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PostSubject: CONDITIONAL & UNCONDITIONAL LOVE-1 (first Story) Short ff..   Mon Oct 27, 2008 7:28 pm

this story is about sujal , kashish.. it’s about their hatred , their enmity , their forced marriage , their differences & finally their love which wins over all the odds to become the unconditional love…. So presenting to you
Sujal – played by the heartthrob
Rajeev Khandelwal

Kashish – played by the gorgeous
Aamna Shariff

So presenting to you conditional & unconditional love……. hope you like it…..

Conditional & Unconditional Love…….


Sujal garewal , kashish sniha belong to rich households.. they are strangers to each other but they have seen each other but then they are enemies.. sujal is a business man & he does not believe in marriage , wants his freedom & has a loads of attitude but will never do anything against his mother’s wishes….…
Kashish on the other hand is also a business person & she is a kind of person who lives for her mother & her business .. she has a hatred over marriage as her father divorced her mother when she was very young for some other woman & they had to face a number of difficulties to come up in life …
Sujal , kashish study in the same college.. but they belong to different gangs.. the gangs members were always at logger heads with each other…thus whenever sujal , kashish meet they ended up fighting.. the college finished.. life moved on for both of them.. sujal & kashish became business persons at different places… they never thought that life would make them meet again nor did they want to meet again..… but life had it’s own twist & turns… after 3 years sujal , kashish meet up in a business meeting.. they meet as business rivals this time… in the meeting again both their ego’s clash.. both are unable to forget their past enmity….. this time again they part ways not as business associates but then as business foes…
Life carries on for two more years.. & in kashish’s house her mom is asking her to get married.. kashish refuses… sujal is undergoing the similar kind of case from his family.. sujal’s mother tries to tell him to get married but this time sujal is adamant on his stand that he wouldn’t get married… now sujal’s family puts a condition forth him.. they say that if sujal does not get married with in a period of one month then the whole garewal property will be handed over to the trust.. sujal forcibly agrees for the marriage & the family starts looking out for girls…. Kashish along with her mother comes to Shimla {sujal stays there } to attend a conference .. in the conference sujal , kashish meet up again & their rivalty increases further..
Accidentally when kashish & her mom go to the Temple. In the Temple sujal’s family see kashish & think that she would be the apt bahu for their house.. kashish leaves the Temple as she has a important meeting to attend.. sujal’s family then meet kashish’s mom.. they become good friend’s & then they decide that why don’t they get sujal , kashish married.. at sujal’s home he is told that they have got a girl who would marry him.. sujal is least interested in the matter & says that as long as his family is happy he is happy & he does not want to know anything more about the girl….. & he leaves the place… in kashish’s home kashish is not ready for the marriage.. she & her mom have a heated up argument & then kashish’s mom convinces kashish to get married…kashish finally gives up as she knows that her mother wouldn’t listen.. both sujal & kashish put forth a condition that the marriage will be a low profile… sujal , kashish don’t meet.. they directly meet on the day of their shaddi in the mandap.. that is at this point of time that of them realize whom are they getting married too… the marriage ends…all the rituals take place..
In sujal , kashish’s room :-
Sujal :- so miss kashish u wanted to get married to me , then why did you act as if u hated me oh may be that is because u wanted my attention .. u girls..silly girls.. I’am telling you na.. { he say’s scarcastically } .. but get one thing straight u mean nothing to me.. I have got married to you only because of my family.. & my property it was just a compulsion to get married to you & I’am stuck with you.. ya u don’t even think you will win over my hearts feelings.. I have & will always hate you & nobody can change that.... do u understand that { he clicks his fingers in front of her }
Kashish :- mr. Sujal garewal I think you are totally mistaken I have married you just because of my mother.. if I had got a chance I would never have got married.. it just because of her.. & do u think I want to win over your heart stop dreaming sujal garewal.. it’s high time you stop dreaming.. & ya I agree with u on one matter.. even I hate u & will always hate you from the bottom of my heart… welcome to hell…. { kashish gives him a evil smile }
Sujal :- { sujal smiles in the same way & says } welcome to hell to you too…
This is how their new life starts they get married on condition basis.. now sujal , kashish being married but are still on two different paths.. there views , ideas never combine , they are always on opposite tracks.... though married kashish & sujal work separately as rivals.. they live in the same home but know nothing about each other they just act like strangers to each other… sujal , kashish decide to get divorced very soon as they can’t live like this.. they try to surpass each other in every deed they do…
One day sujal’s mother falls sick kashish nurses her back to health.. this gains sujal’s attention.. he is moved that though kashish does not like him she has not shown her disliking to his mother.. sujal wants to thank her but then his ego does not let him to.. sujal , kashish relationship starts improving…
Sujal & kashish go to attend a party.. in the party a girl comes who happens to be sujal’s ex-girlfriend .. she is unaware of the fact that sujal is married and that too to kashish.. sujal , kashish are standing at different corners when this girl comes to sujal.. kashish sees that sujal is talking to the girl she unknowingly starts feeling jealous.. she walks over to sujal..
{ think the girl is archie – Urvashi Dholakia}
archie sees kashish.. coming towards them & then says to sujal :- sujal see there kashish.. I think she has got married & I’am wondering how her husband is tolerating her… I think he would be dieing daily living with her..
kashish hears all this & she is waiting for sujal’s reaction.. sujal who sees kashish just to irritate her
says :- ya archie you are right { both archie & sujal laugh }
kashish now comes to sujal then says :- sujal I’am going home.. & she leaves { sujal just sees a glimpse of tears in kashish’s eyes } ;
archie is confused as to why kashish told sujal that she was going home she asks sujal :- sujal why the hell did she tell you she is going home ??
sujal :- actually archie.. actually { he hesistates }
archie :- I think she has gone mad sujal.. anyway leave it..
{archie starts walking off to get herself a drink when sujal holds her hand & pulls her back }
sujal :- no archie she is not mad.. she is my wife.. she is
Mrs. kashishsujalgarewal ..
archie :- what ??????????????????
sujal:- yes archie she is my lawfully wedded wife..
archie was shell -shocked & sujal felt good calling kashish his wife.. this was the first time he did that but he felt good.. sujal left the party & went home .. he goes to his room & sees that kashish is standing in the balcony.. sujal just goes to her.. he sees that kashish’s eyes are red something like she had been crying.. kashish sees that sujal is there & begins to leave the place..
sujal :- { slowly calls out her name } kashish…
kashish just stands there without turning around waiting for him to continue..
sujal :- kashish why have you been crying { he has the concern in his voice }
kashish :- no I haven’t been crying…
sujal :- ok..
kashish starts walking again when she hears sujal say :- I’am sorry.. I didn’t mean to hurt you kashish.... kashish turns back & there are tears in her eyes….
Sujal continues :- kashish I was just joking.. that’s all..
sujal goes close to kashish & says :- please stop crying , I don’t know why but I can’t stand you in pain… I’am sorry if what I did hurt you…. {he has a apologetical face}
kashish tears keep flowing & she says :- no you have not given me any pain.. … it is just that I was just reminded of my father who left me & my mother for some other lady.. that’s all.. you don’t have to be sorry..
sujal :- ok.. but still I can’t see you in pain.. please wipe off your tears..
kashish just wipes her tears & smiles & says :- thanks sujal for having concern towards me…..
sujal :- kashish I’ll definitely have concern for u afterall you are married to me.. you are my wife..
sujal & kashish just look at each other..
sujal :- kashish till today we have been like strangers , can we forget the enmity between us & get to know each other better….kashish can we be friend’s { he puts his hand forward }
kashish just smiles puts her hand forward & says :- done , friend’s………
this way sujal & kashish became friend’s. even now they worked separately but both respected each others work.. they began understanding each other.. archie was the one person who never liked sujal & kashish being together.. she worked with sujal & always tried to create some misunderstanding & create hatred in sujal’s mind for kashish.. but she did not succeed.. sujal & kashish lived their life peacefully .. slowly but steadily both started gaining feelings for each other.. but both of them were not ready to come forward & accept their love for each other… both wanted the other person to accept their feelings… both of them pretty well knew that the other person had feeling for them.. sujal knew that kashish loves him & the same way kashish knew that sujal had feelings for her…. Days pass by & all was going smooth between them....
one day archie creates a wrong notion in sujal’s mind that kashish is going to divorce him very soon for some other guy .. she even says that she has seen kashish going out with some guy often….. sujal is angry he does not want to loose kashish at any cost as he loves her .. he feels that he should confess his love to kashish at any cost… sujal decides that he would confess & thinks that after that it would be kashish decision whether to accept or reject his love….. kashish is at a business party.. sujal comes there sees kashish & he goes to her holds her hand & then just drags her out of the party takes her home.. kashish is not able to understand why sujal is behaving like this.. sujal takes kashish to their room.. he does not even give her a chance to speak…
kashish :- sujal.. what’s with you.. why are you behaving like this..
sujal :- what do you think of yourself.. do you think you can play with my feelings whenever you like… you came into my life when I hated you.. but today when I have started to love you , you are planning to leave me for some other guy..{ he holds her hand very firmly says all this very angrily }
kashish :- { just couldn’t believe her ears sujal had just told her he loves her } :- what did you say ? {surprised}
sujal :- yes I love you.. don’t you understand it..
{ kashish could see the anger in sujal’s eyes }
kashish just has tears of joy in her eyes.. she just sees sujal & then goes into his arms slowly.. both stay like that for some time & then sujal separates her & then says :-
sujal :- kashish I don’t know when , why , where this happened but the truth is I can’t imagine my life without you.. you mean the entire world to me…. You are my life , my soul…. I love you …. I really do… {kashish just keeps looking at him & tears of joy are rolling down her cheeks & also kashish is blushing a bit}
sujal touches the tears on her cheeks & then says :- soo do you love me ??? would you like to be with me all my life ?? I promise I would stand by you , be with you always….
Kashish does not reply… she keeps shying… sujal waits for his answer.. but kashish instead giving him a answer hugs him tightly….. sujal wraps his hand around her & let her be like that for sometime

then again sujal said :- kashish how about telling me I love you too..
kashish just nods her head in a no still hugging him..…
sujal :- common kashish I know u love me… please for my sake tell it once..
kashish just goes near his ear & whispers in his ear :- I love you too sujal.. she says this & again goes into his arms…
both are in each others arms lost in each other’s world when archie barges in & is shocked to see sujal & kashish hugging.. sujal & kashish look at archie..
sujal :- archie.. what are you doing here..
archie :- sujal I actually came to check if you are ok.. I thought kashish was going to..
sujal cuts her in between & says :- you were mistaken archie.. but it’s ok today because of you I was able to win over my love.. thanku so much archie..
archie is just shocked she leaves the place confused without even uttering a word…...
sujal & kashish stare at each other & kashish says..
kashish :- sujal may be archie did all these with an intention to separate us but then she has brought us together.. we have to really thank her for that..
sujal :- I think you are right.. but then at present I have better things to dicuss rather than archie… {he gives a mischievous smile & pulls her closer by her waist..}
Kashish :- better things like..{she says this with a purposeful meaning} she plays with his shirt buttons…
sujal :- like…. He just pulls are even more closer & then kisses her forehead , her cheeks… & again takes her in his arms.. & then lifts her of her feat & carries her away……
Both sujal & kashish leave their dark past behind & promise each other to start a new life which has trust , belief & love for one another & nothing else…
archie then left the country as all her efforts of winning sujal’s heart went in drain.......
one year passes by sujal , kashish now work together they have merged their business & their love is growing day by day & nobody in the world had the strength to separate them.. may be sometimes they had different opinions about things but they never tried to show that the other person is wrong .. they never let down each other…. though they fought they completed each other & complimented each other … thus both sujal & kashish got the love they deserve in life
“ THE UNCONDITIONAL LOVE ” which neither will nor can be changed in any circumstance ………..
& they lived happily ever after….


I hope all of you liked it...


Last edited by surya on Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:44 pm; edited 2 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: CONDITIONAL & UNCONDITIONAL LOVE-1 (first Story) Short ff..   Sat Nov 08, 2008 11:03 pm

heyi that was a good fic hun! A sweet short romantic fairytale...
enjoyed reading it! took down to the memory lane of kth..
Good work honey! Very Happy
I totally enjoy these short fics..!!

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PostSubject: Re: CONDITIONAL & UNCONDITIONAL LOVE-1 (first Story) Short ff..   Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:41 pm

ruksaar_khan wrote:
heyi that was a good fic hun! A sweet short romantic fairytale...
enjoyed reading it! took down to the memory lane of kth..
Good work honey! Very Happy
I totally enjoy these short fics..!!

ruku dear thanku so much.. i'am so glad you liked the story.. me ek dum khush..... Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: CONDITIONAL & UNCONDITIONAL LOVE-1 (first Story) Short ff..   Fri Dec 05, 2008 9:13 pm

hey suri jaanu!! once again superb Short story!! it was awesome!!! loved it completely!!! u did a fabulous job!! i read all 3 of ures and there all just gr88!!!! waiting to read more!!! they are great!!!!

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PostSubject: Re: CONDITIONAL & UNCONDITIONAL LOVE-1 (first Story) Short ff..   Wed Dec 10, 2008 1:30 am

rajeevaamna4eva wrote:
hey suri jaanu!! once again superb Short story!! it was awesome!!! loved it completely!!! u did a fabulous job!! i read all 3 of ures and there all just gr88!!!! waiting to read more!!! they are great!!!!

summi jaanu no thankoo..... Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: CONDITIONAL & UNCONDITIONAL LOVE-1 (first Story) Short ff..   Tue Dec 16, 2008 5:01 pm

ure welcome sweetehart!!!

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