Tere Bina- An eternal Love story -Part 2 on pg-2

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Introduction

Herez presenting u a new love story Tere Bina
A story of love & changing relationships… A story showing shades of love…

Characters-

Rajeev Khandelwal as Rayan Garewal-
A very practical business man who had seen many ups and downs in his life. Who fortunately got his love but unfortunately lost her too. And today the only person that mattered to him the most was that one person who was his life.

Aamna Shariff as Saima Khanna-
A very sweet , caring & homely person. Her grandma was her only family & the world to her. But the only mistake she did was she fell in love which had changed her forever.

Chaitanya Choudhary as Aryan Kapoor-
A very fun loving and flirtous type of a person. For him life was just a game. Only one person that had little importance in his life was her friend Saima.

These are the main characters of Tere Bina. Rest of the characters will be introduced as the story proceeds…

Site Admin Posts : 90 Join date : 2008-10-18

heeyii ruku, im so glad that u've started my fav fic here too! luv ya honey!!

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hey ruku
so good to have u'r fanfic here
am glad u started it here

did read half of it
may b missed some last parts, no problems as it'll b easy for us to have it here Very Happy

Posts : 39 Join date : 2008-10-19

hey ruku love intro Very Happy

i guess i hv read this sumwhere but dont remember but will follow it continuously Embarassed

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thanks guys, will post the first part soon.. Smile

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part-1

ek naya din..ek nayi subha hai. andhere ki chaadar ko hatate hue suraj ki halki si kirne nikhar aayi hai...
Patto per shabnum ki bunde hai jinhe dekhkar lag raha hai jaise ki wo baahe phylakar iss naye din ka swagat
kar rahi hai... Is khubsoorat se mausam mein ek pyari si ladki un patto ki aor dekh rahi hai..ya u kahe wo shabnam
ki bunde uske liye prerna hai...wo un shabnum ki bundo aur aur un phoolo ko is kadar dekhti hai maano wo unse baatein
kar rahi hai..kuch keh rahi ho.... wo bas unhe chune hi wali hoti hai ki peeche se koi use bulata hai....
person: memsahaab aapko dadima bula rahe hai...
{wo ladki palatti hai.... aur hawa se uski zulfe udkar uske chehre per aati hai... wo badi nazakat se apne chehre se zulfe hatati hai}
girl: aap chaliye kaka.., hum abhi aate hai..
person: ji betiya...
{yeh kehte hue wo naukar chala jata hai}
{ wo ladki bas un patto ko doubara dekhti hai...phir achanak muskurati hai phir palatti hai..aur daudti hui ander jaati hai...
uski payal ki awaaz saare ghar mein maano kisi dhun ki tarha bajti hai... ., wo ander dinning table pe jaati hai aur apni dadi ko waha
baitha dekhti hai..aur unhe peeche se jakar pakadti hai}
Dadi: ah..aa gaye apne dosto se milkar... [laughs] meri pagli beti... chal aa baith aur naashta karle...
{wo ladki saamne aati hai... aur yeh aur koi nahi balki hamari pyarisi Saima [aamna] hai}
Saima: sahi kaha dadima aapne.., yeh subha subha suraj ki kirne.., wo shabnum ki bunde..inhe dekhkar hume itni khushi milti hai ki kya kahe..
baaki to aap jaante hi hai...
Dadi: ha ha..tumhe bhala mujhse bhehtar aur kaun jaan sakta hai...
{both laugh}
Dadi: acha beta.., ab to tumhari saari padhayi bhi puri ho chuki hai.., to ab aage kya socha hai?
Saima; sochna kya hai dadima, bas apne business mein aapka haath batana hai, aur kya..
Dadi: yeh bhi thik hai..., meri thodi zimmedariya kam ho jayenge...
Saima: oh dadima, ab aap apni saari zimmedariyo ko bhul jayiye..ab hum sab kuch dekhenge..aapko office ki thodi bhi
fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi hai..
Dadi: {smiles} zimmedariyo ko kaise bhool jaye beta.., hamari zimmedariya to tab puri ho jayengi jab tumhari shaadi hokar tum apne ghar chali jaogi..
Saima: nahi dadima.., hum aapko chodkar kahi nahi jaane wale...
Dadi: to kya tum kabhi shaadi nahi karogi?
Saima; karenge na..per hum use ghar jamai bana lenge..phir to sari problems hi solve ho jayenge..
{both laugh}
{tabhi Saima ka cell ring karta hai.., wo cell dekhti hai..aur bas daudte hue apni room mein chali jaati hai}
Dadi: are sun to....
{per Saima bas chali jati hai}
Saima: hello...Ar...Aryan
{aryan hai hamare pyare aur naughty se chaitanya}
Aryan: hey Saima... kaha ho tum? pata nahi peechle do dino se tum mujhse milne nahi aayi ho... Ho kaha tum?
Saima: main yehi ho baba... bas zara aise hi..
Aryan: acha wo sab chodo aur yeh batao ki aaj kab milogi?
Saima: jab tum kaho
Aryan: ok...to phir ek ghante baad baristas mein
Saima: thik hai..,hum aa jayenge.. per Aryan please intezar mat karvana
Aryan: nahi baba... ab tumhe kya batao..tumse milne ki kitni jaldi hai mujhe...anyways tum aa jao..phir tumse bahot
zaroori bat karni hai..aur iss baar bas ek tum hi meri help kar sakti ho..
Saima: ab aisi bhi kya baat hai Aryan?
Aryan: oh ho..pehle milo to sahi.. chal then will catch u after an hour..
Saima: ok..bye
Aryan: bye...
Saima: {to herself} ab aisi bhi kya baat ho sakti hai... yeh Aryan bhi na.. [smiles]
{kuch der baad Saima Aryan se milne ke liye jaa hi rahi hoti hai ki dadi use rok lete ha}
Dadi: are beta kahi jaa rahi ho to saath chalo main chod deti hu....
Saima: nahi dadima.., hum chale jayenge..waise bhi hume jaldi pohochna hai...
Dadi: thik hai..per zara dhere drive karna...
Saima: ji dadima..acha hum aate hai...,byeee
Dadi: bye..
{Saima.., drive karte hue bas Aryan ke baare mein hi sochti rehti hai.... wo puri tarha apni soch mein khoyi rehti hai ki saamne se aate hue ek bachche ko wo dekti nahi aur
uske haatho acident ho jata hai... wo immediate gaadi rokti hai aur uss bachche ki taraf jaati hai... bachche ke sar per chot aayi hoti hai aur kaafi khoon beh raha hota hai..
wo yeh dekhkar bahot darr jaati hai.., kuch pal ke liye wo samajh nahi paati ki wo kya kare... phir wo kisi tarha uss bachche ko uthati aur hospital le jaati hai..aur bachche ko admit karvati hai..,
per wo kaafi dari hui hoti hai... tabhi doctor aakar use bache ke bare mien puchte hai}
doctor: ji aap iss bachche ki maa hai?
Saima: nahi doctor..per baat kya hai? wo thik to hai na?
doctor: dekhiye bachche ki treatment to humne kar di hai..per chot lagne ki wajah se kaafi khoon beh chuka hai..., aur iss waqt hamare blood bank mein iss bachche ka blood group available nahi hai..
Saima: {ghabrayi hui} oh god... kaunsa blood group hai?
doctor: B-positive
Saima: ji hamara blood group bhi B-positive hai
doctor: oh that's great! waise aapne bataya nahi ki aap iss bachche ki kya lagti hai?
Saima: doctor..wo..wo hamari gaadi se hi iss bachche ka accident hua tha.., per doctor humne yeh jaanbhujkhar nahi kiya tha..wo to bas ekdum se...
doctor: what? yeh to police case hai.. hume immediate police ko inform karna hoga..
Saima: per doctor.... humne yeh jaan bhujkar nahi kiya hai..
{tabhi waha nurse aati hai}
nurse: doctor.., hume immediate dusri khoon ki bottle chadhani hogi...
doctor: oh god.. blood ka arrangement hua?
nurse: ab tak nahi...
Saima: doctor hum uss bachche ko apna khoon denge.... , aap chaho to baad mein police ko inform karna per abhi uss bache ko dekhiye..
doctor: ji ji..chaliye...
{Saima uss bachche ko blood deti hai..tabhi waha hospital ke bahar ek gaadi tezi se aakar ruk jaati hai..., aur ek shaksk bilkul pareshan sa gaadi se bahar nikalta hai,
usne lite blue color ka suit pehna hai.., aur wo daudta hua reception counter tak jata hai..}
nurse: yes sir.., how can i help you?
person: yaha abhi ek chote bachche ki accident case aayi hai..
nurse: ji sir.... may i know your name please
person: Rayan Garewal... {aur yeh rahe hamare dashing & handsome.......... rajeev}
nurse: yes sir.. first floor, second room to ur left.
Rayan: thanks...
{aur wo daudta hua room tak jata hai..aur waha Saima aur apne bete Aditya ko aise haal mein dekhkar hairaan hota hai..}

thatz it in part-1.......
pls do comment!

RAianz Posts : 115 Join date : 2008-10-18

hey ruku jaan!! gr88 2 see ure FF here 2, i do follow it in our grp 2!!! waise gr88 going jaan ure FF is awesome, love it!!!!

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ah! lovely part! I've read this fic twice but still would love to read it agen.So keep updating!!

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Nice FF ruku always love to read it and now feeling good to read it again....thanks for the part....hope u update soon

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hey ruku jaldi update karna ok!!

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part-2

Recap:
Saima Aryan se milne ke liye nikalti hai aur raaste mein anjaane mein uske gaadi se ek chote bachche ka accident ho jata hai,
aur wo use hospital le jaati hai..... hospital mein uss bachche ka blood group available nahi hota hai aur isiliye Saima uss bachche ko
apna khoon deti hai..

story further.......
{Saima uss bachche ko blood deti hai..tabhi waha hospital ke bahar ek gaadi tezi se aakar ruk jaati hai..., aur ek shaksk bilkul pareshan sa gaadi se bahar nikalta hai,
usne lite blue color ka suit pehna hai.., aur wo daudta hua reception counter tak jata hai..}
nurse: yes sir.., how can i help you?
person: yaha abhi ek chote bachche ki accident case aayi hai..
nurse: ji sir.... may i know your name please
person: Rayan Garewal... {aur yeh rahe hamare dashing & handsome.......... rajeev}
nurse: yes sir.. first floor, second room to ur left.
Rayan: thanks...
{aur wo daudta hua room tak jata hai..aur waha Saima aur apne bete Aditya ko aise haal mein dekhkar hairaan hota hai..}
Rayan: adi.......... adi {aur wo daudkar uss bachche ke kareb aata hai..aur Saima bas Rayan ko hi dekhti hai} beta ..yeh ..yeh sab kya hua aapko...
{tabhi nurse waha aati hai}
nurse: ex-cuse me sir..... aap patient ko disturb mat kijiye... waise aap iss bachche ke kaun hai?
Rayan: {bilkul ghabraya hue} nurse kya hua ise...aur yeh thik to hai na?
nurse: ji ab to yeh thik hai..per aap kaun hai?
Rayan: main iss bachche ka pita hu
nurse: oh to aap hi Mr.Rayan Garewal hai..
Rayan: ji...
{tabhi doctor aate hai}
doctor: oh Mr.Garewal acha hua aap yaha gaye...
Rayan: kya baat hai doctor..aditya ab kaisa hai..aur yeh accident hua kaise? aur aditya ko yaha kaun laya..
doctor: relax Mr.Garewal.. apka beta ab thik hai..and thanks to that {pointing towards Saima} lady..jo na sirf aditya ko
yaha le aayi per use apna khoon bhi diya...
Rayan: wat? khoon...
doctor: nothing serious Mr.Garewal... darhelsal aditya ko sar pe chot lagne ki wajah se kaafi khoon beh chuka tha aur uss waqt uska
blood group hamare blood bank mein available nahi tha..to inhone hi aapke bete ko khoon diya...
Rayan: oh... acha doctor ab aditya kaisa hai? main use ghar kab le jaa sakta hu?
doctor: woh ab thik hai..per phir bhi hum use aaj yehi rakhenge..aap use kal ghar le ja sakte hai...
Rayan: ok doctor..and thank u so much...
doctor: its ok... and take care of him ...
Rayan: ji...
{doctor leaves aur Rayan goes and sits besides aditya..... but in all this he completely forgets that Saima is in the same room..
he just looks at aditya..and his eyes are filled with tears..... kuch der mien nurse aati hai}
nurse: mam, ab aap bhi yeh kuch fruits khaa lijiye... warna aapko kamzori mehsoos hogi...
Saima: ji.. {her cell starts ringing}
Saima: ha Aryan..
Aryan: kya ha? kaha ho tum? main kabse tumahara intezar kar raha hu Saima, ho kaha tum?
Saima: wo hum... yaha hos.. hospital mein hai..
Aryan: what? hospital? per kyun? tum thik to ho na?
Saima; ha baba hum thik hai.., bas wo ek accident hua tha..
Aryan: what?..acha tum kis hospital mein ho..main abhi waha aa raha hu..
Saima: are nahi yaha aane ki zaroorat hai, hum ab thik hai..aur ghar jaa rahe hai.., dadima ko pata chal
gaya tho khamakha pareshan ho jayenge...
Aryan: are you sure u'll manage?
Saima: ha Aryan..tum hamari fikar mat karo..acha ab hum tumse baad mein baat karte hai...
Aryan: ha thik hai... waise bhi aajka din to gaya na ab.. anyways....., u take care
Saima: ok..bye
Aryan: byee..
{Rayan waha baitha Saima ki saari baate sunta hai..phir uske taraf mudta hai}
Rayan: aaj aapne adi ke liye jo kiya hai uske liye shayad thanks bhi kam hai...
Saima: ji nahi... uss waqt jo hume thik laga humne wahi kiya... aur phir is sab ke zimmedar bhi to hum hi hai..
Rayan: {looks at her surprisingly} kya matlab? main kuch samjha nahi....
Saima: wo..darhasal... aapke bete ka accident hamare gadi se hi hua tha..
Rayan: what????
Saima: per humne yeh jaan bhujhkar nahi kiya.., uss waqt hum kuch samajh hi nahi paaye kab kaise...hua..
{tabhi aditya ko hosh aane lagta hai}
Aditya: papa.... papa......
{Rayan immediately turns towards him...}
Rayan: ha.. beta.., papa yehi hai.... dekho..
{aditya slowly opens his eyes}
Aditya: papa..... oouch!!!! sar mein pain ho raha hai...
Rayan: kuch nahi beta.., bas thodisi to chot lagi hai na.., aur phir hamara adi to strong hai na.. jaldi thik ho jayega..
Adi: papa...
Rayan: ha beta papa yehi hai...
{then Rayan turns towards Saima}
Saima: hum jante hai ki anjaane hi sahi per humse bahot badi galati hui hai, aap agar police ko inform karna chaho to kar sakte hai..
{Rayan bas Saima ki taraf dekhta hai...kamre mien bilkul khamoshi chaa jaati hai}
Rayan: sazaa galati ki nahi gunaho ki dii jaati hai..., ha main police ko tab inform karta jab aap adi ko wahi zakhmi
haal mien chodkar chali jaati...., per kyunki aapne waise nahi kiya...aur adi sahi salaamat hai... to ise main bhi galati samajhkar hi bhool jaunga,
aur bhi bhool jana....
Saima: {smiles a bit} ab main kya kahu... aap ne to..{aur wo bed se uthti hai..aur adi ke kareeb jaane hi wali hoti hai ki usi thodi chakkar aane lagti hai aur wo girne hi wali hoti hai
ki Rayan use pakad leta hai... Saima Rayan ki baho mien hoti hai.., dono ek dusre ki aankho mein iss kadar dekh rahe the... maano ki kho kahi kho gaye ho....,
Rayan ka ek haat Saima ki kamar mein hota hai aur dusre haath se usne Saima ka haath pakda hota hai..., dono ek dusre ke kaafi kareb hote hai...tabhi Rayan apni palkein hata deta hai}
Rayan: aap..aap thik to hai?
Saima:ji... {apni palkien neechi karti hai} ji....bas wo..{aur apne aap ko ekdum se Rayan se dur karti hai... aur adi ki taraf jaati hai...aur pyar se uske sar pe se haath ferti hai...}
Saima; ab kaise ho aap bete?
{adi koi jawaab nahi deta.., bas Rayan ki taraf hi dekhta hai}
Adi: papa.....
Rayan: ha beta.., papa yehi hai...
Saima: koi baat nahi...., hum adi se kal milne aayenge....
Rayan: aap chaho to main aapko aapke ghar chod du
Saima: ji shukriya...., per hum chale jayenge..... aap yehi adi ke paas rahiye....
Rayan: are u sure?
Saima: ofcourse..dont worry i'll manage.... aap bas adi ka khayal rakhiyega.... acha ab hum chalte hai..
Rayan: ok...
{saima waha se chali jaati hai.., aur Rayan wahi adi ke kareeb baithta hai}
{Saima ghar pohochti hai..., aur bas kuch der baad dadima bhi ghar aate hai.., Saima apne kamre mein hoti hai..
dadima seedhe Saima se milne uske kamre mein jaate hai}
Dadima: Saima..., kya hua beta main kabse tumhe dhund rahi hu aur tum yaha akele baithi ho..
Saima: kuch kaam tha dadima, hum to bas abhi abhi aaye hai.. thoda thak gaye hai..
Dadima: kya baat hai beta, tum kuch udaas si lag rahi ho
Saima: kuch nahi dadima.., aap khamakha pareshan ho rahe hai... hum bilkul thik hai, bas thode thak gaye hai..
Dadima: Saima, kya ab dadima se jhoot bolenge?
Saima: {smiles} aap se kabhi koi baat chupa hai bhala... wo hua u ke .... {aur Saima dadima ko uss accident ke baare mein sab kuch bata deti hai}
Dadima: per tum to thik ho na?
Saima: ji dadima.., bas thodi kamzori hai..
Dadima: aur wo bachcha?
Saima: wo bhi thik hai..., uske papa uske saath hai..
Dadima: chalo acha hua ki bachche ko jyada chot nahi aayi..., lekin ab tum bhi aaram karo.., abhi kahi bhi
jane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai... main tumhare liye juice bhijwa rahi hu...
Saima: ji dadima, hum kahi nahi jaa rahe hai..
Dadima: waise tum jaa kaha rahi thi...
Saima: wo hum Ar...., {saima aryan ka naam kehne wali thi per nahi kehti} Ar..Arzoo se milne gaye the....
Dadima: Arzoo??? acha wo tumhare college ki saheli... kaisi hai wo?
Saima: pata nahi , hum to mil hi nahi paaye...
Dadima: to koi baat nahi... kal use ghar bula lena... per filhaal aaram karo..
Saima: ji dadima...
{dadima chale jate hai..,per saima ko yeh baat bilkul achi nahi lagti ki usne dadima se jhoot kaha ki wo arzoo se milne jaa rahi thi}
Saima: {to herself} yeh kya...humne dadima se jhoot kyun kaha? kyun nahi kaha ki hum Arzoo se nahi Aryan se milne jaa rahe the...
{Saima apni soch mein khoyi hui rehti hai tabhi use kisi ka phone aata hai}
Saima: hello....
person: hello... is this Miss Saima Khanna?
Saima: yes..speaking, whose this?
person: Rayan Garewal here...
Saima: ji aap? sorry hum aapko pehechan nahi paaye...
Rayan: its ok.. baat yeh thi ki aap apna purse yehi bhool gayi hai..., aapke driving license se aapka phone no. mila..to socha ki aapko inform kardu
Saima: oh ha..hum to bhoool gaye the... hum abhi aakar pick kar lete hai...
Rayan: nahi aapko yaha aane ki zaroorat nahi.., aap bas apna address dijiye main bhijwa deta hu....
Saima: thik hai..., 26 park road, Khanna house.. {Saima adress bata hi rahi hoti hai ki call disconnect ho jata hai} hello.. hellooo..Mr. Garewal...
Rayan: hello...hellooo... oh god!!!! iss battery ko bhi abhi hi khatam hona tha..
{tabhi nurse aati hai}
nurse: Mr.Garewal..., aapke bete ko ab puri tarha se hosh aa gaya hai.. wo aapko bula raha hai...
Rayan: thanks... {and he runs towards adi's room}
Rayan: adi beta..., ab kaise hai aap?
Adi: papa..., hum yaha kaise aaye?
Rayan: beta aapko chot lag gayi thi na.., to bas isiliye aapko hospital lana pada...
Adi: per hume yaha nahi rehna, hume ghar jana hai....
Rayan: ha beta.., bas aaj hi ki to baat hai, kal hum aapko ghar le jayenge... lekin abhi aap aaram kijiye... papa
yehi aapke paas hai...
{yaha Rayan Adi ko lekar kuch pareshan hota hai to waha Saima Aryan ko lekar.... bahot sochne ke baad wo Aryan ko phone karti hai}
Saima: hello.. Aryan....
Aryan: hey Saima..., main bas tumhe hi yaad kar raha tha, kaisi ho ab?
Saima: hum thik hai
Aryan: aur wo bachcha?
Saima: ha wo bhi thik hai.... per tum yeh batao ki aisi kya baat thi jiske liye tumne hume milne bulaye the? wo baat to adhuri reh gayi na?
Aryan: baat???? baat nahi musibat kaho Saima....
Saima: musibat???? kya matlab?
Aryan: ab mujhe masoom ki dukh bhari kahani kya sunaye.....
Saima: Aryannn.... mazaak karna bandh karo aur batao ki baat kya hai?
Aryan: ab tum to jaanti ho ki jab bachche bade ho jate hai to ma baap ko unki shaadi karvane ki kitni jaldi hoti hai... to bas aaj kal main bhi isi
pareshani mein hu...
Saima: kya? shaadi??? per tumhare parents to yaha nahi hai na... kya yaha aaye hai?
Aryan: nahi..wo to wahi New York mein hi hai, per unhone uncle se kaha hai ki agar koi achi indian ladki mile
to hamare Aryan ke liye baat chalana..and guess what? unhe ladki bhi mili hai... aur kal mujhe uss ladki se milne jana hai..
Saima: what? iska matlab tumne shaadi ke liye haa kardi...
Aryan: are nahi... isiliye to mujhe tumhari madat chahiye.... tumhe kal bas mere saath chalna hoga...
Saima: Aryan yeh tum kya keh rahe ho meri kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai... ladki dekhne saath chalna hoga...
Aryan: oh god, lagta hai uncle aa rahe hai, listen main tumhe kuch der baad phone karta hu, yaa phir kal tum seedhe mujhe baristaas mein hi milna..thik
shaam 5 baje.... bye bye byee
Saima: per Aryan suno to...
{per Aryan Saima ki baat sune bina hi phone disconnect kar deta hai}
Saima : {to herself} oh god! ladki dekhne..... ab hum kya kare, yeh Aryan phir kuch ulti sidhi harkat karega...
god help that girl now..........

thatz it in part-2
comments awaited!!!!

ruku dear bohat achche.. very nice... Smile

please next part jaldi se post karna... Laughing

RAianz Posts : 115 Join date : 2008-10-18

hey ruku gr88 part!! ive read ure FF before but i am njoying reading it once agen!! gr88 part!!!

ruku yaar continue karo na jaldi se..me waiting... Smile

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