tum free ho tho yahaan “liquids”
{guys it is a pub in Hyderabad sorry I don’t know places in
Shimla} aajao… { yeh baat kehkar tanya phone rakh dethi hain or
to rather be precise tanya phone patak dethi hain}
Raj just looks at his cell get’s more irritated but then
decides to go & meet tanya…….
Raj goes to the place & meets tanya but still is in the
same foul mood……..
tanya observes that raj has not been behaving properly from
the time he has come….. but tanya tries to behave very normal
to him…. After sometime tanya finally get’s irritated at
raj’s behavior… she catches hold of raj’s hand & drags him out
& takes him to the parking lot…..
They reach the place when Raj says :- kya baat hain tanya
tum mujhe yahaan kyun laayi ho ???
Tanya :- offoh raj… tumhe hua kya hain ??? batao mujhe…. { she
tries to touch his face but then raj moves her hand away}
Raj :- aisi koi baat nahi hain tanya main bilkul theek hoon
aur main sochtha hoon ki ab mujhe ghar jaana hain main
ghar jaa raha hoon……….
{ raj starts to walk off jab tanya kehthi hain }
tanya:- no raj tum kahiin nahi jaa rahe ho… tum pehle mujhe
batao tumhe kya pareshaani hain.. tum aise behave kyun kar
rahe ho ???
Raj :- dekho tanya main tumse ab koi baat nahi karna chahtha…
please mujhe is waqt akela chod do……
Tanya :- kahiin tum aise behave us khushi ki wajah se toh
nahi kar rahe ho na…..
Raj { gives her a hard stare & then says } :- dekho tanya tum
ab khushi ko beech mein mat lekar aao…..
Tanya :- main kahaan lekar aa rahi hoon khushi ko
raj, khushi tho hamesha se humare beech ki deewar thi aur
mujhe nahi lagtha woh humara peecha kabhi chodegi……dekho na raj
aaj bhi ab bhi woh khushi sirf is baat ki planning kar
rahi hogi ki woh tumhari zindagi mein kaise wapas aaye aur
tumhari jhayadhaat kaise hasill kare…..aur ab tho usse is baat
ke liye mouka bhi mil gaya hain ki woh tumhare kareeb aa
sake.. it is all because of ur family… your so called happy
family.. {she points her finger at him}
Raj :- dekho tanya tumhe koi hakh nahi bantha ki tum meri
family par ugli utao….aur rahi baat khushi ki toh khushi bhi
mere saath rehna nahi chahthi hain.. yeh sirf meri aur uski
majboori hain ki hum mein kuch dino ke liye saath rehne ka
pati-patni ka natak karna hoga……. Yeh sirf humari majburi hain
tum samajthi kyun nahi…….
Tanya { says sarcastically }:- haan shayad yeh majburi hain
lekin tumhare liye tho sone pe shuhaga hain na… { she says this
sentence & raises a eye-brow at him }
Raj :- tum kehne kya chahthi ho tanya saaf saaf kaho???
Tanya :- main zyada kuch nahi kehna chahthi raj main tho bas
sachayi bayaan kar rahi hoon…
Raj :- kaisi sachayi tanya main kuch samjha nahi……
Tanya :- raj kyun jaan kar bhi anjaan banne ka naatak karthe
ho……
Raj :- tanya please.. ab agar tumhari faltoo ki baatein khatam
ho gayi ho tho main jaa raha hoon….
Tanya :- raj na hi meri baatein faaltu hain aur na hi meri
baat khatam hui hain…. achcha theek hain tum sunna chahthe hona
ki mere in baton ka matlab kya hain tho ab tum suno mera
matlab kya hain suno tum mera matlab yeh hain ki agar
khushi tumhare saath aakar rehne lagthi hain tho tumhe tho
khushi ki tumhare zindagi mein wapas aane ki khushi hi hogi ,
aur tum khushi ke saath apna rishtha koi majburi mein nahi
balki dil se nibhaoge… tum bas kehne ke liye mujhse pyaar
karthe ho par tumhare dil mein sirf ek hi naam bastha hain woh
naam khushi hain sirf khushi.. tum rehthe mere saath ho par
sochthe khushi ke bare mein ho tum dekhthe mujhe ho par
tumhari aankhon mein sirf khushi ka chehra nazar aatha hain ,
main tumhare saath hothi hoon par nazar tumhe khushi aathi
hain….
Raj :- {tries to intervent & says} nahi tanya tum ghalat sochthi
ho main khushi se pyaar nahi kartha main tho bas usse
nafrat kartha hoon… beintahaan nafrat kartha hoon …….
Tanya :- nahi raj tum khushi se nafrat nahi karthe main
tho kehthi hoon tum kabhi usse nafrat kar hi nahi sakthe
kyunke tum tho usse bohat chahthe ho…. Haan raj agar main maan
bhi loon ki tum khushi se nafrat karthe ho tab hi woh tumhari
nafrat bankar hi sahi tumhare dil ke dhadkano ke saath
dhadhak thi hain tumhari chalthi saanso ke saath chalthi hain lekin
main tho tumhari zindagi mein koi mainey hi nahi rakhthi na
, kyunke na tho tum mujhse pyaar karthe ho aur nahi tum
mujhse nafrat karthe ho….
Raj :- nahi Tanya main tumse pyaar kartha
Tanya {cut’s him in between}:- nahi karthe tum mujhse pyaar
raj nahi karthe tum…… aaj bhi tumhare dil ke dhadkano ke saab
se zyada kareeb sirf khushi hain..
{she has fake tears in her eyes } nafrat bankar hi sahi par
woh har pal tumhare pass hain .. chahe woh yahaan tumhare pass
moujood na ho par woh tumhare ehsaas mein hamesha hain aur
hamesha rahegi… aur yeh baat main jaanthi hi nahii pal pal
mehsoos bhi karthi hoon…kabhi kabhi tho mujhe lagtha hain ki
main tumhare zindagi mein koi mainey nahi rakhthi…mujhe tho yeh
bhi lagtha hain ki tum mere pass isliye ho kyunke tum us
khushi ke parchayee uski yaado se durr bhaagna chahthe ho….
Main tumhare liye sirf woh ek zariya hoon which will help you
over-come the sorrow the bitterness given to you by khushi…..
shayad tum mere pass rehkar sabko aur khaaskar ki khushi ko
yeh dikhana chahthe ho ki tum tumhari zindagi mein khush ho
tum us dhoke se bahar nikal aaye ho joh tumhe khushi ne
diya tha…. Tum khushi ko yeh dikhana chahthe ho ki agar uski
zindagi mein koi aur ho saktha hain tho tumhari zindagi mein
kyun nahi……yahii baat saabit karne ke liye tum mere saath
ho……..Lekin tum jaanthe such baat kya hain raj tum aaj bhi
khushi ke yaado mein hi zinda ho duniyaan ke liye Raj Garewal
has moved on par apne aap ke liye tum aaj bhi ussi modh
par khade ho jahaan khushi ne tumhe choda tha aur aaj bhi
tumhe sirf uska hi intezaar hain…. maine maana ki tumhare dil
mein joh khushi ke liye pyaar ke jazbaat the woh mar chuke
hain aur tum usse nafrat karthe ho par tumhari khushi ke liye
is nafrat mein bhi ek concern chupa hua hain , care chupa
hua hain pyaar chupa hain suna tumne tumhari khushi ke liye
nafrat mein bhi pyaar chalak tha hain tum aaj bhi khushi se
pyaar karthe ho……..{she starts crying}
raj :- {turns her towards himself catches her shoulder very
firmly & then says }:- nahi kartha main usse pyaar suna tumne
main usse pyaar nahi kartha… main nahi jaantha ki kya main
tumhe yeh baat kabhi samjhapauga ya phir nahi par meri zindagi
ka sabse bada such yehi hain ki main khushi se pyaar nahi
kartha khushi se tho kya ab tho main kissi se bhi pyaar nahi
kar sakthe kyunke mere pehle pyaar ne meri khushi ne mera dil
is qadar thod dala ki is dil ke saare jazbaat saare feelings
mar gaye hain….. tum jaanthi ho tanya aisa insaan joh zindagi
se root gaya ho joh sabse durr jana chahtha ho jiske dil ke
saare armaan jeethe jee mar chuke ho unhe kya kehthe hain
unhe zinda laash kehthe hain… aur main ek zinda laash ki tarah
pal pal ghut ghut ke jee raha hoon…. Main maantha hoon main
tumse pyaar nahi kartha aur main yeh qabool kartha hoon ki
main zindagi mein kabhi bhi ek pal ke liye bhi tumse pyaar
nahi kar saktha… lekin haan iska matlab yeh nahi ki main khushi
se pyaar kartha hoon main maantha hoon ki meri zindagi mein
kabhi ek pal aisa aaya tha jab khushi hi meri duniyaan
banthi jaa rahi thi par aaj woh meri zindagi mein ek ajnabee hain
jisse main jab bhi miluga ek dushman ki tarah miluga…. Mere
aur khushi se beech kayi rishthe jude pehle hum dushman the
phir humme majburan pati-patni banna pada phir hum dost bane
zindagi aage badi aur ab is modh par hum dushman ban gaya
hain..aur jab do dost dushman banthe tho qayamat aathi hain
kyunke woh do dost ek dusare ke achchayi , burayi aur
kamzoriyaan jaanthe hain…{he tries to calm her down now } mera yakiin
karo main khushi ke saath natak karna meri majburi hain
kyunke bouji hospital mein hain aur ab hum unhe sachayi nahi bata
sakthe kyunke doctors ke kehna hain ki hum mein bouji ko
zyada se zyada pareshaniyoon se durr rakhna hoga…..aur main nahi
chahtha ki meri sachayi batane ki wajah se dusare ki chehre
ki hasi chin jaye dusro ki pareshaani bad jaye….{tanya ab bhi
chup nahi hothi she keeps on crying }
Tanya { roothe hue kehthi hain } :- nahi raj tum aaj bhi khushi
se pyaar karthe ho……
Raj :- achcha chalo ab rona band karo aasoon pohanch lo aur
mujhe batao ki main aisa kya karoon jiske ki tum mera baat
par vishwaas karo…..batao mujhe…… {he questions}
Tanya :- saabit karoooo…….
Raj :- theek tho batao main is such ko kaise saabit karoon
????
Tanya :- mujhse shaddi karke saabit karo raj ki tumhare dil
mein khushi ke liye koi jazbaat nahi hain koi jagaah nahi
hain.……
Raj:-{ trying to analyze what tanya said & then says } kya kaha
tumne shaddiiiiiiiiii…………
Tanya :- haan raj mujhe apni patni banakar saabit karo….
Raj is shell –shocked uski kaano mein tanya ki baat gunj
rahi hothi hain he is quite for sometime when again tanya
says :- dekha raj tum aaj bhi khushi ko chahthe ho isliye tho
tum mujhse shaddi nahi karna chahthe.. tum aaj bhi chahthe ho
ki khushi tumhare zindagi mein lout ke… tum aaj bhi chahthe
ho ki tumhare aur khushi ke beech jitni bhi kadwi yaadein
hain tum un sabko mitakar ek nayi shuruwaat karo…. Raj tum meri
zindagi se chale jao… main nahi chahthi ki main is tarah ki
zindagi bithau…..
Raj { hears to everything & finally speaks – up } :- main tumse
shaddi karne ko taiyaar hoon tanya…..
Tanya is stunned by raj’s reply & she utters :- kya kaha
tumne tum mujhse shaddi karoge…..
Raj :- { sternly says } haan tanya main tumse shaddi karoonga
main aaj hi mumma aur ghar waalo se humari shaddi ki baat
karoonga…….
tanya out off happiness hugs raj but raj shows her a cold
response & does not even hug her back…. He moves away from
her & then says :- ab main jaa raha hoon tumse baad mein
miloonga……


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:11 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- part 3 (continuation)

Tanya tries to stop him but then raj is adamant & he leaves
the place… raj drives off from the place quickly… now tanya
is standing their alone & talking to herself :- kab thak durr
bhaagoge mujhse raj ek na ek din tho main tumhe apna banakar
hi chodugi aur uske liye aaj yeh mera pehla kadam tha… {she
wipes her tears flicks the tears in the air & smiles
villainously} GOD….itna natak kar karke thak gayi hoon main….. ab
patah nahi aur kya kya karna padega mujhe aur kitne papad bhelne
padenge mujhe , par koi baat nahi main joh bhi kar rahi hoon
Garewal empire ki malkin banne ke liye kar rahi hoon aur
uske liye main kissi bhi hadh thak jaugi.………
Tabhi tanya ka cell bajtha hain….. Tanya picks the call……
Tanya :- hello…
The person :- hello Tanya….
Tanya :- jii vasu aunty kahiye…..
{I think all of you know vasu is kamal’s wife & kamal is
raj’s chachu }
Vasu :- kaam ho gaya kya ???
Tanya :- haan aunty aap fikhar mat kijiye kaam ho gaya hain
sab kuch plan ke mutabik hi hua raj shaddi ke liye maan
gaya hain…..
Vasu :- yeh tho bohat achchi khabar sunayi hain tumne.. itne
dino se ek achchi khabar sunne ke liye kaan taras gaye the…
aur waise bhi ek achchi khabar tho aathe aathe hi reh gayi…{she
sulks }
Tanya :- kaunsi achchi khabar aathe aathe reh gayi aunty….
Vasu :- are Tanya simple si baat hain main itne dino se
intezaar kar rahi hoon ki kab khabar aayegi ki bouji is duniyaan
mein nahi rahe par har baar unki tabiyat bigadthi hain aur
phir woh theek ho jaathe hain hain.. {she sulks making a face }
Tanya:- aunty aap bhi na… achcha aap yeh saari baatein chodiye
aur meri baat suniye raj ne kaha hain ki aaj woh ghar pe
sabse humari shaddi ki baat karega tho aap raj ko support
kijiyega taaki kissiko naa kehna ka mouka hi naa mile….
Vasu :- tanya tum fikhar mat karo main yahaan sab kuch
sambhaal loongi.. aur waise shukar hain ki sab kuch plan ke mutabekh
hi hua….
Tanya:- aunty sab kuch plan ke mutabekh tho hona hi tha na
kyunke humne sab kuch itni baariki se joh plan kiya tha….
Vasu :- haan yeh baat tho such hain humne pehle unki dosti
mein khadwahat dali phir humne unki duriyaan badayi phir humne
unhe alag kiya aur akhir main ab humne raj se shaddi ke
liye haan karwa hi li…..
Tanya :- you know what aunty we two are just tooo
gooooddddd……
Vasu :- right………
Both Tanya & vasu laugh…..
Then vasu & Tanya continue to talk for some more time
discussing their plans & stuff..{ vasu aur Tanya ke pass koi dusara
kaam nahi hain is liye baat karthe hi jaa rahe hain } then
their talk ends…..

Ab zara hum dekhthe hain ki raj aur khushi ki kya haalat
hain….
Pehle khushi ki halat dekhthe hain…… khushi apne ghar mein
veer ke saath masti mazaak kar rahi hothi hain.. shayad is hasi
khel mein woh apne dil ke dard ko kahiin dhaba dena
chahthi hain… veer yeh baat jaantha tha ki khushi jitni khush
bahar se lagthi hain utni hi woh andar se toot gayi hain.. woh
jaantha tha ki woh apni behen ki khoyi hui zindagi usse
lout ta nahi saktha is liye woh usse kissi bhi haalat mein khush
rakhne ki koshish kartha hain…..
Khushi was just walking to the sofa with a tray of tea woh
chalthe chalthe suddenly trip karthi hain aur ghirne waali
hothi hain jab veer usse foran pakad letha hain…. he makes her
sit on the sofa & says…
Veer :- my dear sister maine tumse kitni baar kaha hain ki
tum apna khayaal rakha karo… lekin nahi kyun manoge tum meri
baat hamesha main joh bhi kahoon tum uska ulta hi karthi ho..
tumne tho tai {decide} kiya hain na ki joh bhi main kahoon
tum uska ulta hi karo… mere kehne ka tho koi value hi nahi
raha hain….{ he makes a sad puppy childish face }
Khushi {smiles at his reaction & says } :- are nahi veer aisi
koi baat nahi hain…… woh tho ghalthi se mera pair carpet
mein phas gaya tha tho isliye….
Veer :- dekho khushi tum apna khayal nahi rakhna chahthi tho
mat rakho kyunke tumhara khayal rakhne ke liye yahaan hum sab
hain lekin apne bachche ka khayal tumhe khud rakhna padega….
{ khushi keeps seeing veer she suddenly starts imagining raj
in front of her & talking to her}
Raj :- khushi dekho aaj ke baad tum koi tension nahi logi…
agar tum tension logi tho bachche ki sehat par asar padega tho
tum aaj ke baad bohat careful rahogi balki bohat nahi tum
bohat bohat bohat careful rahogi samjhi……aur agar tumhe kuch
chahiye tho woh mujhse kahoogi tum zyada strain nahi karogi……
Khushi starts smiling & khushi ke aansoon start flowing out
of her eyes… she is still in the thoughts of how would raj
take care of her if he was with her…. When veer shakes her
& says :- khushi tum sun rahi ho ki nahi {khushi comes out
of her imaginative world & looks at veer confused when veer
continues saying } tum kahaan kho gayi main tabse tumhe kuch
keh raha hoon aur tum ho ki… waise tum kiss duniyaan mein
kho gayi thi….
Khushi just looks at him with teary eyes which shows she
was thinking about raj… khushi just leaves the place & goes
upstairs while all veer does is just watches her leave as he
knows it is not the right time to talk to khushi…….
Ab zara we will see what raj is doing :-
Raj has driven back home…. Veena , lalit , vasu & kamal are
sitting in the hall when raj walks in…
Raj looks at them & very firmly says :- maine aaj apni
zindagi ka ahem faisla kiya hain joh main aap sabko batana
chahtha hoon……
Kamal :- kaisa faisla raj…
Raj :- maine yeh tai {decide } kiya hain ki main tanya se
shaddi kar raha hoon….
Veena:- kyaaaaaaaaa…….
Lalit :- yeh kya mazaak hain raj……
Raj :- yeh mazaak nahi haqueeqat hain…
Kamal :- lekin raj….. yeh kaise ho saktha hain…
Vasu :- kamalllll yeh tho khushi ki baat hain ki raj aur
tanya shaddi kar rahe hain..waise bhi woh khushi kabhi humare
raj ke qabil thi hi nahiii…
Veena :- yeh tum kya keh rahi ho vasu….
Vasu :- veena main bilkul sahi keh rahi hoon…. Raj tumhare is
faisle mein main tumhare saath hoon….
Raj:- dekhiye aap log mera parivaar ho aur isliye maine yeh
baat aap sabko batana munasibh samjha.. ab agar aap log mera
saath dena chahiye tho de sakthe hain aur agar na chache tho
mera saath chod bhi sakthe main kissi par dhabaab nahi
daluga ki woh mera saath de… lekin main aap sabko yeh zaroor
kahooga ki yeh meri zindagi hain aur main wohi karoonga joh
mujhe karna chahiye aur joh mujhe sahi lagtha hain agar koi
mera saath de yaa phir naa de…..
Raj walks off from there leaving everybody shocked while vasu
has a evil smile on her face… after sometime raj is in his
room standing by the window when veena comes to him…
Veena :- raj…
Raj turns around & has tears in his eyes he says :- mumma…….{
saying this he hugs veena & tears roll down his eyes veena
wipes his tears & then says }
Veena :- raj main nahi jaanthi ki tumhare aur khushi ke beech
kya problem hain aur main yeh jaanna bhi nahi chahthi.. main
jaanthi hoon tho bas itna ki tujhe tere aur khushi ke
rishthe ko ek aur mouka dena chahiye.. apne liye naa sahi tho
bouji ke liye tho tumhe aisa karna hi hoga…main chahthi hoon tum
tumhari aur tanya ki shaddi ke bare mein ek baar phir soch
lo kyunke mera tajurba kehtha hain ki tera yeh faisla ghalat
hain aur ek maa kabhi nahi chahegi ki uske bachche kabhi koi
ghalat faisla le… mere khayal se aaj bhi tera aur khushi ka
rishtha khatam nahi hua hain aaj bhi kahiin na kahiin tum
dono ka dil sirf ek dusare ke liye dhadhak tha hain…. dekh raj
mujhe joh laga maine woh keh diya hain aap tujhe joh karna
hain woh teri marzi hain kyunke yeh teri zindagi ka faisla
hain….
Veena yeh kehkar kamre se bahar chali jaathi hain aur peeche
chod jaathi hain confused raj ko joh veena ki baton se
pareshaan ho jaa tha aur soch mein dhoob jaatha hain….


Song in the background:-{for Raj }

“ Why did you break my heart….
Why did you fall in love……..
Why did you go away, away, away, away….
Dil mera churaaya kyun……
Jab yeh dil todna hi tha…
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon……
Humse mooh modh na hi tha…….
Humse mooh modh na hi tha……
Why did you break my heart……
Why did you fall in love……
Why did you go away, away, away, away……
Ho, dil ko dhadakna tune sikhaaya…….
Dil ko tadapna tune sikhaaya ……..
Aankhon mein aansu chhupe the kahin…….
Inko chhalakna tune sikhaaya…….
Seene mein basaaya kyun Dil se jab khelna hi tha….
Humse dil lagaaya kyun…..
Humse mooh modh na hi tha……..
Dil mera churaaya kyoon……
Why did you break my heart
Why did you fall in love….
Why did you go away, away, away, away…
Ho, milti thi nazrein jab bhi nazar se……..
Uthte the shole jaise jigar se……
Saanson se nikla jaise dhuaan sa…….
Banta tha mujhse jeete na marte ……….
Aag kyun lagaayi jab…….
Bujhaaye dil chhod na hi tha…..
Humse dil lagaaya kyun….
Humse mooh modh na hi tha……
Dil mera churaaya kyoon………
Jab yeh dil todna hi tha……..
Humse dil lagaaya kyoon……
Humse mooh modh na hi tha ……..
Why did you break my heart…..
Why did you fall in love…
Why did you go away, away, away, away….”

Raj sees khushi’s smiling image on his mirror so he hits
his hand on the mirror his eyes are burning with anger & he
says :- tumhari wajah se aaj mujhe yeh kadam utana pada hain
sirf tumhari wajah se.. maine tanya se shaddi ke liye haan
kaha kyunke main saabit karna chahtha tha ki main tumse pyaar
nahi kartha.. nahi kartha main tumse pyaar…….{ then raj sees
the wound on his hand intently & says } pyaar kartha hoon main
tumse bohat pyaar kartha hoon itna pyaar kartha hoon ki tum
meri nas nas mein basi ho itna pyaar kartha hoon ki tum
khoon bankar meri ragho mein daudthi ho…. Main chahkar bhi kabhi
tumse tumhari yaado se alag nahi ho saktha….{ raj has tears
in his eyes }

Dusari taraf khushi is in her room crying & thinking about
how her life and how her life would have been different if
raj was with her…….


Song in the background:-{for khushi }

“Sun leyna Sun leyna ...
ohhhh ....
Sun leyna Sun leyna ... Sun leyna Sun leyna…..
Sun leyna Sun leyna… Sun leyna Sun leyna….
Usay dard kahye jahn dil ho,
Dil ho wahnnnn jahnnn pyaaaar……
Is pyaar main mushkil hai……..
Muhskil tho hai mereeeee yaaaaaar…..
Phir bhi karay gay kertay reh gayyyyyy…….
Pyaar tuje meri jaaaan……
Sun leynaaaaa dil jnaiyaaaaa ………
Gal mile Gal mie gal hona pyar diya
Tri baba tri baba ....
Sun leynaaaaaa dil janiyaaaaaaa………
Gal mile Gal mie gal hona pyar diya ……..
Sun leyna Sun leyna ... ……….
ohhhh ..……..
Sun leyna Sun leyna …….....
Jo milaaaa nahiii woh mera nahiii……..
koiiii bhiiii gilaaaaa nahiiiii……
Koi chod de………
Dil tod de…….
Usay kho diya khainnnnnn……..
Rehnay do Chorooooo………..
Kuch bhi na sochoooo………
Pyaar tho hai imthiannnn……
Sun leyna dil janiyaaaaaaa……
Gal mile Gal mie gal hona pyar diya……..
Sun leyna dil janiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……..”

Khushi :-{talking to herself} kaash raj hum aaj bhi saath
hothe kaash humare beech itni duriyaan nahi hothi kaash tumne
mujh par ek baar vishwaas kiya hotha.. kaash tumne ghairo ki
baat na sunkar tumhare apne ki baat tumhari khushi ki baat
suni hothi kaash tumne mujhe ek mouka diya ho tho aaj hum
saath hothe aur humare is saath ko koi nahi thod saktha tha hum
saath khush hothe…. Lekin shayad kabhi kabhi hum joh chahthe
hain woh waise nahi hotha is wajah se hi tho aaj hum dono
alag hain judaa hain… par is durri se mere pyaar par koi farq
nahi padtha aaj hum jitne bhi alag kyun na ho main har pal
tumhe apne pass mehsoos karthi hoon… main raj ko tab mehsoos
karthi hoon jab main khush hoon jab main udaas hoon jab main
daarthi hoon jab main akeli hothi hoon har pal raj mere
saath hain.. kabhi mera pyaar bankar to kabhi mere aasoon bankar
tho kabhi mera dost mera sahara bankar tum har pal mere saath
ho raj main nahi jaanthi ki kya hum kabhi is janm mein
milenge ya nahii par tum hamesha mere saath rahoge….after some
khushi wipes her eyes dry & carries on with her work….
Jaise taise raat kat jaathi hain……
Agli subah raj apne ghar par hotha hain jab uske cell par
angad ka call aatha hain….
Raj:- hello…..
Angad :- hello raj…..
Raj:- haan angad bol kya baat hain ?? tune call kyun kiya
hospital mein sab theek hain na ??????
Angad :- raj yahaan zara ghadbad ho gayi hain
Raj :- {immediately asks} kya hua ?? bouji tho theek hain na
???
Angad:- haan raj bouji tho theek hain par woh yahaan zidh kar
rahe hain ki unhe abhi ke abhi ghar aana hain…. hum sab ne
unhe mana karne ki bohat koshish ki par woh maan hi nahi
rahe hain…….
Raj:- are lekin agar bouji yahaan aagaye tho unhe patah chal
jayega ki main aur khushi alag ho gaye hain…{he says worriedly
}
Angad:- aur raj bouji ko abhi yeh baat patah chalna theek
nahi hain…..
Raj :- haan main jaantha hoon……{ raj pauses & starts thinking
of something }
Angad :- achcha raj ab tu hum mein bata hum kya
kare ???
Raj :- achcha theek hain angad tum log bouji ko lekar aao
mere pass ek plan hain…. abhi mujhe kuch kaam hain main tumse
tab baat kartha hoon jab tum bouji ke saath ghar aajaoge…….
Angad:- theek hain…chal bye…..
Raj finishes his call & leaves the house……
Dusari taraf hospital mein kripa , anjali aur kavya are
standing near bouji’s bed jab angad comes there he says..
Angad :- kaam ho gaya bouji……. Maine raj ko keh diya hain….
Kavya :- chalo yeh kaam tho achchi tarike se ho gaya…
Anjali:- ab hum mein sirf yahii koshish karni hain ki raj aur
khushi zyada se zyada waqt saath guzare aur unke beech joh
bhi differences hain woh unhe khatam kare….
Kripa :- I hope so… thanks bouji agar aap humare is plan
mein shamil nahi hothe tho humari mushkil aur bad jaathi…….
Bouji :- is mein thanks kehne ki kya baat hain
puttar …agar raj aur khushi saath honge tho mujhse zyada khushi
kissiko nahi hogi….aur joh joh baatein tum logon ne mujhe
batayi usse saaf zahir hotha hain ki raj aur khushi ka rishtha
kissi ke ghehre sazish ka shikaar hain un logo ke alag hone
ke peeche kissi ka haath hain……tum log ab zara si bhi chinta
mat karo hum unhe kissi bhi haalat mein saath layenga…
all together say :- yesssssssssssss………….
Yeh tho hua hospital ka scene now we see raj standing in
front of khushi’s house & ringing the bell… kuch dhair bell
bhajane ke baad darwaza khultha hain….
Veer opens the door & is shocked to see raj standing in
front of him….
Veer {sternly says }:- tummmmmmmmmmmmm…….

Chaliye guys yahaan khatam hua dil se dil thak part 3..
Guys I promise agli part se there will be more focus on raj
& khushi together & also thode past events se parda
hatega…..pukka I promise……..
I hope this part was bigggg enough………

Ab jaanne ke liye ki veer aur raj ke beech kya baat hoga ??
raj ka kya plan hain ??? khushi us plan par kaise react
karegi ??? veer kaise react karega ??? tanya kaise react karegi ???
tanya aur vasu ne aisa kya kar diya ki raj aur khushi ka
rishtha anth ke taraf bad raha hain ??? in saare saawalo ke
jawaab jaanne ke liye padthe rahiye “ dil se dil thak ”……

I’ll be waiting for your comments , compliments &
suggestions……..

Take care……..
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

love
Surya…..


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:14 pm

“ DIL SE DIL THAK :- PART 4 ”


Agli subah raj apne ghar par hotha hain jab uske cell par
angad ka call aatha hain….
Raj:- hello…..
Angad :- hello raj…..
Raj:- haan angad bol kya baat hain ?? tune call kyun kiya
hospital mein sab theek hain na ??????
Angad :- raj yahaan zara ghadbad ho gayi hain
Raj :- {immediately asks} kya hua ?? bouji tho theek hain na
???
Angad:- haan raj bouji tho theek hain par woh yahaan zidh kar
rahe hain ki unhe abhi ke abhi ghar aana hain…. hum sab ne
unhe mana karne ki bohat koshish ki par woh maan hi nahi
rahe hain…….
Raj:- are lekin agar bouji yahaan aagaye tho unhe patah chal
jayega ki main aur khushi alag ho gaye hain…{he says worriedly
}
Angad:- aur raj bouji ko abhi yeh baat patah chalna theek
nahi hain…..
Raj :- haan main jaantha hoon……{ raj pauses & starts thinking
of something }
Angad :- achcha raj ab tu hum mein bata hum kya
kare ???
Raj :- achcha theek hain angad tum log bouji ko lekar aao
mere pass ek plan hain…. abhi mujhe kuch kaam hain main tumse
tab baat kartha hoon jab tum bouji ke saath ghar aajaoge…….
Angad:- theek hain…chal bye…..
Raj finishes his call & leaves the house……
Dusari taraf hospital mein kripa , anjali aur kavya are
standing near bouji’s bed jab angad comes there he says..
Angad :- kaam ho gaya bouji……. Maine raj ko keh diya hain….
Kavya :- chalo yeh kaam tho achchi tarike se ho gaya…
Anjali:- ab hum mein sirf yahii koshish karni hain ki raj aur
khushi zyada se zyada waqt saath guzare aur unke beech joh
bhi differences hain woh unhe khatam kare….
Kripa :- I hope so… thanks bouji agar aap humare is plan
mein shamil nahi hothe tho humari mushkil aur bad jaathi…….
Bouji :- is mein thanks kehne ki kya baat hain
puttar …agar raj aur khushi saath honge tho mujhse zyada khushi
kissiko nahi hogi….aur joh joh baatein tum logon ne mujhe
batayi usse saaf zahir hotha hain ki raj aur khushi ka rishtha
kissi ke ghehre sazish ka shikaar hain un logo ke alag hone
ke peeche kissi ka haath hain……tum log ab zara si bhi chinta
mat karo hum unhe kissi bhi haalat mein saath layenga…
all together say :- yesssssssssssss………….
Yeh tho hua hospital ka scene now we see raj standing in
front of khushi’s house & ringing the bell… kuch dhair bell
bhajane ke baad darwaza khultha hain….
Veer opens the door & is shocked to see raj standing in
front of him….
Veer {sternly says }:- tummmmmmmmmmmmm…….
Veer sees Raj standing in front of him coolly…
Veer :- {rudely says}:- tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho ???
Raj :- khushi hain ??? { he asks sternly }
Veer :- haan khushi ghar par hain..par main tumhe usse milne
nahi doonga..
Raj tries to walk inside the house par veer uska raastha
rokh letha hain… aur kehtha hain…
Veer :- maine tumse kaha na ki tum khushi se nahi mil
sakthe….
Raj :- {ignores him enters the house & again turns towards
veer & says } :- khushiii
Veer gets irritated by raj’s actions & he comes to raj &
says :- kya samajthe ho tum apne aap ko.. tum kiss haq se is
ghar mein aaye ho.. tumhe joh karna tha woh sab tho tum pehle
hi kar chuke ho.. khushi ke chehre ki har ek mushkurahat tum
cheen chuke ho… ab tumhe kya chahiye…
Raj just keeps looking at him then again says :- main yahaan
sirf khushi se milne aaya hoon.. tumhari bakwaas sunne nahi
aaya…
Veer :- main bhi yahaan tumse fizool ki baatein karne nahi
baita hoon… so please tum yahaan se jaa sakthe ho….{raj keeps
staring at veer jab veer kehtha hain } please leave raj isse
pehle ki main ghar aaye mehmaan ke saath koi batameezi
karoon….out please…{veer raj ko darwaze ke taraf ishara kar ke
kehtha hain }
Raj :- veer main yahaan se khushi se mile bagair nahi
jaooga……
Veer :- { veer goes to raj & catches his collar } raj…… bohat
ho gaya… tum kyun aaye ho yahaan yeh main nahi jaantha aur
jaanna bhi nahi chahtha.. main jaantha hoon tho bas itna tum
woh shaks ho jisne meri behen ki zindagi mein itne dukh bhar
diya ki aaj woh agar muskurayi bhi tho us muskurahat mein
uske aasoon saaf nazar aathe hain…tum woh insaan ho jisse main
sabse zyada nafrat kartha hoon… agar mere bas mein hotha tho
main tumhari zindagi mein itni kadwahat bhar doonga ki tum
zindagi ke har ek pal tadpoge..
{he leaves his collar & turns to the other side }
raj:- veer agar tum kar sakthe ho tho mujhe karke dikhao ..
aur haan ek baat hamesha yaad rakhna garajthe badal
barasthe nahi…{ he says sarcastically & mockingly }
veer :- { dubara mudh kar raj ka collar pakad tha hain aur
kehtha hain } agar mere bas mein hotha tho main har us cheez ko
mita detha joh khushi ko dard , aasoon , takleef detha hain…{
he leaves his collar & then says } par afsos ki main aisa
nahi kar saktha.. {he kicks his feet on the ground with
anger } kyunke agar main tumhe takleef doonga tho dard khushi ko
hoga , chot tumhe lagegi tho aasoon khushi ke bahenge.. aur
main aisa kabhi nahi chaaonga…ki meri wajah se khushi ko sapne
mein bhi koi bhi takleef ho.. main tumse phir kehtha hoon raj
tum yahaan se chale jao.. tum pehle hi khushi ka jeena
mushkil kar chuke ho ab kya tum usse uska jeena ka haq bhi cheen
loge… main yeh khatahi nahi chahuga ki tumhari wajah se khushi
ki zindagi mein aur koi pareshaani aaye….
Raj :- veer tum meri baat samaj kyun nahi rahe ho ?? mera
khushi se milna bohat zaroori hain…{he says with anger }
Veer { get’s agitated }:- kiss tarah ke insaan ho tum raj
tumhe main tabse samjhane ki koshish kar raha hoon ki tum
khushi se nahi mil sakthe lekin phir bhi tum kehthe ho ki tumhe
khushi se milna hain.. mere khayaal se tumne thodi bhi
ghairrat naam ki cheez nahi hain.. aur agar tum mein thodi bhi
ghairrat hothi tho mere itna kuch kehne ke baad bhi tum yahaan
khade nahi rehthe chale jaathe yahaan se… raj chale jao yahaan
se.. main tumhe mere ghar mein bardhast nahi kar saktha.. isse
pehle ki main us rishthe ka lihaaz bhi bhool jaun joh kabhi
humare beech tha…please…..Raj main tumse akhri baar kehtha hoon
nikal jao yahaan se…
{he screams }
tab peeche ek awaaz aathi hain :- veerrrrrrrrrrrrrr….
Raj & veer turn around to see khushi standing in front of
them…
Khushi :- veer yeh kya tarika hua raj se baat karne ka ??
Veer :- khushi tum please mujhe mat sikhao ki is insaan se
kiss tarah baat karni chahiye par main tho kehtha hoon yeh
insaan tho baat karne ke bhi layak nahi hain…yeh insaan…. { he
points out his finger at raj }
Khushi comes to veer aur usse zor ka thappad maarthi hain :-
tshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………..
Veer is shocked & he sees khushi without saying anything…..
Khushi :- veerrrr..kya tum yeh bhool gaye ho ki raj se
tumhara rishtha kya tha ?? maine tumhe kayi baar samjhane ki
koshish ki par tum kabhi nahi maane…. Dekho veer tum meri zindagi
mein dhakhal dena band kar do… raj aur mere beech joh bhi
differences hain woh
hum dono ke beech hain tumhe hum dono ke beech padne ki koi
zaroorat nahi hain samjhe tum…
Veer :- khushi tum aaj bhi issi insaan ka saath dogi jisne
tumhe zindagi mein sirf aur sirf dard diya hain….
Khushi :- veer maine kaha na tumse mere aur raj ke beech mat
pado…bas…. Tum apni zindagi jiyo mujhe apni zindagi jeene do……
Veer looks at khushi with all the pain in his eyes , he
turns towards raj who is silently observing everything & says :-
main tumhe nahi choduga….
Khushi :- veer tum jao yahaan se…veer just leave…
Veer turns sees khushi for once & then leaves the place in
a huff of anger & he goes upstairs……
Ab wahaan sirf raj aur khushi hothe hain…. dono mein se koi
kuch nahi keh raha tha… tab khushi kehthi hain..
Khushi :- haan tho bolo raj tum yahaan kyun aaye
ho ??
raj :- { looks at her } khushi woh darasal main…main yahaan… { he
stops & keeps fumbling for words }
khushi :- raj tumhe joh kehna hain saaf saaf kaho ?? aaj tumhe
yahaan tumhari kaunsi majburi keech layi hain ???{she questions}
raj :- khushi tumhe mere saath ghar chalna hoga… {he says
quickly }
khushi :- kyaaaaaaaaaaa…………
raj :- haan tumhe mere saath ghar chalna hoga….
Khushi :- main samjhi nahi ?? kya matlab hain tumhara ???
Raj:- mera matlab yeh hain ki tumhe mere saath ghar chalkar
kuch dino ke liye meri biwi ka natak karna padega…
Khushi :- nahi raj main aisa kuch nahi karne wali hoon….
Raj :- khushi mujhe bhi koi shouk nahi hain tumhare saath
rehne mein par main tumse yeh madat isliye maang raha hoon
kyunke bouji ko agar yeh sachchayi patah chal jayegi ki hum
dono ab saath nahi rehthe tho unke liye achcha nahi hoga…….
Khushi :- tho tum chahthe ho ki main bouji ke saamne apne
rishthe ka dikhawa karoon…
Raj :- that’s exactly what I mean…
Khushi :- sorry raj lekin mujhse yeh nahi hoga.. main aisa nahi
kar sakthi aur na hi main aisa kuch karoongi…
Raj :- what do you mean by tum aisa nahi kar sakthi dekho
khushi hum mein aisa karna hoga kyunke bouji ke zindagi isse
juda hua hain…
Khuhi:- raj main bouji ko koi dhoka nahi dena chahthi..
Raj :- dekho khushi tumhare is dhoke se kissi ko khushi mil
rahi hain…
Khushi :- theek hain raj main tumhari baat maan bhi loongi
par kya bouji ka dil tab nahi tootega jab unhe asliyat ka
patah chalega… tab hum kya karenge… kabhi socha hain tumne is
bare mein ki unhe kitna dukh hoga is baat se…{she questions }
Raj :- woh sab main nahi jaantha aur main jaanna bhi nahi
chahtha ab is pal mere liye bouji ki sehat sabse zyada zaroori
hain…..bas…… aur khushi tum bouji ki fikhar bilkul mat karo
mujhe unhe samjhana bohat achchi tarah se aatha hain..
Khushi :- kya matlab hain tumhara raj ??
Raj :- mere kehne ka matlab yeh hain ki joh dhoka tumne
mujhe diya hain us dhoke ke saamne tho yeh dhoka kuch bhi nahi
hain tho is dhoke se bahar nikal aane mein bouji ko bas kuch
din lagenge par tumne joh dhoka mujhe diya hain woh shayad
kabhi nahi mitega..…
Khushi :- rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj………
Raj :- kyun khushi kya hua ?? maine such baat kahii tho dil
ko bura lag gaya dil ko teiz pohanchi.. par maine joh abhi
abhi kaha us mein ghalat hi kya hain.. tum ne mujhe dhoke diya
, tumne humare shaddi ke rishthe ko ek khel bana diya ,
tumne mujhe jeethe jee maar dala…
Khushi :- raj maine aisa kuch nahi kiya hain tum samajthe kyun
nahi , tum ek baar tho meri baat sun lo…
Raj :- kya batana chahthi ho tum mujhe… yahii ki tumne mujhe
koi dhoka nahi diya , mujhse koi fareb nahi kiya….{khushi just
looks at him with teary eyes raj uske paas jaatha hain & he
holds her arm & says } yahii kehna chahthi ho na tum… tho
batao mujhe tumhare aane wale bachchche ka baap kaun hain ?? kyun
khushi hain koi jawaab…
Khushi { frees her arm from his hold & says } :- haan hain
jawaab yeh bachcha tumhara hain.. suna tumne tumhara bachcha hain
yeh…
Raj :- mera bachcha..mujhse aur khudse jhoot bolna band karo….
Khushi main tumse is bare mein koi baat nahi karna chahtha
hoon.. kyunke jab bhi hum dono is baat par argue karthe hain
tho things become get worse in our relationship…
Khushi :- haan sahi kaha tumne lekin ab isse zyada humare
rishthe mein bura kya ho saktha hain ki tum apna bachcha ko
apna nahi keh rahe ho.. tum apne bachche ko apna naam nahi de
rahe ho….
Raj :- bas khushi.. yeh bachcha mera nahi hain.. aur haan ek
baat hamesha yaad rakhna main kabhi is bachche ko apna
bachcha nahi kahoonga kabhi isse apna naam nahi doonga..…
Khushi :- ek baat yaad rakhna raj mujhe kabhi tumhare sahare
ki zarorat nahi padi hain aur na hi mere bachche ko padegi…
Khushi ki yeh baat raj ke dil ko cheer dethi hain…
Raj :- {looks at her as she says the statement very harshly }
dekho khushi main yahaan tumse humari life ke problems
discuss karne nahi aaya aur na hi unhe badane aaya hoon tum bas
mujhe itna batao kya tum mere saath chal rahi ho ya nahi ??
Isse pehle ki khushi kuch kahe peeche se veer ki awaaz aathi
hain :- nahi khushi tumhare saath nahi chalegi…
Raj :- maine tumse jawaab nahi poocha veer.. main khushi ka
faisla sunna chahtha hoon….
Veer :- raj maine tumse keh diya na ki khushi tumhare saath
kahiin nahii jayegi… tum kiss kisam ke insaan ho raj tum
apne matlab ke liye dusro ka istamaal karthe ho aur jab apna
kaam nikal aaye tum unhe apni zindagi se nikal phek dethe
ho.. tum khushi ke saath pehle bhi aisa kar chuke ho lekin is
baar main tumhe wohi karne nahi doonga… is baar main khushi ko
tumhare saath jaane nahi doonga……..
Before raj could reply to veer.. khushi intervents & says :-
raj tum bahar jao aur gaadi mein mera intezaar karo main
tumhare saath chaluga… {khushi yeh sab baatein raj ko dekhkar aur
veer se nazar churakar kehthi hain}
Raj :-[ looks at khushi & says] theek hain , tum jaldi aana
main bahar hoon….
Yeh baat kehkar raj wahaan se chala jaatha hain aur khushi
bhi apne kamre mein apne kuch cheezein aur kapde lane chali
jaathi hain…khushi comes down with her bag ab thak veer wahiin
khada hua hotha hain looking at khushi sternly…veer kuch bol
hi nahi raha hotha hain…


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:16 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak- Part 4 (continuation)

Khushi slowly walks upto him & says :- kuch kahoge nahi
veer…
Veer :- kya kahoon… jab mere kuch kehne ya na kehne se tumhe
koi farq nahi padtha tho main kya kahoon..
Khushi :- veerrrr…..tum aisa kyun sochthe ho…..
Veer :- khushi shayad tum sahi ho mujhe tumhare aur raj ke
beech padna nahi chahiye.. yeh tumhari zindagi hain aur tumhare
zindagi ke faisle lene ka haq bhi sirf tumko hi hain…
Khushi :- nahi veer aisi baat nahi hain……
Veer :- tho kaisi baat hain khushi….. tum aaj bhi us insaan
ke liye mujhse lad rahi ho..mujhse khushi.. tum raj ke paas
wapas jaakar bohat badi ghalthi kar rahi ho khushi ek baar
phir woh bas tumhara istamaal karega aur tum raj ko yeh mouka
de rahi ho ki woh tumhara istamaal kare..….agar mere bas mein
hotha tho main tumhe jaanne nahi detha par jab tum faisla
kar hi chuki ho ki tumhe jana hain tho tum kahaan meri baat
sunogi…
Khushi :- veer main us ghar mein apni purani zindagi mein
sirf bouji ke liye jaa rahi hoon.. jaise hi bouji poori tarah
se theek ho jayenge main apni aaj ki zindagi mein lout
aaugi..
Veer :- theek hain… agar tum raj ke saath uske ghar jana
chahthi ho tho jao.. lekin ek baat yaad rakhna agar us raj ne
tumhe ek bhi dard diya ,tumhe ek bhi asoon diya tho mujhse
bura koi nahi hoga phir raj ko mujhse koi nahi bachcha payega
tum bhi nahii main tab tumhari ek nahi sunuga....yaad rakhna….
Khushi :- theek hain baba…. tho ab agar tumhari izzazat ho tho
main jaun kya ????{ she asks sweetly }
Veer :- haan haan jao…aur suno tum apna khayal rakhna… koi
problem ho , pareshaani ho tho mujhse share karna… samjhi…
Khushi :- haan baba… ab chal mujhe bahar thak tho chod de….
Veer :- nahi main bahar nahi aauga..
Khushi:- woh kyun bhala ????
Veer :- bahar woh raj hoga aur main usse dekhkar dubara apna
mood nahi kharab karna chahtha… tum apna khayal rakh byee..
Khushi :- achcha chal theek hain bye…
{both khushi & veer hug & then khushi starts coming out}
raj is standing outside his car waiting for khushi.. he sees
khushi walking towards him carrying her bag.. raj sees her &
walks towards her…. He calmly stands by her & tries to take
the bag from her hand but then khushi does not give it to
him & just keeps looking at him…
raj tries again but in vain :- { with irritation he says }
khushi apna bag do mujhe….
Khushi :- nahi raj.. it’s ok…
Raj :- no it is not ok khushi.. bag do mujhe…
Khushi :- rajjj…. Bag utna bhaari nahi hain…
Raj :- khushi shayad tum bhool rahi ho tum pregnant ho aur
pregnancy mein strain karna is not good for the mother & the
child….
raj yeh baat anjaane mein keh dethe hain aur anjaane mein
uska khushi ke liye concern uski aankhon mein chalak padtha hain
khushi just stares at him & even raj is lost in her eyes
when suddenly khushi gains back her composure & lowers her eyes
even raj realizes what he is doing & starts looking else
where to divert the situation… & then khushi again says…
Khushi :- nahi raj main manage kar loongi…. Mujhe tumhare
madat ki zaroorat nahi hain…
Raj :- jaantha hoon tumhe sahare ki zaroorat nahi hain… par
jab thak tum mere saath ho tum meri zimmedhaari ho…aur main
nahi chahtha ki kal ke din mujhpar koi yeh ilzaam lagaye ki
main apni zimmedhaari theek se nahi nibha paya……
he says all these & then takes the bag from her hand or
rather snatches it away from her hand walks towards his car puts
the bag in the back seat & then looks back at khushi who
is still standing still in the same place & looking at him
with a lot of questions in her eyes…
raj :- chalein…….
Khushi comes out of her thoughts & says :- aahhh..haan chalo…
khushi starts coming towards the car… raj stands there until
khushi comes there & then he opens the front door for khushi
to sit in… khushi just looks at him & sits in.. raj closes
the door & then comes & sits on his driver seat & drives
off….
Gaadi mein dono raj aur khushi chup hothe hain dono mein se
koi bhi kuch bol hi nahi raha hotha hain.. shayad inke beech
ke yahiin kamoshi is equalent to a millons of words spoken
between two other people… dono chup hothe hue bhi ek dusare
ke dil ki baat ko sun rahe the.. raj while driving passed
glances at khushi when he thought khushi was not looking at him
& the same was with khushi woh bhi raj ko chori chori
nazaro dekh rahi thi … aise karthe hue dono ke aankh bhi mile
par aankh milthe hi dono ne apni nazar chura lethe… dono ke
aankhein unke dil ke haal ko bayaan kar rahi thi.. unke dard ,
unke aasoon unke har takleef ki gawah unki aankhon mein
chayi hui halki se nami thi.. par woh dono yeh baat manna hi
nahi chahthe ki woh ek dusare ke bina nahi jee sakthe woh ek
dusare ke bina adhure hain..……

Song in the background :- {for raj & khushi }


“Sun leyna Sun leyna ...
ohhhh ....
Sun leyna Sun leyna ... Sun leyna Sun leyna…..
Sun leyna Sun leyna… Sun leyna Sun leyna….
Usay dard kahye jahn dil ho…….
{raj looks at khushi with pain in his eyes}
Dil ho wahnnnn jahnnn pyaaaar….
Is pyaar main mushkil hain……
Muhskil tho hai mereeeee yaaaaaar
{khushi raj ke taraf num aankhon se dekhthi hain joh ki is
busy driving the car}
Phir bhi karay gay kertay reh gayyyyy…….
Pyaar tuje meri jaaaan……..
Sun leynaaaaa dil jnaiyaaaaa…….
{both look at each other at the same time they turn away to
the either side}
Gal mile Gal mie gal hona pyar diya……..
Tri baba tri baba ....
Sun leynaaaaaa dil janiyaaaaaaa………..
Gal mile Gal mie gal hona pyar diya……..
Sun leyna Sun leyna …….....
ohhhh ..………..
Sun leyna Sun leyna .………
Jo milaaaa nahiii woh mera nahiii…..
{khushi looks at raj & remembers the time when he said the
kid is not his }
koiiii bhiiii gilaaaaa nahiiiii……….
Koi chor day……….
Dil tor day…… …….
{raj looks at khushi & thinks as how she is cheating on
him}
Usay kho diya khainnnnnn.…..
{raj ki aankhein bhi num ho jaathi hain
Rehnay do Chorooooo……..
Kuch bhi na sochoooo……..
{raj apne goggles pehen letha hain to chupa his aasoon}
Pyaar tho hai imthiannnn……..
{khushi bas raj ko dekhe jaa rahi hothi hain}
Sun leyna dil janiyaaaaaaa……..
Gal mile Gal mie gal hona pyar diya…….
Sun leyna dil janiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……
{raj stops the car with a jerk he looks towards khushi ,
khushi wonders why he has stopped the car & looks at him
dono ki aankhein milthi hain…}
Sun leyna dil janiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…….”

Khushi is still looking at him wondering why he has stopped
the car while raj gazes away & then says :- ghar aagaya hain
chalein…..
Khushi looks outside the window & realizes that she is before
the garewal mansion… she comes out of the car & keeps
staring at the house & thinks :- kabhi yeh ghar mera hua kartha
tha , kabhi main is ghar ki bahu hua karthi thi , lekin aaj
wohi main hoon wahii yeh ghar bhi hain aur wahii yeh ghar ke
log hain par haalat wahii nahi hain rishthe wahii nahi hain..
aaj is ghar mein main is ghar ki bahu banke nahi aayi
hoon.. balke main yahaan aayi hoon tho sirf bouji ke liye… jab
main yeh baat jaanthi hoon ki main yahaan sirf bouji ke liye
aayi hoon tho kyun mera dil is baat ko nahi maantha.. kyun
aaj bhi dil mein kahiin na kahiin yeh aas hain ki shayad
is baar is ghar mein main un rishthho ko hasil kar loon
jinhe main pichli baar jeet nahi payi thi.… { she means her
rishtha with raj } khushi in khayalo mein dhoobi hui hothi hain
jab raj kehtha hain :- andar chalein.. bouji aathe hi honge…
Raj & khushi walk inside… ghar par koi nahi hotha siwai vasu
ke baki tho kuch office mein the tho kuch hospital mein…
vasu khushi ko dekhkar hairaan ho jaathi hain…
Vasu :- khushiiiiiiiiii………… tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho ???? raj
tum isse yahaan kyun laaye ho…
Raj :- khushi kuch dino ke liye isi ghar mein meri biwi
bankar rahegi…
Vasu:- lekin kyun raj ??
Raj :- kyunke main nahi chahtha ki bouji ko mere aur khushi
ke rishthe ki asliyat patah challe…
Vasu :- par raj.. yeh ladki…
Raj cut’s her in between & says :- maine keh diya na ki
khushi yahiin rahegi tho bas woh yahii rahegi… { he says this very
sternly showing loads of attitude }
Then raj walks – off to his room carrying khushi’s bag… khushi
is about to go when vasu stops her & starts taunting her..
Vasu :- tho khushi…akhirkaar tum wapas aa hi gayi.. patah nahi
tumne bouji pe kya jadoo kar diya hain ki woh sirf tumhe
itni emiyat dethe hain.. khushi kahiin tumhe jadoo tona tho nahi
kar diya na bouji par.. {she says mockingly & giggles & then
continues } lekin haan khushi ek baat yaad rakhna tum is
ghar mein bas kuch dino ki mehmaan ho.. tumhari jagah pe is
ghar mein bohat jald koi aane wala hain..
Khushi :- kya matlab ???
Vasu :- matlab tho bohat hi seedha hain khushi tumhari jagah
I mean raj ke biwi ki jagah zyada dino thak tumhara nahi
rahega kyunke raj ne faisla kiya hain ki bohat jald woh aur
tanya shaddi ke bandhan mein bhandne jaa rahe hain……
Khushi ke upar bijliyaan ghirthi hain woh shocked ho jaathi
hain.. tab vasu phir kehthi hain :- kya hua khushi jhatka laga
kya ?? ab tho in sabki aadat daal lo khushi.. meri tho tumhare
liye yeh suggestion hogi ki tum apna saaman unpack hi mat
karo patah nahi kab dubara packing karni pad jaye…dekho agar ab
tum apne saamaan unpack nahi karogi tho tab tumhe aasani ho
jayegi na jab tumhe yahaan se jaogi aur woh bhi hamesha ke
liye..….
Vasu just passes a evil smile to khushi & then leaves the
place… khushi still in the state of shock goes towards raj’s
room…{I mean her room }
After sometime bouji is back home he is very happy to see
khushi.. all the family sit together & have a long chat then
all go to their respective rooms…..
Raj aur khushi apne kamre mein hothe hain… tab khushi raj se
kehthi hain :- congratulations raj…
Raj looks at her not understanding why she is congratulating
him… he raises his eye brow in order to ask her for what…..
Khushi :- suna hain tumne tanya se shaddi karne ka faisla kiya
hain..tho is liye congratulations..{she goes to him & extends
her hand raj also extends his hand & they shake hands }
Khushi :- raj I hope tumhe is shaddi se woh saari khushiyaan
mile joh tumhe mujhse shaddi karke nahi mili.. I wish you
all the luck… aur waise bhi tum tho bohat hi khush hoge naa
akhir tumhe tumhara pyaar joh milna wala hain…. {she smiles
par phir bhi uski aankhon ka dard chupaye nahi chup raha tha}
Raj looks at her & even he can see the pain in khushi eyes
par woh khushi ko hurt karna chahtha tha tho isliye woh
khushi se poochtha hain :- tum khush ho ??
Khushi bas usse dekhe jaa rahi hothi hain trying hard not to
let her tears drop out of her eyes…
Raj :- {repeats his questions } kya tum khush ho khushi
????
Khushi :- {comes out of her thoughts & says } ha…an.. haan main
khush hoon….
Raj :- {sarcastically comments } hmm..tho agar tum khush ho tho
main khush kaise ho saktha hoon….
Khushi :- kyaaaaaaaaaaa……..{she looks up at raj }
Raj :- kuch nahii… achcha main tanya se milne jaa raha hoon….
Raj yeh baat kehkar apni gaddi ke chabbiyaan lekar wahaan se
chala jaatha hain while khushi just keeps looking at him
leaving….. khushi sits back their crying thinking about all her
good & bad moments which she spent with raj…….

Song in the background :- {for khushi }

“Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba……
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba……
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba…….
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba …..
Dil ke jo armaan the, dil mein hi reh gaye……
Aashiqui jo kee toh ham, ashqon mein beh gaye…….
Gham ka fasaana hai, dard ye puraana hain…..
Itna bhi koyi yaad aaye na rabba…….
Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba…….
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba…….
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…….
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba……..
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba……..…
Ashq aankhon mein bhare hain jigar jalta hain……….
Kya qayaamat hain , kya qayaamat hain……….
Kya qayaamat hain………..
Bhari barsaat mein ghar jalta hain……..
Yahi sochthi hoon kaise usko bhoolaaungi………
Na woh kabhi aayega na, usse bhool paaungi…….
Jeene ka thheekaana hai na, marne ka bahaana hain……
Itna bhi koyi bhi sataaye na rabba…….
Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba…….
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba…….
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…….
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba……
Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba……
Pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba………”

Yeh tho hua khushi ka haal ab hum dekhthe hain ki raj ka
haal kitna behaal hain…
Raj sitting in his car with tanya..
Tanya :- raj aaj ka tumhara din kaisa tha ???
Raj:- achcha tha….
Tanya :- achcha ya bohat achcha…
Raj :- tanya yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hain tum ek hi sawaal
bar baar kyun pooche jaa rahi ho… ek baar keh tho diya ki aaj
ka mera din achcha tha….
Tanya :- main tumse aaj yeh baat isliye pooch rahi hoon kyunke
maine suna hain aaj tum khushi ko wapas ghar lekar aaye
ho….…
Raj :- tanya agar tumhe yahii baat mujhse poochni thi tho tum
tabse ghuma ghuma kar sawaal kyun pooch rahi ho ?? { he gets
irritated at her behaviour }
Tanya :- achcha raj chalo main ab tumse seedha seedha yeh
sawaal poochthi hoon khushi ko tum wapas kyun laye ho raj ??
Raj:- dekho tanya mere liye bouji ke jaan se keemthi aur kuch
nahi aur unke liye main kuch bhi karoonga….
Tanya:- bouji bouji bouji…..bas…..tho iska matlab ki agar kal
ko woh tumse kahe ki tum are khushi apne saare differences
bhool ke ek nayi zindagi shuru karo….tho kya tum karoge…batao
mujhe…….
Raj :- tanya please…….
Khushi:- kyun raj suchchi baat kahii maine tho tumhe woh baat
katak gayi…dekho raj ek baat main tumse keh dena chahthi
hoon I don’t care for your family….. I just care about you…
mujhe tumhari family se koi lena dena nahi hain all I’am
concerned is about you… that’s all.. aur tumhari family ke liye main
kabhi apne khushiyon ki bali nahi chadaugi.. aur haan raj agar
koi bhi shaks tumhare aur mere is rishthe mein rukawat bana
tho main usse nahi chodugi…yeh baat tum achchi tarah se samaj
lo…..tanya raj ko kuch kehna ka mouka hi nahi dethi…..
Tanya opens the door of the car gets down , slams the door
hardly & walks off….
Tanya ke jaathe hi raj hits his hand on the steering wheel
with total ghussa aur usse samaj nahi aa raha tha ki woh kya
kare kyunke ek taraf tanya ka zidd tha tho dusari taraf
khushi ka fareb.. raj was feeling helpless he did not know ki
woh kaunsa raasthe chune kiska haath thaame…… raj starts
thinking about khushi………



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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:17 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 4 (continuation)

Song in the background :- {for raj }

“Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya………..
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya……….
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……..
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……..
Ho ho ho……..
Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya………
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya………
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……..
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……….
Tumse gila nahin mujhe kismat se hain gile……..
Karta hai aasmaan kyoon yeh dil ke faisle……..
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake………
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……..
Oh ho ho ho……….
Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya……..
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya…….
Barbaad ho gaya main kyoon yeh bhi na keh saka………
Roya main yun ke ek bhi aansu na beh saka……..
Aansu na beh saka, aansu na beh saka…….
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake…..
Aa ha ha……
Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya…….
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya……..
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……..
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……”

Well guys here ends dil se dil thak part 4.. I hope you all
enjoyed it… & I even hope that I have written a big enough
part……. Keeping my fingers crossed & waiting for all your
comments eagerly…..

Now to know what is in store for them in their future ????
what are vasu & tanya going to do to spoil khushi & raj’s
marriage ??? kya raj aur khushi ki zindagiyon mein woh khushi
woh pyaar lout aayega ??? kya kabhi raj aur khushi ek dusare
se apne pyaar ka izhaar kar payenge ??? ab bouji kya karenge
raj aur khushi ko milane mein ???
Main jaanthi hoon yeh aur kayi aur sawaal apke zehan mein ghoom
rahe hain in sab sawaalo ke jawaab jaanne ke liye padthe
rahiye dil se dil thak….


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:18 pm



“ DIL SE DIL THAK :- PART 5 ”

Raj sitting in his car with tanya..
Tanya :- raj aaj ka tumhara din kaisa tha ???
Raj:- achcha tha….
Tanya :- achcha ya bohat achcha…
Raj :- tanya yeh tumhe kya ho gaya hain tum ek hi sawaal
bar baar kyun pooche jaa rahi ho… ek baar keh tho diya ki aaj
ka mera din achcha tha….
Tanya :- main tumse aaj yeh baat isliye pooch rahi hoon kyunke
maine suna hain aaj tum khushi ko wapas ghar lekar aaye
ho….…
Raj :- tanya agar tumhe yahii baat mujhse poochni thi tho tum
tabse ghuma ghuma kar sawaal kyun pooch rahi ho ?? { he gets
irritated at her behaviour }
Tanya :- achcha raj chalo main ab tumse seedha seedha yeh
sawaal poochthi hoon khushi ko tum wapas kyun laye ho raj ??
Raj:- dekho tanya mere liye bouji ke jaan se keemthi aur kuch
nahi aur unke liye main kuch bhi karoonga….
Tanya:- bouji bouji bouji…..bas…..tho iska matlab ki agar kal
ko woh tumse kahe ki tum are khushi apne saare differences
bhool ke ek nayi zindagi shuru karo….tho kya tum karoge…batao
mujhe…….
Raj :- tanya please…….
Khushi:- kyun raj suchchi baat kahii maine tho tumhe woh baat
katak gayi…dekho raj ek baat main tumse keh dena chahthi
hoon I don’t care for your family….. I just care about you…
mujhe tumhari family se koi lena dena nahi hain all I’am
concerned is about you… that’s all.. aur tumhari family ke liye main
kabhi apne khushiyon ki bali nahi chadaugi.. aur haan raj agar
koi bhi shaks tumhare aur mere is rishthe mein rukawat bana
tho main usse nahi chodugi…yeh baat tum achchi tarah se samaj
lo…..tanya raj ko kuch kehna ka mouka hi nahi dethi…..
Tanya opens the door of the car gets down , slams the door
hardly & walks off….
Tanya ke jaathe hi raj hits his hand on the steering wheel
with total ghussa aur usse samaj nahi aa raha tha ki woh kya
kare kyunke ek taraf tanya ka zidd tha tho dusari taraf
khushi ka fareb.. raj was feeling helpless he did not know ki
woh kaunsa raasthe chune kiska haath thaame…… raj starts
thinking about khushi………


Song in the background :- {for raj }

“Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya………..
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya……….
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……..
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……..
Ho ho ho……..
Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya………
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya………
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……..
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……….
Tumse gila nahin mujhe kismat se hain gile……..
Karta hai aasmaan kyoon yeh dil ke faisle……..
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake………
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……..
Oh ho ho ho……….
Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya……..
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya…….
Barbaad ho gaya main kyoon yeh bhi na keh saka………
Roya main yun ke ek bhi aansu na beh saka……..
Aansu na beh saka, aansu na beh saka…….
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake…..
Aa ha ha……
Tumse mujhe pyaar kyoon ho gaya…….
Tum na mile aur main kho gaya……..
Tum mere khwaabon se jaa na sake……..
Tum meri baahon mein aa na sake……”

Yahaan garewal ghar par har taraf chehal – pehhal hothi hain…
par khushi abhi bhi apne kamre mein baithkar soch mein dubbi
hui hothi hain…. woh sochthi hain :- aise kyun hua humare
saath raj…pehle hum kabhi ek rishthe mein judhna nahi chahthe
the.. aaj jab humare beech ek atoot rishtha hain hum ussi
rishthe se durr bhaag rahein hain… kyun raj ?? akhir meri ghalti kya
hain raj…… kya meri ghalthi yeh hain ki main tumse beintahaan
pyaar karthi hoon aur tumhe kabhi kona nahi chahthi.. agar yeh
meri ghalthi hain tho us ghalti ki tum mujhe aaj itni badi
saza kyun de rahe
ho ??
Dusari taraf raj ab bhi wahiin gaadi mein baita hua hotha
hain……woh apna purse nikaltha hain aur apne purse ko open
kartha hain & starts seeing the purse.. us purse mein kashish ka
pic hotha hain & that too khushi smiling & {raj dhere se
touches khushi’s face} & says :- khushi tumhari is muskurahat ke liye
main kuch bhi kar saktha tha , main kissi bhi hadh thak jaa
saktha tha….. par tumne mujhe majboor kiya ki main tumhe apne
aap se durr karoon..tumne kyun kiya aisa khushi.. hum humari
zindagi mein khush the.. humare beech dosti thi… kabhi ek pal
ke liye pyaar bhi tha….lekin tumne mere dil se woh saare
jazbaat nikaal diye…. {he looks at the photo with disgust & then
tears the photo into two pieces vertically } raj looks at the
torn photo for a second then keeps the pieces of the pic
together…. Raj us pic ko apne dil ke kareeb rakh kar kehtha hain
:- main jitna bhi tumse durr jaane ki koshish kartha
hoon..main utna hi tumhare kareeb aa jaatha hoon… tumhare
aasoon ,tumhara dard sab mujhse bardhast nahi hotha…lekin main tumhe
kabhi nahi apnauga….agar tum mujhe such batathi tho bhi main
tumhe maaf kar detha par aur shayad tumhe apna bhi letha….par
tumne mujhse such nahi kaha….main aaj bhi tumhari har ek baat
jaantha hoon aur main kabhi tumhe apne dil se nikaal na
pauga…
Yeh kehthe hi raj apne purane dino ki yaado mein kho jaatha
hain aur dusari taraf khushi bhi bas apne ateet ke bare mein
hi soch rahi hothi hain…

Flashback :-

Aaj se theen saal purani baat hain….
Ek bada sa ghar hain…..bahar ek beautiful garden hain jis
mein har tatah se phool , plants rakhe gaye hain…. we can see a
lady wearing a long top , with a jeans… the lady is just
trimming the plants & watering them…. Now a servant comes &
says :- prerna bitiya
Prerna just sees him & says :- kya hua birju kaka..
Birju kaka :- bitiya woh darasal ab thak khushi bitiya jaagi
nahi hain…
Prerna :- theek hain kaka… main zara usse dekhkar aathi hoon…
aap isse pakadiye…{she tells him handing over the water – pipe }
Prerna walks inside….as she walks in she sees two girls
running everywhere creating a whole lot of confusion & mess….
Prerna sees that both the girls are walking in the opposite
direction without seeing that they are about to clash with each
other… prerna at the right moment stops the two of them by
calling their names :- anjali , kripa sambhal ke…at this point
both the girls look at prerna & discover that they were
about to clash with each other…..
Now prerna says :- tum dono ko dikhayi nahi detha kya ??
kahiin chot lag jaathi tho… { she says with a bit of anger }
Anjali {cheekily says} :- prerna jiji chot lag jaathi tho achcha
hotha… MBA ke pehle din hi college bunk karne ka mouka mil
jaatha… main tho yeh roz roz ki padayi se tang aa gayi hoon..
aur yeh padayi tho khatam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha
hain….saying this anjali starts giggling & even kripa joins her..
then they look at prerna who is giving them a angry stare..
they at once stop laughing & say :- sorry jiji.. {they start
making puppy faces}
Prerna:- theek hain… {anjali & kripa breath a sigh of relief} ab
tum dono yeh batao ki tum dono ne itni bhagam daudi kyun
machayi hui hain ???
Kripa :- woh jiji aaj humare MBA ka pehla din hain na tho
is liye hum zara books aur baaki cheezain order mein rakh rahe
the.. ……
Prerna :- theek hain…agar tum dono ko koi madat ki zaroorat ho
tho mujhe batana….
Anjali :- haan..{she pauses for a moment & then says} waise
jiji khushi kahaan hain ???
Prerna :- Bhagwaan main tho bhool hi gayi thi….{she hit’s her
forehead lightly}
Kripa:- kya jiji…
Prerna :- khushi ab thak so rahi hain aur main usse hi tho
utane andar aayi thi….achcha main ab zara usse jaga kar aathi
hoon….
Prerna tells this & starts walking upstairs… she reaches a
room… the rooms door has a tweety poster.. prerna opens the door &
walks inside… inside she sees the room is in a very shabby
state clothes , cd’s , books all thrown everywhere…. Prerna just
walks over to the bed sit’s at the edge of the bed & says
:- utto bachcha..dher ho rahi hain..aaj tumhe college jana
hain… we can see a girl groaning in her sleep under the
blanket… only her fore head can be seen… prerna places her hand over
her fore-head.. & says :- utto baba… late ho raha hain… the girl
still keeps groaning in her sleep…
Prerna:- achcha theek hain tum sothi raho…main anjali aur kripa
se keh doongi ki woh tumhare college mein inform karde ki
Miss.khushi sinha ka aankh subah ke aat baje bhi nahi khula
hain…..isliye woh aaj college nahi aayi…
Suddenly the girl get’s up with a jerk..throws her blanket &
says :- kya subah ke aat baj gaye… jiji aapne mujhe jagaya
kyun nahi…
Prerna {get’s up from the bed walks over to pick up the
clothes scattered everwhere , starts folding the clothes & says } :-
main tho tujhe kabse jagane ki koshish kar rahi hoon par tu
tho badi gehri neend mein so rahi thi…
Khushi :- { starts squeezing her eye & says } haan jiji woh
darasal kal raat ko kaafi dhair thak neend nahi aayi…
Prerna {walks back to her & says } :- achcha chal ab yeh sab
chod tu jaldi se taiyaar hokar neeche aajaa…
Khushi :- theek hain..jiji…
Prerna leaves the room.. while khushi goes to the washroom..


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:20 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- part 5(continuation)

Ab zara hum humari nazar ghumaathe hain… ussi shehar main ek
aur kaandhaan ki… bahar nameplate par likha hain “The
Garewals”…{chaliye andar chalthe hain}…{it is the RnG mansion}..sabhi log
apne apne kaamo mein busy hothe hain.. aisa koi nahi hotha
joh free hotha hain.. koi puja kar raha hotha hain , tho koi
paper padh raha hotha hain aur koi tho nhastha karthe hue
dikhayi detha hain…. now the person doing the puja finishes the
aarti & gives prasad to two people :- ye lijiye prasad…
Kamal :- thanks bhabhi…
Lalit:- thanks veena…..
Kamal sees vasu who is sitting on the table & having her
breakfast..he tells her :- vasu…tumhe kitni baar kaha hain ki tum
puja ke baad apna nhastha karo…
Vasu :- kamal yeh sab mujhse nahi hoga.. mujhe jab bhook lagegi
tho main khaugi…{she says ignorantly} aur main roz roz na hi
puja kar sakthi hoon aur na hi apne aap ko bhooki rakh
sakthi hoon jab thak puja na ho jaye… mujhe kya tumne tumhari
veena bhabhi samaj rakha hain ….. {she says sarcastically}
Kamal ko yeh sab sunkar bada ghussa aatha hain par veena usse
shant karne ke liye kehthi hain :- haan kamal.. vasu theek keh
rahi hain.. puja tho main kar rahi hoon na tho phir woh
bhooki kyun rahe….{she gives a pleading look to kamal asking
him to cool down}
Lalit :-veena yeh bachche kahaan hain ?? dikhayi nahi de rahe
hain ??
Veena :- anurag tho subah hi apni kissi meeting ke liye chala
gaya.. kavya aur angad tho gym gaya hain…mukti tho upar terrace
par hain..{before veena could continue vasu phir boli}
Vasu:- aur veena woh tumhara chahitha beta raj kahaan hain… kal
raat ko ghar aaya bhi ya nahii…ya phir kissi party mein tha…
{vasu keeps on taunting & finally veena says}
Veena:- woh apne kamre mein hain… so raha hoga shayad…
Vasu:- haan bhai agar raat mein late thak bahar rahega party
karega tho subah sahabzada jaldi kaise utenge… kyun sahi kaha
na veena….
At this point kamal cut’s her & says :- sahi , ghalat hum
baad mein tay karenge..pehle tum apna nhastha khatam karo….ya
phir main yeh samjoon ki dusaro ki burayi karthe karthe tumhare
pait bhar gaya ho…kamal gives vasu a stern look , vasu just
looks at him gets angry & starts finishing her breakfast…
Veena :- aap log khana khayiye main bas abhi aathi hoon….
Veena walks up-stairs.. she enters a room which is cleanly &
neatly maintained… she sees that the guy is still sleeping on
the bed & she also sees that the music system is on… she
first goes & switches it off then she goes the guy & says:-
raj chal ut jaa…warna tujhe dhair ho jayegi…. The guy slowly
get’s up & says :- morning mom…
Veena:- good morning beta… raj maine tujhse kitni baar kaha hain
ki raat mein dhair thak kaam mat kiya karo…
Raj:- mom main bas yeh file dekh raha tha.. aur dekhthe
dekhthe kab aankh lag gayi patah hi nahi chala…{he says pointing
to a file which is on the bed}
Veena {says in mock anger}:- raj tune abhi thak apni padayi
bhi poori nahi ki hain aur tu office ke kaamo mein lag gaya..
abhi se yeh haal hain tho na jaane tab kya hoga jab tum
office full time join karoge…. Tum tho apna bilkul bhi khayal
nahi rakh rahe ho…. Main tumhare papa se kahoongi ki woh tumhe
office ka koi kaam naa de…
Raj:- mom papa aur bhaiya kitna kaam karenge.. isliye maine
unse kaha ki woh mujhe koi project file dede check karne ke
liye….aur waise bhi mom abhi tho sirf ek hi saal MBA ki
padayi baaki hain , uske baad tho mujhe office hi join karna
hain.. tho isliye maine socha hi main abhi se office ke kaam
jaan loon…
Veena:- raj dekh kaam sab baad mein , pehle tujhe apna khayal
rakhna chahiye…tu tho kabhi meri baat maantha nahi hain….
Raj:- aisi baat nahi hain mom… achcha theek hain main aaj se
apna poora ka poora khayal rakhoonga… pukka rakoonga…
Veena:- achcha chal yeh baatein karna chod aur taiyaar ho
jaa.. tujhe college bhi tho jana hain…
Raj:- jee mom…
Veena leaves the room while raj goes to get ready…. After
sometime raj comes out dressed in causal wear…
Raj is wearing a black polo neck shirt with blue denim jeans…
raj stands in front of the mirror brushes his hair… put’s on
his rolex watch looks at himself in the mirror & says :- now
that looks cool Mr. Raj grewal.. you are simply the best….{he
says this with a huge amounts of attitude} & he starts
whistling…. & then he starts tying the lace of his shoes…..
Tabhi raj ke room ka darwaza khultha hain aur koi kehthe hue
andar aatha hain :- yes puttar you are the best….
Raj turns around & says :- are bouji ayiye na….
Bouji:- main tho aa gaya puttar.. par tu yeh bata tu kahaan
jaane ke liye taiyaar ho raha hain….
Raj finishes tying the lace & again turns back to the mirror
& starts combing his hair again & says :- woh bouji mein
college jaa raha hoon…
Bouji:- dhat teri ki…{he hits his fore head}
Raj observes this , gets confused & says :- kya hua bouji
?????
Bouji:- oye raj puttar..{he walks near raj & says} main tho
yeh soch raha tha ki tu yeh dulhe ki tarah saj dhaj kar apni
kissi nayi girl friend ko milna jaa raha hain… lekin tune tho
meri saari umeedo par paani pher diya…. Maine socha ki tu na
jaane kiss tina , meena se milna jaa raha hain…..lekin tu tho
college jaa raha hain…
Raj laughs & then says :- kya bouji aap bhi….
Bouji {smiles & then says}:- waise puttar mujhe ek baat baata
tere zindagi mein itni saari ladkiyaan aayi aur chali bhi
gayi lekin un sab ladkiyon mein kya tujhe ek bhi ladki nahi
mili jisse tu pyaar kartha ho , jisse tu shaddi karne ki
sochtha ho……
Raj {having a shocked expression on his face} :- kya bouji yeh
pyaar kiss chidiya ka naam hain bouji.. aap kya mujh ko nahi
jaanthe bouji.. pyaar , vyaar , shaddi jaise jhanjhat mein main
kabhi nahi padoonga…. woh sab mere liye nahi hain….
Bouji:- chal hat.. khote de puttar…. Tu jab pyaar mein padega na
tho ithihaas banayega….
Raj:- bouji aisa kabhi nahi hoga….
Bouji :- aur aisa kyun nahi hoga ??
Raj:- woh isliye bouji kyunke jaisi ladki mujhe chahiye woh
mujhe kahiin na mil sakthi…..
Bouji:- achcha..tho bata kaisi ladki chahiye tujhe….
Raj:- chodiye na bouji..main keh raha hoon na aisi ladki
kahiin nahiin hogi agar aap usse poore duniyaan mein dhoondenge
bhi tho nahi hogi…
Bouji:- puttar agar duniyaan mein nahi hogi tho main usse…usse
….usse..{he thinks & says } mars se le aauga... is baat par
dono bouji aur raj has padthe hain.. jab bouji phir kehthe
hain:-batana puttar kaisi ladki chahiye tujhe…
Raj:- mujhe..mujhe..kiss tarah ki ladki chahiye..hmm… ok so let
me think mujhe ek aisi ladki chahiye joh jab muskuraya ko
mera din baj jaye…on the other side we see khushi standing in
front of the mirror smiling & brushing her hair.. raj
continues :- woh aisi honi chahiye ki woh modern bhi ho aur uske
saath saath traditional bhi…yahaan we see khushi wearing a black
designed jeans with a log yellow top uptil her knee..she wears
a stole for it , wears big earing..& no bindi…. Raj again
starts telling :- woh phoolon se bhi nazuk ho… here we see
khushi slowly blowing at a small cut joh uska haath pe hua…. Raj
says :- woh aisi ho ki….
Now bouji gets vexed & says:- woh woh woh , woh aisi honi
chahiye , woh waisi honi chahiye…tum joh is woh ke bare mein keh
rahe ho is woh ka koi naam nahi hain ya phir tum mujhe us
woh ka naam batana nahi chahthe…haan..{he raises a eye-brow at
raj}
Raj:- kya bouji.. maine kaha na aisi koi ladki is poore jahaan
mein aapko kahiin nahi milegi…. Now raj looks at his watch &
says :- dekha bouji main aapse baatein karthe karthe bhool hi
gaya ki mujhe college ke liye dhair ho rahi hain…. achcha
bouji main chaltha hoon… raj starts walking , he walks till the
door turns back with a smile on his face & sees that bouji
is thinking something.. & raj says :- bouji aap zyada sochiye
mat jiss tarah ki ladki mujhe chahiye woh kabhi nahi milne
wali…. {he says this & runs off even before bouji could say
anything…}
Bouji:- oye puttar sun tho..{he calls for raj but gets no
response & then says } lagtha hain bhaag gaya…. Lekin raj puttar
tu fikhar mat kar tujhe jiss tarah ki ladki chahiye woh
zarror milegi…. Agar nahi mili tho main usse dhoond kar laoonga….
Bouji then smiles to himself & leaves raj’s room….
Now raj apna nhastha kartha hain & starts leaving for his
college along with angad & kavya…. Raj is driving a open top
sports Ferrari red…angad aur kavya uske saath baithkar baatein kar
rahe hothe hain….
Dusari taraf khushi ,anjali aur kripa bhi ghar se nikalthe
hain… obviously khushi driving…. Khushi is driving BMW open top
sports black…{my favourite}… dono ghadiyaan I mean raj ki gaadi
aur khushi ki gaadi ek hi signal par aathi hain…… both raj &
khushi look at eachother… dono ko ek dusare ko dekhthe hi
dono ke dil mein kuch hua… yeh koi khushi nahi thi par dono ko
ek dusare ko dekhkar ek tarah ka ghussa aaya… raj felt like
khushi was challenging him for a race & even khushi felt
like raj challenging her…. Both were looking at each other with
these thoughts when the singal turned green.. this time both
raj & khushi speeded up their cars & both were not ready to
allow the other person to go….yeh race bohat durr thak chali
aur phir by raj’s badluck & khushi’s good luck raj’s car
one tyre got punctured…raj car came to a halt…. khushi just
speeded up , she turned around gave raj a victorious smile &
left the place…
Raj got agitated…he got down the car checked the tyre.. &
kicked his leg in the air in anger….
Now kavya , angad & raj after a lot of struggle changed the
tyre.. & then started on their way to the college…. But raj
mood was very bad.. he was in a total foul mood…kavya & angad
tried to calm him down…
Angad:- raj…itna ghussa kyun ho rahe ho ???
Kavya:- haan raj angad bilkul sahi keh raha hain… afterall it
was just a stupid race….
Raj looked at both of them & said :- raj garewal ke liye
kabhi koi challenge stupid ya bekaar nahi hothi… aaj us ladki
ki kismat achchi thi ki who raj garewal se jeet gayi.. lekin
zaroori tho nahi ki woh ladki ki kismat har baar achchi ho…
Kavya:- raj tujhe kya lagtha hain ?? tu us ladki ko kabhi na
kabhi phir milega ???
Before raj could answer angad bola :- naah raj.. I don’t think
tum kabhi us ladki se dubara miloge…
Raj:- main nahi jaantha ki kya main us ladki se dubara miluga
ya phir nahi par haan main itna zaroor jaantha hoon ki agar
phir kabhi main us ladki se mila tho main usse chod doonga
nahi…..{he has that ghussa wala look}


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:20 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 5 (continuation)

By saying this raj’s car enters the college campus… in theeno
ke aathe hi sabki nazar inpe padi..{ I mean ladkiyaan}
All the girls started surronding them & trying to impress any
one of the three guys..as they were afterall the garewals
young clan.. the guys who will run the garewal empire in the
near future…
Aaj inke college mein a new batch of first year students ki
entry ho rahi thi.. the guys start walking.. when raj suddenly
spots something & turns back instantly…. & keeps looking at
something….
Angad & kavya say :- raj kya dekh raha hain chal na tu…pehle
hi class ke liye late ho gaye hain…
But raj does not move an inch… now kavya & angad turn around
& say :- chal na…..
Raj:- yeh…{he says pointing out to something }
Kavya:- raj tujhe kya ho gaya hain.. yeh kissiki gaadi hi tho
hain…
Angad { jovially says}:- kya yaar raj tu yahaan aas pass ki
kubsurat ladkiyo ko chodkar gaadiyaan kabse dekhne laga
hain….both kavya & angad burst out laughing.. raj gives them a stare
both of them keep quite & then raj says:- yeh wohi gaadi
hain joh woh ladki chala rahi thi..
Kavya {confused}:- ladki kaun ladki…
Raj:- are wohi ladki jis ne subah mujhe challenge kiya…
Angad:- challenge…kaunsa challenge , kaunsi ladki…
Raj :- are wohi jiski main tum logo se ko keh raha tha ki
agar woh kabhi zindagi mein dubara mili tho main usse
chodoonga nahi…..
Angad & kavya together say :- oh..tho woh ladki…
Raj:- haan wohi ladki…
Kavya:- par tu kaise jaantha hain ki yeh wohi gaadi hain joh
who ladki chala rahi thi ??
Raj:- maine gaadi ka number note kar liya tha… me sure yeh
wohi gaadi hain…..
Angad:- tho ab tu kya karne wala hain ???
Raj:- ek kaam karthe hain..hum theeno college ke alag alag
kone mein dekhthe hain aur us ladki ko dhoondthe hain..
Kavya & angad:- theek hain….{both start walking off to other
sides}
Raj:- aur haan agar tum dono ko woh ladki kahiin dikhayi di
tho mujhe call karna.. ok…
Angad & kavya nod their heads in affirmative & leave the
place….
Slowly now the time has passed by & it is time for the
students to go home… kavya ,angad & raj still have no luck in
finding the girl…
Tired all the three guys are walking back to the parking
lot…
Angad :- kya yaar raj..poora din hum yunhi ghoomthe rahe…..
Kavya:- college ke chakkar lagathe gaye….
Angad:- par phir bhi woh teri ladki tho hummein kahiin nahii
mili…
Kavya:- aur tere us ladki ke chakkar mein hum ne aaj ka koi
bhi class attend nahi kiya….
Angad:- aur aaj main kissi bhi ladki ke saath waqt nahi
guzar paaya…..
Raj just gives both of them a hard glare & keeps walking…
His eyes see the BMW & in theeno ke peeche se theen
ladkiyaan aathi hain laughing & giggling…..& they cross the guys… raj
wahii rukh jaatha hain , angad aur kavya ko bhi wahiin rokh
letha hain…..
Angad:- ab kya hua ?? {getting irritated}
Raj:-{points at the front & says } woh dekh wahaan.. wohi
ladki…..
Kavya sees her & says :- are wah raj is baat pe tho tere
upar kuch kehna ka jee chah raha hain arz kiya hain…
Angad:- irshaad irshaad….
kavya:- arz kiya hain…arz kiya hain…
raj get angry at kavya & says :- ab uske aage bhi kuch
kahega ya phir arz kiya hain hi kehtha rahega…
kavya:- ok ok..ab suno “ jisse hum dhoond rahe the gali gali
woh aakar mile mujhe meri hi gali… …”
kavya starts giggling….raj pulls him & walks to where khushi
is standing..{near her car}
anjali:- krips..aaj ka din achcha tha na…
kripa:- haan anji achcha tha….
Khushi:- hmm.. haan aaj college ka pehla din tha aur bohat
achcha tha….
Peeche se raj kehtha hain :- ab yeh din achcha nahi rahega….
Khushi , anjali & kripa turn around…. Khushi is facing raj &
anjali & kripa are right behind her….angad & kavya are behind
raj..
Khushi sees raj usse phir ghussa aatha hain woh shocked ho
jaathi hain aur kehthi hain :- tummmmmmmmmmm…
Raj:- haan main…
Khushi:- phir race karne ka irada hain kya..subah ki haar
kaafi nahi hui kya..ki phir aagaye…mooh utake.. haarne ke
liye…{she says sarcastically}
Raj:- shayad jeet pehli baar mili hain tumhe..isliye itna ud
rahi ho ???
Khushi:- aye….mister….mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hain…main
befizool logo par apna keemthi waqt zaya nahi karthi..samjhe
tum….{she points his finger at him}
Raj gets very angry at her & holds her hand very firmly….
Khushi ke haath mein dard hona shuru ho jaatha hain & she tries
to free her hand..but all her efforts go in vain as raj
does not give an inch… jitna woh try karthi hain apna haath
chudane ki utna hi he has tightening his grip… his anger showed
in his eyes & khushi’s tears should her pain…finally raj left
her hand..
Yeh saari baatein dekhkar wahaan par students ki bheed jama
ho gayi thi….sab ki nighahein raj aur khushi pe tikki hui
thi….
Khushi :- tumhari himmat kaise hui ??
Khushi raises her hand to slap him but he stops her mid way
& puts her hand down..
Raj very sternly with loads of attitude says :- tum nahi aap
kahogi..tum mujhe suna tumne…aap kahoogi mujhe..…..
Khushi:- main tumhe aap kahoongi..yeh baat tum sochna bhi
mat…it is impossible…
Khushi turns back to the car when raj pulls her back & says
:- agar woh namumkin hain tho usse mumkin banao…make it
possible….. common yeh tumhare senior ka order hain agar tumhe is
college mein rehna hain tho tum wahinn kahoogi joh main keh
raha hoon…repeat it after me.. main joh bhi tumhara naam ho
aapse yaani raj garewal se sar jhukakar apni ghalthi ki maafi
maangthi hoon..saari ghalthi meri hi thi…. ho sake tho aap mujhe
maaf kar dejiyega…say it.. raj moves her catching her shoulder
tightly….
First khushi does not want to say it par phir khushi ko
anjali aur kripa ka khayal aatha hain & then slowly she starts
telling everything as raj told her…
Khushi:- main khushi aapse yaani
Raj cuts her in between & says :- poora naam kaho.. apne
poora naam ke saath …{he says rudely}& yaa say it loudly…..&
make it quick as we don’t have time….
Khushi:- main khushi sinha aapse yaani raj garewal se sar
jhukakar apni ghalthi ki maafi maangthi hoon..saari ghalthi meri
hi thi….ho sake tho aap mujhe maaf kar dejiyega…{she says it
loudly & with all the anger}
ho gaya..ab main jaa sakthi hoon….
Raj:- {looks at her & says } nahi tum nahi jaa sakthi… abhi
tho maine apna badla liya hi nahi…{he observes khushi’s car &
says } hmm..tho yeh wohi gaadi hain na jisse tumne mujhe
subah haraya tha..aur ussi jeet par tum itna akad rahi thi….he
just goes in front of the car… takes a stone & smashes the
front glass of the car with the stone…
All are left shocked..raj again comes back to khushi gives
the stone in her hand & says :- yeh pattar tum hamesha apne
pass rakhna yeh tumhe yeh yaad dilayega ki tumhe mujhse bach ke
rehna chahiye…samjhi tum… aur haan ab tum jaa sakthi ho….
Khushi looks at him with total disgust & raj turns back to
go….when khushi calls him back…
Khushi:- Mr.Raj Garewal… ek min…raj turns around & observes what
khushi is doing…...
Khushi apne gaadi ke aage jaathi hain & she takes the stone
{the same one raj gave to her} & smashes the head-lights of
her car…. All are totally bewildered… khushi comes back to raj
aur uske haath mein woh pattar thama dethi hain aur kehthi
hain :- ab main chaine se ghar jaa sakthi hoon..tumhe kya lagtha
hain cheezo ko thodna , dusro ko baatein sunana tumhe hi aatha
hain.. lekin afsos maine abhi abhi sabit kiya ki main bhi
cheezain thod sakthi hoon..shayad tum mera head light thodna bhool
gaye is liye maine thod diya…{she gives him a confident &
challenging look & then khushi starts leaving but then comes back
& says } aur hain mujhe dusro ki cheezein apne pass rakhne ki
aadat nahi hain…...isliye isse tum hi rakho…. Khushi hands him
over the stone & leaves the place in her car along with
anjali & kripa…
Where as raj is standing grounded their without even moving
an inch totally shocked…. Angad & kavya see that all the
student are standing their looking at their faces & talking in
whispers… angad & kavya get raj out of his shocked state &
then all the three leave the college premises……

Yahaan khushi , anjali aur kripa ghar pohanchthi hain… prerna is
sitting out & checking on some file..when she sees them…first
she sees them & smiles but then the next moment looks at
the broken condition of the car… she is surprised…. All the
three girls walk towards prerna when prerna asks them :- yeh
gaadi ko kya hua ??? koi accident tho nahi hua na ?? tum log tho
theek ho na ???? {prerna keeps continously asking questions
without giving them a chance to speak seeing that they are not
telling anything so she says} ab koi kuch tho bolo.. aise kyun
khade hue ho ??
All this time khushi keeps her eyes grounded & does not look
up…finally she looks up & gives a look to prerna something as
if she is upset..khushi ke aankhon mein aasoon hothe hain &
then she runs inside without telling prerna anything…. then to
her room & locks it up…… Anjali & kripa walk inside… Prerna is
left there confused about khushi reaction…
Prerna comes inside & stops anjali & kripa who are heading
towards their room…
Prerna:- kripa ,anjali…. rukho…..
They both turn around slowly & face prerna…. & prerna says :-
tum log kya mujhe bata sakthe ho ki kya hua hain ?? tum
logon ki gaadi ki yeh haalat kyun hain aur khushi ko kya hua
hain ????
Kripa:- chodiye na..jiji…bas..aise hi… kuch nahi hua…
Prerna:- kuch nahi hua..kya matlab hain tumhare is kuch nahi
hua se.. tumne khushi ki haalat dekhi hain… batao mujhe kya
hua ????
Anjali:- zyada kuch nahi jiji..ek sar phire ne saara mood off
kar diya…
Prerna:- kya hua poori baat batao mujhe…
Anjali :- jiji college mein ek senior se pala padh gaya tha..
usne khushi se khamaka ki jhagda mol liya.. then anjali starts
telling the whole Scenario which happened in the college &
also which happened in the morning….
Prerna is worried about khushi…
Ab dusari taraf.. kavya ,angad aur raj gym mein hothe hain…raj
ka ghusse ab bhi paara mein chada hua tha…uske aankhon mein
bohat ghussa tha aur woh yeh saara ghussa punching bag par
nikaal raha tha… kavya aur angad kaafi time pehle apna exercise
khatam kar chuke hothe hain aur woh dono raj ka exercise
khatam karne ko wait kar rahe hothe hain.. par raj is in no
mood of stopping the puching… ultimately kavya , angad walk over
to raj , catch the puching bag & say…
Kavya:-tu abhi thak usse bhulla nahi hain kya ??
Angad:- yaar tu us khushi ka ghussa is bechare punching bag
se kyun le raha hain….
Kavya:- chal raj..ghussa chod de….
Angad:- chal yaar raj..aisi baton ko seriously nahi lete…
Raj:- {punching the boxing bag harder } raj kabhi apne dushmano
ko itni asani se chodtha nahi hain… main us ladki ko sabak
sikhake hi rahoonga…
Kavya:- lekin raj.. aisi kaamakha ki dhushmani kyun le raha
hain us ladki se I mean us khushi se …
Raj:- dushmani tho usne li hain raj..raj garewal se… ab main
usse batauga ki kiss shaks se pala pada hain uska…aur dekho
main ek baat tum dono ko saaf saaf bata dena chahtha hoon
aur woh yeh ki main tho us ladki se badla lekar hi rahoonga
ab tum dono mujhe batao ki kya tum dono mera saath doge…
Kavya & angad think for a moment & kavya says :- ofcourse raj
main tumhare saath hoon…
Raj {faces angad & says }:- aur tu angad….
Angad:- theek hain main bhi tere saath hoon…..
Raj:- good…ab dekhna Miss.khushi sinha main tumhe chaine se
jeene nahi doonga…..
Angad:- lekin haan raj ek baat tho manna hi padega…
Raj & kavya together say :- kya baat ??? kaunsi baat ???
Angad:- us ladki mein kuch tho baat thi…
Raj:- tujhe aisa kyun lagtha hain ??
Angad:- dekhna raj.. college ki har ladki teri ek jhalak , teri
ek muskurahat par fida hain par aaj pehli baar aise ladki se
saamna hua joh tere takkar ki hain…. woh ladki kya naam hain
uska hain khushi un ladkiyon mein se nahi hain joh aaj thak
tere peeche padthi aayi hain.. she is different..woh yeh
kabiliyat rakhthi hain ki woh tumhare eeent ka jawaab pattar se de
sake… aur iska saboot yeh pattar hain… {angad raj ke haath mein
woh pattar thama detha hain joh ki raj ne apni bag mein
rakhi hui thi joh khushi ne usse wapas di thi wohii pattar..} raj
looks at the stone with total anger pouring out of his
eyes.. woh pattar dekhthe hi raj ko khushi ki baatein yaad aa
jaathi hain…
Raj stares at the stone & then says :- Miss.khushi ab tumhe
patah chalega ki main kiss kisam ka insaan hoon… main yeh
pattar tumhe us din doonga jis din mera badla poora ho jayegi….
Aur main wadaa kartha hoon apne aapse ki main mera badla
bohat jaldi lekar rahoonga aur tumhare aamanat is pattar ko
bohat jald tumhare pass pohanchaunga..
Ab yeh theeno ghar chale jaathe hain…

Guys so here ends dil se dil thak part 5… hope all of you
liked it.. this part had a bit of flashback element in it…I
hope all the people who were waiting for the flashback are
satisfied…guys ab agle kuch parts will have the flashback…then
I hope all the mystries will be solved & all your questions
will be answered….

Guys ab yeh jaane ke liya ki what will raj do ?? how will
khushi react ??? how will anurag & prerna meet?? What will khushi
do if raj does anything ?? will khushi & raj ever become
friend’s ?????etc etc questions will be answered in the next
part....
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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:14 pm

Recap:- raj aur khushi apne poorane dino ke khayalo mein ghum hothe hain… in
that flashback we see how raj aur khushi pehli baar mile…. Aur un mein
takraar ho gaya…. Raj & khushi both are very angry with each other
aur ab aage dekhthe hain raj aur khushi ki zindagi kya rang dikhathi
hain...

“DIL SE DIL THAK -- PART 6”…

kavya,angad aur raj gym mein hothe hain…raj ka ghusse ab bhi paara mein
chada hua tha…uske aankhon mein bohat ghussa tha aur woh yeh saara
ghussa punching bag par nikaal raha tha… kavya aur angad kaafi time
pehle apna exercise khatam kar chuke hothe hain aur woh dono raj ka
exercise khatam karne ko wait kar rahe hothe hain.. par raj is in no
mood of stopping the puching… ultimately kavya , angad walk over to raj
, catch the puching bag & say…
Kavya:-tu abhi thak usse bhulla nahi hain kya ??
Angad:- yaar tu us khushi ka ghussa is bechare punching bag se kyun le raha hain….
Kavya:- chal raj..ghussa chod de….
Angad:- chal yaar raj..aisi baton ko seriously nahi lete…
Raj:-
{punching the boxing bag harder } raj kabhi apne dushmano ko itni asani
se chodtha nahi hain… main us ladki ko sabak sikhake hi rahoonga…
Kavya:- lekin raj.. aisi kaamakha ki dhushmani kyun le raha hain us ladki se I mean us khushi se …
Raj:-dushmani tho usne li hain raj..raj garewal se… ab main usse batauga ki
kiss shaks se pala pada hain uska…aur dekho main ek baat tum dono ko
saaf saaf bata dena chahtha hoon aur woh yeh ki main tho us ladki se
badla lekar hi rahoonga ab tum dono mujhe batao ki kya tum dono mera
saath doge…
Kavya & angad think for a moment & kavya says :- ofcourse raj main tumhare saath hoon…
Raj {faces angad & says }:- aur tu angad….
Angad:- theek hain main bhi tere saath hoon…..
Raj:- good…ab dekhna Miss.khushi sinha main tumhe chaine se jeene nahi doonga…..
Angad:- lekin haan raj ek baat tho manna hi padega…
Raj & kavya together say :- kya baat ??? kaunsi baat ???
Angad:- us ladki mein kuch tho baat thi…
Raj:- tujhe aisa kyun lagtha hain ??
Angad:-dekhna raj.collg ki har ladki teri ek jhalak , teri ek muskurahat
par fida hain par aaj pehli baar aise ladki se saamna hua joh tere
takkar ki hain…. woh ladki kya naam hain uska hain khushi un ladkiyon
mein se nahi hain joh aaj thak tere peeche padthi aayi hain.she is
different..woh yeh kabiliyat rakhthi hain ki woh tumhare eeent ka
jawaab pattar se de sake… aur iska saboot yeh pattar hain.{angad raj
ke haath mein woh pattar thama detha hain joh ki raj ne apni bag mein
rakhi hui thi joh khushi ne usse wapas di thi wohii pattar.} raj looks
at the stone with total anger pouring out of his eyes.woh pattar
dekhthe hi raj ko khushi ki baatein yaad aa jaathi hain.
Raj stares at the stone & then says :-Miss.khushi ab tumhe patah
chalega ki main kiss kisam ka insaan hoon… main yeh pattar tumhe us din
doonga jis din mera badla poora ho jayegi.Aur main wadaa kartha hoon
apne aapse ki main mera badla bohat jaldi lekar rahoonga aur tumhare
aamanat is pattar ko bohat jald tumhare pass pohanchaunga.
Ab yeh theeno ghar chale jaathe hain.
In khushi’s house.still khushi is locked in her room.. who na kissi ki
baat sunne ko taiyaar thi aur na hi kissi se baat karne ko…
Prerna calls all of them for dinner… anjali aur kripa come…prerna sees that khushi has not come so she
says :- yeh khushi kahaan hain ???
Anjali:-
jiji woh keh rahi thi usse bhook nahi hain… uska mood ab bhi bohat
kharab hain…{she says with a kind off worried expression on her face}
Prerna:-
yeh khushi bhi na…patah nahi kab badi hogi…itni choti si baat par woh
itna naraz hokar baithi hain..theek hain chalo tum dono kha lo..main
zara usse lekar aathi hoon…
Saying this prerna leaves..she goes upstairs & knocks on khushi’s door…
Prerna:- khushi….{she knocks} darwaza khol..
Khushi:- nahi jiji…aap jayiye yahaan se…..
Prerna:- khushi…meri baat tho sun….
Khushi:- nahii jiji…
Prerna:- khushi dekh tu chal aur dinner kha le…
Khushi:- mujhe bhook nahi hain…
Prerna:-
khushi dekh main jaanthi hoon tu us ladke se ghussa hain…par us ladke
ka ghussa tu apne khane pe kyun nikaal rahi hain ???
Khushi:- jiji
main kissi se ghussa nahi hoon..main bas kuch dhair ke liye akeli rehna
chahthi hoon…aur waise bhi mujhe bhook nahi hain.. aap apna dinner
khatam kar lejiye…
Prerna:- achcha khushi jaise teri marzi….{she says with fake sorrow} ab tu nahi khayegi tho main bhi nahi khaugi….
Tab peeche se anjali aur kripa ki awaaz aathi
hain :- hum bhi nahi khayenge….
Prerna :- chal anji , kripa hum table saaf kar dethe hain…kyunke waise bhi hum khane tho nahi waale hain…
Anjali:-
haan jiji chaliye…{they start walking away but then talk loudly so that
khushi could hear} waise krips tujhe tho bohat bhook lagi thi na…
Kripa:- haan bhook tho lagi thi…par ab hum kar bhi kya sakthe hain… logo ko meri parwah hi nahi hain…
Prerna:- krips tu kha lena…
Kripa:-
nahi jiji…agar khushi nahi khayegi tho main bhi nahi khaugi…aur lagtha
hain khushi ko tho koi farq nahi padtha main khaun ya na khaun…agar kal
subah main bhook ke mare behosh ho jaun tho please mujhe hospital
pohancha dena…aur haan koi us baat ke liye khushi ko zimedaar nahi
manna…khushi meri sabse achchi dost hain aur hamesha rahegi…tho kya hua
agar usse meri parwah nahi hain par mujhe tho uski parwah hain na…
Khushi
is standing behind them hearing to all the conversation..actually when
all the three were busy talking khushi slowly walked in…
Khushi smiles hearing to the whole conversation &
says :- krips ab teri nautanki khatam ho gayi ho tho khana khane chale…{she says pointing to the table}
all the three turn around & get surprised to see khushi standing there..
anjali :- are khushi tu yahaan kab aayi..hum mein tho patah bhi nahi chala….
Khushi :- jab aap theeno apne drame baazi mein busy the…
All the three give a mischievous smile as if they were caught…
Prerna:- drama…yahaan drama kaun kar raha tha… anjali , kripa kya tum dono koi drama kar rahe the…
Kripa:- nahi tho jiji..hum tho koi drama wama nahi kar rahe the…kyun anji…
Anjali:-
haan krips tu sahi keh rahi hain…aur tv bhi nahi chal rahi hain tho
tune kahaan se koi drama ki awaaz sunli..…khushi lagtha hain tere kaan
baj rahe hain..
All giggle….
Khushi :- { hoth jorthe hue
kehthi hain} haan meri maa…. haan mere hi kaan baj rahe the…ab chalo
mere pait main chuhe dhaud rahe hain….
Kripa & anjali walk on
the either side of khushi & say:- jiji abhi kuch dhair pehle koi
humse keh raha tha na..ki usse bhook nahi hain…tho ab kaise bhook lagi
hain ???
Khushi:- are ghalthi ho gayi chalo naah…agar ab maine
kuch nahi khaya tho kripa ke bajay main behosh ho jaungi….all laugh
& then prerna says…
Prerna:- achcha chal ab bohat baatein ho gayi hain..hum khana khathe hain…
All the four head towards the dining table…
While eating prerna says :- khushi main tujhe batana bhool gayi…
Khushi :- kya jiji..
Prerna:- woh aaj subah tere college jaane ke baad veer ka phone aaya tha…woh tumse baat karna chahtha tha…
Khushi :- lekin main usse koi baat nahi karna chahthi hoon…{she says with thoda sa ghussa }
Anjali:- are ab us bechare se kya ghalthi ho gayi ?? kyun ghussa ho rahi ho uspe..
Khushi :- main isliye uspe ghussa ho rahi hoon kyunke usne kaha tha ki woh mujhse kal raat baat karega par usne nahi kiya…
Prerna :- are bechara kissi kaam mein phas gaya hoga..
Kripa:- haan sahi kaha jiji aapne..…warna woh hamesha apne vaade nibhatha hain..
Khushi:- haan..haan….mujhe patah hain aap theeno hamesha ussi ki side lethe ho….
Anjali
:- waise hum maanthe hain ki hum hamesha uska saath dethe hain..par
khushi woh tho har dum sirf tera saath detha hain na…
Khushi
{smiles} :- haan yeh baat tho sahi hain…aur aisa kyun nahi hoga
akhirkhaar woh mera bhai hain aur saath saath mera dost bhi hain naa..…

Then there is silence for sometime…all the four finish their dinner
& sit in the hall… prerna is sitting there & working on some
project…. & talks go on
non-stop between anjali , kripa & khushi..….
Khushi :- are jiji yeh aap kya kar rahi hain ???
Prerna:-
kuch nahi khushi.. woh kal mujhe humari company ko represent karthe hue
ek presentation dena… ek naye contract ke liye.. I hope yeh contract
hum mein mil jaye…
Anjali :- zaroor milega jiji…akhir aapne itni mehnat joh ki hain…
Prerna:- I hope so..agar yeh contract hum mein mil gaya tho humari company ko faida hoga….
Khushi:- I’am sure jiji kal sab theek hoga….
Kripa:- me sure too…
Prerna:- achcha chalo ab tum theeno jao aur so jao… raat bohat ho gayi hain…
Khushi:- theek hain jiji..
All the three get up wish good night to prerna & then leave to their room..
Khushi enters her room…
She
goes by the window & starts looking up at the sky.. seeing the
stars & the moon… bahar it was raining or rather drizilling….
She starts thinking :- hmm…aisa kyun lagtha hain zindagi bohat jald ek haseen mod lene waali hain..
Aisa kyun lag raha hain ki zindagi ke dour mein koi anjana shaks kadam
rakhne wala hain… in panni ki bhoondo mein {she places her hand outside
the window feeling the water drops on her hand} mein kissi ka ehsaas
hain kissi ke aane ki aahat hain……. she just takes the water drops
& places it on her cheeks…& smiles..& again she starts
talking to herself :- main nahi jaanthi ki mera pyaar , meri zindagi
kahaan hain , mera humsafar kahaan hain lekin main itna zaroor mehsoos
kar sakthi hoon ki woh jahaan bhi hain mere bohat kareeb hain..main
usse har pal ,har ghadi mehsoos kar rahi hoo..{tabhi wahaan taiz hawa
chalthi hain & rain starts falling heavily , paani ki cheete
kashish ke chere ko bhiga rahi thi…} mehsoos kar rahi hoon main usse in
hawaoo mein , in pani ki bhoondo mein…. Khushi inhi khayalo mein khoyi
hui hothi hain jab prerna room mein enter hothi hain…khushi turns
around & sees prerna..
Khushi:- are jiji aap…
Prerna:-
haan..main bas dekhne aayi thi ki kya tu so gayi hain ya nahii.. aur
yeh kya tu abhi thak soyi kyun nahii…???{she questions}
Khushi {makes a childish face & says } :- woh jiji darasal mujhe neend nahi aa rahi thi..tho isliye….{she stops}
Prerna:- tho isliye tu wahaan khidki ke pass khade khade khayalo mein ghum hain…
Khushi:- nahi jiji..main tho bas aise hi kuch soch rahi thi…
Prerna:- achcha chal ab sochna vochna chod aur so ja.. abhi dhair se soyegi tho phir kal subah college ke liye dhair ho jayegi…
Khushi:- achcha jiji.. aap jayiye main so jaungi….
Prerna:-
nahi main yahaan se kahiin nahi jaa rahi hoon jab thak tu bed par lait
na jaye….kyunke mere jaathe hi tu phir kuch na kuch sochne lagegi aur
dhair se soyegi….
Khushi smiles comes to the bed :- achcha jiji ab aap jao.. main pukka so jaungi…
Prerna :- {kisses on her fore head & says } good night…
Khushi:- good night…
Prerna
then starts walking & khushi makes herself comfortable on the
bed…prerna while walking sees that the window is open..{the window
where khushi was standing} she goes towards the window & is about
to close it when khushi says :- rehne dijiye na jiji…
Prerna tries to tell khushi that it is raining but then khushi pleads her not to close the window.. prerna finally gives up….
Then
prerna says jovially :- khushi tu na aise zid kar rahi hain ki shayad
us khidki se koi rajkumar aayega aur tujhe le jayega..kyunnnnnnnnn……koi
aayega kya… {she asks mischievously}
Khushi { shies a bit & says } :- are kya jiji aap bhi…
Prerna:- nahi maine kya kiya… mujhe tho bas teri bechaini dekhkar aisa laga kiii….
Khushi :- kiiii {she raises her eyebrow }
Prerna:- aisa kii tu kissi ka intezaar kar rahi hain…
Khushi :- aapne bilkul sahi kaha dii.. intezaar tho kar rahi hoon par najaane kisska…
Prerna
gets confused with what khushi has said she goes sits beside khushi on
the bed & toches khushi ‘s fore head , starts checking
temperature….
Khushi :- {catches hold of her hand & says} kya hua jiji…
Prerna :- nahi main bas check kar rahi hoon ki kahiin teri tabiyat tho theek hain na…
Khushi:- haan jiji main bilkul theek hoon..mujhe kya hona hain…
Prerna :- nahi tu aaj suddenly itne behki behki baatein karne lagi hain tho.. mujhe teri tabiyat ki chintha ho rahi hain…
Khushi:- aisi koi baat nahi hain jiji…
Prerna:- achcha main ab chalthi hoon..{prerna starts to leave when khushi again calls her…}
Khushu:- jiji…{prerna turns around & looks at her}
Khushi
continues :- jiji..kya kabhi aapko aisa lagtha hain ki aapki zindagi
kuch hi palo mein badal jayegi… kya aap ko kabhi kissi anjane , unknown
shaks ka intezaar hotha hain…kya aap kabhi ek aise shaks ke bare mein
sochthe hain ya aapke khayalo mein aisa insaan ki parchayi aathi hain
jisse aapne aaj thak kabhi bhi dekha nahi hain…{she says all this with
had badi & a confused expression or rather a question mark face}
Prerna:-
khushi main shayad samaj rahi hoon tu kya keh rahi hain.. har ladki ka
apne humsafar ke bare mein kuch khayal hothe hain..kuch ideas hotha
hain ki woh aisa ho aisa na ho…sabhi ladkiyon ke zindagi mein yeh dour
aatha hain… waise khushi ek baat poochon..
Khushi :- haan jiji poochiye na..
Prerna:- kya aisa koi ladka tumhare nazar main hain jiske saath tum apni zindagi guzarna chahthi ho jisse tum pyaar karthi ho…
Khushi:-
nahi jiji..aisa ab thak tho koi nahi mila… par ab lagtha hain woh joh
koi bhi hain , jahaan kahiin bhi hain bohat jald mere saamne aajayega….

Prerna:- aur tujhe aisa kyun lagtha hain ??
Khushi:- bas lagtha hain jiji…
Prerna:- wohi tho pooch rahi hoon kyun lagtha hain..
Khushi:-
{shrugs her shoulders & says } patah nahi.. dil keh raha hain
shayad….{she says this with a dreamy look on her face}
Prerna:- khushi tu na bilkul pagal hain.. chalo ab tum sapne dekhna chodo aur so jao..aur mujhe bhi sone do…
Khushi
smiles & prerna leaves the room.. khushi lays down on the bed &
then before covering herself with the blanket sees towards the window
smiles & says :- patah nahi mera prince charimg kahaan hoga…mera
sapno ka raja….{she starts thinking again… }

Song in the background:-

“ Mere khwabon mein joh aaye…
aake mujhe chaid jaaye…
{khushi
apna chehra blanket ke andar chupathi hain & closes her eyes &
then she opens then suddenly as she sees someone’s parchayi in her
thoughts…}
usse kaho kabhi saamne thoo aaye…
{she again closes her eyes to see the image of the person par is baar bhi usse sirf ek dhundli si image hi dikhthi hain}
Mere khwabon mein joh aaye…
aake mujhe chaid jaaye…
usse kaho kabhi saamne thoo aaye…
Mere khwabon mein joh aaye…
Kaisa hain kaun hain woh jaane kahaan hain..
Jiske liye mere hoonto mein haan hain…
Apna hain yaa begana hain woh..
Such hain ya koi afsana hain woh….
{khushi gets up & sits on the bed with a blank expression on her face}
Dekhe ghoor ghoor ke yunhi durr durr se..
Usse kaho meri neend na churaye…
{she looks at the window & outside she sees that rain has stopped & there just a cool breeze}
Mere khwabon mein joh aaye…
aake mujhe chaid jaaye…
usse kaho kabhi saamne thoo aaye…
Mere khwabon mein joh aaye…aa……
{she keeps staring at the window}
Jadoo jaise koi chalne laga hain
Main kya karoon dil machal ne laga hain..
Tera deewana hoon kehtha hain woh..
Chup chup phir kyun rehtha hain woh…
{ she imagines a guy coming on a goda with a mask on his face & taking her away}
Kar baita bhool woh le aaya phool woh….
Usse kaho jaye chaand leke aaye…
Mere khwabon mein joh aaye…
aake mujhe chaid jaaye…
usse kaho kabhi saamne thoo aaye…
{she imagines a masked guy proposing to her}
la la..lalala..laaaaaaaaaaalaaa….
la la..lalala..laaaaaaaaaaalaaa….”

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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:20 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 6 {Continuation}

khushi then comes out of her imagination hits her head lightly & lays on the bed , removing out all the thoughts out of her mind..
khushi again closes her eyes .. when she does that :- she again has the
parchayi of her dream man but suddenly she even get’s the image of rajstanding with a smile on his face… she abruptly opens her eyes with a sense of confusion on her face & she thinks :- main uske bare mein
kyun soch rahi hoon…main tho bas usse nafrat karthi hoon..us raj ka
chehra mere khayalo mein kyun aaya…main uske bare mein kyun sochne lagi hon… kyun kyun akhir kyun..she gets hyper….then calms herself down thinking it was just a thought…. But phir khushi apne aap se kehthi hain :- woh ladka raj… bilkul mujh jaisa hain…usse bhi haar bardhast nahi hothi..aur aaj joh usne kiya woh lazmi tha..agar main uski jagah hothi tho main bhi shayad yahii karthi.. anyway ab main uske bare mein kyun soch rahi hoon… phir khushi apni aankhein band karthi hain &
just mumbles in very low voice:- rajjjjjjjjjjj…..{ raj ka naam kehthe
hain anjaane mein hi sahi khushi ki chehre ki muskaan aur khushi aur
bhi zyada khil jaathi hain}
then finally khushi goes to sleep peacefully…
yeh tho hui khushi ki baat ab zara nazar raj pe daalthe hain..
raj , angad & kavya are sitting in their car….they are all returning home from the disco….
angad:- raj aaj disc mein bada mazaa aaya na…
raj who was driving the car looks towards him &
says :- haan…mazaa tho aaya…lekin angad hum roz tho yahii karthe hain….roz disc jaathe hain aur we chill-out there…
kavya:- haan yeh baat tho bilkul sahi hain…
raj:- guys main aaj tum dono se ek baat poochna chahtha hoon..
angad & kavya :- tho pooch na raj ??
raj:- aaj subah bouji mujhse keh rahe the ki mere liye koi na koi ladki
zaroor banayi gayi hogi…lekin main is baat ko nahi maantha…ab mera
sawaal tum dono se yeh hain ki kya tum is baat par vishwaas karthe ho
ki someone somewhere is made for you ???
kavya :- {thinks of something & hesitantly says} haan shayad..main is baat ko maantha hoon…
raj:-kavya yeh tu kya keh raha hain mujhe haan shayad mein jawaab nahi
chahiye..… bol haan ya naah…{woh zara irritate hotha hain}
kavya:- achcha yaar ghussa mat ho…main zaroor vishwaas kartha hoon ki someone somewhere is made for you….
raj:- hmmm..theek hain…aur tu angad….
angad :- main bhi is saying mein vishwaas rakhtha hoon…
raj:- achcha mujhe yeh bata ki tum dono ko is baat kar vishwaas kyun hain ??
angad :- dekh raj… main tujhe samjhatha hoon… hum har roz itni ladkiyon se milthe hain aur hum unhe bhool jaathe hain…
now kavya interrupts & continues :- lekin zindagi mein ek aisa chehra
hotha hain joh hum bhool ke bhi bhool nahi payenge…chah ke bhi nahi
bhula sakthe uska chehra..
angad now says :- hum jitni bhi koshish kare us chehre ko bhool ne ki par humein har taraf wohi ek chehra naraz aatha hain…
kavya:- exactly.. aur hum na chahthe hue bhi us insaan se pyaar kar baithe
hain…aur woh someone joh somewhere se aatha hain humari zindagi ban
jaatha hain….
angad :- ab samjhe Mr.bhudhu…{he giggles & hits raj lightly on his forehead}
raj looks at both of them smiles & then asks :- achcha chalo ab mujhe
tho patah chal gaya ki tum dono ko pyaar mein vishwaas hain..par mujhe
yeh batao ki kya tum dono ko aaj thak aisa koi mila jiske tumhari dil
ki ghanti baji ho woh bhi pehli hi mulaqat mein…
angad & kavya { without thinking instantly say } :- haannnnnn….
Raj looks at both of them..angad , kavya look at eachother confused…
Raj :- achcha chalo ab yeh bhi bata do ki woh ladkiyaan kaun hain….jisne tumhari dil ki ghanti bajayi hain…
At the same time angad & kavya say..
Angad says :-krips..
& kavya says :- anji…
angad & kavya looks at eachother surprised….
Raj asks them :- yeh naam tho kahiin suna hua lag raha hain mujhe..waise unka poora naam kya hain…
Angad :- raj..dekh tu ghussa na ho…par yeh dono us ladki ke dost hain..
Raj:- kaunsi ladi ??? kayeki ladki ??
kavya :- [gulps down his saliva & says] wohi ladki jisne aaj tujhse jhagda kiya…woh khushi….
Raj looks at both of them with a shocked expression first & then slowly gets a sweet smile on his face…
Both look at raj with a dara hua expression….
Raj:- are tum dono mujhe aise kyun ghoor rahe ho…
Kavya :- raj tujhe bura nahi laga…
Angad:- yaar tho tu shock ke wajah se aise behave kar raha hain nahi tho tune
theek se nahi suna…raj hum un ladkiyo se pyaar karthe hain joh us ladki
khushi ke dost hain….
Raj:-
tho kya hua ?? is mein bura kyahain…tum dono ko ladkiyo se hi tho pyaar
hua hain kissi ladke se tho nahi….{ he says this & all the three
start laughing & giggling}

Raj :- nahi guys mujhe seriously bura nahi laga hain.. actually
main bohat khush hoon tum dono ke liye… afterall tum dono mere bhai bhi
ho aur mere best buddies bhi…
Raj:- waise unke poore naam kya hain ??
Angad & kavya together say :- hum nahi jaanthe…
Raj looks at them & says :- kya…… tum unka poora naam nahi jaanthe…
Angad:- haan raj woh actually humne unka naam tab suna jab woh apni gaadi ki taraf jaa rahe the..
Kavya :- aur woh log ek dusare ko aise hi anji ,krips keh ke address kar rahe the…
Raj:- tho tum logon ko patah karwana chahiye tha na…
Angad :- woh raj darasal college mein joh kuch bhi hua hum uske baad directly tere saath college se nikal aaye…
Kavya :- tho isliye humein mouka nahi mila ki hum unka naam patah kar sake….
Raj:- oh…tho yeh baat hain… chalo koi baat nahi hum kal patah karwa lethe hain….
All the three smile at this…. There is silence in the car for sometime when again kavya asks…
Kavya :- waise raj aaj tune humse yeh kyun poocha ki kya we believe in someone somewhere is made for
you ??
Raj :- bas aise hi yaar..mann kiya tho maine pooch liya…
Kavya :- raj tu sach keh raha hain ya phir humein chakma dene ki koshish kar raha hain….
Raj:- kavya tum aise kya sawaal kar rahe ho mujhse ?? maine kaha na maine aise hi poocha…
Kavya:- raj mujhe sahi sahi jawaab de…. Aur main sach jaanna chahtha hoon… samjhe tum….
Raj :- kavyaaaaaaaaaaa……
Now angad intervents & says :- haan raj bata na…. Mujhe bhi jaan na hain..
Raj :- lo ghar aagaya… {he says parking the car}
Raj
gets down & starts walking off when angad calls out his name &
says :- raj andar jaanne se pehle humare sawaal ka jawaab tho dethe
jaa…
Raj just turns around passes a smile & starts walking..
When kavya says :- hmm…something fishy… lagtha hain raj ke mann mein kuch
kuch tho pakh raha hain… ab patah karna padega ki kaunsi khichidi pakh
rahi hain…
Angad :- shayad tu theek keh raha hain…. chal ab andar chalthe hain..
Raj har ke andar sabse pehle pohanchtha hain…. hall mein veena , lalit ,
kamal aur vasu baithe hue hothe hain……vasu sees him & starts with
her taunts again….
Vasu:- are veena tumhare is bete ka tho koi jawaab nahi… najaane tumne isse kiss tarah ki parwarish di hain….
Veena
ignores her remark , but raj says :- aapko agar mujhse ko problem ho
tho aap mujhse kahiye aap mom ko kyun baatein suna rahi hain ???
Vasu
:- achcha raj..agar tum aisa hi chahthe ho.. tho suno..tum roz raat
ghar late aathe ho..bahar jaathe ho aur apne baap-dada ki kamayi par
parties karthe ho… isse tho achcha hotha ki tum apni padayi par dhyan
do aur paise waste karna band karo…. Kavya aur angad bhi issi ghar mein
rehthe hain par woh dono tumhare jaise paise karch nahi karthe hain…par
tum..lekin raj tumse bolna hi fizool hain kyunke tum kabhi nahi
sudhroge… tum ab party kar ke aa rahe ho..aur upar kavya aur angad dono
apne kaam kar rahe hain.. {actually vasu ko patah nahi tha ki angad
,kavya aur raj saath bahar gaye hue hain as she had gone out to a kitty
party…}
Angad & kavya are standing at the door way listening to all the talks…
Amgad does not let vasu continue & says :- sahi kaha aapne hum apna kaam hi kar rahe the…
vasu
is surprised to see angad & kavya at door way.. angad walks to her
& says :- aap mujhe batayiye aapki problem kya hain…aap humein
chaine se rehne kyun nahi dethi…main , raj aur kavya saath gaye the..
Vasu :- { with a scared kind off expression says } woh mujhe patah nahi tha…maine socha kii…
Angad
:- aap aapki soch ko humare rishthe par havi na hone de tho hi behtar
hoga.. … aur waise aapko patah kaise hotha aap tho hamesha apne kitty
parties mein joh busy hothe hain… Aur haan aap rishthe se meri maa hain
lekin usse kayi zyada mera liye woh rishtha hain joh mera badi maa aur
raj ke saath hain….{ angad says this sternly , vasu is shocked….&
angad is about to walk away but then he comes back & says }
Angad:- aur kya kaha aapne raj paise waste kartha hain.. tho suniye raj joh
bhi paise karch kartha hain woh sirf mere aur kavya ke liye hothe
hain…woh apne liye tho kuch nahi kartha….
Now veena to ease the tension says :- tum theeno khana khaoge kya ???& she pleads angad to stop with expressions…
All the three say no to food & head upstairs while going upstairs kavya again starts asking questions to
raj , raj keeps avoiding the question…{the question about someone somewhere is made for you }
All the three go up & go to their respective rooms..
Raj just enters his room , jab peeche se angad aur kavya ki awaaz aathi hain…
Raj turns around & looks at them…& confusedly
says :- tum dono yahaan koi kaam tha kya ……???
kavya
:- nahi raj hum tho bas tujhse yahiin baat kehne aaye the ki hum dono
hamesha tera saath denge…chahe kuch bhi ho jaye…
raj :- kyaaaa.. main kuch samjha nahi…. ab tum yeh baat kyun kar rahe ho ??
Angad :- bas raj tujhse yeh baat kehne ka mann kiya tho keh diya… chal ab hum chalthe hain…good night…
Kavya :- good night raj..
Raj :- good night…
Angad & kavya are about to step out of the room when angad says :- raj tujhse ek aur baat kehni thi…
Raj :- haan bol na…
Angad :- raj tujhe pyaar par vishwaas nahi hain naa..
Raj :- haan main pyaar par vishwaas nahi kartha par main pyaar ki aur pyaar karne walo ki izzat zaror kartha hoon..
Kavya
:- raj ek aisa din zaroor aayega jab tumhare dil ke darwaza par koi
ladki chup ke se dastak de jayegi.. aur tumhe patah bhi nahi chalega..
Angad :- woh ladki tumhari zindagi banegi raj… ek aise ladki zaroor milegi tumhe…
Raj:- are woh…tum dono tho majnu ban chuke ho ab mere peeche kyun pade hue
ho.. pyaar vyaar sab mere liye nahi hain.. main un cheezo se koso durr
hi achcha bhala hoon.. kyun mujhe is jhanjhat mein daal rahe ho..
Angad :- raj jiss din tujhe pyaar ho jayega na.. us din main tujhse poochoonga.. ki how does it feel to fall in love….
Raj{haath jhortha hain aur kehtha hain } :- achcha..mere baap..jab main
pyaar mein padoonga tho tab dekha jayega… ab tum dono jao aur mujhe
sone do…
Raj pushes kavya & angad out of his room playfully…
Raj goes & sits on the bed & suddenly kavya &
angad
peep through the door & say :- tujhe pyaar zaroor hoga raj…. {
before raj could even react angad & kavya run away } & raj
smiles….
Raj :- {thinks } yeh dono bhi na..bilkul pagal hain…
waise yeh dono joh keh rahe the woh baat ghalat bhi tho nahi thi…
shayad main aaj se pehle in lines someone somewhere is made for you
mein vishwaas nahi kartha tha par aaj us ladki ko dekhne ke baad shayad
mujhe vishwaas ho gaya hain.. najaane kya baat hain us ladki khushi
mein…ki main usse bhulla hi nahi paa raha hoon.. usse apne khayalo se
nikaal hi nahii paa raha hoon… mujhe tho us ladki pe ghussa hona
chahiye par ghussa hone ke bajaye mujhe us par pyaar aa raha hain..agar
aisi harkat kissi aur ne ki hothi tho
raj garewal usse apna badla
liye bina nahi chodtha.. lekin aaj yeh dil kyun chahtha hain ki us
ladki ki ek chah , ek hasi ke liye main khud ko mita doon.. pehle kabhi
tho mere saath aisa nahi hua… meri zindagi mein kayi ladkiyaan aayi aur
gayi bhi lekin khushi us sab se alag main…main nahi jaantha ki main
khushi ke liye kya feel kartha hoon..ya main yeh bhi nahi jaantha ki
mere dil mein kya jazbaat hain khushi ke liye , jaantha hoon tho bas
itna ki she is different & she is very special to me..{ raj apna
haath apna sar par phirtha hain aur cute se tarike se smile kartha
hain} raj bachu zara sambhal ke.. kahiin yeh ladki tera dil chura ke na
ud jaye… dil pe kabu rakh raj… shayad main khushi pe isliye ghussa ho
raha tha kyunke woh bilkul mujh jaisi hain wohi ghussa , wohi akkad joh
mujh mein hain aur shayad main isliye bhi ghussa tha kyunke aaj thak
kissi ladki ne raj garewal se aise behave nahi kiya....aur main shayad
is baat ko bardhast nahi kar paaya…. Chalo joh bhi ho main kal khushi
ko sorry kahoonga aur apna dosti ka haath bhi badauga…ab yeh aage uski
marzi hain ki kya woh meri dosti kabool karthi hain ya nahi…{phir raj
ko angad aur kavya ki kahii hui baat ki ek din koi ladki uske dil pe
dastak degi woh yaad aathi hain aur woh sochtha hain } aaj dil mein
pehli baar us khushi ki wajah se kuch tho hua…par main nahi jaantha kya
?? shayad main joh khushi ke liye feel kartha hoon woh pyaar nahi
hain…..{he stops hesitates & then continues thinking } par agar yeh
pyaar hain tho…tho…tho…{he says dreamingly} tho isse achcha mujhe aaj
thak kabhi nahi laga.. yeh joh ehsaas dil mein jaga hain woh mujhe itni
khushi de raha hain ki main bayaan nahi kartha saktha… shayad issi ka
naam pyaar hain…

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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sun Nov 09, 2008 10:21 pm


Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 6 { Continuation)

Song in the background:-

“ Kyun chalthi hain pavan…..
Kyun jhoome hain gagan….
Kyun machaltha hain mann….
Na tum jano na hum…
Na tum jano na hummm…
Kyun aathi hain bahar…
Kyun luttha hain karrar…
Kyun hotha hain pyaar….
Na tum jano na hum…
Na tum jano na hummmmmm…..
{raj keeps thinking about khushi with a dreamy look on his face }
Yeh madhoshiyaan yeh tanhayiyaan..
Tasavoor mein hain kisski parchayiyaan..
Yeh bheega sama umaange jawa..
Mujhe ishq le jaa raha hain kahaan…
{he just thinks about the time when khushi had challenged with full confidence}
Kyun ghum hain har disha….
Kyun hotha hain nasha….
{he thinks about her eyes which were so expressive }
Kyun aatha hain mazza …
{he thinks about the time when he broke the glass of khushi’s car & irritated her}
Na tum jano na hum…
Dhadhak tha bhi hain…
Thadap tha bhi hain…
Yeh dil kyun achanak behal tha bhi hain..
Mehak tha bhi hain…
Chehak tha bhi hain…
Yeh dil kya wafa ko samaj tha bhi hain..
Kyun milthi hain nazar…
{he thinks about the time when khushi was shocked to see him in the parking lot }
Kyun hotha hain asar…
Kyun hothi hain seher…
Na tum jano na hum…
Na tum jano na hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…
{he thinks about the time when he realizes may be he loves khushi }
Kyun chalthi hain pavan…..
Kyun jhoome hain gagan….
Kyun machaltha hain mann….
Na tum jano na hum…
Kyun aathi hain bahar…
Kyun luttha hain karrar…
Kyun hotha hain pyaar….
Na tum jano na hum…
Na tum jano na hummmmmm…..”
{ he touches his dil & thinks shayad issi ehsaas ko pyaar kehthe hain shayad..hmmm……}

raj
just lays down on the bed & thinks as how he would say sorry to
khushi the next day… thinking about all these things raj goes to sleep
with a smile on his face & keeping khushi in his thoughts….

Agle
din dono ke ghar mein sab kuch theek hotha hain matlab normal hotha
hain..… sinha house mein har din ke jaise had-badi machchi i hui hothi
hain.. har koi apna kaam kartha kartha ek dusare ki madat bhi kartha
hain aur thodi hasi mazak bhi chalthi rehthi hain.. dusari taraf
garewal house mein bhi subah ki shuruwaat roz ke jaise hi hothi hain….
vasu keeps passing her remarks & taunting veena…{vasu kabhi nahi
sudhar sakthi } aur veena as usual un baato ko ignore karke apne kaam
mein mashroof hothi hothi…
raj , angad aur kavya apne masti mazak mein rehthe hain….
then angad ,raj & kavya have their nhastha & leave for the college…
raj
while going to the college stops the car in front of a shopping mall…
angad & kavya look at him surprised as why he has stopped the car…
raj understands their expressions & says :- yaar woh actually mujhe kissi ke liye gift lena hain…
all
the three enter the mall… raj goes & sees some gifts..finally he
likes a brown big sized teddy bear & also a porcelin doll of
brids..jiske ke beech mein it is engraved “FRIEND’S FOREVER”..
he shows it to angad & kavya who were just looking around …
raj :- ab tum dono yeh bolo ki yeh cheezein kaisi hain ???{ he points out to the things }
kavya :- achchi tho bohat hain…par yeh tho bata yeh kisske liye le raha hain ??
raj :- angad tu bata kaisi hain ??
angad :- achchi hainn…raj par tum yeh gift kiss ke liye le rahein ho ??
raj :- woh { hesitates a bit to tell them & then finally says} woh khushi ke liye…
kavya & angad :- raj tu theek tho hain na.. khushi ke gift woh bhi tu khareed ne wala hain…
raj
:- haan yaar woh actually mujhe usse sorry kehna hain..kal ki harkat ke
liye…main uske saamne dosti ka haath badana chahtha hoon…
angad :- are wah raj tu tho ek hi din mein sudhar gaye… maine kal sahi kaha tha us ladki mein kuch tho baat hain….
kavya:- hmmm..i agree…
raj :- { feels shy a bit & says } ab yeh agree wagree chodo..aur gifts leke chalo….
Angad :- haan haan chal..aaj tho tujhe college pohachne ne ki sabse zyada jaldi hogi… kyun…
Angad , kavya giggle…raj pays for the gifts & all the three leave to the college…

So
guys chaliye yahaan khatam hotha hain dil se dil thak part 6…I hope you
all liked the part…

Ab yeh jaanne ke
liye ki kya khushi raj ki dosti accept karegi ??? kya khushi aur raj ke
beech joh jazbaat hain kya woh sirf pyaar hain ?? angad ,kripa , anjali
aur kavya ka kya hoga ??? prerna ka presentation kaise rahega ?? prerna
aur anurag ki pehli mulaqat kaise hogi ?? ab in sab ki zindagiyo mein
aage kya hoga ?? yeh sab jaanne ke liye wait kijiye for the next part
of dil se dil thak…

Sorry guys is part mein raj , khushi saath
nahi the..but i promise agle part mein zyada tar khushi aur raj saath
honge…aur haan agle part mein we will also know a bit about mukthi
& veer…..

Please post your comments & suggestions…I’ll waiting for them…

Take care…
Byeeeeeee

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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sun Nov 23, 2008 2:51 pm

“ DIL SE DIL THAK – PART 7”

jaise taise khushi aur raj ki raat kathi ek dusare ke khayalo mein…. Ab agle din dono ke ghar mein sab kuch theek hotha hain matlab normal hotha hain..… sinha house mein har din ke jaise had-badi machchi i hui hothi hain.. har koi apna kaam kartha kartha ek dusare ki madat bhi kartha hain aur thodi hasi mazak bhi chalthi rehthi hain.. dusari taraf garewal house mein bhi subah ki shuruwaat roz ke jaise hi hothi hain…. vasu keeps passing her remarks & taunting veena…{vasu kabhi nahi sudhar sakthi } aur veena as usual un baato ko ignore karke apne kaam mein mashroof hothi hothi…
raj , angad aur kavya apne masti mazak mein rehthe hain….
then angad ,raj & kavya have their nhastha & leave for the college…
raj while going to the college stops the car in front of a shopping mall… angad & kavya look at him surprised as why he has stopped the car…
raj understands their expressions & says :- yaar woh
actually mujhe kissi ke liye gift lena hain…
all the three enter the mall… raj goes & sees some gifts..finally he likes a brown big sized teddy bear & also a porcelin doll of brids..jiske ke beech mein it is engraved “FRIEND’S FOREVER”..
he shows it to angad & kavya who were just looking around …
raj :- ab tum dono yeh bolo ki yeh cheezein kaisi hain ???{ he points out to the things }
kavya :- achchi tho bohat hain…par yeh tho bata yeh kisske liye le raha hain ??
raj :- angad tu bata kaisi hain ??
angad :- achchi hainn…raj par tum yeh gift kiss ke liye le rahein ho ??
raj :- woh { hesitates a bit to tell them & then finally says} woh khushi ke liye…
kavya & angad :- raj tu theek tho hain na.. khushi ke gift woh bhi tu khareed ne wala hain…
raj :- haan yaar woh actually mujhe usse sorry kehna hain..kal ki harkat ke liye…main uske saamne dosti ka haath badana chahtha hoon…
angad :- are wah raj tu tho ek hi din mein sudhar gaye… maine kal sahi kaha tha us ladki mein kuch tho baat hain….
kavya:- hmmm..i agree…
raj :- { feels shy a bit & says } ab yeh agree wagree chodo..aur gifts leke chalo….
Angad :- haan haan chal..aaj tho tujhe college pohachne ne ki sabse zyada jaldi hogi… kyun…
Angad , kavya giggle…raj pays for the gifts & all the three leave to the college…
Yahaan anjali , kripa aur khushi bhi college ke liye nikal padthe hain… they go by a cab kyunke khushi ki gaadi is in a very bad conition it is not yet gone for repair aur prerna ki gaadi tho usse chahiye thi , so they go in a cab…
Pehle raj ,angad aur kavya college pohanchthe hain… when they reach they see khushi , kripa & anjali in the cab… unko cab mein dekhthe hi raj ko kuch soojtha hain…raj leaves angad & kavya there who are staring at kripa & anjali & runs into the college building….after some time raj comes back & he sees that angad & kavya are still lost in their world when raj comes & clicks his fingers in front of them.. both came back to reality….& together say :- ha…an..
Raj looks at them & says :- kya ho gaya hain tum dono ko ????
angad :- raj woh {he says pointing forward } raj looks in that direction & says :- woh kaun ???
Angad :- raj yaad nahi krips…woh abhi wahaan par thi…
Kavya:- aur anji bhi wahiin par thi..{he says pointing to the same place}
Raj:- lekin ab woh dono wahaan par nahi hain…samjhe tum dono….
Kavya & angad together say :- kaash hothi tho…
Raj looks at them open mouthed & says :- tum dono pagal ho gaye ho….ab jald hi tum dono ka kuch intazaam karna padega warna tum dono ko aise hi chod diya tho na jaane tum dono kya karoge..
Raj:- achcha ab tum dono chalo….
Angad :- kahaan chalein..ab bhi tho tu keh raha tha ki humara kuch karna hoga tho chal na humari madat kar aur hum un ladkiyo se dosti karthe hain…
Raj :- abhiii jana hain kya ??
Kavya :- haan chal na raj…dekh tu jab thak khushi se maafi nahi maangtha woh ladkiyaan humse dosti nahi karengi…. Tho ab tu chal aur khushi se apne kal waali harkat ke liye maafi mango…
Raj :- nahi guys…abhi nahi…. Raj Garewal ka maafi maange ke tarike mein bhi ek style hotha hain….{he says this as if he has some idea in his mind}
Angad:- raj tu tho pehle hi khushi ke liye gifts khareed chukka hain naa…tho phir ab aur kya chahiye…
Raj :- hmm…dekho guys hum baaki baatein baad mein kare..ab tum dono chalo mere saath….woh bhi
chup-chaap bina koi sawaal – jawaab ke…
angad & kavya just nod their head in acknowledgement…
Raj starts walking back to the car with angad & kavya… angad & kavya follow him confused…
Angad :- raj hum parking ki taraf kyun jaa rahe hain ?? {he asked with a confused expression on his face}
Kavya :- raj mera bhi same sawaal hai..hum parking ki taraf kyun jaa rahe hain…hum tho abhi college aaye hain na…..{he says increasing the confusion}
Raj :- jaantha hoon hum abhi abhi college aaye hain lekin abhi hum logo ko kahiin aur jana hain…aur waise maine abhi abhi tum dono se kaha na ki tum dono ko sawaal – jawaab nahi karoge..aur tum dono phir shuru ho gaye…..{he gave them a stern look}
Kavya :- achcha theek hain chal…hum ab koi sawaal nahi karenge…
Angad:- waise bhi hum jaanthe hain ki humare kissi bhi sawaal ka tu ab tho koi jawaab nahi dega..
Both angad & kavya sulk & make cute faces….
Raj looks at both of them smiles & says :- ab mooh banana chod do aur jaldi chalo..jitni jaldi jaayenge utni jaldi humara kaam khatam hoga…
All the three leave the college premises… raj keeps driving & angad keeps guessing as to where they are heading too…
Angad :- raj kya hum kissi party mein jaa rahein hain kya ?????
{raj just gives him a look & gets back to driving & angad continues..}
angad :- agar kissi party mein jaa rahein hain tho mazaa aayega..waise bhi roz roz college jana is toooo boring….
At this point kavya cuts him & say :- angad tum kaunsa roz roz classes attend karthe ho..aadhe se zyada waqt tho college canteen mein rehthe ho ya phir college se hi gayab ho jaathe ho…
Angad :- tho phir tum kya expect karthe ho ?? main har din ke woh classes attend karoon… mujhse tho aisi cheezein expect hi mat karo…. Aur kavya mujhe tho ek cheez samaj nahi aathi ki tum woh sari boring classes attend kaise karthe ho….
Kavya :- angad main ab bhi kehtha hoon tu sudhar jaa yeh humare padayi ka akhri saal hain… uske baad joh chahe kar lena…….
Angad :- my dear brother kavya humein kabhi zindag i mein woh kaam harkhiz nahi karna chahiye jisse dil na pasand kare… aur padayi mere liye kuch aise hi hain… aur waise bhi MBA ke baad mujhe kaunsa tumhare aur raj ki tarah business suits pehan kar board meetings attend karni hain..mujhe tho ek rockstar singer ban na hain…samjheeeeeeeee……..
Kavya { haath jhorthe hue } :- samaj gaya hain… poori tarah se samaj gaya ki tu kabhi nahi sudhar saktha….
Angad aur kavya ki yeh cute fight chalthi hi rehthi hain jab raj enters a big house… angad & kavya wonder ki yeh kisska ghar hain…
Raj parks the car gets down & asks both kavya & angad also to get down…
Both get down…now kavya asks raj :- raj yeh kisska ghar hain ?? tu humein kahaan lekar aaya hain ???
Angad :- haan raj bata na yeh teri kaunsi girl friend ka ghar hain….
Raj listens to angad & mumbles to himself :- yeh mere kissi girlfriend ka ghar nahi hain….lekin shayad yeh mere life-partner ka ghar hain….{he smiles to himself & comes out of his thoughts when he hears angad & kavya}
Angad & kavya together say :- bol raj yeh kisska ghar hain aur tu humein yahaan kyun laya hain ???
Raj does not reply anything & keeps walking..
Kavya sulks & says :- raj isse tho achcha yeh hotha ki hum college mein rehthe aur issi bahane main aur angad un ladkiyon ka naam tho jaan lethe…..
Angad :- haan yaar…yeh baat tho kavya ne bilkul sahi kahi…na jaane tu humein yahaan kisske ghar mein lekar aaya hain..{he says looking around}
Yehi baat karthe karthe angad , raj & kavya reach the door & raj rings the bell… raj bell ek baar bajatha hain nobody comes..he rings the bell again…now the door opens….& it is opened by birju kaka…{yes guys it is khushi’s house}
Birju kaka :- jee kahiye aapko kiss se milna hain….
Raj :- jee woh mujhe khushi….
Birju kaka does not let him complete his sentence & says :- khushi bitiya tho ghar par nahi hain…woh college gayi hain…. agar aap chahe tho aap khushi bitiya ke behen se mil sakthe hain…
Raj :- main aapse yahii keh raha tha ki mujhe khushi ki behen se milna hain par aapne mujhe kehne hi nahi diya….{he says cutely & smiles }
Briju kaka :- maaf karna beta…mujhe laga ki tum khushi bitiya se milne aaye ho… chalo koi baat nahi aap andar aa jao main abhi prerna bitiya ko batakar aatha hoon…
Birju makes them sit in the hall… & then goes inside to inform prerna…
Kavya :- tho yeh khushi ka ghar hain…ab tu humein bata hum yahaan kyun aaye hain ??
Raj :- bas thoda sa intezaar karlo bohat jald jaan jaoge…
Angad :- waise ek baat bata tujhe khushi ke ghar ka patah kaise mila ??
Before raj could answer this question wahaan prerna aathi hain….
All the three see prerna & stand up….
Then raj speaks-up :- hello maam , mera naam raj hain… maine hi aapse thodi dhair pehle baat ki thi…
Aur yeh mere bhai kavya aur angad……
Kavya , angad smile & say :- hello….
Prerna :- oh..hello…main prerna sinha hoon…khushi ki badi behen…
All the three are still standing when prerna asks them to sit down…they sit down when prerna asks them…
Prerna :- tho batayiye main appki kya madat kar sakthi hoon ???
Raj :- {hesitates , fumbles then gathers all the courage & says } maam shayad aap jaanthi hi hongi ki kal college mein kya hua…
Prerna :- haan main jaanthi hoon…
Raj :- maam lekin kya aap jaanthi hain ki main woh ladka hoon jiska saath khushi ka jhagda hua tha…
Prerna is kind off shocked but then woh muskura dethi hain…yeh baat raj observe kartha hain aur poochtha hain..
Raj:- maam aap muskura kyun rahi hain…shayad aapne theek se suna nahi main woh ladka hoon jis ne khushi ki gaadi ki yeh halat ki hain… aisi halat mein tho aapko mujhse kehna chahiye tha ki main yahaan se chale jaun par aap tho muskura rahi hainn…
Prerna:- main mushkura isliye rahi hoon kyunke tum bilkul khushi ke jaise ho…mujhe tumhare attitude mein khushi ki jhalak dikh rahi hain…
Raj :- tho kya maam aap mujhse ghussa nahi hain..
Prerna :- dekho raj college mein joh kuch hua tumhare aur khushi ke beech hua…& I think khushi ab itni badi tho ho hi chuki hain ki usse apni har baat par meri madat ki tho zaroorat nahii hain…& I even think mujhe uske baton mein interfere nahi karna chahiye…. Tho ab tum log mujhse kaho ki main tumhare liye kya kar sakthi hoon…
Raj :- maam… woh darasal main khushi se apni harkat ke liye maafi maang na chahtha hoon aur is liye main chahtha hoon ki main uski gaddi repair karwa ke usse waise lautau jaise mere thod ne se pehle thi….{he says with a sweet smile}
Prerna :- well idea tho bura nahii hain….par tumhe kya lagtha hain khushi maan jayegi…
Raj :- patah nahi maam , I hope ki woh maan jaye , main uski taraf dosti ka haath badana chahtha hoon…
Prerna :- theek hain..tum apna luck try karo aur agar kissi bhi cheez ki zaroorat padi tho mujhse ya phir anjali aur kripa se pooch lena….
Angad aur kavya ke chehre par ek khushi aa jaathi hain when they hear anjali & kripa’s name…they are sure that yeh un ladkiyon ke naam ke jin ke liye woh
Log deewane hue jaa rahein hain….par phir bhi confirm karne ke liye angad poochtha hain….
Angad :- kripa , anjali kaun ???? {he has a fake confused expression on his face}
Before prerna could say raj casually says :- are wohi do ladkiyaan joh kal khushi ke saath thi…
Kavya & angad look at him surprised thinking that how does raj know their names…
Kavya whispers in raj’s ears :- tujhe kaise maloom ki yeh wohi ladkiyaan hain…. before raj could answer prerna says :- right raj..yeh wohi ladkiyaan hain..
After some more talk raj says :- achcha maam main ab hum chalthe hain…aur waise bhi humein bohat kaam hain humein gaadi repair karwane leke jaana hain…
Prerna :- theek hain , yeh lo gaadi ki chabbiyan…{she hand over the gaadi ki chabbi to raj}
Raj :- thanku maam , aur haan maam thanku once again kyunke aap mere kehne par apne kaam pe nahi gayi…
Prerna :- it’s alright..mujhe bas ek meeting ke liye jana tha aur woh abhi thodi dhair baad hi start hogi tho main ab nikloongi….
Then raj , angad & kavya are leaving when they
say :- bye maam..
prerna :- tells them bye..


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sun Nov 23, 2008 2:52 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 7 (Continuation)

after that prerna leaves for her meeting immediately & she
tells birju kaka that these three guys will be around & will take
khushi’s car……
now outside kavya & angad start showering their
questions on raj questions like :- how does he know the names of
khushi’s friends , if he knew it earlier then why din’t he tell them
before , how did he come to know khushi’s address..etc etc……
raj finally gets irritated by the continuous questions & says :- chupppppp…{or rather yells a bit }
both angad and kavya become quite in a single instance & look at raj…
raj
says :- chalo ab shuru se shuru karke mein tumhare saare saawalo ke
jawaab detha hoon.. aaj subah jab mein college pohanchcha tho maine
dekha ki khushi cab mein aayi hain naaki apni gaadi mein…tho tab main
samaj gaya ki shayad gaadi ab thak repair nahi hui ho….tho maine socha
kyun na main gaadi ko theek karwau……tho jab tum dono anjali aur kripa
ko dekh ne mein mugn the main college mein gaya aur wahaan se khushi ke
ghar ka patah aur number maloom kiya..aur tabhi maine un do ladkiyo ke
naam bhi jaan liye the….
Kavya :- agar tum tab hi unka naam jaan gaye the tho humein kyun nahi bataya ??
Raj:-
nahi actually maine tum dono ko yeh baat is liye nahi batayi kyunke
mujhe tum dono ki bechaini dekhkar mazaa aa raha tha…jis tarah tum dono
unke naam jaanne ke liye , unke ek jhalak dekhne ke liye thadap rahe
the tum dono tho bilkul devdas lag rahein the..
Raj starts laughing , giggling & starts running from there…
Angad
:- raj kya kaha tune hum tujhe hum devdas lag rahe the…ab main tujhe
nahi chod donga…angad & kavya start running after raj…aur raj apni
jaan bachakar bhaag raha tha….
After sometime theeno bhi thak jaathe
hain… & then raj says :- ab chalo guys gaadi ki repairing karwa ke
humein shaam thak college bhi pohanchna hain….
Angad :- haan chal…waise raj kripa kitna achcha naam hain hain…
Raj
:- achcha angad…kal thak tho yahii naam tujhe old fashion lagthe the
lekin aaj….wah wah tu tho bohat jald sudhar gaya…us ladki ki presence
hi yeh kaam kar gayi ab patah nahi jab woh tere zindagi mein aa jayegi
tho tera kya haal hoga….
Angad shies…..
Kavya { teases him &
says }:-are wah angad aaj pehli baar tu kissi ladki ke wajah se
sharmaya hain… kavya starts giggling..raj & kavya give themselves a
hi-fy…
Angad ko sharam aathi hain & he gets more embarrassed
& says :- haan haan kavya..tere bhi tho yahiin haal hain…. tu tho
aaj thak kissi bhi ladki ki taraf dekhtha nahi tha par ab anjali ko
dekhne ke baad tho tere hosh hi ud gaye hain….
Kavya :- anjali { he says dreamingly & starts thinking about her }
Raj :- ab tum dono apni prem kahaniyo se bahar niklo & let us get to work…. Chalooooo….
then the guys call a mechanic & take khushi’s car to the garage…

dusari
taraf khushi college mein bohat khush hothi hain… koi bhi un theen
ladkiyo ko kuch nahi kehtha I mean they don’t rag them as unhone dekha
tha ki kal khushi ne raj ki kya haalat banayi thi…
it is there break
time in college…. Khushi , kripa aur anjali college mein aise hi ghoom
rahe hothe hain.. jab anjali says :- guys mujhe library jana hain..ek
book collect karni hain…tum dono mein se koi chalega mere saath..
kripa :- naah anji mujhe tho bhook lagi hain main zara canteen jaakar aathi hoon…
anjali :- haan theek hain…aur khushi tu ??
khushi :- nahi anji tu jaa…main class jaa rahi hoon… kahiin jaane ka mann nahi kar raha hain…
anjali , kripa get worried hearing to this & ask :- kyun kya hua teri tabiyaat tho theek hain na khushi ???
khushi :- haan main bilkul theek hoon…bas aise hi mann nahi kar raha hain..
anjali :- theek hain..
then
anjali leaves to the library & kripa leaves to the canteen…..khushi
slowly walks through the corridor & then to the class….Khushi ka
chehra dekhkar koi bhi yeh baat patah laga saktha tha ki woh koi soch
mein thi…..
khushi goes to her class ,takes her seat & then
holds her head & starts talking to herself :- OH GOD.. yeh kya ho
raha hain mujhe..kyun mein kal se uska chehra ek pal ke liye bhi bhool
nahi paa rahi hoon…kyun har pal har waqt har gadi mujhe reh rehkar uski
yaad dila raha hain…. jabse mein college aayi hoon kyun meri nazarein
sirf ussi ko dhoond rahi hain…. main tho us insaan ko jaanthi bhi
nahii…tho phir kyun , kyun soch rahi hoon main uske bare mein , kyun
har taraf dekhkar yeh umeed hothi hain ki kahiin se tho us mr.attitude
ka chehra dikh jaye…us Raj Garewal ka chehra dikh jaye...
GOD..yeh
mujhe kya ho raha hain…kyun uska naam lethe hi dil ko ek ajeeb sa
sukoon miltha hain , uska naam mere chehre par ek halki si muskaan
laathi hain..
Mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hain ki raj woh shaks hain
jiska main najana kabse intezaar kar rahi hoon…mujhe aisa kyun lagtha
hain ki raj meri zindagi mein bohat emiyat rakhtha hain….kyun.. kahiin
mujhe raj se pyaar tho nahi ho gaya hain….. mujhe kuch samaj nahii aa
raha hain ki main karoon tho kya karoon…

Song in the bvackground:- {for khushi}

“Kyun aaj kal neend kam khwab zyada hain….
Lagta hai khuda ka koi naik irada hain….
Kal tha fakhir dil aaj shehzada hain…
Kya mujhe pyaar hain…aah….
Kaisa ghumaar hain…aah….
kya mujhe pyaar hain…aah….
Kaisa ghumaar hain…aah….
{she starts thinking about her & all the time she was with him}
Pathar ke in rasto pe….
Phoolon ki ek chaddar hain…
Jabse mile ho humko…
Badla har ek manzar hain…
{she thinks about the time when she first saw him at the signal}
Dekhoon jahaan main neele neele asmaan tale…
Rang naye naye hain jaise ghulthe hue….
Soye se khwab mere jaage tere vaasthe…
Tere khayalo se hain bheege mere raasthe…
{she thinks about the previous day jab woh barish ke bhoondo mein kissi ka ehsaas mehsoos karthi hain}
kya mujhe pyaar hain…aah….
Kaisa ghumaar hain…aah….
kya mujhe pyaar hain…aah….
Kaisa ghumaar hain…aah….
{she thinks about the time when she realized may be the feelings she has for raj is love}
Tum kyun chale aathe ho…
Har roz in khwabo mein…
{she thinks jab raat mein she got raj’s face in her thoughts}
Chupke se aa bhi jaao…
Ek din meri raahon mein…
{she suddenly imagines raj walking upto her & smiling }
Tere hi sapne andhero mein ujalo mein..
Koi nasha hain teri aankhon mein…
Tu mere khwabo mein jawaabo mein sawaalo mein…
{she thinks about the time when she was confused about the feelings she has for raj}
Har pal tum mere khayalon mein..
{she thinks about how she had been thinking of raj all the time}
kya mujhe pyaar hain…aah….
Kaisa ghumaar hain…aah….
kya mujhe pyaar hain…aah….
Kaisa ghumaar hain…aah….”

Phir
kashish comes out of her thoughts & thinks &am p;am p; says
shayad mere dil mein joh feelings raj ke liye hain woh pyaar nahi hain
sirf k infatuation hain then she hesitates & says lekin agar yeh
pyaar hain
tho ….khushi is in her thoughts whether what she feels
for raj is pyaar or not when khushi’s mobile starts ringing
continiously…khushi looks at the caller’s name & gets happy..
Khushi
picks up the call & starts talking :- kyun yaad aagayi meri…ab thak
kahaan the janaab aap… aapke call ka wait kar karke thak gayi main… tu
kaisa
hain ?? aur ab tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho ??
The caller :- khushi… main tho tab kuch bolunga jab tum mujhe baat karne ka mouka dogi…..
Khushi:- achcha achcha..ab tho bol…veerrrr….
Veer
:- khushi main bilkul theek hoon…sorry main tumhe do din se call karne
ki koshish kar raha hoon par kaam mein itna busy ho gaya tha aur upar
se yeh padayi…life badi hectic ho gayi hain…{actually veer is studying
law & also assiting a lawyer in London}
Khushi :- veer maine
tujhse kitni baar kaha hain ki wahaan apne kaam aur apne padayi ke
saath saath apne liye bhi thoda time nikal liya karo….. par tu hain ki
meri baat suntha hi nahi hain…..
Veer :- khushi yaar dekh ab tum tho meri badi behen ki jaisi baat karne lagi ho..
Khushi :- tho hoon na main teri badi behen….
Veer
:- haan tum meri sweet sis ho…lekin uske saath saath meri dost bhi
ho…tho please ab mujhe lecture na dena ki main apna khayal nahi rakhtha
waghaira waghaia… ab khushi yeh sab baatein chod aur mujhe batao
tumhari university kaisi hain ??
Khushi :- achcha hain…. main ,
krips aur anji yahaan ke mahaul mein adjust kar rahe hain….ya aisa
kahoon ki karne ki koshish kar rahe hain….
khushi baatein kar rahi
hothi hain par uska dil idhar udhar batak raha hotha hain , she is not
concentrating on what veer is telling..
veer observes that khushi is not talking totally & just answering in a yes , no that’s all….so he asks..
Veer :- khushi tum theek tho ho na….tumhe kya hua hain ??
Khushi :- kya veer..mujhe kya hona hain…main tho bilkul theek hoon…..aur tujhe kyun lagtha hain ki main theek nahii hoon…
Veer
:- khushi dekh na tabse main hi bakh bakh kiye jaa raha hoon aur tum
tho kuch nahi bol rahi ho… aur agar yeh normal instance hotha tho main
suntha aur tum bolthi…tho ab mujhe sachchi sachchi batao kya baat hain….
Khushi
:- veer darasal yeh baat hain ki humare college mein ek ladka hain raj
, & then khushi starts telling him everything that happened….
Veer
listens to the whole thing & says :- khushi us ladke ki itni himmat
ki woh aisi harkat kare woh bhi meri behen ke saath , ab main usse nahi
chod donga… main aur theen hafto mein wahaan aa raha hoon tab main us
ladke ko sabak sikhauga….
Khushi listening to veer’s words says :- nahi veer tum aisa kuch mat karna…
Veer {surprised}:- kyun main aisa kuch kyun naa
karoon ???{he questions }
khushi :- { confused } yeh tho main bhi nahi jaanthi…
veer :- kya matlab hain tumhara khushi ?? tum kya bol rahi ho ???
khushi :- veer main tumhe ek baat sach sach bataoon…
veer :- haan batao..
khushi:-
veer joh harkat kal raj ne ki uske baad mujhe uspe ghussa aana chahiye
par main chahkar bhi usse ghussa nahi ho paa rahi hoon… main chahkar
bhi usse apne khayalo se nikaal nahi paa rahi hoon…mujhe kuch samaj
nahi aa raha what I’am feeling…mujhe ek pal ke liye lagtha hain ki
kahiin yeh pyaar tho nahii…lekin agle hi pal mann mein yeh khayal aatha
hain ki main raj ko jaanthi hi kitna hoon usse pyaar karne ke liye..
lekin agar mere dil mein joh jazbaat raj ke liye hain woh pyaar nahi
tho phir kya hain…main kuch samaj nahi paa rahi hoon…
veer :- laughs at khushi’s confusion…
khushi :- kya veer main yahaan kuch samaj nahi paa rahi hoon aur tum ho ki meri is haalat par has rahe ho… {she says childishly}
veer
:- { stops laughing & says } achcha baba nahi hastha.. ab khushi
tum meri baat suno tum apne dimaak peh zor na daalo…just give it
sometime… I think thode waqt ke baad sab kuch saaf ho jayega aur tum
bhi sab kuch samaj logi aur phir there will be no confusion..
khushi:-
shayad tum theek keh rahe ho.. I’ll have to give my feelings some time
& then analyze what I’am going through , what I’am feeling…
veer :- now that’s like my sister….
Khushi:- achcha ab mujhe yeh bata how is everything going on there ??
Veer :- sab kuch achcha jaa raha hain…lekin mujhe tumhari , jiji , anji aur krips ki bohat yaad aa rahi hain…
Khushi :- hmmm.. tu yahaan aa kab raha hain ??
Veer :- shayad theen ya chaar hafthe ke baad..abhi thak kuch theek se keh nahi saktha…
Just then khushi sees that anjali ,kripa have come in the class & also she hears the bell ring…
Khushi:- achcha veer ab meri class hain main phone rakhthi hoon..
Veer :- theek hain..tum apna khayal rakhna..byee…
Khushi :- haan bye…tu bhi apna khayal rakhna…
Then khushi keeps the phone & goes to anjali & kripa….
Yeh tho hui anjali , kripa aur khushi ki baat ab zara dekhthe hain ki raj , angad aur kavya ka haal kitna behaal hain….
Yeh
theeno baithkar gaadi repair karwa rahe hain..aur raj mechanic ke har
ek kaam ko supervise kar raha hain… angad aur kavya dono ko bhook lagi
hothi aur raj hain ki wahaan se hilne ka naam hi nahi le raha
tha….finally tang aakar angad kehtha hain….
Angad :- raj ab tu
humara saath chal raha hain ki nahii… mujhe aur kavya ko bhook lagi
hain….tu bhi chalna hum kuch kha ke aathe hain…yeh log apna kaam
jaanthe hain tumhe yahaan baithne ki koi zaroorat nahii…{he says
pointing towards the mechanics}
Kavya :- haan raj chal na….
Raj:- nahi yaar tum log jao…main nahi aa raha aur waise bhi mujhe bhook nahi hain…aur mujhe yeh kaam bhi dekhna hain…
Kavya :- lekin raj….
Raj cuts him in between & says :- no lekin wekin tum log jao… mujhe bhook nahi hain…
Angad :- are you sure ??
Raj :- haan you go ahead..main yahiin hoon…
Finally kavya & angad give up as they are not able to convice raj & they leave…
Raj yahaan akele baite khushi ke bare mein sochne lagtha hain…uski masoomiyat , uska ghussa , uska
Chehra
pe hasi , uska attitide… uski har ek ada raj ko khushi ka aur bhi
deewana kar rahi thi….. woh jitna khushi ke bare mein soch raha tha
utna hi usse yakeen hothe chala jaatha hain ki khushi hi woh shaks hain
joh uske liye banayi gayi hain….



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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sun Nov 23, 2008 2:53 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 7 (Continuation)

Song in the bvackground:- {for raj}

“ Pal pal dil ke pass tum rehthe ho…..
Pal pal dil ke pass tum rehthe ho……...
Jeevan meethi pyaas yeh kehthe ho…..….
Pal pal dil ke pass tum rehthe ho……..…..
{ he imagines khushi standing in the middle of the road looking at him & smiling}
Har shaam aankhon par…Tera aanchal leharaye…..
Har raat yaadon ki….Baraat le aaye….
Main saans letha hoon…Teri khushboo aathi hain….
{he thinks she is very close to him & he is holding her by her waist}
Ek mehka mehka sa….Paighaam laathi hain…
Meri dil ki dhadkan bhi….Tere geet gaathi hain…..
{he imagines as if he is hugging khushi}
Pal pal dil ke pass tum rehthe ho……...
Kal tujhko dekha tha…Maine apne aagan mein…
Jaise keh rahi thi tum….Mujhe band lo bhandhan mein…
{he thinks about the time at his home when he was in khushi’s thoughts }
Yeh kaisa rishtha hain…Yeh kaise sapne hain…
Beghane hothe bhi…Kyun lagthe apne hain…
{he imagines that he & khushi & walking hand in hand slowly}
Main soch mein rehtha hoon…darr darr ke kehtha hoon..
Pal pal dil ke pass tum rehthe ho……...
{he imagines as if he is going down on his kness & proposing to khushi}
Tum sochogi kyun itna main tumse pyaar karoon…
Tum samjhogi deewana main bhi ikraar karoon…
{ he imagines that they are out having a candle light dinner & she is smiling , hitting his fore-head lightly}
Deewano ki yeh baatein..deewane jaanthe hain…..
Jalne mein kya maza hain…parwane jaanthe hain..
Tum yunhi jalathe rehna aakar khayalo mein…..
Pal pal dil ke pass tum rehthe ho……...
Jeevan meethi pyaas yeh kehthe ho…..….
{he imagines as if they both are playing in the rain & dancing in the rain}
Pal pal dil ke passsssssssssss
tum rehthe ho……...”

suddenly
he hears somebody calling out his name…he comes out of his imagination
& sees that kavya & angad are back… he then diverts his
thoughts from khushi & starts talking to angad & kavya…
after
sometime the mechanic says that the work is done…raj pays off the bill
amount then he tells angad & kavya to take his car & he says he
would get khushi’s car…. He also says that they have to be quick as the
classes will be over in a short period of time….
All the three rush towards their college…. & reach well before in time…..
Now
they keep waiting in the parking lot….raj sees khushi , anjali &
kripa coming towards the parking lot {they are coming there because if
they have to reach the university gate they have to go through the
parking lot}
Raj immediately keeps the teddy –bear & gift in
khushi’s car & leaves the place with angad & kavya…raj stands
by his car & is observing khushi intently…
Khushi , anjali aur
kripa baat karthe hue jaa rahe the…..jab anjali ki nazar khushi ki
gaadi mein padthi hain joh ki parking lot mein parked thi…
She stops kripa & khushi leaving them confused…
Khushi:- kya hua anji.. tum rukh kyun gayi…
Anjali points to khushi & kripa the car…
Kripa :- khushi yeh tho teri gaadi hain…yeh yahaan kaise aayi…
Khushi { confused } :- hain tho yeh meri hi gaadi..par main nahi jaanthi yeh yahaan kaise aayi…
Anjali:- achcha chalo chalkar dekhthe hain..
All the three get near the car…. Anjali finds the
teddy-bear & a card with a note attached to it which is addressed to khushi….
Anjali :- { points at the doll , the note & says } khushi is pe tera naam likha hain.. dekh le….
Before
khushi could see the note kripa opened the other gift & showed it
to khushi :- khushi yeh dekh yeh bhi tere liye “FRIEND’S FOREVER”….
Khushi {stares at the gift & says } :- yeh kissne bhejha hain..
Now
anjali gives the teddy & the note in khushi’s hands…..khushi opens
the note & reads it :- main jaantha hoon meri ghalthi maafi ke
qabil nahi hain.. phir bhi main umeed kartha hoon ki tum meri dosti ka
haath kabool karoge aur mujhe maaf kardo….wadaa kartha hoon ki main is
dosti ke rishthe ko kabhi tootne nahi doonga…par is sab ke liye pehle
tumhe mujhe maaf karna hoga & meri dosti ka haath sweekar karna
hoga… sorry khushi…I’am very sorry ….kya tum meri katha maaf karogi….
Raj …

Khushi
is surprised that it was done by raj & she looks up when she hears
raj says…{she looks up & sees that raj is holding his ears very
cutely}
Raj:- tho bolo khushi kya tum meri katha maaf karogi… kya tum mujhse dosti karogi…
Khushi
looks at him surprised as she never expected raj to do such a thing…raj
aage aatha hain apna haath aage kartha hain aur kehtha hain :- mujhse
dosti karogi…
Khushi kuch pal ke liye bas raj ko dekhe jaa rahi
hothi hain phir uske chehre pe halki si muskaan aathi hain woh dheere
se apna haath aage karke raj ke haath se milathi hain…
Raj:- thanks khushi..thanks a lot…agar tum mujhe maaf na karthi tho I would have felt very guilty…
Khushi :- koi baat nahi….bas bhool jao us baat ko woh baat kal tha joh bheet chukka hain lekin aaj tho hum dost hain na….
Raj :- haan right…. Waise khushi yeh hain angad aur kavya..mere bhai cum mere best friend’s
Khushi unko hi bolthi hain..phir khushi says :- aur yeh dono mere best friend’s hain kripa aur anjali….
Ab yeh log baatein karna shuru kar dethe hain…
Khushi :- {says to raj} raj yeh gifts tum lekar aaya ho kya ??
Raj :- haan kyun ?? tumhe pasand nahi aaya…
Khushi :- { hugs her teddy tightly & says } nahi mujhe bohat pasand aaya… thanks raj..
Raj :- ab tho hum dost hain na…tho dosti mein no thanks no sorry…samjhi…….
Khushi:-
theek hain main sorry aur thanks nahi bolungi lekin tum bhi nahi
bologe…waise tum meri gaddi kahaan se le aaye..who bhi theek karwa ke
???
Raj :- woh actually hum tumhare ghar gaye the.. {& then he tells about they meeting prerna etc etc }
Khushi :- aur yeh sab tumne kyun kiya ??
Raj :- woh maine tumhara dil dhukaya tha na…is liye…socha ki tumhe is tarah se manaoo…
Khushi:- that’s sooo sweet of you raj…{khushi ke is compliment par raj zara sa sharmatha hain}
Kuch dhair aur yeh log baatein karthe hain..phir they leave for home…..
Ek
taraf jab khushi ghar pohanchthi hain tho bohat khush hothi hain aur
dusari taraf raj bhi bada khush hotha hain…..both finish their dinner
in their houses & are in their room….thinking about each other….
Khushi
raj ke diye hue teddy bear ko apne haath mein hi rakhthi hain aur usse
baatein karthi hain {she is sitting on her bed}:- tum mere liye bohat
special ho jaanthe ho kyun woh isliye ki raj ne diya hain tumhe mujhe….
Raj…..kal jiska naam thak mein lena nahi chahthi thi aaj uska yeh tofha
mere liye itna special kaise ho gaya…{she questions hersekf} raj jaisa
bhi hain bohat bohat bohat bohat achcha hain… she hugs the doll even
more tightly & then closes her eyes…..
Yahaan raj ke kamre mein
raj ka haal bada behaal tha.. woh reh rehkar apna haath dekh kar
mushkura raha hain…he remembers the moment jab khushi ne usse haath
milaya…..he just keeps staring at him hand & smiles sweetly &
says :- main apne aap se yeh wadaa kartha hoon khushi ki agar main
zindagi bhar ke liye kissi ka haath thamoonga tho woh sirf aur sirf
tumhara haath hoga khushi…sirf tumhara…


Song in the background :-{for khushi & raj}

“Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…….
Mitwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…….
Love will find its ways……..
Janiyeeeee heeriyeeeeeeeee……..
Love will find its ways…….
Janiyeeeee Heeriyeeeeeeeee……..
Mere maan yeh batade tu…….
Kisi aur he chala hai tu…..
Kya paya nahi tune…..
Kya dhund raha hai tu…….
Jo hai ankhaeee……
Jo hai un sunheeeee…….
Woh baat kya hai baata…….
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……….
kahe dhadkane tujhse kya……
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……..
Yeh khud se to na tu chupa…….
Mere maan yeh batade tu……….
Kisi aur he chala hai tu…….
Kya paya nahi tune……..
Kya dhund raha hai tu…….
Jo hai ankhaeee…….
Jo hai un sunheee……..
Woh baat kya hai baata……..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…….
kahe dhadkane tujhse kya…..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…….
Yeh khud se to na to chupa…..
Love will find its ways……..
Janiyeeeee heeriyeeeeeeeee….
Love will find its ways……..
Janiyeeeee heeriyeeeeeeeee….
Jeevan nagar main……
nagar main nagar main…….
Prem nagar main…….
Nagar main nagar main…..
Jeevan nagar main………
Prem nagar main……..
Aaya nazar main……
Jabse koi hain…….
Tu sochta hain……..
Tu pucccchta hain……..
Jiski kami thi……
Kya woh wahi hai…..
Haan yeh wohi hain…….
Haan yeh wohi hainnnnnnnnnnnnn…….
Tu ek pyaasa aur………
Yeh nadi haiin…
Kahi he nahi isko……
To khul ke bata yeh……..
Jo hai ankhaeee……..
Jo hai unsunheee…….
Who baat kya hai baata……..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…………
Kahe dhadkane tujhse kya…..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh………
Yeh khud se to na to chupa…….
Oooooooooohhhhhh………
Teri nigaheh……..
Pagal he rahe…..
Par tu yeh soche……
Jayu ya na jayu…….
Yeh zindagi jo……
Hey na naachi to……
kyun bediyoon main…..
Main nahi pa hoon…….
Preet ki ki dhun par…..
Naach re pagallllll……
Udtha agar hai……..
Udhne de yeh anchalll……
Kahe koi…..
Apne ko aise tarasaye………
Jo hai ankhaeee……
Jo hai un sunheee…….
Who baat kya hai baata……
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……………
Kahe dhadkane tujhse kya……..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……..
Yeh khud se to na to chupa…….
Mere maan yeh batade tu………
Kisi aur he chala hai tu……….
Kya paya nahi tune………
Kya dhund raha hai tu……..
Love will find its ways…….
Janiyeeeee heeriyee……
Love will find its ways…..
Janiyeeeee heeriyee…….
Love will find its ways….
Janiyeeeee heeriyee…..
Love will find its ways…….”

Chaliye guys yahaan yeh gana khatam hotha hain aur dil se dil thak part 7 bhi..i hope all of you liked it…

Ab
dekhne ke liye ki in sab ki zindagiyaan aage kaise badthi hain , kya
raj aur khushi ka rishtha dosti se aage badega ya phir is dosti mein
darrar pad jayega… prerna apne jeevan saathi se kaise milegi ….etc etc
jaanne ke liye wait kijiye for the next part of dil se dil thak… aur
haan guys next part mein shayad I’ll introduce tanya’s character…..

Please post your comments , compliments & suggestions…me will be waiting for them eagerly….

Take care…….
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee……

love forever
Rajeev

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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:05 pm

hey suri sweetehart gr888 FF loved it completely!!! its a very different one 4 sure!! it started off as the present and now going in2 flashback!! very intresting surely!!! cnt wait 2 read wot happens!! and am loving the flashback scenes between raj n khushui!! its fggoing gr88!!! that was soo cute wen he gives her the teddy and has her car fixed!!! loved these parts!! do updae soon jaan!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Wed Dec 24, 2008 6:53 pm

rajeevaamna4eva wrote:
hey suri sweetehart gr888 FF loved it completely!!! its a very different one 4 sure!! it started off as the present and now going in2 flashback!! very intresting surely!!! cnt wait 2 read wot happens!! and am loving the flashback scenes between raj n khushui!! its fggoing gr88!!! that was soo cute wen he gives her the teddy and has her car fixed!!! loved these parts!! do updae soon jaan!!!!

summi dear no thankoo yaar...me fulltoo khush that you like the part.. i hope tumko agge kii kahani bhi pasand aaye.... i'll surely continue soon.... Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:14 pm

“DIL SE DIL THAK :- PART 8”


Ek taraf jab khushi ghar pohanchthi hain tho bohat khush hothi hain aur dusari taraf raj bhi bada khush hotha hain…..both finish their dinner in their houses & are in their room….thinking about each other….
Khushi raj ke diye hue teddy bear ko apne haath mein hi rakhthi hain aur usse baatein karthi hain {she is sitting on her bed}:- tum mere liye bohat special ho jaanthe ho kyun woh isliye ki raj ne diya hain tumhe mujhe…. Raj…..kal jiska naam thak mein lena nahi chahthi thi aaj uska yeh tofha mere liye itna special kaise ho gaya…{she questions hersekf} raj jaisa bhi hain bohat bohat bohat bohat achcha hain… she hugs the doll even more tightly & then closes her eyes…..
Yahaan raj ke kamre mein raj ka haal bada behaal tha.. woh reh rehkar apna haath dekh kar mushkura raha hain…he remembers the moment jab khushi ne usse haath milaya…..he just keeps staring at him hand & smiles sweetly & says :- main apne aap se yeh wadaa kartha hoon khushi ki agar main zindagi bhar ke liye kissi ka haath thamoonga tho woh sirf aur sirf tumhara haath hoga khushi…sirf tumhara…


Song in the background :-{for khushi & raj}

“Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…….
Mitwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…….
Love will find its ways……..
Janiyeeeee heeriyeeeeeeeee……..
Love will find its ways…….
Janiyeeeee Heeriyeeeeeeeee……..
Mere maan yeh batade tu…….
Kisi aur he chala hai tu…..
Kya paya nahi tune…..
Kya dhund raha hai tu…….
Jo hai ankhaeee……
Jo hai un sunheeeee…….
Woh baat kya hai baata…….
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……….
kahe dhadkane tujhse kya……
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……..
Yeh khud se to na tu chupa…….
Mere maan yeh batade tu……….
Kisi aur he chala hai tu…….
Kya paya nahi tune……..
Kya dhund raha hai tu…….
Jo hai ankhaeee…….
Jo hai un sunheee……..
Woh baat kya hai baata……..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…….
kahe dhadkane tujhse kya…..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…….
Yeh khud se to na to chupa…..
Love will find its ways……..
Janiyeeeee heeriyeeeeeeeee….
Love will find its ways……..
Janiyeeeee heeriyeeeeeeeee….
Jeevan nagar main……
nagar main nagar main…….
Prem nagar main…….
Nagar main nagar main…..
Jeevan nagar main………
Prem nagar main……..
Aaya nazar main……
Jabse koi hain…….
Tu sochta hain……..
Tu pucccchta hain……..
Jiski kami thi……
Kya woh wahi hai…..
Haan yeh wohi hain…….
Haan yeh wohi hainnnnnnnnnnnnn…….
Tu ek pyaasa aur………
Yeh nadi haiin…
Kahi he nahi isko……
To khul ke bata yeh……..
Jo hai ankhaeee……..
Jo hai unsunheee…….
Who baat kya hai baata……..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh…………
Kahe dhadkane tujhse kya…..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh………
Yeh khud se to na to chupa…….
Oooooooooohhhhhh………
Teri nigaheh……..
Pagal he rahe…..
Par tu yeh soche……
Jayu ya na jayu…….
Yeh zindagi jo……
Hey na naachi to……
kyun bediyoon main…..
Main nahi pa hoon…….
Preet ki ki dhun par…..
Naach re pagallllll……
Udtha agar hai……..
Udhne de yeh anchalll……
Kahe koi…..
Apne ko aise tarasaye………
Jo hai ankhaeee……
Jo hai un sunheee…….
Who baat kya hai baata……
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……………
Kahe dhadkane tujhse kya……..
Mitwaaaaaaaahhh……..
Yeh khud se to na to chupa…….
Mere maan yeh batade tu………
Kisi aur he chala hai tu……….
Kya paya nahi tune………
Kya dhund raha hai tu……..
Love will find its ways…….
Janiyeeeee heeriyee……
Love will find its ways…..
Janiyeeeee heeriyee…….
Love will find its ways….
Janiyeeeee heeriyee…..
Love will find its ways…….”

Issi tarah raj aur khushi ki raat ek dusare ke khayalo mein , ek dusare ke sapno mein guzar jaathi hain…
Agle din subah raj aur khushi ke liye bohat alag hothi hain.. dono ko hi aisa lagtha hain ki aaj ki subah baki dino se bohat alag hain unhe is din ki shuruwaat mein ek ajeeb si khushi mehsoos ho rahi thi.. lekin raj , khushi yeh baat nahi samaj paa rahe the ki joh ho raha hain kya ho raha aur woh joh bhi ho raha hain kyun ho raha hain…
Chaliye yeh ho gayi dono ki description ab dekhthe hain khushi ke kya haal hain….
Sinha house :- khushi’s room…
Khushi has already woken-up… she is not yet ready for the college.. woh apne cup-board ke pass rukhkar apne saare kapde dekh rahi hothi hain..aur ek ek kapde ko bed par daal rahi hothi hain..with total amount of frustration & irritation….
Tabhi prerna kamre mein enter hothi hain & she is thinking that khushi is still sleeping..toh woh aathe hi kehthi hain…
Prerna :- khushi…chal uth jaa… warna tujhe college jaane ke liye dhair ho jayegi…. she says all this & still does not see the bed or khushi but then sees the bed finally.. prerna dekhthi hain ki khushi is not on the bed & bed par saare kapde bikhre pade hue hain… then she sees khushi standing near her cup-board & having a sad irritated face expression… prerna walks to her….
Prerna :- khushi yeh sab kya hain ????
khushi :- { who is still checking & throwing the clothes on the bed irritatedly says } kya…kya hain jiji…
Prerna :- ajj patah nahi tujhe kya ho gaya hain.. tu aisi harkatein kyun kar rahi hain ??
Khushi :- kya harketein main kuch samjhi nahi ??
Prerna :- are dekh teri pehli harkat aaj tu mere jagane se pehli hi ut gayi….roz tho yeh haal hotha hain ki agar main tujhe jagane aa bhi gayi tho tu itni aasani se tho nahi utthi aur aaj dekh…. Aur dusari harkat teri yeh hain joh tu abni kar rahi hain {she points out to khushi’s hand which is full of clothes} ab tu patah nahi in kapdo ka kya kar rahi hain ya phir tu karna kya chahthi hain in kapdo ke saath….. main tabse dekhe jaa rahi hoon tu apne kapde cup-board se nikal kar bed par phaik de rahi hain.. meri tho kuch bhi samaj hi nahii aa raha hain… ab tum mujhe batao ki baat kya hain akhir tumhe kya chahiye aur waise tu dhoond kya rahi hain ?? bata mujhe….
Khushi :- { having a childish face says } jiji dekhiye na mujhe college ko pehen ne ke liye ek bhi dhang ka dress nahi mil raha hain….
Prerna looks at her surprised & says :- khushi tu theek tho hain na…{she asks in a concerned expression}
Khushi :- mujhe kya hona hain jiji..main tho ek dum theek hoon..waise aap ne mujhse yeh sawaal kyun poocha…
Prena :- {smiles & says} dekh na khushi yahaan par kitne aache kapde hain..{she takes a top from her hand & says } yeh dekh yeh top kitni achchi hain..{she takes one more chudidaar from her hand & says } yeh dekh yeh bhi tho kitni achchi hain..aur tu kehthi hain ki tujhe koi dhang ke kapde nahi mil rahein hain college ke liye..
Khushi :- {sulks & says } jiji in mein se mujhe kuch bhi pasand nahi hain..
Prerna :- khushi..yeh tu kya keh rahi hain..yeh sab kapde tho tune kudh pasand karke karide hain.. kal thak tho tumhe yeh kapde bohat achche lagthe the phir aaj kya hua ?????
Khushi :- jiji bas aise hi..mujhe in mein se kuch pehen ne ka jee nahi kar raha hain…
Prerna :- wohi tho main jaanna chahthi hoon kyun khushi ??
Khushi { has a cute look , shrugs her shoulders & says}:- patah nahi…
Prerna sees khushi’s childish behavior smiles
Prerna :- achcha khushi tu ek kaam kar tu ajj ke liye mix & match karke kuch pehen le….
Khushi :- jijiiiiiiiii………..you are too good.. aap sahi keh rahi hain main mere kapde mix & match karke koi aisa combination pehan sakthi hoon joh aaj thak maine kabhi pehni hi nahi…
Prerna:- absolutely…
Khushi:- jiji you are just the best…. Khushi says this & hugs prerna…
Prerna then hits khushi on her fore-head lightly…& says :- pagal…{khushi smiles & prerna continues} chal ab tu jaa aur kapde decide kar..warna agar tumne jaldi nahi ki tho tum shaam thak ka waqt logi yeh decide karne mein ki main kya combination ke kapde pehannu…aur tum college bhi nahi jaa paogi….
Khushi agrees & then khushi starts seeing the clothes while prerna goes to khushi’s bed & starts arranging the clothes properly…
Prerna :- khushi waise main tujhse ek sawaal poochongi tho kya tu uska sahi sahi jawaab degi….{ she says while she is folding the clothes properly}
Khushi :- jee poochiye na..aapko joh poochna hain woh poochiye main aapke har sawaal ka jawaab doongi… aur haan jiji aap ek baat yaad rakhiye app jab chahe mujhse kuch bhi pooch sakthi hain aapko mujhse koi sawaal karne ke liye meri izzazat ki katahi zaroorat nahi…..aur agar aapne agli baar phir mujhse izzazat maangi tho main aapse naraaz ho jaungi…samjhi aap..{she questions}
Prerna :- haan baba..main samaj gayi…main poori tarah se samaj gayi..agli baar bhool ke bhi tujhse izzazat nahi maangoongi…. Theek hain…..
Khushi :- haan theek hain…
{prerna looks at khushi & smiles affectionately}
When khushi says :- achcha ab aap yeh sab baatein chodiye aur bataiye ki aap mujhse kya pooch na chahthi thi…
Prerna :- main tho bas yeh poochna chahthi thi ki tum aaj kissi se milne jaa rahi ho kya ???
Khushi :- milne matlab…{she asks}
prerna :- milne matlab…as in you milne matlab…{prerna raises a eye-brow at khushi}
Khushi :- { khushi pretty well knows ki prerna kya kehne ki koshish kar rahi hain phir bhi khushi kehthi hain} as in…what…main kuch samjhi nahi..
Prerna :- { holds her ear twists it & says } sab samajthi hain tu…phir bhi natak karthi hain..
Khushi:- ahh..ahhhhh.jiji…
Khushi apna kaan prerna ki pakad se chudathi hain aur kehthi hain :- kya samajthi hoon jiji main..aap kya keh rahi hain mujhe kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha hain..
Khushi starts walking off when prerna stops her by calling out for her :- khushi…{khushi turns around & looks at prerna } achcha ab chal main tujhse yeh sawaal sedhe sedhe karthi hoon.. kya tum ajj apne Mr. Right se milne jaa rahi ho??
Khushi :- {shocked says } what….jiji..yeh kya keh rahi hain aap…
Prerna :- haan dekh na..aaj tu mujhe bilkul badli badli hui nazar aa rahi hain..teri aankhon mein joh khushi , joh ek alag chamak mein dekh rahi hoon woh aaj thak maine kabhie nahi dekha… aur isliye mujhe lagtha hain kiiiiiiiiiii..{prerna stops}
Khushi :- { is blushing a bit & says } ki kya jiji ???
Prerna:- kii shayad tere dil peh kissi ne dastak diya ho… shayad tujhe kissi ne pyaar ka ehsaas dilaya ho….
Khushi is still blushing & says nahi jiji aisi koi baat nahi hain….
Prerna :- chehra dekha hain apna tune…. Zara aayine mein dekh le ki tu kitna blush kar rahi hain… aur waise tu yeh baatein chod hi de kyunke tere chehre se saaf dikh raha hain ki tujhe pyaar ho gaya hain… achcha chal ab tu jaldi se taiyaar ho jaa aur neeche aaja breakfast karne…
Khushi :- ji..jiji…main bas kuch dhair mein aathi hoon.. aap jayiye..
Prerna starts walking out of the room she looks back at khushi who is still in all smiles & is blushing.. prerna says :- waise khushi mujhe aaj ek baat patah chali hain….
Khushi :- kya jiji…
Prerna:- woh yeh ki tujhe I mean Khushi Sinha ko sharmana bhi aatha hain…
After saying this prerna quickly leaves the room…
Aur khushi wahiin khadi hothi hain aur kehthi hain :- yeh jiji bhi na....
Then khushi goes & stands infront of mirror…she sees that woh sach hi mein blush kar rahi thi aur uska cheek is all pink…..khushi aayine ke saamne khadi hi hothi hain jab usse raj ka image mirror mein dekhthi hain…. she is happy at the same time confused to see raj….she turns back to see but she does not find anybody there….raj’s image vanishes from the mirror as well.. khushi just smiles & then gets back to get ready for the college..



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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:17 pm

Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 8 (Continuation)

Yeh tho hain humari khushi ki baat ab dekhthe hain ki raj ki kya
haalat hain.. raj apne kamre mein hain he is getting ready for the
college….
Raj is getting ready aur woh bohat khush hain aur gana gun guna raha hain :- thoda sa pyaar hua hain..thoda hain baaki….
Raj
ko apne aas pass ki duniyaan ka koi patah nahi hotha.. woh bas gana
gununathe hue…apne kaam kartha jaa raha tha.. aur woh apne kamre mein
har jagah khushi ko khade hue dekhtha hain… then he brushes off the
thoughts aur starts combing his hair…. woh bhi gana gungunathe hue ab
raj is singing :- yun tho hum tum milne ko milthe rahe par kyun aaj
aisa laga….koi mil gaya..…. Tabhi raj ke kamre mein bouji enter karthe
hain aur dekhthe hain ki raj bada khush lag raha hain..
Bouji continues the song :- haan kaun mil gaya…
Bouji :- bata na puttar kaun mil gaya ?? { he questions }
Raj :- kaun mil gaya bouji..koi bhi tho nahi mila…
Bouji says :- wah puttar tu mujhe hi chakma dene ki koshish kar raha hain…kyun….ab bata mujhe…
Raj :- kya bataoon bouji batane ko tho kuch hain hi nahii…
Bouji:-
raj seedhe seedhe tarike se mujhe bata aaj kya baat hain tu bada khush
lag raha hain aur gana bhi gunguna raha hain…woh bhi koi mil gaya
wali.. {bouji has a mischevious smile on his face} kya baat hain..bata
mujhe {he raises a eye-brow at raj & then sits on the bed }
Ab bhi raj kuch nahi kehtha aur apne kaam mein busy hotha hain…
Jab bouji kethe hain :- waise raj..mujhe tere bare mein koi baat patah chali hain..
Raj looks at bouji confused & asks :- mere bare mein.. kya baat…kaunsi baat….
Bouji
:- woh mujhe yeh baat patah chali hain ki tune kal kissi ek ladki ke
liye kya naam hain uska { he thinks & says} haan khushi…
Khushi
ka naam bouji ke mooh se sunthe hi raj apne saare kaamo ko chodkar
stares at bouji ki akhir bouji ko yeh baat kaise patah chali…
& bouji continues :- tune kal us khushi ke liye kuch gifts khareede….kyun…
raj
bas aake bouji ke pass kneel-down kartha hain aur kehtha hain :- bouji
woh darasal aisi koi baat nahi hain.. mujhe bas us ladki ko sorry kehna
tha tho isliye maine gifts kareedhe…
bouji :- kya tu sure hain bas itni hi baat hain ??
raj :- haan bouji..main tho bas sorry kehna chahtha tha… bas itni hi baat hain…
{raj se saari baatein bouji se nazrein neechi rakhkar kehtha hain}
tab
bouji says :- dekh raj aaj thak tune na hi jhoot bola hain aur na hi
jhoot bolna seekha hain.. tho ab tu mujhe saari sachayi bata…
raj looks up at bouji & says :- sachchayi tho main bhi nahi jaantha bouji…
bouji :- kya matlab..??
raj
:- bouji woh ladki khushi ko dekhkar dil mein kuch hone lagtha
hain..jab bhi usse dekhtha hoon jee kartha hain usse hi dekhtha jaun..
mujhe aisa lagtha hain ki uske chehre ki ek hasi ke liye main kuch bhi
kar saktha hoon…yahaan thak ki main apni jaan bhi de saktha hoon… mujhe
aisa kyun lagtha hain ki agar usse koi takleef pohanche tho usse kayi
zyada dard mujhe mehsoos hoga….main kuch samaj nahi paa raha hoon ki
mujhe kya ho raha hain…kabhi kabhi tho mujhe lagtha hain ki joh
feelings mere dil mein khushi ke liye hain woh pyaar hain…lekin agle hi
pal mujhe yeh khayal aatha hain ki khushi se mile mujhe tho ab bas
theen hi din hue hain aur inti jaldi pyaar kaise ho saktha hain…mujhe
kuch bhi samaj nahii aa raha hain ki mujhe kya hue hain…..bouji.. {he
says with a confused look on his face }
bouji :- { smiles at raj’s confusion & says } oye…khote de puttar main tujhe batatha hoon ki tujhe kya hua hain..
raj :- kya hua hain bouji mujhe ????
bouji :- simple si baat hain raj…tujhe us ladki khushi se pyaar ho gaya hain…samjha tu…
raj
:- {again with a confused expression asks } lekin bouji mujhe aur
khushi ko mile tho bas theen hi din hue hain… aur in theen dino mein
pehle din hum dono mein ladayi hui dusare din dosti hui..aur aaj teesra
din hain..aur mere feelings pyaar kaise ho saktha hain ???
bouji
:- oye..tu tho ek dum ulla da patta hain… pyaar ke hone ke liye 3 din
kya 3 second bhi kaafi hain.. pyaar kiya nahi jaatha pyaar tho bas ho
hi jaatha hain.. insaan chahe na chahe pyaar tho ho hi baiththa
hain…aur haan pyaar peh kissi ka koi bas nahi chaltha pyaar tho e k
aisa hawa ka jhonka hain joh agar kissi ko choo jaye tho woh insaan
bina kuch soche bina kuch samjhe us hawa ke jhonke ke saath udtha chala
jaatha hain……samjha tu…ya ab bhi koi aur baat samjhaoon tujhe main….
raj :- { sighs in relief , smiles & says } haan bouji ab main samaj gaya….
Bouji :- waise puttar yeh khushi dikhthi kaisi hain ???
Raj :- khushiiiiii…………{raj starts getting flashes of khushi’s face , her smile aur woh bouji ko koi jawaab nahi detha..}
Bouji
:- {brings him out of his thoughts & says } ab khushi ke sapne
dekhna chod aur bata mujhe woh dikhthi kaisi hain ???
Raj :-
khushi bohat hi zyada ahchi hain.. bohat pyaari hain… woh bohat masoom
hain…kabhi kabhi lagtha hain bohat ghussa karthi hain..bohat ghussa
hain us mein..{raj thinks about the time jab khushi ne apni gaadi ke
glass thod diya..& then he continues}lekin kuch bhi ho bohat hi
masoom hain..{he thinks how she hugged the teddy} aur in short woh
bohat hi achchi hain…..
Bouji asks :- tho matlab woh is ghar ki bahu banne ke kabil hain…
Raj joh ki bouji ki baat ko sun nahi raha tha he was still in khushi’s thoughts says abruptly :- haannnnnnnn..
Then he suddenly realized what bouji had asked he sees bouji who is in all smiles..
Raj
says :- kya bouji abhi tho mile hain…pyaar ka izhaar tho hone dijiye
phir hum shaddi ke bare mein sochenge…patah nahi humari zindagi humein
aage kya rang dikhayegi..humein kaunse modh par le jayegi.. main tho
yeh bhi nahi jaantha ki khushi ke dil mein mere liye kya jazbaat hain…
aur woh mujhse pyaar nahi karthi ho tho ???{ he says with a dara hua
expression}
Bouji :- oye..puttar…tu daartha kyun hain… ek baat tu
hamesha yaad rakh..joh kuch hotha hain achche ke liye hotha hain…aur
joh hoga woh bhi achcha hi hoga…. Dekh tujhe pyaar hua na yeh tho bohat
achchi hua.. aur mujhe yeh bhi patah ki woh ladki bhi tere liye wohi
feel kar rahi hogi joh tu uske liye feel kartha hain…. {bouji gives a
assuring smile}
Raj :- I hope so bouji…
Bouji :- oye….tu hope
wope chod…mujhe patah hain ki jis tarah tere pyaar ki shuruwaat itni
achchi tarike se hui hain ussi tarah tere pyaar ka anjaam bhi bohat
khoobsurat hoga…samjha…
Raj :- jee bouji..main samaj gaya…..thanks bouji..agar aap nahi hothe tho patah nahi mera kya hotha…{raj smiles}
Bouji
:- achcha chal..puttar tu ab jaldi se taiyaar hokar neeche aaja…saath
mein nhastha karthe hain….aur nhasthe ke saath saath teri shaddi ki
baat bhi chaidthe hain table par..…
Raj :- are nahi bouji…meri
shaddi ki baat nahii…bas aap mujhe thoda time do..aur waise pehle to
bhaiyya ki shaddi ho ni hain na..{he means anurag} please bouji… agar
aap meri shaddi ki baat karne wale hain tho main tho wahaan aaunga hi
nahi……pleaseeeeeeeee….
Bouji :- hmm..achcha chal theek hain…..tu
jitna chahe waqt le le… lekin tu mujhse ek waada kar..jis din bhi tu
shaddi ke liye taiyaar hoga us din tu yeh baat sabse pehle mujhe aakar
batayega….
Raj :- jee bouji main aapse waada kartha hoon… ki jis
din bhi mere dil mein shaddi ka khayal aayega main sabse pehle aap hi
se aakar kahoonga….
Bouji :- achcha ab main neeche jaa raha
hoon…tu jaldi se aaja….while bouji is leaving raj stops him & asks
:- bouji waise aapko khushi ke bare mein kahaan se patah chala…
Bouji
:- woh puttar actually mujhe angad aur kavya na bataya…. woh bhi tab
jab maine unhe bohat force kiya…warna woh dono toh mujhe kabhi nahi
batathe…
Raj :- theek hain bouji…..ab main un dono ko nahi chod doonga…
Bouji
smiles & leaves the room aur yahaan raj phir khushi ke khayalo mein
kho jaatha hain..after sometime he comes down..has his breakfast &
then leaves to the college with kavya & angad…..
Dusari taraf khushi bhi anjali aur kripa ke saath college ko nikal chuki hothi hain…
Ab
raj gaddi chala raha hotha hain….aur woh kavya aur angad ko stern look
detha hain… kavya ,angad nahi samajthe ki kyun raj unhe aise dekh raha
hotha hain…
Tho tab angad kehtha hain :- kya hua mere bhai ?? tu hum dono ko aise kyun dekh raha hain ???
Raj
:- woh main tumko aise isliye dekh raha hoon kyunke main jaanna chahtha
hoon ki tum dono ne bouji ko jaakar khushi ki baat kyun batayi….{he
says sternly}
Kavya & angad make a puppy face…&
kavya says :- woh raj actually……
raj :- actually what….{he asks a bit angry }
angad gulps down his saliva & says :- actually..raj
bouji ne humein force kiya ki hum unhe bataye..
raj
:- haan..haan..jaantha hoon bouji ne tum logo ko majboor kiya
hoga…..lekin unhe is baat ki zaarorat hi kya thi ki who tumse aakar yeh
sawaal karein…
kavya:- woh raj darasal baat yeh hui ki kal shaam
tu jabse aaya tha tabse bohat hi zyada khush lag raha tha.. tho bouji
humare kamre mein aaye the humse yeh baat poochne ki tu itna khush kyun
lag raha hain ???
angad continues & says :-aur jab bouji
humare kamre mein aaye tho main aur kavya tere badle hue andaaz ke bare
mein baat kar raha the aur khushi ka bhi zikar kar rahe the tho bouji
ne humari saari baatein sun li…
kavya :- aur phir jab bouji ne humse saari baatein poochchi tho hum logo ko majboori mein aakar unhe sab batana pada…
raj :- hmm…tho yeh thi baat…
angad
:- raj dekh we are really sorry…humne bouji ko kuch bhi jaan bhooch kar
nahi bataya… woh tho bas unhone humari baatein sun li aur humein unhe
sab batana pada..please humein maaf karde….
Kavya :- haan raj humein maaf kar de na…
Both angad & kavya make pleading faces ki raj has detha hain…& kehtha hain…
Raj
:- theek hain..tum dono bhi kya yaad rakhoge main tum dono ko baksh
detha hoon…maafi detha hoon…. {& all the three start giggling}
Ab
gaadi comes to the same signal point jahaan khushi aur raj pehli
martaba mile the…. Coincidentally khushi ki gaddi bhi ussi signal par
rukhi hui hothi hain.. raj aur khushi ek dusare ko dekhthe hain..aur
phir apni apni gaadi ko accelerate kartha hain ..phir se race karne ke
liye….the signal goes green…& both raj & khushi gaadi ko
speed-up karthe hain…raj ki gaadi mein angad aur kavya ko samaj nahi aa
raha hotha hain ki ab jab raj aur khushi ki dosti ho gayi hain tho raj
phir kyun race kar raha hain..aur dusari taraf khushi ki gaadi mein
anjali aur kripa bhi yahii soch rahe the ki khushi aisa kyun kar rahi
hain jabki raj aur uski dosti ho chuki hain…
Anjali aur kripa dono
bhi khushi se baat poochne ki koshish karthe hain par khushi gives them
a angry stare & they shut up…wahaan doosri taraf angad aur kavya
bhi raj se poochne ki himmat karthe hain par unhe raj se koi jawaab
nahi miltha & in turn they get a angry stare from him too..…. angad
, kavya , anjali aur kripa in chaaro ki haalat bohat kharab hothi hain…
woh yeh soch kar darr rahe hothe hain ki kahiin raj aur khushi ke beech
ek aur naya jagda tho nahi hua ?? woh mann hi mann wish kar rahe the ki
raj aur khushi ke beech kuch nahi hua ho….
Khushi keeps driving
& raj stops his car..or rather his car comes to a halt…raj bahar
aakar gaadi mein dekhne lagtha hain ki kya problem hain…when khushi’s
car surpasses their car…
Raj khushi ke jaane ke paanch minute baad gaadi mein aakar baith jaatha hain..tab angad raj se poochtha
hain :- kya hua raj kya problem thi gaadi mein ??
raj :- woh kuch nahi bas ek wire ka loose contact ho gaya tha…ab theek hain…
kavya :- tho chalo naa…


raj again starts driving…he reaches the college goes inside &
parks in car in the parking lot…. He sees thar khushi , anjali &
kripa are standing by their car.. raj exact unke pass jaakar gaadi
rokhtha hain…. raj comes out of the car…& faces khushi…. Angad ,
kripa , kavya & anjali darr rahe hothe hain ki kahiin koi nayi
ladayi koi naya bhakhaida na khada ho jaye raj aur khushi ke
beech……sirf yeh chaar hi aur aur baki thode students bhi wahiin khade
hokar raj aur khushi ko dekh rahe hothe hain kyunke un sab ko patah
hotha hain ki pichle do din se raj aur khushi ke beech kya chal raha
hain……angad , kavya , anjali aur kripa ki tension badthi rehthi hain…
raj aur khushi are seeing eachother aur raj is obsevering khushi’s
beauty her masoomiyat…
chaliye let me explain ki khushi ne kya
pehanna hua hain…khushi is wearing a white designed shirt & a she
is wearing a long umbrella cut skirt which is in black colour &
mirror work is made on it…..she is wearing a a black staol….long
studded white earing.. & a very sleek chain with a heart pendant on
her neck…
angad tries to divert raj’s attention & take him
away from thee where as kripa tries the same with khushi…par no luck…
raj & khushi both don’t budge in & keeping staring at each
other sternly giving eachother a angry look… then raj khushi look at
the four of them I mean angad , kripa , anjali & kavya…. Aur woh
dekhthe hain ki in chaaro kr tho pasine choot rahe the darr ke
mare….Then they both look back at each other & both of them at once
burst out laughing & give eachother a hi-fy..
yeh dekhkar angad , kripa , anjali aur kavya hairaan ho jaathe hain… not only these
four but all the other people standing there also are surprised….
Wahaan pe khadi hui ladkiyo ki tho haalat kharab ho rahi hothi
hain..kyunke raj ne kabhi aaj thak kissi bhi ladki se itne achche se
rishtha nahi nibhaya….sab hairaan hothe hain ki kal thak joh ladki raj
ko ek aankh nahi baa thi thi aaj raj ussi ladki ke saath hasi-mazaak
kar raha hain…wahaan ki saari ladkiyaan in short khushi se jal rahi
hothi hain….
khushi points at kripa , anjali & says :- krips ,
anji..tum dono ne apni haalat dekhi hain…. tum logo ka haalat tho dekho
hain kitne daare hue dikh rahe ho…{she starts giggling}
raj just keeps staring at khushi who is laughing….
Raj :- angad , kavya tum dono ki haalat bhi kuch kum nahi hain…tum dono ki shakl bhi dekhne layak hain…


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PostSubject: Re: Dil Se Dil Thak... Part 8 Updated , Pg 3....   Sat Jan 03, 2009 5:18 pm

[Dil Se Dil Thak:- Part 8 (Continuation)

anjali :- khushi iska matlab..tune humein bewakoof banaya…
khushi :- haan..absolutely..main aur raj tho aise hi mazaak kar rahe the….
Kavya :- haan haan..bada mazaa aaya hoga tum dono ko…
Angad :- hum tho darr rahe the ki bani banayi dosti mein phir se koi darrar na pad jaye….
Raj :- angad dekh agar hum dosti ek baar kar lethe hain.. tho us rishthe ko hum hamesha nibhathe hain….
Khushi cuts him & says :- aur agar dosti sachchi ho tho dosto ke beech darrar kabhi nahi aayegi…
Raj :- chahe kabhi kabhi ghalatfaimiyaan aa jaye par darrar nahi….samjhe……
Angad {haath jodhthe hue kehtha hain}:- haan mere bhai main tum dono ki dosti ki philosophy samaj chukka hoon…..
Anjali :- achcha khushi , krips chal humari class hain…. dhair ho rahi hain….chalo…
Now kavya bina kuch sochche kehtha hain :- aap jaa rahi hain ???
Tab anjali kehthi hain :- kyun na jaun….
All look at kavya & kavya looks down with a confused expression…
When anjali again asks him :- kyun na jaun kya main ??
Kavya :- nahi nahi..aisi koi baat nahi..aap jayiye..maine kab rokha hain….
Then
anjali , kripa & khushi say bye to them & start leaving..when
kavya mumbles :- waise agar main aapko rokhoonga tho kya aap rukh
jayengi…… yeh baat sirf anjali sunthi hain woh foran palatthi hain aur
kavya ko dekhthi hain with a confused expression & asks him:-
jee..kya aap ne kuch kaha…
Kavya is like anjali ne yeh baat kaise
sunli par phir bhi he maintains his compusure & says :- jee
maine…maine tho kuch nahi kaha..
Then anjali starts walking with khushi & kripa… yahaan kavya ke confused state par raj aur angad has rahe hothe hain…..
Angad
kavya ke pass jaakar uske khandhe par apna haath rakhtha hain aur
kehtha hain :- lage raho kavya.. lage raho…waise abhi thak kavya is
seeing anjali walking-off…. Kavya looks up at angad & says..
Kavya :- kya lage raho angad…
Angad :- nahi nahi zyada kuch nahi..bas tum joh abhi abhi kar rahe the..{he laughs}
Kavya :- kya kar raha tha main ????
Now
angad starts imitating kavya :- aap jaa rahi hain ???? waise agar main
aapko rokhoonga tho kya aap rukh jayengi???? {he starts laughing &
raj too joins him in teasing kavya} kavya yeh sab kya tha… tu directly
anjali se keh saktha tha ki you want to take her out.. uske bajaye tum
usse keh rahe the..aap jaa rahi hain.. etc..etc…
Kavya:- itna
aasaan nahi hain angad..agar usne mujhe ulta ek thappad maar diya
tho…{he says while keeping his hand on his cheek}angad yeh dekhkar aur
bhi hasne lagtha hain..jab kavya phir kehtha hain waise maine kuch tho
baat ki anjali se lekin tune tho kripa se baat bhi nahii kii… iska
matlab yeh hua ki tum bhi is baat se daarte ho ki kahiin kripa tujhe
reject na kar de tujhe thappad na maar de….at this point kavya starts
giggling & angad ek dum chup ho jaatha hain.. aur kehtha hain :-
dekh kavya aisi koi baat nahi hain..samjha tu…
Kavya { cheekily
says } :- haan..haan…main tho poori tarah se samaj gaya….ki Angad
Garewal kripa naam ki ek ladki se daartha hain…..{kavya starts laughing
again}
Angad :- kavya..teri tho…main tujhe nahi chod doonga….
Kavya
wahaan se bhaagna shuru kar detha hain… & angad uske peeche peeche
usko pakadne ki koshish mein bhaag raha hotha hain…..
Yahaan raj
is just standing there & smiling at angad & kavya..he starts
walking slowly… when he sees khushi coming towards him….
Raj :- khushi tum yahaan wapas…tumhari tho class thi na…
Khushi:-
haan class tho thi…lekin professor nahi aayein hain…aur phir mujhe
realize hua ki main apna cell gaadi mein bhool gayi hoon…tho isliye
apna cell collect karne wapas aayi hoon…waise tum ab thak yahaan kya
kar rahe ho ?? tumhe bhi tho class attend karni thi na ???
Raj:- haan lekin….chaltha hain…kabhi kabaar class mein late jaakar professor ki daant bhi khana zaroori hotha hain…
Khushi:- raj tum bhi naa…
Raj smiles… & then khushi starts going to the car & raj walks with her to the car….
Raj
& khushi just keep looking at eachother & keep walking in
silence… they look at eachother when they think that the other is not
looking… dono issi khamoshi mein chalthe rehthe hain par woh dono hi
kuch kehna chah rahe the..par dono kuch na keh paye…. Finally khushi
breaks the silence & says
Khushi :- waise raj..thanks….
Raj:-
thanks…thanks par no thanks kehthe hain dosti mein….dosti ka pehla
osool hain madam dosti mein no thanku no sorry…bhool gayi aap itni
jaldi..{raj says all this with a kind off sweet innocence on his face}
Khushi smiles & says :- achcha baba… bhool gayi.. chalo no thanku…
Raj :- waise aap mujhe batane ki zehmat karengi ki yeh no thanku hain kiss khushi mein keh rahi hain aap mujhko ??
Khushi :- raj pehli baat tum mujhe aap kehna band karo.. mujhe achcha nahi lagtha jab app mujhe aap kehthe ho….
Raj:-
achcha jii…agar main aapko aap kahoon tho aapko achcha nahi lagtha….tho
phir aap kyun mujhe aap kehkar chaid rahi hain..
Khushi :- woh tho bas isliye kyunke aapko chedne mein bada mazzaa aatha hain…
Raj :- tho aapko mujhe chedne mein mazaa aatha hainn…chalo theek hain main bhi aapko aap kehkar hi tang karoonga…
Khushi:- nahi raj..please aisa na karna..
Raj:- kyun na karoon main aise hi karoonga…..{he says like a small kid who is behaving adamant}
Khushi sighs & says :- achcha theek hain..main aap nahi kahoongi tumhe…ab khush…
Raj :- that’s like a good girl…
Khushi takes the cell from the car & then raj asks
her :- waise tumne mujhe bataya nahi ki tumne no thanks kiss khushi mein kaha…
khushi:- woh actually maine no thanks isliye kaha kyunke main jaanthi hoon ki
abhi kuch dhair pehle joh humare beech race hui thi woh tum jaan
bhoochkar haar gaye….


Raj looks at her surprised & says :- nahii khushi aisi koi baat nahi hain..
Khushi:-
raj u know meri ek khasiyat hain aur woh yeh hain ki agar main ek baar
kissi shaks ko apna dost banathi hoon tho main usse jhat se pehchaan
lethi hoon.. main mere dosto ko achchi tarah se parak na jaanthi hoon…
aur main poore yakeen ke saath keh sakthi hoon ki tum ab mujhse jhoot
bol rahe ho aur tum race jaan bhoochkar hare ho…. Tumne apni gaadi
mujhe jitwane ke liye rokhi thi…aur tumhari gaadi mein koi kharabi
–warabhi nahi thi..kyun kya main sahi hoon ??
Raj passes a smile
aur apna haath apne sar par phertha hain not knowing what to say…. When
khushi again asks him :- bolo raj..kya main sahi hoon…kya maine tumhe
sahi pehchaanna hain…
Raj :- haan..tum sahi ho..
Khushi:-dekha I told you main apne dosto ko bakhoobhi parak na jaanthi hoon….
Waise ek baat poochoon.. tum jaan bhooch kar kyun har gaye ??? tumhe
tho haarna pasand nahi??
raj smiles & cutely says :- patah nahi kyun… par dil ne kaha ki main tumhe haarne na don..tho isliye..
Khushi intervents & says :- tho isliye mujhe jitwa kar tum haar gaye…. Kyun ???
Raj :- haan….aur waise bhi dosti mein kasi jeet aur kaisi haar….
Khushi :- raj tumna bilkul pagal ho…
Raj :- {says to himself } haan pagal tho hoon…aur woh bhi sirf tumhare liye…..
Khushi asks raj :- kuch kaha tumne…
Raj:- are nahi maine toh kuch nahi kaha.. aur phir apne
Aapse kehtha hain raj zara sambhal ke kahiin yeh tere dil mein joh baat hain
woh bhi na sun le.. sambhal jaa raj..sambhal jaa..… he smiles…
Khushi interrupts his thoughts & says :- nahi mujhe laga shayad tumne kuch kaha…
Raj:-nahi khushi maine kuch nahi kaha… ab chalo tum tumhare class jana hain
aur mujhe bhi apni class attend karne jaani hain..pehle hi bohat dhair
ho chuki hain….
Khushi :- haan chalo… chalthe hain…
Khushi starts walking ahead of raj… suddenly raj catches khushi’s hand &
pulls her back very close to him.. they both are just staring at
eachother..
Tab khushi kehthi hain : - rajj…….{she says it in whispers}
Raj :- { puts a finger on her lips & then says } shh…
Dono bas ek dusare mein khoye hue hothe hain..
Then suddenly khushi realizes ki what is happening she immediately backs-off
& looks down with sharam..even raj realizes & gets embarrassed
& to get over the embarrasement he says :- khushi…{khushi looks up
at him & he continues} main toh bas tumse yeh kehna chahtha hoon ki
kya tumhara aaj ka class attend karna zaroori hain…
Khushi looks at him surprised as she was not expecting this from him & says :- kyaaaaaa………
Raj:- haan..main toh yahii poochna chahtha ki..kya class attend karna
zaroori hain ??? tumne kya laga ?? {he asks mischeviouly as he wanted
to know ki khushi ke dil mein uske liye kya hain..}
Khushi :- {she
shies a bit & says }mujhe kuch bhi toh nahi laga…. Raj aaj mere
class attend karna bohat zaroori hain.. hum phir kabhi class bunk
karenge..theek hain…
Raj :- joh hokum mere aaka..he bows his head down.. both share a laugh..
Khushi says :- achcha ab chalo…
Raj :- after you…
Khushi
phir se aage chalne lagthi hain.. jab usse kuch rokh letha hain…
actually uska stoal peeche phas jaatha hain… khushi ko lagtha hain ki
raj ne uska stoal pakda hua hain tho she says :- raj please mujhe jaane
do..class ke liye late ho raha hain…
Par raj abhi thak koi reaction nahi kartha tho khushi turns back & says:- raj…
She sees that raj has not caught her stoal actually woh stoal raj ke gadi
mein phasi hain… she sees that raj is cutely standing there folding his
hands with a sweet smile on his face…. Khushi smiles..hits her
fore-head lightly & then goes near raj to free her stoal…. Khushi
starts trying par usse nahi ho raha hotha hain…
Tho woh raj se kehthi hain:- raj aise khade-khade muskura kyun rahe ho meri kuch tho
help karo naa….. then raj also starts helping..is douraan raj , khushi
ke haath milthe hain…dono ko kuch ehsaas hotha hain.. & then they
look up at each other at the same time , their eyes get locked &
time comes to a stand still….

Song in the background :-

“ Aankhon Se Kaajal Ki Tarah……..
Phoolon Se Khushboo Ki Tarah…..
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne……
Chura Liyaa……..
Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne……
Chura Liyaa…
O Jaana Yeh Kya Kiya Tumne…….
Aankhon Se Kaajal Ki Tarah……
Phoolon Se Khushboo Ki Tarah…….
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne……
Chura Liyaa………
Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne….
Chura Liyaa…..
Zikr Tera Hawaon Se Jab Bhi Kiya Karte Hain…..
Yaadon Mein Teri Khushboo Ka ……..
Hum Mazaa Liya Karte Hain…….
Palkon Se Neendon Ki Tarah……
Neendon Se Khwaabon Ki Tarah……
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne….
Chura Liyaa………
Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne…
Chura Liyaa…..
Chura Liyaa Hain Chura Liyaa Hain
Tumne Chura Liyaa Hain…….
Aksar Yeh Sunte The Hum……..
Ishq To Hai Deewaanapan…..
Tum Se Milke Jaan Gaye…….
Sach Kehte The Log Sanam……
Hoton Se Hasi Ki Tarah…….
Hasi Se Khushi Ki Tarah…….
Dilo Ko Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne……
Chura Liyaa
Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne…..
Chura Liyaa………
O Jaana Yeh Kya Kiya Tumne………
O Jaana Yeh Kya Kiya Tumne…..
Chura Liyaa Hain Tumne……
Chura Liyaa…….”


Then
both raj ,khushi come to reality & khushi foran apna haath peeche
karthi hain & then raj frees the stoal & looks at khushi but he
still does not leave the stoal….. khushi apna sar neeche rakhe hue
hothi hain kyunke usse thodi sharam aa rahi hothi hain…raj sees khushi
like this & feels very happy….
Khushi then with all the courage looks up & says :- main ab chalthi hoon..
Raj :- {casually says } haan tum jao…
But
khushi phir bhi wahiin ki wahiin khadi hothi hain… raj does not
understand why… phir khushi raj ko ishara karthi hain ki he is still
holding her stoal…
Raj then smiles very sweetly & let goes of the stoal…
Khushi
leaves the place at once…. Par thodi durr jakar woh raj ko dekhne ke
liye palatthi hain & she sees that raj ki nazar sirf us par hain..
both raj & khushi get a instant smile on their faces & then
khushi waves to raj & now leaves..raj bhi kuch dhair wahiin khada
hotha hain phir apne class attend karne chala jaatha hain…

Guys
ye lijiye khatam ho gayi dil se dil thak part 8.. I hope is part ne
aapko sula na diya ho…. I hope this part was intresting &
good….& hope you all liked it...

Ab yeh jaanne ke liye ki
aage chalkar kya raj khushi ki dosti mein kabhi darrar aayegi..agar
darrar aayegi tho woh kya itni mazboot hogi ki do milthe dilo ko judaa
kardegi …. Kya raj aur khushi ki dosti sachchi dosti nahi thi… raj aur
khushi ke raasthe aaj itne alag kyun hain ?????? in sawaalo ka aur
baaki sab sawaalo ke liye wait for dil se dil thak part 9…. Aur padthe
rahiye dil se dil thak….

Please post in your comments & compliments…me will be waiting for them….waise guys criticism is also welcome…

Take care……
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

love Forever
Rajeev....

Surya….
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